View Full Version : Star Wars The What Ifs
UrbanChaos
12-24-2010, 06:36 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 1: The Beauty and the Gungan
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
After just escaping Naboo, with two Jedi, the Queen of Naboo and her handmaidens. Jar Jar knows that tensions are high and plans to stay out of trouble, He would rather not get cut to pieces by a lightsaber. Jar Jar is wandering around Padme’s ship looking for something new or interesting. Everything on the ship is so shiny and clean, nothing like the Gungans underwater home, where everything is wet, grimy and well… simply ugly. Jar Jar’s hand gently touches the ships side wall and it was cold to the touch but very smooth. Jar Jar enjoys the smooth clean things of Theed rather then his dirty home world.
Jar Jar’s mind slowly drifts to the queen and her 4 handmaidens; Rabe, Eirtae, Padme and Sabe they were the most beautiful girls Jar Jar had ever seen so smooth and gentle, their skin was like velvet. Just thinking about them gave Jar Jar a stiffy… well a semi erect one anyway, at full erection his cock was a mighty twelve inches and once his mating instincts took over… well then he had to have sex, no if ands or buts. He gently rubbed the ever growing bulge in his pants.
He slid up against the side of the ship and closed his eyes and started imagining Sabe, Rabe, Padme and Eirtae naked, but especially Padme… Jar Jar would give anything just to see her nude or even in slightly more revealing clothes Jar Jar’s dick became even harder. He knew he couldn’t let it get much harder in fear of going into his primal mating instincts.
But wait Jar Jar could hear something a… murmur coming from the queen’s chamber. But no one was supposed to be in their, they were all supposed to be in a meeting with the Jedi, was it an intruder? An assassin that had snuck aboard?
Jar Jar summoned all his courage and decided to take a peek in. The first sign of danger and he would run and get help.
Slowly Jar Jar edged to the door… he slowly opened the door ever so slightly… now the murmur sounded more like… more like a moan but what could be moaning and why? Jar Jar edged his head around the corner… his eyes widened and his mouth dropped dumbfounded. Their on the queens bed was Sabe and Rabe both naked!
“mesa like this” Jar Jar whispered, Sabe’s head was buried in Rabe’s crotch licking her pussy while she fingered her own snatch, Jar Jar had a perfect view, Rabe had her head tilted back and her back arched up her breast’s where a perfect hand size with rosy red nipples which she was now squeezing. Jar Jar’s dick was now at its full 12 inch erect. He lowered his pants a little and let his cock out, he grabbed his dick and started to rub furiously his eyes never leaving this glorious sight. Sabe had climbed up onto Rabe and started kissing her passionately their tits pressed tightly together, Rabe embraced her with a hug. Sabe continued to finger Rabe’s tight snatch, Jar Jar could now see that Sabe had a cute patch of hair above her pussy while Rabe’s pussy was shaved clean. After one last kiss Rabe pulled away from Sabe, Rabe leaned towards the night stand and opened the top drawer and pulled out a dildo. Sabe grinned with a naughty smile and began to suck on the top of the dildo while Rabe began to play with Sabe’s nipples.
Then Jar Jar heard foot steps in the hall, in an effort to hide he attempted to pull up his pants and run… but his leg got stuck in his pant leg and he fell into the hall his cock still fully erect to its 12 inches.
At that very moment Padme rounded the corner, wearing a white long sleeved shirt and black slacks, then she saw Jar Jar laying on the ground, his cock standing straight in the air, and she was… slightly turned on, Padme had heard stories of Gungan cock but had never seen one, it was about 12 inches long and about three inches thick.
“Jar Jar are you ok!?!” Padme cried as she grabbed his arm and tried to pull him up, but the one thing she wanted to do more then anything at that moment was grab his cock. Padme always enjoyed a good cock in her snatch but this was bigger then average and she wanted to try it right now.
“Mesa Fine, Mesa ok!” Jar Jar cried as he jumped up and tried to hide his fully erect cock, he blushed and felt very embarrassed. But Padme had seen Jar Jar’s cock and now had a lust for it and she was going to have it.
“Are you sure Jar Jar is anything broken?” Padme asked.
“Yes, mesa okie day.” Jar Jar said obviously still embarrassed.
“Maybe we should check.” Padme said provocatively as she winked.
“No! Mesa fine!” Jar Jar said clearly not getting the hint.
“Jar Jar, just let me handle this.” Padme said as she dropped to her knees.
Jar Jar tilted his head in confusion as he watched Padme get down on her knees. She grabbed his cock and began to stroke, Jar Jar smiled clearly understanding what she was doing now. Padme opened her mouth and attempted to suck his cock, she began to suck on the tip of the cock and slowly stuffed the cock down her throat she got 9 inches down her throat, Jar Jar moaned in ecstasy. His cock began to pulse, Padme, having sucked many cocks before, knew Jar Jar would soon cum. She pulled the cock out of her throat and coughed a little she wasn’t used to having that much cock down her throat, Jar Jar’s cock was salty and warm, she quickly put her arms in her sleeves, knowing Jar Jar would cum soon, she pulled her shirt down towards her stomach rather than off showing the most perfect tits, they were a little more then a handful, perfectly round plump perky and soft, they were the envy of every girl in Theed and any guy would kill to see them. At the sight of them Jar Jar couldn’t hold back any more and began to cum, 6 thick streams of cum sprayed at Padme, she managed to catch two in the mouth, one in the hair and the rest on her tits. But now Jar Jar’s mating instincts took over and he wasn’t done. He laid Padme on the ground and took off her slacks, then pulled of Padme’s pink underwear and threw them to the side. He let his 6 inch tongue dangle from his mouth and showed it to Padme with a grin. Padme laid completely flat with a smile on her face knowing she was going to have the best tongue fuck of her life. Then she put her legs over Jar Jars’s shoulders as he grabbed her thighs and pulled her closer. Padme pulled off her shirt and tossed it aside, and then she started massaging her perfect tits. Jar Jar began licking her twat with his monstrous tongue, he stroked her clit with his tongue while he fingered her ass. Soon his tongue entered her pussy and Padme could no longer hold back, she began to pulsate then she began to cum, she drenched Jar Jar’s tongue in her sweet tasting cum, Jar Jar bobbed his head up at Padme with a Grin. Padme saw that Jar Jar once again had a hard cock.
“You better put that to good use.” Padme panted as she pointed to his cock.
Jar Jar slowly crawled up towards Padme hovering inches above her body his 12 inch cock brushing up against her tight snatch, Padme moaned slightly as Jar Jar brushed her cheek with his right hand it was so smooth, and again Jar Jar succumbed to his primal instincts and entered her pussy and pushed 4 inches of his cock in, Padme moaned loudly with ecstasy. Jar Jar kept pushing and got 8 inches in. Padme almost passed out from pleasure, she grabbed Jar Jar tightly and pushed her tits up against Jar Jar’s chest, they were so soft and perfect Jar Jar thought. Jar Jar kept pushing and got 10 inches in, Padme felt every inch and felt nothing but pleasure nothing had ever been this deep before, with a final grunt Jar Jar pushed the final 2 inches in, Padme had all 12 inches of Jar Jar’s cock in her pussy.
“Oh God Jar Jar it feels so good! You’re tearing me apart! Now FUCK me Jar Jar!”
Jar Jar was happy to oblige and began to thrust faster and faster, each time he felt his cock hit Padme’s womb, Padme dug her finger nails into Jar Jars back and yelped with every thrust, after about 5 minuets Jar Jar once again felt the urge to cum, Padme let go of Jar Jar and he grabbed her plump round tits that was it after feeling Padme’s perfect tits Jar Jar pulled out and sprayed his cum all over Padme’s thighs, stomach, chest, breasts and face for a minute and a half.
Padme smiled and ran a finger from her stomach to her mouth covering her finger in cum. She sucked it seductively with a naughty grin.
“We have to do that again sometime Jar Jar.” Padme said as she carefully got up. Padme knew she was going to have to spend a couple hours in the bacta tank to make her pussy tight again.
“Mesa thought youd reject mesa and mysa small dick.” Jar Jar said with a shy grin.
“You mean Gungan dicks get bigger.” Padme said dumbfounded.
“Of course what did yousa think, hows yousa ganna get all that cum off?” Jar Jar asked quizzically
“Oh… ah Sabe and Rabe will probably lick me clean, don’t worry they are good at keeping secrets.” Padme said to busy thinking about bigger Gungan dicks. Jar Jar smiled thinking about Sabe and Rabe licking his cum off of Padme.
Quietly they gathered their things both with smiles on their faces, Jar Jar grabbed his pants and headed off towards his quarters. Padme gathered her shirt and slacks and walked into her room, forgetting her pink underwear in the hallway, Padmes door closed and locked and Jar Jar was long gone.
Young Obi Wan slowly walked out of the shadows of the corner where he was hiding.
“Did you get all that R2?” Obi Wan asked. R2-D2 whistled in a high confirming note.
“Good.” Obi Wan smiled, then out of the corner of his eye he saw the pink panties Padme had forgotten, he rushed over and snatched them up he brought them to his nose and inhaled deeply, the sweet smell of her twat was still on them. Obi Wan walked towards his cabin, smile on his face, panties in his pocket, and a video to use….
lilshepherd
12-24-2010, 07:27 PM
Loved it
UrbanChaos
12-24-2010, 08:42 PM
@lilshepherd thnx man first story i've made
collegedude33
12-25-2010, 01:32 AM
pretty decent. Good use some more details...
Natsu
12-25-2010, 04:22 AM
wow just wow
UrbanChaos
12-25-2010, 12:23 PM
@collegedude33 yeah i see what your sayin im trying to take my time on number two
@Natsu lol is that a good thing or a bad thing
UrbanChaos
12-25-2010, 06:51 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 2: Knight Takes Handmaiden
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
“Now Obi Wan remember we will be landing on Tatooine in about an hour, you will not be coming down on the planet with me I need you to protect the ship, the hutts are gangsters and we can not trust them.” Qui Gon Jinn said to his apprentice.
“Of course master, I am going to go to my cabin to rest and meditate.” Obi Wan said as he turned around to go to his cabin, though he did not intend to relax he intended to watch the video of Padme and Jar Jar fucking.
Obi Wan smiled at the thought of seeing Padme getting drilled by the Gungans 12 inch dick, he began to day dream about her perfect tits, and he would give anything to see them in real life, though for now he would have to settle for a holo vid
Sabe was walking down the corridor with some papers for Qui Gon, wearing a white tank top and black mini skirt her ass just barely visible, the Queen had turned the heat up on the ship for Jar Jar after they fucked to make him feel more accommodated, though Sabe knew it was so Jar Jar would fuck Padme again. Sabe giggled remembering how much cum she, Rabe and Eirtae had to lick off, and no one but the handmaidens knew that the Queen and Padme were one in the same. Due to the increased heat the handmaidens and the Queen had started wearing lighter and a less amount of clothing. No one on the ship complained each girl was stunning with their looks. They were hand picks not only for their abilities but also for their looks.
Sabe rounded a corner and ran straight into Obi Wan, they both tumbled to the floor and Sabe’s papers scattered everywhere.
“I am so sorry!” Obi Wan exclaimed
“No, no I wasn’t looking were I was going I’m sorry.” Sabe said with a smile, Sabe secretly had a crush on Obi Wan and wanted to fuck him, but she was the Queens handmaiden and could not pursue that feeling… as much as she might want to.
Sabe got on all fours and began to pick up the papers, giving Obi Wan a nice look at her panties, they were black and barely large enough to cover her pussy, he could see just a slight amount of hair above her pussy, her ass was perfectly round.
Obi Wan shook his head and tore his gaze from the sight though his 7 inch dick had became fully erect by this point, he got on all fours began to help gather Sabe’s papers.
Sabe glanced over and did a double take when she saw the bulge in Obi Wan’s pants, she blushed realizing she had given him the perfect view of her panties and juicy ass, she smiled realizing he could probably see her pubic hair as well since she had chosen the tightest panties she had this morning.
Knowing what she had done she decided to have some fun, she slowly scooted backwards pretending to pick up papers. Sabe knew by this point she had to be inches from his face, so she started waving her ass back and forth in front of his face.
Obi Wan gulped, and wanted to start licking her pussy so bad, but he knew he couldn’t he had to stay focused.
“Ummm Sabe here are your assers errr I mean papers.” Obi Wan stuttered as he handed her the papers he had collected.
“Oh thanks Obi.” Sabe said with a smile and a wink.
Obi Wan hesitated but then got up and rushed to his room his dick felt like it would explode and he intended on masturbating to that video of Padme. Being the queens decoy Sabe looked a lot like Padme and Obi Wan definitely saw it now his heart was racing and he was tense just thinking of Sabe… was he in love? Or was this just lust. As a Jedi he knew both were forbidden but he didn’t care. He had banged many girls before, Qui Gon had taught him that the Jedi were sometimes too focused on rules and some could be bent just slightly… the sex rule being one of those rules.
Obi Wan entered his room and quickly put the holo vid in. He took his shirt off and threw it to the side the same with his pants and boxers. His cock was still fully erect from the sight of Sabe’s juicy ass, he started to stroke his cock and smiled…
Meanwhile Sabe continued to the flight deck were Qui Gon was, Sabe wished that she could fuck Obi Wan, she had fucked many men before but it was usually a threesome with the Queen or the Queen had asked her to fuck one of her political friends, as the Queens handmaiden she was forced to take an oath that she would be abstinent, but above all else follow the Queens orders, so if the queen asked her to have sex she had to have sex. She did not get to choose without the Queen’s consent.
“Um, Qui Gon here are the papers you asked for.” Sabe said as she handed them over to Qui Gon.
“Oh thank you Sabe, by the way you’re looking very good today.” Qui Gon said with a wink. Sabe blushed and started to smile, Sabe liked Qui Gon, he was a very handsome man, she wouldn’t mind fucking him but she would rather have Obi Wan, besides he was more Eirtae’s type. Sabe turned and started walking away. Swaying her hips trying to look extra sexy for Qui Gon.
Qui Go smiled, he wished he could fuck Sabe, but he was to busy. But he liked Eirtae more she had a certain attitude he enjoyed, and he was more partial to blondes. Maybe later Qui Gon thought.
Sabe entered the queens chamber and plopped down on the bed with a slight frown.
Padme, the queen, noticed that Sabe was upset, she was preparing her disguise so she could go walk around on Tatooine with Qui Gon. As Queen Amidala she knew she would not be allowed to go, so she would go as Padme which everyone thought was just another handmaiden, Sabe would fill in for her since she was her decoy. Sabe was Padme’s best friend and she was almost like Padme’s sister. Padme walked over and sat down beside Sabe.
“What’s wrong Sabe?” Padme asked
“It’s Obi Wan.” Sabe said with a blush. Padme smiled now understanding.
“Oh, you have a crush on him don’t you.” Padme said her smile widening.
“Yeah but I can’t do anything about it.” Sabe said still frowning
“Because he’s a Jedi?” Padme asked her smile slowly fading.
“No… for a different reason.” Sabe said
“Oh, because of me.” Padme stated now frowning. Sabe just nodded and put her head on Padme’s shoulder.
“I’ll make you a deal with you Sabe.” Padme began as she softly grabbed and tilted Sabe’s head up so she could look her in the eyes. Padme slid her hands down onto Sabe’s cheeks and Padme’s hovered inches way from Sabe’s face.
“You can go fuck him… if you promise we can share his cock sometimes.” Padme finished with a smile. Sabe grinned back and hugged Padme.
“Of course we can!” Sabe cried excitedly. Sabe titled her head forward and began to kiss Padme, Sabe slid her tongue into Padmes mouth and kissed her like this for several seconds.
“Save it for Obi Wan.” Padme said with a wink. The two girls giggled and Sabe rushed out of the room to go to Obi Wan’s.
As Sabe neared the door to Obi Wan’s room she was certain she could hear Padme moaning in their. Sabe was sure it was Padme’s moan because she and Padme fucked often. But Sabe had just left Padme in her room how could she be in Obi Wan’s room… and why would she be moaning?
Sabe gently opened the door until it was just barely open and peeked in.
Their she saw Obi Wan rubbing his cock’s shaft and watching Padme get fucked by Jar Jar. Sabe licked her lips seeing Padme getting penetrated like that was hot and her pussy was getting wet just seeing it.
Sabe closed the door, calmed herself and regained her composure. She pulled her skirt up a little so you could just barely see her black panties and the bottom of her perfectly round juicy ass, she pulled her top down a little as well so she could show of her nice perky tits. Then she gently knocked on the door.
She heard banging in the room, Obi Wan was obviously caught off guard. The door slid open reveling Obi Wan wearing only his pants. His muscular and perfectly Jedi toned body catching Sabe of guard. She held her breath and blushed.
“Oh, hey Sabe… did you need something?” Obi Wan asked.
“No just seeing what you were up to.” Sabe said provocatively, Obi Wan gulped just now noticing she had pulled her skirt up and lowered her top showing her perky tits, they were nearly identical to Padme’s.
“Well come on in.” Obi Wan said as he waved her in.
Sabe having had sex with many guys knew exactly how she was going to get Obi wan into bed.
Sabe took a few steps in and neared the bed and then pretended to trip over his shirt that was lazy thrown on the floor, Obi Wan turned around to catch her and she pushed a little harder into Obi Wan knocking him flat on his bed with her laying on top of him, then she started to laugh acting like it had been an accident, Obi Wan joined in on the laughter not realizing what Sabe had just done, after a few minutes the laughter ceased and they were left smiling at each other.
Sabe knew it was time for phase two, she laid her head on Obi Wan’s chest and hugged him making sure to press her soft perky tits against Obi Wan. After several seconds Obi Wan’s cock became hard and pushed up against her slightly, Obi Wan gulped hoping Sabe had not noticed, but of course this is what Sabe was hoping for.
Sabe gently started to rock her ass against the bulge, making it even harder, she leaned in and kissed Obi Wan, she slid her tongue into Obi Wan’s mouth, Sabe always loved putting her tongue in peoples mouth it always made it more personal.
Obi Wan reached down with his hands and gripped Sabe’s perfect ass while he was still kissing her, he nearly came at the perfect roundness of her juicy ass but regained his composure with the use of the force.
She then pulled away from him and sat up on his chest, she was still rocking back and forth on Obi Wan’s dick, and Obi Wan was still clenching her ass. She then pulled her shirt off and tossed her shirt to the side. her tits bounced a little as she unclipped her bra and threw it beside her shirt, her tits were nice and perky and almost identical to Padme’s, just slightly smaller, her nipples were fully erect. She got off of Obi Wan and pulled him up to a sitting position, Sabe got off the bed and dropped to her knees while Obi Wan remained sitting on the bed his legs hanging off the edge. She pulled his pant down showing his 7 inch cock harder then it had ever been. With one hand she started massaging his balls, with the other hand she started to jack off the cock. She opened her mouth and began to suck on the tip of his dick. Obi Wan moaned with pleasure. Sabe began to deep throat the whole cock she took the whole cock into her mouth and down her throat, her head bobbing back and forth. Obi Wan had never had such a good blow job. Sabe let go of Obi Wan’s cock and gave it one final lick, she looked up at Obi Wan and smiled. Obi Wan bent over and kissed her forehead, and ran his fingers through her thick brown hair.
Sabe put Obi Wan’s dick between her tits and began to push her tits up and down giving Obi Wan the best tity fuck she could. Obi Wan started thrusting his hips and finally gave into the need to cum, Sabe quickly put her mouth over his cock and caught all the cum in her mouth. She pulled off his cock and opened her mouth reveling the cum in her mouth. She smiled and then swallowed it with a gulp.
She stood up and this time Obi Wan got on his knees he pulled her skirt off and she kicked it to the side, then he pulled her panties off and tossed them on his dresser. He licked Sabe’s cunt a few times making it nice and moist and then he stood up with a fully erect cock again. Sabe gasped and looked confused.
“I’m a Jedi Sabe, I have some… unique talents.” He said with a wink
She playfully pushed him on the bed where he laid flat on his back. Sabe climbed up and hovered above his cock, then gently guided it into her pussy and started to bob her body up and down she leaned forwards and put her hands on the wall for support her ass slammed up and down on Obi Wan’s dick. Obi Wan reached up and grabbed Sabe’s tits and started groping them, Sabe gasped and she couldn’t hold on she came all over Obi Wan’s dick just adding lubrication so she could go faster as She kept slamming her pussy down on Obi Wan’s dick.
“I’m going to cum Sabe!” He exclaimed.
“Do it in me Obi!” Sabe cried, Obi Wan’s dick pulsed as he shot stream after stream of cum into Sabe’s cunt. Sabe leaned forward and laid her head on Obi Wans chest, Obi Wans cock slipped out of her pussy and sprayed the last few streams of cum on her ass, Sabe hugged Obi Wan and fell asleep on him. Obi Wan kissed her forehead and he too fell asleep with a smile on his face.
The next thing they heard was a beeping coming from Obi Wans pants pocket. And they both jerked awake.
“Will be landing soon Sabe.” Obi Wan said quietly. Sabe yawned and realized where she was. She kissed Obi Wan and then got up. And started to get dressed. Obi Wan Smiled has he watched her perfectly sculpted body jiggle, she put on her shirt and skirt, and Obi Wan used the force to push her panties behind his dresser. She looked around with a frown trying to find her panties, then she shrugged and looked at Obi Wan.
“I have to go to the queen Obi, but will have to meet up again.” She said with a smile. She kissed him on the cheek one last time then headed to the door, she opened it then stopped, and turned around.
“Love ya Obi.” She said, she had never said that to anyone other then Padme before and she meant it.
“Love you to Sabe.” Obi Wan called back with a wink
Obi Wan got up and put his pants on then walked to his dresser and pulled the panties out from behind it. He sniffed them, they still had her scent on them. He opened his closet and put them in with the pink ones he had got from Padme.
Obi Wan decided he was going to collect all of the handmaidens panties, eventually he hoped to get even the Queens panties….
lilshepherd
12-25-2010, 07:20 PM
Nice
dragonice442
12-25-2010, 11:59 PM
really good starts
collegedude33
12-28-2010, 12:27 AM
great addition. Its getting there now...with more details, it is painting the picture. Keep up with the details and also try to catch more of the Star Wars feelings
UrbanChaos
12-29-2010, 12:57 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 3: The Closet
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
“It’s to hot down here.” Padme complained.
“I already told you to stay on the ship so I don’t want to hear any complaining.” Qui Gon stated as they entered Mos Eisley city. Padme walked beside Qui Gon trying to keep up with his pace while Jar Jar trailed behind staring at Padme’s perfectly toned firm ass through her skin tight pants.
“Now let’s enter this part store and try not to make a scene.” Qui Gon said aiming his comment at Jar Jar. They entered the rather shady looking store and where immediately introduced to the owner
“Welcome my name is Watto may I help you find what your looking for.” The blue flying creature asked.
“Yes we are looking for a T-14 hyperdrive.” Qui Gon said
“Yes yes we have T-14 a T-15 and even a T-17. Follow me to the back of the lot and I’ll show you the conditions.” Watto said as he started to lead Qui Gon to the back door.
“Don’t touch anything.” Qui Gon said sternly pointing a finger towards Jar Jar and the walking out.
“Like mesa would wanna touch anything in heres.” Jar Jar whispered, after Qui Gon left. But Jar Jar’s instincts started to get the best of him and he did indeed start to touch things, until he came across a round flat brown disc shaped object.
Jar Jar bent over and inspected the odd device, then with his long finger touched it.
The disc object jumped up and a droid popped out, Jar Jar was startled and backed into more objects making a bigger mess, tools and parts spilled every where. Jar Jar lunged at the droid managing to grab it but knocking over more stuff in the process. Jar Jar managed to put the droid in a chokehold and restrained it but it would be only a matter of time before it broke free.
“Qui Gon is going to kill mesa dead!” Jar Jar cried in fear.
“Jar Jar in here.” Padme called opening a door that led into a closet. Jar Jar, thinking that throwing it in the closet would help the situation, tossed the robot in hearing it crash in the room knowing it had only made a bigger mess, but Padme grabbed Jar Jar’s arm and hauled him into the closet with the droid. Then Padme turned and locked the closet door.
Padme pushed Jar Jar against the wall and put her hands down his pants with a coy smile.
“I’ve been dreaming about your cock for awhile.” Padme groaned.
“Mesa been dreamin about yous to.” Jar Jar said with a big dumb grin.
Padme started to slide to hear knees taking Jar Jar’s pants with her. Jar Jar’s dick popped out already erect to it’s 12 inches. Padme grabbed the cock with both her hands and started to stroke. Jar Jar groaned a little then leaned down and pulled her shirt off and tossed it aside revealing her luscious, perky, perfect tits. And Jar Jar felt as if he was in heaven. Padme started to suck on the tip of Jar Jar’s dick and kept stroking it with both hands. Jar Jar groped one of her tits with one hand and rubbed the other tits nipple with the other hand.
When an invisible hand yanked her skin tight pants down, Padme tilted her head back with Jar Jar’s cock still in her mouth and it was… the droid! The droid had added an attachment to his crotch that resembled a dick. Padme smiled knowing what the droid was up to, then she started to deep throat Jar Jar’s cock to the best of her abilities and braced her self for the incoming dick her pussy was already moist. She felt her panties shift to the side and a cold metal object entered her pussy, she almost chocked on Jar Jar’s dick from the surprise, but the cold only made her head speed up she bobbed her head faster trying to take more of Jar Jar’s dick she almost had all 12 inches down her throat. The droid began thrusting faster into Padmes pussy matching the speed her head was bobbing at, Padme’s thighs felt tingly and she knew she would cum soon. Then Padme managed to shove Jar Jar’s entire dick down her throat. Jar Jar moaned in ecstasy and released all his cum down Padme’s throat. Padme feeling the splurge of hot cum flow down her throat and the metal dick finding just the right spot, also released an abundance of cum on the metal shaft. The droid took a step back the metal cock dripping from Padme’s warm cum and powered down. Jar Jar flopped next to Padme with exhaustion having never cum that much, or having the full 12 inches of his dick deep throated. Padme patted Jar Jar on his dick and gave him a kiss on the cheek. Then readjusted her panties, stood up pulled up her pants and put her shirt back on.
“Come on Jar Jar get up and let’s head back out.” Padme said impatiently. Reluctantly Jar Jar stood up and pulled up his pants. Padme opened the door and Jar Jar smacked her ass knowing one day he would fuck it.
Padme and Jar Jar carefully stepped out trying to act casual. They heard voices and footsteps coming back into the shop.
“What happened to my shop!?!” Watto screamed, Jar Jar casually started to whistle and strolled out of the shop.
“Some guys came in and said you owed a Hutt money or something.” Padme calmly said.
“I paid them already! Boy get in here!” Watto shrieked. Casually a young kid strolled in.
“Watto I was just cleaning the service droids.” The boy said.
“Just clean the front.” Watto stated bitterly. The boy started cleaning and Qui Gon and Watto kept negotiating.
“I guarantee that no one else has a T-14 hyperdrive” Watto stated.
“I think I’ll look around first.” Qui Gon Said.
“Padme stay here I’ll be back soon.” Qui Gon continued, and then he walked out of the store and into the blinding sun.
Padme started to poke around the store seeing odd things and weird parts Watto paid no mind to her, but she could tell the boy had some interest, trying to peek at her while Padme wasn’t paying any attention, but being a Queen Padme was able to catch even the slightest glance from someone, but the boy seemed to be staring at her chest and ass as much as possible. Padme being around 15 noticed the boy was only about a year or two younger, and he was kind of cute. She started to feeling bad for the boy knowing Jar Jar had made the mess and Padme felt some what responsible.
“So are you a slave.” Padme asked bluntly.
“I’m a person and my name is Anakin.” The boy stated.
“Yes he’s my slave.” Watto cut in.
“Let me help you Anakin, I’m Padme.” Padme said, Watto sighed and slowly flew out of the room.
“Sorry for snapping at you Padme, and thanks for the help.” Anakin said sheepishly. Padme just smiled and kept picking parts up off the ground. Eventually all the parts where cleaned up in the main shop area, and Padme was left staring into Anakin’s eyes, they were deep blue and his sandy blonde hair made Padme notice just how handsome he was.
“Awe man they even got into the closet.” Anakin exclaimed.
“Let me give you a hand.” Padme said starting to have other thoughts about how she could help Anakin.
They entered the closet and started to clean. Padme licked her lips watching Anakin’s young arms budge. Anakin kept cleaning until he came across the droid that had just fucked Padme, and noticed the added attachment.
“Looks like this service droid has been servicing someone in another way.” Anakin said with a wink, then he hit the droids nose and it refolded into a disc.
Padme pushed Anakin up against a wall and started to kiss him. Anakin having no objection slipped his hands down and squeezed Padme’s firm ass. Padme squealed in delight and put her hands down Anakin’s pants and grabbed his increasingly hard dick.
Anakin put his hands on Padme’s hips and gave her a slight push down, Padme took the hint and slid down onto her knees. Anakin pulled his pants down showing his 6 inch dick fully erect, it wasn’t the biggest dick Padme had ever seen but she still intended to gobble it up. But before she could Anakin was tugging on her shirt. She smiled and helped Anakin pull off her shirt, the shirt came off revealing her miraculous tits.
“You must be an angel.” Anakin sputtered after catching a glimpse of Padme’s tits, but Padme was to busy licking his cock, she started to suck on the tip of it then put the whole thing in her mouth and easily deep throated it over and over never once coming up for air. She massaged his balls with one of her hands and pulled her hair back with the other. Anakin leaned down and started to feel Padme’s beautiful tits.
“Yup, I’m going to have to fuck these.” Anakin said.
Padme took the cock out of her mouth with salvia still on her cheek and Anakin pulled a chair up and sat down, Padme scooted in closer and wrapped her tits around Anakin’s dick and they both grinned at each other Padme stared slowly stroking his dick with her tits and then furiously started to pump them up and down Anakin tilted hid head back and moaned Padme kept pumping and tried to go even faster her soft tits making a thumping sound every time she hit his thighs.
“I’m going to cum!” Anakin cried, Anakin thrusted his hips up and his dick exploded spraying cum all over Padme’s face and hair, Padme licked her lips cleaning the cum off her lips. Anakin tossed a towel to her and she wiped her face clean, the pulled a gold mirror out of her pocket and attempted to clean her hair. Padme did the best she could and the started to gather her clothes.
“We’re not done yet Padme.” Anakin said.
“We’re not?” Padme asked quizzically.
“Course not, it’s your turn.” Anakin winked then grabbed her hand and sat her down on the chair. Padme grinned understanding as Anakin Knelt down and slid her pants and thong off.
Anakin started to lick her pussy and rub Padmes clit. Padme moaned underestimating Anakin, feeling Padme’s pussy getting moist Anakin slid two fingers into her pussy and kept licking, Padme put her hands on her tits and started to massage them. Then Anakin stopped rubbing her clit but Padme’s kept groaning anyway and with one of her hands started to squeeze and pinch her nipples, then with his free hand Anakin put one finger into Padme’s ass and thrust it in and out. Padme whimpered a bit but then her moans only grew louder then Anakin hit just the right spot with his fingers in her pussy and Padme’s legs shook, and cum came squirting out of her pussy Anakin smiled knowing he had done a good job. Padme pulled Anakin up knowing her cum juices would still be all over his lips and kissed Anakin licking up her own juices.
“How did you get so good at licking pussies?” Padme asked, Anakin shrugged and started to get redressed, Padme followed his lead and she to started to get dressed but couldn’t understand how a boy his age was so good at licking cunts.
As they walked out of the closet they heard Qui Gon and Watto arguing.
“Republic credits don’t work around here.” Watto said
“How about we bet then, my ship if we lose, the hyperdrive if we win, I’ll even let you choose the game.” Qui Gon reasoned. Watto, being a betting person, smiled.
“Deal, I choose pod racing, but I choose Sebulba to win, he always wins.” Watto smiled.
“I race, choose me.” Anakin piped up. Qui Gon inspected the boy closely and nodded.
“I choose the boy.”
“Anakin! He always loses! But you chose him and you have to stick with him.” Watto laughed
“I’m going home Watto, sand storms coming I heard.” Anakin said.
“Yes we better be going to.” Qui Gon said. Then Qui Gon, Padme and Anakin all left the store.
“Do you guys have a place to go?” Anakin asked.
“Our ships just outside the city.” Qui Gon answered.
“You’ll never make it in time, you could come stay at my house then you could inspect my pod racer.” Anakin offered secretly hoping to get in Padme’s pants again.
“We’d love to.” Padme cut in. Anakin waved them down an alley and towards his house.
“What for mesa!” Jar Jar yelled dashing out of a store, with the owner yelling behind him.
“Well this is it.” Anakin said opening the door to his house.
“Anakin is that you?” a women’s voice called from inside the house.
“Yes, and I brought friends that are going to stay the night with us, if it’s ok.” Anakin called back. A woman came out from the room and looked at Qui Gon with lust in her eyes.
“Of course it is my names Shmi.” The women said now eyeing Padme down.
“My name is Qui Gon, this is Padme and Jar Jar.” Qui Gon said with a smile.
“Well make yourselves at home.” Shmi said just before disappearing into the room again.
“Well let’s see your Pod Racer.” Padme said with a grin.
And with that Anakin lead the group out into the backyard…
Natsu
12-29-2010, 01:00 PM
oh wow
UrbanChaos
12-29-2010, 01:01 PM
I know Anakin was only about nine in the movie but i didnt like a nine year old being put in an adult situation and nine seems a little young anyways, plus this site has a rule of a minium age of fourteen, hope you enjoy feed back is most welcome
lilshepherd
12-30-2010, 02:48 PM
Nice
Natsu
12-31-2010, 05:00 PM
dude it says in the chapter and i quete "
Padme being around 15 noticed the boy was only about A year or two younger, and he was kind of cute." thus meaning he would be about oh i don't know 14!!
UrbanChaos
12-31-2010, 09:08 PM
@Natsu except that tatooine dosent run by galactic standard time i.e. our time since Tatooine dosent have the same time hours or the same amount of days in their year its hard to know his exact age so about is an approximate age
And im not really sure how that effects the story lol
UrbanChaos
01-16-2011, 10:37 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 4: Shmi’s Adventure
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
“That’s a very impressive Pod Pacer you have Anakin.” Qui Gon Jinn commented
“Do you think I’ll win Qui Gon?” Anakin asked
“Of course I do.” Qui Gon said as he patted Anakin’s shoulder. Padme was inspecting the engines not really understanding the concept.
“I can show you how it works Padme.” Anakin said walking over towards Padme. Padme smiled and listened intently to Anakin’s words while he pointed at hoses and wires explaining their uses.
Qui Gon turned and started to walk into the house, in the back round he could hear Anakin trying to impress Padme by telling her he was the only human that could Pod Race. Qui Gon suppressed laughter seeing young love in action.
Qui Gon entered the homestead and walked into the living room, he sat down and crossed his legs. He gently closed his eyes and began to meditate. He let his body become one with the force and became very aware of the force. And their was something very… odd. Something that radiated the force more than anything he had ever felt.
How had he not noticed this earlier! He had never felt such untamed force power in his life! But where was it coming from? Or who was it coming from? Qui Gon focused harder and was able to narrow it down to the backyard.
He felt Padme’s luscious presence, Jar Jar’s dimwittedness, some kids… probably Anakin’s friends, and their it was the overwhelming presence it was… it was Anakin, Qui Gon was instantly flooded with confusion. Anakin was just a boy, and probably had next to no knowledge of the force. But their was no doubt he was the source of the power.
Qui Gon settled his nerves, took a deep breath, and decided he would deal with it later. He needed to meditate right now. Then he sensed another presence in the room he had been to focused on locating the source of power he felt and had forgotten his surroundings. He immediately knew it was Shmi watching him.
“Do you need something?” Qui Gon spoke with out moving. Shmi jumped startled at Qui Gon’s steady voice.
“Umm… No I was just interested in what you were doing.” Shmi answered blushing at being caught, she had actually been watching him because she had thought he was very handsome. Shmi had been alone for a very long time, and aside from being loaned out to Watto’s friends, she had not had the tender embrace of a man. And secretly longed to be fucked again. Just watching him had made her wet.
“I was just meditating, did you need help with something?” Qui Gon asked turn his head to look at her.
“Well you could help me with dinner if you wanted.” Shmi shrugged.
“I’d be delighted.” Qui Gon replied.
He stood up and Shmi took him by the hand and led him into the kitchen.
She pulled out dishes and handed Qui Gon a piece of meat and a knife.
“You can cut that while I prepare the other foods.” Shmi said with a smile.
“So… where is Anakin’s father.” Qui Gon Asked knowing that if Anakin was so strong in the force so would his father.
“Their was no father, I carried him, I raised him... that’s pretty much the whole story.” Shmi said with a nervous glance hoping that she would still be able to fuck him.
Qui Gon just nodded, he unfastened his robe and laid it on the chair. He was now just in his under shirt and his biceps were fully exposed. His upper arms where one hundred percent muscled. Her mouth gaped not realizing just how well muscled he was. Qui Gon turned and noticed her staring.
“Is their something wrong?” Qui Gon asked puzzled. But Shmi just stood their now knowing she had to fuck him, but how?
“Shmi are you ok?” Qui Gon asked now concerned. He grabbed her shoulders and gave her a slight shake.
Shmi lunged in and embraced him in a hug locking her lips to Qui Gon’s. Qui Gon took a step back startled by what she had just done but Shmi remained kissing him. Qui Gon now realized just how beautiful she was, she had been a slave her whole life. She had a very slender feeling and her breasts where a nice average size more then a handful.
Qui Gon slid his hand down her back and squeezed her ass, her ass was nice and round. Perfectly firm and worked. He lifted her up and slammed her on the counter, dishes clattered everywhere, she ran her hands through his hair and his dick increased in size from the continuous making out. She reached down and rubbed his cock through the his pants. Qui Gon hovered her in the air with the force and pulled her pants down and then off and gently sat her back down. She giggled the realizing now that Qui Gon was a Jedi.
The counter was cold on Shmi’s now bare ass and her the juices of her pussy where now falling on the counter.
“No panties Shmi?” Qui Gon asked with a grin.
“I’ve been so naughty master Jedi, maybe you should punish me.” Shmi said sucking her index finger seductively.
Qui Gon smiled and put three fingers into her pussy and started to thrust them in and out, with the other hand he massaged her clit.
“Mmm Qui Gon you’re so good.” Shmi moaned.
Qui Gon could feel that she had not received sex for a very long time. He used the force to squeeze her breasts and then he heard her groan and felt a torrent of fluid released on his fingers. She gasped for breath never having cummed so quick.
“Maybe we should take this to the bedroom.” Qui Gon stated with a smile.
“No! Fuck me on the table!” Shmi demanded. Qui Gon, who was happy to oblige, picked her up and laid her on the table. She threw her shirt off, and Qui Gon squeezed her tits, and they where so elegant and soft. Shmi eyed Qui Gon down and he pulled his pants down showing off a fully erect ten inch cock.
Shmi gasped seeing how large his cock was and hoped she would be able to take it all. Qui Gon gently guided his dick into her pussy. She leaned back and gripped the edges of the table for support.
Then with a mighty thrust Qui Gon shoved his whole dick in. Shmi Gasped for air and the pleasure was overwhelming. Qui Gon started to furiously thrust his cock in and out using the force to increase his speed. Shmi gulped down air not knowing she could feel so good, Qui Gon leaned in and massaged her tits with his hands while again using the force to squeeze her nipples.
She screamed in pleasure and came for a second time. She couldn’t believe how good this felt. Sweat beads rolled down Qui Gon’s chest as he thrusted his cock in and out as fast as he could, he felt the ever need to cum as he pounded her raw pussy.
She pulled her self up and hugged her naked body against Qui Gon’s chest, Qui Gon continued to pound her pussy furiously. Shmi knew if Qui Gon didn’t cum quick she would pass out soon from the pleasure.
“Qui Gon I need you to cum.” Shmi grunted, Qui Gon kissed her cheek and began to pull out, when Shmi wrapped her legs around Qui Gon waist pulling him in close and trapping his cock in her cunt.
“I didn’t say pull out Jedi.” Shmi whispered in his ear. Qui Gon grinned knowing that it was next to impossible for a Jedi to impregnate someone or be impregnated.
Qui Gon thrusted one last time and his balls slapped one last time against the inside of her thighs. Cum spurted inside her pussy filling her womb to the brim and to the point where it was spilling out.
“That was amazing.” Shmi said while Qui Gon pulled his pants up.
“Glad I could help.” Qui Gon said with a wink. Shmi got up and gathered her clothes.
“Well I’d better finish dinner.” Shmi sighed.
“And I had better finish meditating.” Qui Gon said as he turned around and headed into the living room
It was long until dinner was ready, and Shmi called everyone to the table, they ate their supper with casual conversation and Shmi eyeing Qui Gon down lustfully already wanting more. Anakin had his eyes locked on Padme’s breasts, she didn’t mind, Padme knew they were as perfect as breasts could get and she loved to show them off.
“Whoops dropped my fork.” Padme giggled and disappeared under the table where she spotted Anakin’s crotch, she reached out and began to rub his cock through his pants.
Anakin’s eyes widened at the sudden pleasure, and he began to cough.
“Are you ok dear?” Shmi asked.
“Fine, never been better.” Anakin replied quickly.
Padme knew she had a limited amount of time so she put her hands down his pants and started to rub Anakin’s cock as best as she could. From all this danger of easily getting caught just made Anakin all the more horny he felt like he was about to burst with cum.
Anakin put his hands under the table and pulled his pants down to his knees. His six inch cock stood straight up Padme instantly clamped her mouth on it and started a steady bob of her head.
“Padme do you just want another fork? It seems like your having a hard time finding it.” Shmi said
“N-n-no.” Padme stuttered as she sucked Anakin’s cock.
“Well I’ll come under the table and help you look then.” Shmi replied as she lifted the table cloth, both Anakin’s and Padme’s eyes widened in fear, Padme tilted her head in the direction of where Shmi was sitting. And as Shmi’s head appeared under the table Padme still had Anakin’s dick in her mouth trying to look innocent. Shmi quickly crawled under the table and up to Padme.
“Padme what are you doing you naughty girl.” Shmi whispered harshly
“Hmf mmf mmm.” Padme sputtered with Anakin’s cock still in her mouth
“Well I might as well help you finish.” Shmi sighed. Grabbing Anakin’s balls and massaging them with her hands.
Padme spit out Anakin’s cock and kissed Shmi, then Shmi tilled her head and wrapped her lips around the side of Anakin’s cock and Padme did the same. Now Anakin’s cock was sandwiched between his mom’s mouth and Padme’s mouth. Then the both started to bob up and down in a similar rhythm. Anakin could hardly believe that he was getting a blow job from both his mom and Padme… at the same time! Occasionally his mom would give him a blowjob and he would eat out her pussy in return but he didn’t think his mom was this dirty.
Then Shmi went to the top and sucked the tip of Anakin’s cock and his dick exploded in cum. Shmi kept it all in her mouth, then turned to Padme and began to kiss her, the swapped the cum back and forth until they both swallowed about half.
“Found it!” Padme called as she quickly popped out from under the table with the fork in hand. She looked at Anakin who looked exhausted from his sudden release, then to Shmi’s spot where she too popped up.
“Mom can I go to bed? I’m kinda tired.” Anakin asked
“Yes it’s going to be a big day tomorrow, how about we all go to bed early.” Shmi commented and everyone nodded their heads in agreement.
“Qui Gon you can sleep in Anakin’s room, Padme can sleep in my a room, and Jar Jar… you can stay in the living room I guess.” Shmi instructed. The all got up and left to their room assignments.
“I only have one bed so we’ll have to share Padme.” Shmi said.
“I don’t mind.” Padme replied with a smile as she crawled on the bed on her hands and knees her but waving high in the air.
The Shmi slapped Padme’s perfectly toned ass with an open hand.
“Ouch!” Padme cried.
“You’ve been a naughty girl Padme it’s time for your punishment.” Shmi said with a wicked grin. Padme wondered what she was in for.
Shmi sat on the edge of the bed and pulled Padme over her knee, and pulled down her pants to show off Padme’s perfectly round ass.
“Time for a spanking.” Shmi stated. Then slapped Padme’s ass with a hand, a tear rolled down Padme’s cheek, but she surprisingly liked it. After several more hits, Padme’s ass was fairly red, and more tear streams were flowing down her cheek. Then she pulled Padme’s shirt off and pulled down her pants as well.
“Sit on the edge of the bed.” Shmi demanded. Padme obediently did so, Shmi kneeled down and buried her head in between Padme’s crotch.
Shmi put three fingers in Padme’s snatch and began to thrust them violently, then with the other hand she put one finger in Padme’s ass and followed the same rhythm as her three fingers.
“Mmm, slow down Shmi… you’re going to fast and I’m an ass virgin.” Padme moaned. But Shmi just increased the speed, this sudden burst of speed made Padme cum spilling her juices all over Shmi’s hands.
“Their punishment served.” Shmi said with a smile.
“I’ve never came so quick, how did you get so good?” Padme panted.
“Oh you learn a few things when you get my age, now time for sleep.” Shmi said as she stripped down naked too and climbed under the blankets. Padme crawled underneath the blankets next to her and hugged Shmi tightly their naked bodies pressed tightly together.
Padme dry humped Shmi’s leg a little and grinded it as well, but they both knew it was too late to start anything. So they slowly drifted off to sleep…
UrbanChaos
01-16-2011, 10:37 PM
Comments, questions and ideas are most welcome
irishcdn
01-17-2011, 02:46 PM
keep it coming
puckstop101
01-17-2011, 11:00 PM
nice man, good story
lindsaylover
01-19-2011, 09:21 PM
I like it a lot. There are some unusual pairings, which is refreshing and keeps in interesting. I'm not as keen on using nine-year-old Anakin, honestly, but it's your story and I enjoyed the rest a great deal. Please keep writing.
UrbanChaos
01-20-2011, 12:10 PM
I'm not as keen on using nine-year-old Anakin,
@lindsaylover
If you read chapter 3 you'll find out that i changed Anakin's age to 14, i also made an editors note right under the story explaining that i had changed Anakin's age to make it closer to Padme's because I didnt like the idea of a nine year being put into these adult situations just like you
lindsaylover
01-21-2011, 07:31 AM
@lindsaylover
If you read chapter 3 you'll find out that i changed Anakin's age to 14, i also made an editors note right under the story explaining that i had changed Anakin's age to make it closer to Padme's because I didnt like the idea of a nine year being put into these adult situations just like you
Wow, sorry for missing that. I love the story, and I guess I got distracted by it and didn't see the comment. Thank you!
UrbanChaos
01-22-2011, 11:19 AM
@lindsaylover
No worries buddy, i just thought you'd enjoy the story alot more knowing that fact, glad you liked the story :)
irishcdn
01-22-2011, 07:49 PM
cant wait for the next one
UrbanChaos
01-22-2011, 08:05 PM
@irishcdn
shouldnt be to long it will probably be out later tonight, depending on how long the editing takes.
lilshepherd
01-22-2011, 09:39 PM
Nice
UrbanChaos
01-23-2011, 01:36 AM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 5: Race Day
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Padme awoke to the sun shining on her, she glanced at the clock. It read four o’ clock, Padme yawned and wondered how it was already daylight. Then remembered that Tatooine had two suns, so it was almost always daylight.
Padme pulled the sheets off of her, and saw that Shmi’s arm was wrapped around her waist, Padme smiled remembering what they had done last night her ass was still a little sore from the spanking.
Padme gently lifted Shmi’s arm up and off of her waist, Padme sat up and let her legs dangle from the bed trying to spot her underwear. She eventually found them and went over to grab them.
She slipped her arms through the bra straps and peeked out Shmi’s window to the backyard, she was surprised to see Anakin working on his Pod Racer engine, probably doing some final tweaks before the big race. Padme slid her panties up her legs and onto her waist. She inspected her underwear, they were a black, a silk like material for comfort but very revealing, they where mostly see through.
Padme looked at Shmi’s door and noticed it was slightly open, Padme positive Shmi had closed it. Padme quietly opened the door and noticed a pair of boxers laying on the floor.
Padme carefully picked them up and inspected them they were dark blue with white straight lines going down the sides of them, and were a little damp on the crotch. Padme immediately knew they were Anakin’s, she grinned knowing the boy had been spying on them.
She sighed, she might as well put them away for the boy, she walked past the living room seeing Jar Jar sprawled across the couch. Padme found Anakin’s room and opened the door, she saw a mat and pillow on the floor, probably were Anakin had slept, then looked at Anakin’s bed were Qui Gon was still sleeping. Then she saw part of the sheet sticking straight in the air.
Padme walked in slightly intrigued, Qui Gon seemed to be in a comatose state. Probably meditating she thought, she had heard that when Jedi meditate in their sleep that the cant be waken by an outside force. And Padme defiantly wanted to check out Qui Gon’s morning wood.
She tossed Anakin’s boxers to the side and gently walked to the end of the bed, were she proceeded to pull the blankets down and off of Qui Gon. Revealing a ten inch cock sticking straight up in the air.
She gasped, and then an uncontrollable urge came over her. She crawled up onto the bed and found her face inches away from Qui Gon’s ten inch cock. She gently rubbed his dick with her hand, then she slowly began to put her mouth over it and began to suck on it. Then started to bob her head up and down giving him a blowjob. It was so stiff, she had to have it in her pussy.
She sat up and gently maneuvered her body so her pussy was inches above Qui Gon’s cock, Qui Gon hadn’t stirred yet, she slowly sat down engulfing Qui Gon’s dick in her snatch, she finally took all ten inches into her pussy. Then started to slowly move her body up and down slowly starting to ride his cock.
She started to go faster and faster and finally got up to normal speed, but she wanted more something inside her wanted to go faster, she began to slap her ass down on his shaft as fast as she could a smacking sound evolved every time she hit Qui Gon’s balls. She couldn’t believe the pleasure she was experiencing. A tingle developed in her snatch and she released a load of cum onto Qui Gon’s dick. Then she felt Qui Gon’s dick shudder and he too released stream after stream of cum into Padme’s pussy.
Padme kept riding his cock but at a much slower rate. Eventually Qui Gon’s dick became limp and fell out. She took that as her hint to leave. She grabbed her panties and strode back to Shmi’s room cum dripping down her leg. She flopped down into Shmi’s bed and fell back asleep with a content grin on her face.
Back in Anakin’s room Qui Gon grinned it was amazing what a little force persuasion could do. Padme had the idea of fucking Qui Gon, he had just helped it along, then he too closed his eyes for a few more hours of sleep.
The next thing Qui Gon knew Shmi was yelling for every one to wake up and it was time to leave for the race.
The next hour was a blur of Shmi getting everyone ready and showing them to the race track. Anakin had gone on ahead to get his pod racer into position. But Qui Gon had another task, he had to talk to Watto about freeing Anakin from slavery.
Qui Gon wandered around the race track until he finally saw Watto talking to Sebulba. Qui Gon strode over to them trying to figure out how he was going to free Anakin.
“Watto I need to talk to you,” Qui Gon said.
“Ah, it’s Qui Gon the man foolish enough to bet against Sebulba.” Watto snickered
“Watto, what would it take to free Anakin from slavery.” Qui Gon asked.
“Hmmm, he’s one of my best slaves, but since your going to lose the race, how about a game of chance?” Watto replied, removing a chance dice from his pocket.
“Deal.” Qui Gon said.
“I have a better idea.” Sebulba cut in
“If you can fuck my two slave twi'lek’s, without cumming for fifteen minuets then Anakin is free.” Sebulba continued.
“Great idea!” Watto said with a devilish smile knowing that Sebulba had trained his two slaves into the best fucking machines on Tatooine no man had ever even made it to ten minuets without cumming let alone fifteen. Qui Gon just nodded his head in agreement, he had already started to summon the force to help him with the task.
Sebulba lead them to his private room where the twi’lek’s were already waiting naked, Qui Gon’s eyes raced across their naked body’s. Everything about them was identical. Their tits were the same size, about the same as Shmi’s. they had long slender legs. And their body’s where perfectly toned and light blue.
“Give him the special treatment.” Sebulba said. Qui Gon pulled his clothes off and tossed them into the corner of the room. The twi’lek’s bet down in front of Qui Gon’s already stiff cock preparing to give him a blow job.
“Timer starts… now!” Watto exclaimed.
The first Twi’lek instantly snapped her mouth onto his ten inch cock and started to bob her head back and forth. The other put his balls into her mouth and began to suck on them, but then she did something Qui Gon had never seen she used her head tails to wrap around Qui Gon’s cock and started to jack him off, the head tails fell into the rhythm of the other twi’lek’s blow job, and Qui Gon grunted he couldn’t believe how good it felt. He called on the force trying to calm himself before he blew his load.
“Five minuets.” Watto stated. And as if that was a sign to change positions they lead Qui Gon to a table were the second twi’lek laid down flat Qui Gon put his cock in her pussy and began to pound it as hard as he could, he couldn’t let Watto give a reason to back out so he had to fuck as best as he could. The first twi’lek lay on top of the other so they were in the sixty nine position. The twi’lek on the bottom began to eat the others pussy. The one on the top facing Qui Gon’s cock licked and sucked the dick every time it came out, and then wrapped her head tails around Qui Gon’s balls and began to massage them. Qui Gon felt like his dick was about to exploded.
“Ten minuets.” Watto gasped. The twi’lek’s took that as their cue to step things up. The twi’lek on the bottom guided the cock into her ass hole which was twice as tight as her pussy. The one on top put her tits around Qui Gon’s cock giving him a tity job every time his cock came out. Her head tails continued to massage his balls. Qui Gon felt like he was going to pass out from pleasure.
“F-f-f- Fifteen minuets.” Watto stuttered in disbelief.
“Gather round girls.” Qui Gon grunted. The twi’lek’s instantly stopped and quickly got on the knees beneath Qui Gon’s dick with their tongues out waiting for cum. Qui Gon’s dick exploded covering the twi’lek’s in cum from head to toe. Qui Gon had never came so much in his life
“You win.” Watto said shocked.
“The boy is free to go.” Watto continued.
“What about Shmi.” Qui Gon asked putting his clothes back on.
“No way, she stays in my possession.” Watto angrily said. Leading Qui Gon and Sebulba out, Sebulba turned and went down some stairs, most likely to go to his pod racer.
Qui Gon left and found Shmi in a balcony type stand.
“I freed Anakin.” Qui Gon said to Shmi.
“That’s great news! Will you take him with you?” Shmi replied.
“Yes, he will be trained as a Jedi.” Qui Gon said. Before Shmi could reply they heard the announcement that the race was starting.
The race was an amazing lap after lap was nothing but exciting Anakin was doing an awesome job and managed to stay in the lead. And on the final lap Sebulba wasn’t to be seen, apparently Anakin taken him out. Anakin crossed the finish line for the win!
Padme smiled, she left the balcony to go and get Anakin a present for winning, one that she would wrap up. She left trying to find a store that sold bows.
Anakin left his pod racer a winner and a huge grin on his face.
“Qui Gon I won did you see me!?!” Anakin shouted in excitement.
“Yes I did Anakin, you did great, and Watto has agreed to release you from slavery.” Qui Gon said
“Really!?! What about mom?” Anakin asked.
“I tried but Watto wouldn’t have it.” Qui Gon said.
“Let’s celebrate the win.” Shmi cut in, and then grabbing the two of them she lead them off. Anakin wondered were Padme was but didn’t think much of it.
The group celebrated until the middle of the night until they finally went home. Qui Gon lead Anakin outside onto the balcony were he started to do a brief medical examination to make sure Anakin was ok. But really Qui Gon wanted a sample of his blood to check for medichlorines.
“You are going to be trained as a Jedi Anakin.” Qui Gon said breaking the silence.
“Really? How do I use the force anyway?” Anakin asked.
“Well I guess in a way you draw an inner strength from yourself.” Qui Gon explained.
“Well I need to get to bed.” Anakin yawned
“We leave in the morning.” Qui Gon called as the boy walked into the house leaving Qui Gon to stare at the night sky.
Meanwhile Padme was in Anakin’s room she had removed all of her clothes leaving her naked, she tied a red bow around her tits, then she tied another red bow around her waist covering her snatch. She smiled knowing she would make a good prize for Anakin, then she heard movement outside the door, she quickly stood in the sexiest pose she could make and waited.
Anakin slid his door open and looked up, seeing the sexiest sight he had ever seen… it was Padme wrapped in a bow.
“Padme what are you doing?” Anakin asked as he quickly shut and locked his door.
“I’m your prize Ani.” Padme said provocatively.
Anakin smiled and walked over to Padme, he kissed her on the lips.
“Anything I want?” Anakin asked.
“I’m your present.” Padme replied.
“I want a blow job.” Anakin said with a smirk.
Immediately Padme slid to her knees and pulled Anakin’s pants down, his cock was already fully erect to its six inches. Padme rubbed the shaft with her right hand and massaged his balls with the left. Then she put the dick in her mouth and started to give him the blow job he asked for. She continuously deep throated it taking all six inches down her throat. She sped up bobbing her head as fast as she could. Then he grabbed the back of Padme’s head and shoved it all the way forward spraying his cum down her throat. She swallowed it all and he pulled his cock out, cum dribbled down her chin, she kept jacking Anakin’s wet cock and he released two more streams of cum which landed in her hair and on her cheek.
“Ani you already came I had more to give.” Padme said sadly.
“Don’t worry Padme.” Anakin said as she stood up. Anakin brought her into a hug and felt to the back of the bow. He pulled one of the bow strings and the bow fell to the floor showing Padme’s lovely tits. He buried his face in them and she kissed the back of his head.
Then Anakin tried to use his inner strength as Qui Gon had called it, and before he knew it his dick was slowly growing hard again.
Padme felt a hard object slowly rise into her thighs and she knew it was Anakin’s dick.
“How did you do that?” Padme asked with a smirk.
“It’s my present to you.” Anakin said pushing Padme onto the bed were she laid on her back.
Anakin climbed on top of Padme and set his now hard dick in between Padme’s tits. Padme pushed her tits together and Anakin began to thrust, his cock slipped in and out and every time Padme had a chance she would suck the tip of his cock. Anakin looked down seeing the cum before still in her hair and on her face. Anakin felt so turned on that he came once again. The cum sprayed all over her face and hair. Padme licked her lips trying to get the cum. Anakin slid down to Padme’s pussy and started to untie the bow their. Padme wiped some cum off her face and rubbed it on her tits.
Anakin tossed the bow to the side and gave her pussy one lick, it was already super moist. Anakin again tried to summon the inner strength and once again his dick hardened.
Anakin gently guided his dick in to Padme’s pussy and he couldn’t believe how tight she was. He started to thrust in and out and she squealed in pleasure. Anakin increased speed, he pounded her raw pussy as hard as he could. They both moaned in ecstasy, Anakin noticed that he already had to cum, but he drew on the inner strength to buy him an extra few minuets. He pulled out and shot stream after stream of cum onto her stomach and chest. Anakin put his cock back into her pussy and gave an extra few thrust as his cock went limp he tried to call on the inner strength again but he was just to tired. He looked at Padme who glistened in cum. He crawled up onto Padme, gave her one last kiss and passed out.
Padme smiled knowing her present was the best Anakin would ever receive. She hugged the sleeping boy and then grabbed her communicator out of her pants pocket.
“Sabe I need you to do something for me.” Padme whispered into the communicator.
“What is it Padme.” Sabe answered.
“I need you to visit a parts vendor named Watto and persuade him to free a slave named Shmi, do whatever it takes.” Padme added.
“Understood, should I dress up as you.” Sabe asked. Padme considered that if Sabe went disguised as her, which would be easy since Sabe was Padme’s decoy, She might have a better chance of persuading Watto.
“Yes I do tell me when you’ve freed her.” Padme said and then shut off her communicator.
Sabe had dressed up as Padme and snuck away from the ship, she and Obi Wan had fucked almost every hour of every day since Padme had left the ship. But she had to focus now she pulled up her hood and hurried.
Sabe wandered around and finally found the store, she walked in and saw a green short creature which she assumed was Watto.
“Watto, I need to talk to you.” Sabe said.
“huh, yeah, oh yes your… Padme right?” Watto asked
“Yes, I was wondering if their was anyway I could free Shmi from you.” Sabe said.
“Well there is one way…” Watto said now looking Sabe up and down.
“Since I lost Anakin I’ve been wanting to get him back, some revenge. Anakin talked a lot about you… and fucking you would give me great pleasure, knowing I took that from him would be payment enough for Shmi.” Watto said with an evil grin as he rubbed his chin.
“Ok.” Sabe said quietly.
Sabe pulled at her cloak and it fell to the ground, she pulled her red shirt off, and then pulled her black slacks off. She continued undressing unclipping her bra and putting it in the pile of clothes and then pulled off her panties and set it in the pile as well.
Watto pulled off a belt like thing from his waist and two seven inch dicks popped out one was inches above the second.
Sabe walked over and Watto hovered in mid air, Sabe started to suck on the lower cock and stroke the top one. She started to go as fast as she could wanting to end it. She sucked as hard as she could and she heard Watto grunt and she felt cum spray into her throat, and felt a hot sticky substance land on her head, she knew this was the cum from the top cock. She was relived that she had made him cum so quick. But she noticed his dicks where still hard.
“I’m a Toydarian, we cum quick on the first one, but we have two cum holders that was just the first, now bend over that counter.” Watto said.
Sabe did as she was told and bent over the table, she felt rather embarrassed, but she knew she had to do as the queen asked and she might as well enjoy it.
“Fuck me hard Watto.” Sabe said as she wiggled her ass.
“Aren’t you slut.” Watto stated with a smile.
He hovered over to Sabe’s ass and she felt him push up against her pussy, but when he shoved in she felt both cocks in her pussy! She had never felt something so big invading her pussy. She hadn’t felt this pain since she had lost her virginity. But it had started to feel good, really good. She started to shake her ass wanting more pleasure. Watto increased his speed, going as fast as he could. Then finally pulled out and came all over Sabe’s back.
“Shmi’s free.” Watto said with a smile as he floated into a back room. Sabe quickly wiped herself down and got redressed.
Watto floated out and tossed Sabe a holo vid chip.
“A little souvenir, it’s us fucking.” Watto said
“You came quick for a Toydarian.” Sabe called as she walked out, she could her Watto yelling something but couldn’t tell what.
Sabe pulled out her communicator sending a message to Padme telling her the good news, and then quickly rushed to the ship she wanted to get in the bacta tank to heal her hurting pussy.
Padme received the message and smiled, she would have good news for everyone in the morning…
**Editore note this i were I'm going to stray from the actual star wars story line and just stick to basic storyline basicly changing it for a fun "What if"
UrbanChaos
01-23-2011, 01:46 AM
questions comment and ideas are welcome
jimmyf1
01-23-2011, 09:41 AM
very good keep going:D
irishcdn
01-23-2011, 01:28 PM
great addition keep i coming
kieran
01-24-2011, 09:51 AM
Just been through and read them all love them :) well done sir!
UrbanChaos
01-24-2011, 12:32 PM
@kieran
Glad you liked em
kieran
01-24-2011, 03:24 PM
Brilliant story :D read them all. Hmm I can't think of anything to add. But I would like it if you stayed away from some of the more repulsive or deformed characters like Yoda. Great addition keep it up. :)
kieran
01-24-2011, 03:25 PM
Sorry about the repost didn't realise my last one showed up because my connection was being weird. :)
UrbanChaos
01-24-2011, 08:01 PM
@kieran yeah i kinda want to stray away from a small 900 year old green guy ;)
BTW the next chapter should be out either tonight or in the next few days
UrbanChaos
01-25-2011, 10:59 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 6: New Friends, New Enemies
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
“Anakin, it’s time to leave pack your things.” Qui Gon said as his head peeked through the door.
Anakin looked to the door but Qui Gon had already left, he rolled over to Padme to give her a hug, but she too had already left. He yawned and got out of bed quickly putting on his clothes and headed to the kitchen.
In the kitchen he saw everyone eating, Padme at the table eating some kind of cereal, Qui Gon was munching on some fruit, Jar Jar was no were to be seen, he was probably still sleeping Anakin thought.
Anakin got his breakfast and sat across from Padme at the table. For the whole breakfast Padme and Anakin traded winks and sly grins from the night before.
“Alright Anakin we need to leave Watto is having the T-14 hyperdrive taken to our ship as we speak.” Qui Gon Said
Anakin ran to his room to quickly pack a backpack for the trip, when he noticed the droid he had been working on, he went to the back of its head and flipped the on switch.
“Hello, I am C-3PO cyborg relations.” The droid spoke
“Come on C-3PO we’re leaving.” Anakin replied, the droid said nothing else and followed Anakin into the front entrance were the group was waiting to leave.
“Oh, and Shmi.” Padme began.
“Yes Padme?” Shmi asked.
“I talked to Watto after the race and he said that you’re now free.” Padme finished with a grin.
“Really that’s great!” Anakin shouted.
“Thank you so much Padme, and your all welcome to visit anytime!” Shmi said over the excitement.
Shmi rushed them at the door knowing they had to leave to make it to Coruscant in time for the senate.
The group, now accompanied by a new droid, headed for the outskirts of the city.
Anakin was leading the group, he was excited for the adventures that he was about to experience.
“Anakin drop!” Qui Gon yelled, Anakin instantly dropped to his stomach and a swoop bike shot right over top to of him.
“Get to the ship now!” Qui Gon shouted the group ran to the ship while Qui Gon pulled his lightsaber out awaiting an attack.
A hooded figure front flipped off of the bike a red lightsaber already glowing, Qui Gon countered with a swipe, they began to fight, brilliant flashes escaping from the hits. The mysterious figured seemed to be pushing Qui Gon back with each slice, Qui Gon knew that he could not win under the circumstances. Padme’s ship hovered in low with the ramp extended, apparently Qui Gon’s apprentice had sensed the same thing.
Qui Gon force jumped into the ship and the ramp sealed behind him. Obi Wan came sprinting down the corridor from the bridge.
“Master what was that?” Obi Wan asked.
“A Sith.” Qui Gon said solemnly. Obi Wan nodded gravely, it was thought that the Sith had been extinct for hundreds of years, the appearance of one now only meant trouble.
“I need to rest, and prepare a report for the Jedi council.” Qui Gon spoke after a few minuets of silence, Qui Gon got up with a grunt and walked towards his quarters.
“This is Anakin make sure he is well taken care of.” Qui Gon called down from the corridor.
“Anakin eh?” Obi wan asked.
“Umm yes sir.” Anakin said shyly.
“You must be tired I’ll show you to your room, when we get to Coruscant you’re going to have a rough time in front of the council.” Obi Wan said as he showed Anakin toward his new room.
Obi Wan had just showed Anakin to his room and began to walk towards the Queens room to visit Sabe.
Obi Wan knocked on the door, and waited for Sabe to answer. But instead of Sabe answering he was surprised to see Padme she was wearing tight dark slacks that showed off her nice slender ass and were super tight against her luscious ass. His eyes trailed up to find she wasn’t wearing a shirt, just a dark black bra that was mostly see through, her tits looked as if they were about to burst through the bra.
“Hey Padme, your looking good, I was just looking for Sabe.” Obi Wan stuttered staring at Padme’s chest
“Obi! I missed you!” Padme exclaimed hugging Obi Wan and making sure to press her soft tits against his chest.
“Missed you too Padme.” Obi Wan replied hugging her back.
“Sorry Obi, Sabe’s not feeling well. But she did give me this holo vid to give to you.” Padme said handing Obi Wan a data chip, the reality was Sabe was in the bacta tank repairing her pussy from the invasion of Watto’s two dicks.
Obi Wan strode to his room with the data chip wondering what could possible be on it.
Obi Wan entered his room and put the data chip into the holo vid player and then flopped into his chair.
The video started playing and he saw Sabe walk into a dusty parts store, she was dressed up as Padme, Obi Wan had learned the difference between the two along time ago, he had seen Sabe’s naked body dozens of times and knew every inch of it.
The video continued and he saw Sabe getting undressed for a Toydarian, which he assumed was Watto, Obi Wan quickly pulled his dick out of his pants and started to rub it as it increased its hardness.
Meanwhile in Padme’s room.
“Eirtae, I need you to do something for me.” Padme said, Eirtae popped her head out of the personal medical room that Padme had.
“Yes my Queen?” Eirtae asked, Eirtae was the newest handmaiden of the group.
“Just Padme when we’re alone Eirtae. I need you to go help Obi Wan.” Padme said having already watched what was on the holo vid she knew what Obi Wan would be doing right now.
“With what?” Eirtae asked.
“Oh you’ll know when you get there.” Padme answered with a smile.
“Ok… Padme.” Eirtae said puzzled. Eirtae left leaving Padme to her thoughts. She wished she could help Obi Wan, she really liked Obi Wan, probably more then she should. But she couldn’t hurt Sabe that way they were like sisters now. Padme had never sent Eirtae on a task like this so she was interested on how she would do.
Eirtae walked towards Obi Wans corridor with a tight tank top and bright red panties on, Eirtae didn’t like the heat and since Padme had returned to the ship she had turned the heat back up for Jar Jar. She had put her shoulder length blonde hair up into a ponytail. She enjoyed walking around the ship half naked it turned her on a little but no one was in the hallways today. She wanted to suck a cock so bad she thought it had been along time since she had, she looked at her tits, they were smaller then Sabe’s and Padme’s but she liked them anyway.
Eirtae found Obi Wan’s door and without thinking just walked right in
“Obi I’m here to…” Eirtae stopped seeing Obi Wan’s seven inch cock out and fully erect, she gasped now knowing what she was supposed to help Obi Wan with. She licked her lips and walked over to Obi Wan.
“Eirtae! I was just… I mean…” Obi Wan started but stopped when he saw that Eirtae had positioned herself in between his thighs and had started to rub his cock.
Obi Wan rewound the holo vid to where Sabe was jacking off Watto. He wished that Eirtae had been Sabe but he wasn’t complaining.
Eirtae pulled her white tank top off revealing her nice perky tits. She then started to suck on Obi Wan’s cock. Obi Wan leaned over and started to pull Eirtae’s red panties off, with Obi Wan leaned over, Eirtae’s head was trapped deep throating Obi Wan’s cock. She coughed and sputtered, but Obi Wan was still getting her panties off. She decided to slurp on the dick as best as she could.
Obi Wan pulled off the panties and threw them towards the spot where he kept Padme’s and Sabe’s.
Obi Wan stood up and his dick fell out of Eirtae’s mouth, she gasped for air, and Obi wan pulled her up. He grabbed her ass and she jumped up and wrapped her legs around Obi Wan’s waist. He walked over to a wall and Eirtae’s back rested against it.
Obi Wan inserted his cock into Eirtae’s pussy, she yelped not having a dick in her snatch for sometime. He gently pushed his dick all the way in until all seven inches had been inserted. He bent his head down and started to suck on one of her nipples and with one hand started to massage the other tit. Pleasure engulfed her upper torso and she shivered in delight.
The Obi Wan started to thrust his cock in and out slowly, Eirtae’s thighs tingled, and Obi Wan started to go faster, she was glad she was wrapped around Obi Wan’s body because she never would have been able stand through all this pleasure. Obi Wan got to full speed and Eirtae screamed in pleasure cumming all over Obi Wan’s cock, her pussy was now extra sensitive. Obi Wan kept thrusting and playing with her tits when a white liquid started to drip out, Eirtae couldn’t believe she was lactating. Obi Wan increased the thrusts with the aid of the force, his balls slapped up against her furiously. Then finally Obi Wan squirted cum into Eirtae’s pussy, the warm liquid felt amazing in her body and Eirtae passed out from pleasure, Obi Wan kept thrusting until his dick fell out. He noticed that Eirtae had passed out, he snickered as he set her on the bed. He quickly put on some boxers and a white tank top, and stuffed Eirtae’s panties into the draw with Padme’s and Sabe’s.
Then he picked Eirtae up. Her legs dangled over his right arm and her head dangle over his left arm. He left her shirt in his room, she would have to come back for that he snickered.
He walked down the corridor towards the Queens room to give Eirtae back. He used the force but couldn’t sense anyone in the corridor.
While Obi Wan went to return Eirtae, Anakin went to Obi Wan’s room with a question.
Anakin approached the door, it was slightly open so Anakin walked right on in.
“Obi Wan I just had a few questions…” Anakin said as he looked around.
“He does not appear to be here.” C-3PO Stated. Anakin ignored his statement, he was focused on what was on the holo vid screen. It appeared to be Padme fucking Watto! So that’s how she freed Shmi Anakin thought. And their was another data chip sitting next to the player marked Padme plus Jar Jar. Anakin’s heart raced at the sight of both these items.
“C-3PO I need you to scan these two video documents record every frame.” Anakin said excitedly. C-3PO did as he was asked and slid both chips into a hidden compartment and quickly scanned them.
“Process complete.” C-3PO stated proudly after a few minuets. Anakin quickly returned the data chips and hustled out of the room forgetting his question, behind Anakin was C-3PO’s cries for Anakin to wait up.
Obi Wan approached Padme’s door with Eirtae’s limp body in his arms, Eirtae had a smile of pleasure on her face. Obi Wan used the force to knock on the door.
Padme opened the door wearing a dark blue short sleeved button up shirt and a mini skirt and inspected Obi Wan with a grin.
“I see you enjoyed the gift the Queen sent you. Is she ok?” Padme spoke.
“I enjoyed it thoroughly, she just passed out from pleasure is all.” Obi Wan said as he walked in and put Eirtae on the bed.
“How about throwing some of that pleasure my way?” Padme said, Obi Wan turned around to see that Padme had unbuttoned the top three buttons of her shirt, showing that she was not wearing a bra.
Obi Wan walked over to Padme with a smirk, then put both hands on the front of the shirt and ripped the front open, buttons clattered across the floor. Padme flipped the front of her skirt up showing she had no panties on either.
Obi Wan smiled and stuck one finger into Padme’s already moist pussy and with the other hand he had grabbed onto one of Padme’s tits and was groping it. Padme slowly pushed Obi Wan back towards a chair, she gave him a little shove and Obi Wan flopped back into the chair.
Obi Wan looked up and saw that Padme had tossed the ripped shirt to the side, her perfectly toned body was now exposed. Obi Wan pulled down his boxers and his cock was already stiff.
Padme hitched her skirt up a little and swung her leg over Obi Wan’s lap like she was getting on a saddle, she pulled on a piece of string in her hair letting long brown hair flow then she shook her head wildly turning Obi Wan on even more. Padme put one hand on Obi Wan’s cock and held it steady as she guided her self down onto it. She shut her eyes as a tingle of pleasure started, then Obi Wan’s seven inch cock was completely buried in Padme’s snatch. Padme Started to grind back and forth on Obi Wan’s cock as she ran her fingers through her hair. Obi Wan put his hands on Padme’s hips and started to push her up and down, Padme fell into the rhythm and was soon riding Obi Wan’s cock. Padme reached down with one hand and started to massage Obi Wan’s balls with each thrust. Obi Wan watched Padme’s elegant tits bounce up and down with each thrust.
“I’m going to cum.” Obi Wan grunted.
“Do it on my face Obi.” Padme panted, then Padme got off of Obi Wan’s cock and got on her knees, Obi Wan stood up from the chair and Padme started to jerk his cock she felt Obi Wan’s cock pulse and then the warm sticky cum she loved squirted all over her face, she tried to catch as much as she could in her mouth, after the cum had finally finished spraying Padme sucked on Obi Wan’s cock a few times. Padme’s face was drenched in Obi Wan’s cum and it had started to drip on to her tits.
“Come visit me again.” Padme winked as she bent over to get her ripped shirt. Obi Wan slapped Padme’s firm ass and she giggled, Padme sat on the bed watching Obi Wan gather his clothes, but her eyes were more focused on his dangling cock.
“I need to go back to my room.” Obi Wan said as he started to walk towards the door. Padme jumped up and hugged Obi Wan with her still exposed tits, she jerked Obi Wan’s cock a few times getting the remaining cum on her hand. Obi Wan gave a quick hug back and then rushed towards his room.
Padme licked her palm getting the cum off, then started to clean herself up.
“Attention passengers and crew, the landing ramp is now extended.” The announcement over the intercom began.
“Welcome to Coruscant…”
kieran
01-26-2011, 09:43 AM
Good stuff man :)
puckstop101
01-26-2011, 08:44 PM
nice addition man
irishcdn
01-27-2011, 08:16 PM
nice addition. keep them coming
April
01-27-2011, 08:32 PM
Thanks for the hot new chapter :)
UrbanChaos
01-29-2011, 01:03 AM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 7: The Proving
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Qui Gon, Obi Wan and Anakin walked down the landing ramp onto Coruscant. Anakin looked around craning his head in all directions trying to take in the beauty of the city. He had lived his whole life on Tatooine where there was nothing but sand. But now he was in a city that seemed to hover thousands of kilometers in the sky. He attempted to stay in stride with Obi Wan and Qui Gon who seemed to know where they were going, he had been told they were going to the Jedi temple were he would be considered as a candidate for becoming a Jedi.
Padme descended the ramp about an hour later dressed as Queen Amidala, with her two handmaidens Sabe and Eirtae, one on each side. Padme wore the traditional red gown that opened from the front her brown hair was wrapped through a golden head piece, her face was white with makeup, both her cheeks had one red dot and her top lip had dark red lipstick on it on the bottom lip it had a strip of red lipstick in the middle, her handmaidens were also wearing their traditional orange gowns and their faces were not very visible. Padme had originally made an appointment to meet with Chancellor Valorum, but she had received a message from senator Palpatine saying that if she wished immediate aid they should talk. Padme did wish help as soon as possible from the trade federation who had invaded her planet Naboo, therefore she had concluded to hear what Palpatine had to say.
Padme and her handmaidens strode into the congress building, they quickly got into an airlift and went to the Palpatine’s floor. As the lift doors opened and they walked into the entry room Padme got into her negotiating mind frame, she would not leave this floor without Palpatine’s support. The handmaidens got on both sides of a huge double door and opened them for Queen Amidala simultaneously. Padme walked to the rather large desk were Senator Palpatine sat behind her shoes clicked as she walked on the marble floor.
“You wished to speak to me Senator.” Padme spoke with her handmaidens behind her. Senator Palpatine looked up with a seemingly harmless smile.
“Yes my Queen. It has come to my attention that Naboo has been taken control by the trade federation. And that you require assistance.” Palpatine replied.
“Yes I have an appointment to speak with Chancellor Valorum.” Padme stated confidently.
“Well Chancellor Valorum won’t be able to help you.” Palpatine said dryly.
“He won’t?” Padme asked puzzled
“No. Valorum is useless what you need is a new Chancellor, someone who is willing to bypass all the political red tape.” Palpatine answered.
“And how exactly do I go about getting a new one?” Padme asked getting tired of answers that didn’t seem to help her situation.
“You need to make a movement in front of the Senate asking for someone in particular to replace Valorum as Chancellor.” Palpatine continued.
“Someone like you I suppose.” Padme said dryly finally understanding what Palpatine wanted.
“Someone like me. In fact if I was elected I would promise to help you immediately.” Palpatine smiled.
“And you would be willing to do this for me for free?” Padme questioned.
“Well, you would need to provide some… incentive.” Palpatine said a sly grin returning to his face.
“Incentive.” Padme asked on the verge of anger, thousand of her people were already hurt and injured and Palpatine wants incentive she thought! She calmed herself knowing that this was probably the only way to save her people.
“Maybe you should dismiss your servants, so we can properly make arrangements.” Palpatine said.
Padme turned and waved at her handmaidens to leave, they hesitated for a moment but after a harsh glare from Padme they walked out of the room closing the giant doors behind them.
“Name your terms.” Padme growled, she was unwilling to leave without saving her people, but she swore revenge on Palpatine knowing were this conversation would go.
“I think you know what I want.” Palpatine said with a devilish grin. Padme inspected the man, he was in his late forties, maybe his early fifties. Padme knew that with this gown she would not be able to service him properly, it took two handmaidens to assemble the whole dress. But the gown did open from the front which was a bonus. Padme would just have to make a deal with the man. She sat down in a well cushioned chair that was made from a red velvet material seated a few feet from the Senators desk.
“Given my gown I cannot help you fully.” Padme began, and Palpatine looked discouraged.
“But I can assist you orally.” Padme ended trying to sound as formal as possible. She watched Palpatine consider the proposal hoping that would be enough.
“My Queen you don’t need to talk so formal.” Palpatine started.
“I know that your gown is hard to function for sex, but just a blow job will not be sufficient, and I have met several different Naboo Queens, I know that the gown opens from the front. Tsk, tsk, you will have to do better then that.” Palpatine ended leaning back in his high back leather chair with a triumphant smile. Padme clenched her teeth, she rarely met her political match and Palpatine seemed to be one of the few. She tilted her head slightly trying to think of a way to beat him but came up with no answers it appeared that Palpatine had won. Without his support there was no way for Padme to help her people and that would be a greater loss. Padme lifted her head nobly and spoke again.
“I will give you a blow job for now, I will open my gown and expose my breast and possibly give you a tity job, but as soon as you cum it’s over. And only after you help will I allow you to fuck me.” Padme said keeping her eyes locked on Palpatine’s not letting him make her feel ashamed. Palpatine interlocked his fingers and thought deeply.
“This is acceptable.” Palpatine nodded.
“You may have a future in democracy my Queen. Now let’s begin the first half of our agreement.” Palpatine ended pushing his chair back a few feet.
Padme stood up pushing the chair back, she pulled several hidden velcro straps on the front of her gown and pulled it open. She gently took it off and set it on the red velvet chair she had just sat on. Underneath the gown was a black corset with dozens of strings her arms had a thin white material on it, they seemed to be tied to the corset, her legs had on tight black material that hugged her ass making it look extra juicy, the leg material was tight on the legs as well only adding to her already sexy legs this too seemed to be tied to the corset, on her feet she wore a pair of black high heels. She pulled a few strings on her corset and part of the front feel off revealing her perky luscious tits. She stood there with her hands on her hips her hair was still wrapped through a golden head piece and her makeup had yet to smear.
Palpatine waved Padme to come forward, she walked around the desk to see the senators dick already out, she looked at it and it was about eight inches long and as hard as a rock. Padme knelt down crouching on her heels so she wasn’t on her knees, her ass hovered inches from the ground. She put her hand on her thighs, leaned forward and licked upward licking the front half of the shaft all the way from the balls to the tip of the cock, Padme’s idea was to tease him into cumming early. But after several licks like this the cock felt hard as ever.
Padme wrapped both hands around his cock and started to slowly jerk it. She leaned in and started to lick his balls as she increased speed with her hands, Palpatine lowered one hand and felt one of Padme’s juicy tits, Padme felt Palpatine’s cock pulse and she knew that he was close to cumming she quickly put her mouth on the cock and started sucking the tip. She cursed herself for forgetting her makeup, she sighed knowing her lipstick was now smeared and probably some of her white face makeup was too. The pulse was gone in the cock and she knew she had missed her chance for a pre-ejaculation she let go of the cock with her mouth making a slight pop sound. She saw red lipstick on the tip, angry with herself she put the entire cock in her mouth and started to bob back and forth, every time she bobbed out she crossed her eyes and watched the red lipstick line grow longer and darker on the shaft of the cock. She bobbed back and forth as fast as she could but the Senator’s cock would not tremor slightly with cum. She tried deepthroating it she took it all in and down her throat several times holding it their in her warm throat for seconds at a time before gagging and pulling her head back. She pulled the cock out frustrated and felt her saliva drip down her chin, she knew she had definitely just ruined her face makeup, she inspected the cock seeing the shaft covered with lipstick.
She put the cock between both tits and started to bounce up and down going on her tip toes every time she bounced up, when she came down her high heels made a clatter on the marble floor, she watched the inside of her tits become red from the lipstick on the cock making a nice line on them, she bounced as fast as he could watching the cock disappear for a few seconds in her soft juicy tits before reappearing seconds later. She couldn’t believe the Senator had lasted so long, they had been fucking this way for almost fifteen minuets. She decided to try something called the super deepthroat, she had heard about it on her home planet of Naboo, it was something the Gungan females would attempt, but few were able to accomplish it, of course the Gungan dicks were huge, Jar Jar had said his twelve inch cock was small.
Padme reinserted Palpatine’s cock into her mouth and bobbed her head back and forth a few times only going about half way up the shaft. And then she deepthroated the cock three times getting ready to super deepthroat. She pulled out to the tip of the cock one last time, then she slammed the cock all the way down her throat keeping her mouth as wide as possible, she felt all eight inches in her throat but she wasn’t done she kept slamming her head forward with her mouth wide open, she sucked as hard as she could and sucked in the Senator’s balls into her mouth she had all eight inches of his cock in her throat and his balls in her mouth she could feel the Senator’s thighs rub against her cheek only furthering the smear of her makeup, the Senator’s eyes widen having never felt this before. With his entire shaft in Padme’s throat and the balls in her mouth Padme clamped her lips shut making sure they couldn’t escape, Padme remembered the last step to the super deepthroat and began to suck on the cock and balls like a sucker, her cheeks pulsed with each suck. Then she felt a tremor in her throat, the cock was about to explode with cum, she remembered that if she pulled the cock out now she could possible damage her throat, she had to wait for the cock to go totally limp and retract into her mouth before she could let it out. She felt a wave of warm liquid flow down her throat, she almost gagged but she knew she had to stay calm. She tracked the liquid down her throat and into her stomach, she felt stream after stream flow down her throat and thought that it would never end, he probably hadn’t came in a very long time. Finally she felt the liquid stop, she hated the fact that she had swallowed Palpatine’s cum but loved the warm feeling in her stomach.
She felt the cock go fully limp and she knew it was as small as it would be, she gently spat the cock and wiped the spit off her lips and chin, she looked at her palm seeing more smeared makeup on it.
“Wow, I don’t know were you learned that trick but it felt fantastic.” Palpatine said happily. Padme felt terrible, she had given her first super deepthroat to the person she now hated the most why couldn’t it have been Anakin or Obi Wan she wondered. She slowly stood feeling her thighs ache from being in the kneeling position for that long. The Senator leaned in to kiss Padme put she put the middle finger on his puckered lips.
“We didn’t agree on that.” Padme said trying to keep her voice even.
“You have spunk, I like that.” Palpatine said once again leaning back in his chair his cock still hanging out.
Padme walked around the desk and tied the top part of her corset on as best as she could her back turned to the Senator, Palpatine stared at her luscious ass, the black fabric hugged her ass beautifully showing how perfect it was, he felt his cock get slightly stiff again.
Padme put her gown back on snapping the velcro back in place, she walked out of the office with a tear going down her cheek, she felt noble for saving her people but ashamed for doing it this way. When Padme walked out the large doors she slammed them as hard as she could making a large boom sound. She still had to appear in front of the Senate in less then half an hour she thought, how could she go looking this way? Then she saw Sabe and Eirtae.
Sabe rushed forward knowing what Padme had just done and kissed her on the lips.
“What you did was very noble my highness.” Sabe stated.
“It took a lot of courage.” Eirtae added.
“I still feel awful.” Padme murmured.
“How am I supposed to go in front of the senate like this?” Padme asked heart broken, as they stepped into the lift. But Sabe pushed a button marked P-17.
“Where are we going Sabe? We need to go to the Senate now.” Padme said perplexed.
“We are going to the Private Quarters room 17, I had Eirtae rent it out while I ran back to the ship for your back up makeup kit.” Sabe said confidently.
The doors to of the lift opened up and the group stepped out, Padme wiped her tears away as she looked around smiling, it was one room, the walls were light grin and the bed was on the left wall, Padme saw a desk centered in the middle of the room with a large mirror on it and the make up kit already all laid out.
Padme turned and hugged Sabe grabbing her tight ass in the process.
“Thank you so much Sabe.” Padme sniffled in joy, Padme let go and kissed Eirtae on the cheek.
“And thank you Eirtae.” Padme continued. Eirtae blushed a little and led Padme to the chair.
“Now let’s fix your makeup.” Sabe said cheerfully.
Meanwhile Anakin had just finished his meeting with the Jedi Council.
“Thank you Anakin please wait outside until we call you in.” Mace Windu Told Anakin, Anakin bowed his head and walked out silently.
Qui Gon and Obi Wan both walked to the center of the room, the Master’s were in a circle around them all seated in specifically designed chairs.
“Well what do you think?” Qui Gon asked breaking the silence.
“Too old is he.” Yoda said.
“So was I if you remember.” Obi Wan cut in.
“I agree with Master Yoda.” Mace Said leaning back in his chair.
“But his medichlorine count is higher then Master Yoda’s.” Qui Gon countered.
“True, but you already have a Padawan.” Kit Fisto added.
“Obi Wan is ready for the test to become a Jedi now.” Qui Gon said patting Obi Wan’s shoulder.
“All other Padawan’s have had to go through tests to be selected it is simply unfair.” Plo Koon stated.
“That is why I suggest he goes through the Proving.” Qui Gon spoke.
The entire council murmured with thoughts and questions about the idea.
“The Proving is rarely used Qui Gon. It is only used for special cases, we have not used it in over two hundred years.” Mace said shocked.
“I know, but I feel that this boy is a special case.” Qui Gon said. Obi Wan stayed out of the conversation, he had only heard small details about the Proving and wasn’t entirely sure what it was all about.
“Qui Gon you can’t be serious we aren’t even prepared for such a thing, and it isn’t fair for us to ask someone to help Anakin.” Mace Windu stated.
“Well actually Jedi Aayla Secura volunteered, when I mentioned it to her. In fact she is already waiting in the Proving chamber.” Qui Gon said a small grin evolving knowing he had just won.
The Master’s looked around at each other taking an invisible vote.
“Bring in Anakin.” Mace Windu sighed. Obi Wan left the room and quickly returned with the boy.
“Anakin, to old are you to become a Padawan.” Yoda said. The boy lowered his head, an awful feeling washing over him.
“However, Qui Gon has brought it to our attention that you can go through something called the Proving. It is an ancient decision making tool used for cases like you. We can not tell you what it is about, but you will learn what it is when you enter the Chamber. You may choose if you except or not.” Ki Adi Mundi ended.
“I except.” Anakin said half excited half scared of what would happen next.
Mace Windu stood up and walked to an empty wall, he pulled out a key from beneath his brown cloak. He pulled a removable panel from the wall which held a lock. Mace inserted the key into the lock and twisted the key. The wall slid to the side revealing a lift.
“Please step in Anakin.” Mace said waving Anakin over, Anakin walked swiftly to the lift and stepped in.
“Jedi Aayla Secura is waiting in the Chamber for you, she will explain the rest when you get there.” Mace said pushing a button after he finished.
The doors to the lift closed leaving Anakin in the dark, he heard the lift gears start to grind and felt the lift lowering. Anakin calmed himself preparing himself for whatever lay beyond the door.
The doors opened and Anakin stepped into a rather large room, he saw a large brown table, a few chairs and a large bed. He looked around until he saw a light blue Twi’lek standing in the middle of the room, she looked to be in her early twenties, no older then twenty one Anakin thought. She was in a black zip up jumpsuit that was tight against her body, showing off her amazing curves.
“Jedi Aayla Secura?” Anakin asked.
“You can just call me Aayla sweetie.” The Twi’lek spoke soothingly as she walked over to Anakin.
“The Council said you’d explain more about the Proving.” Anakin asked feeling better.
“Well the Proving is used on potential candidates like you, who are too old but have a special element about them. The Proving will test a few of your force abilities, if you pass you will be trained.” Aayla answered.
“What kind of abilities?” Anakin asked, Aayla blushed a little and started to speak again.
“Well, what most people don’t realize is that Jedi posses amazing sex abilities, and by your age you should have learned how to control some of them. You will be tested on how many times you cum, how long you last and how much pleasure your partner receives.” Aayla said still blushing.
“Should we begin then?” Anakin asked hesitantly. Aayla just nodded with a shy grin on her face.
Anakin unzipped the front of Aayla’s jumpsuit and she pulled her arms out of her sleeves, she pushed the top half down a bit so it hung from her waist. Anakin fondled her light blue tits and sucked on one of her nipples, Aayla put a hand down Anakin’s pants and started to rub his already hard six inch cock.
Anakin pulled Aayla’s jumpsuit all the way off and inspected her heavenly body, her ass was perfectly toned from her Jedi work outs, her tits were a little larger then Padme’s and her stomach was flat and perfect. Anakin pulled Aayla toward the bed and she laid down flat on it, Anakin quickly tossed his clothes to the sides and laid on top of her in the sixty nine position, Aayla started to suck Anakin’s cock running her tongue along the shaft of the cock and massaging his balls with both hands. Anakin thrusted two fingers into Aayla’s pussy while he licked her snatch, with the other hand he grabbed and started to the squeeze her clit, Aayla squealed in delight and released a wet sticky substance into Anakin’s mouth, Anakin thrusted his hips up and down face fucking Aayla as hard as he could his balls smacking her face with each thrust, then he pushed all the way down and felt his six inch dick all the way down her throat and began to cum. The warm liquid slid down Aayla’s throat and she swallowed every drop. Anakin got up and turned around, his dick was instantly hard as he saw Aayla’s tits.
Anakin put his dick in between Aayla’s tits and leaned forward, he had heard that Twi’lek head tails were very sensitive, he put on in his mouth and started to gently suck on it.
“Oh Anakin that feels amazing.” Aayla panted, Anakin grabbed the other head tail with the other hand and started to rub it. Then he started to thrust his hips forward tity fucking Aayla. Her tits encased Anakin’s dick and it felt amazing, Aayla licked the tip of the cock each time it came out and Anakin couldn’t help but orgasm Anakin moaned and his cock exploded squirting cum all over Aayla’s face. Aayla pushed Anakin over and he flopped on his back.
Aayla climbed on top of Anakin and started to grind on Anakin’s cock with her pussy, Anakin’s cock stiffened up again and Aayla guided the dick into her pussy. Aayla lowered herself down and felt Anakin’s cock being buried all the way in. she rocked back and forth a little making the cock extra hard. And then she started to bob up and down the cock sliding in and out of the snatch, Aayla began to message her tits and couldn’t help but moan. She felt a tingle in her thighs, then felt herself cum splashing cum all over Anakin’s cock.
Anakin felt a surge of power coursing through his veins, Anakin grabbed Aayla’s ass and lifted her up, he stood up and instinctively Aayla wrapped her legs around Anakin’s waist, Anakin thrusted in and out pounding Aayla’s pussy as hard as he could, Aayla couldn’t believe that Anakin was holding her up. Anakin walked over to the large table with his dick still buried in Aayla’s pussy, Anakin laid Aayla down on the table and grabbed her thighs for support, he started to pound her pussy once again, with each thrust Aayla’s tits bounced back up and down, then she saw a glint in Anakin’s eyes almost as if they were glowing for a moment. Then she felt an invisible force start stroking her head tails, the invisible force worked its way down massaging her shoulders and began to fondle her tits and pinching her nipples, she felt the force massage every part of her body at once, her head felt like it was going to explode in pleasure she attempted to figure out how Anakin was massaging every part of her body with the force when he had virtually no training in the force. But the pleasure was just too great and she couldn’t think straight.
Anakin thrusted one more time spurting cum into Aayla’s pussy every inch of her body vibrated from Anakin’s new found force abilities, the pleasure became to great and Anakin was still spurting cum into her snatch, she felt so much pleasure and then saw darkness over whelming her vision, the pleasure was to great and she succumbed to the blackness.
Aayla’s eyes slowly fluttered opened, and she sat up, she felt cum dripping out of her pussy and looked down at it to see a large puddle that had probably leaked out. She saw Anakin still standing there with a concerned look on his face, she looked down at his dangling cock and it was fairly normal for his age about six inches. She was a Twi’lek, trained to be a sex slave like all Twi’lek’s, how could this boy make her pass out?
“Are you ok Aayla?” Anakin asked quizzically.
“Y-y-yes Anakin.” Aayla stuttered still feeling pleasure in all parts of her body though it had started to fade rapidly.
“How long was I passed out?” Aayla asked.
“About five minuets.” Anakin answered clearly still concerned. Aayla attempted to stand up but she felt very weak, she drew on the force trying to strengthen her self.
Aayla found her jumpsuit and gently put it on her pussy still very tender from the pounding. She looked over to see Anakin already dressed and by the lift doors. She entered the lift with Anakin and they rode it back up to the Council chamber.
When they emerged Anakin was instantly asked to leave, and he did as he was told.
“So Aayla, your thoughts?” Mace Windu asked
“When Qui Gon told me about this boy and how he could be the chosen one that is to destroy the Sith I almost laughed, but the boy made me pass out from pleasure.” Aayla said.
“You can’t be serious, you’re a Twi’lek, and several of us have been lucky enough to fuck you, none of us have been close to making you pass out.” Kit Fisto blurted out.
“I am serious, and the boy did, I believe he is the chosen one.” Aayla stated proudly.
“Thank you Jedi Aayla. Well we can not ignore this and I believe that the boy is to be trained as a Jedi.” Ki Adi Mundi said evenly. The Council murmured in agreement.
“Please wait outside Obi Wan.” Plo Koon said. Obi Wan bowed his head and walked out leaving his Master Qui Gon Jinn inside.
Obi Wan walked out of the Chamber and started to talk about his experience with Anakin, Obi Wan had been lucky enough to experience Aayla as well.
Before long Qui Gon came out and spoke to Obi Wan and Anakin.
“They have asked me to join the Jedi Council and I have accepted. Obi Wan you will become a Jedi within the next month.” Qui Gon said with a smile.
“What about me?” Anakin asked.
“You will be trained by Obi Wan if all goes well. Now lets head back to the ship” Qui Gon Said leading the group away.
Meanwhile in the Senate.
“That is why I believe that Senator Palpatine should become the new Chancellor.” Padme finished her long speech, and everyone gave a thunderous applause. Padme left after hearing that Palpatine would indeed become the new Chancellor. As she was leaving Palpatine stopped her.
“Ah, my Queen I’m glad I caught you before you left, aid for the planet Naboo will arrive within the next day or two. And don’t think I forgot about our deal.” Palpatine Said. Padme had nothing to say to Palpatine so she simply turned and walked away her handmaiden’s right behind her.
Padme walked to her ship the travel was a blur, her mind was busy thinking about other things. Before she knew it she was in her main chambers. She pressed the intercom button and spoke into it.
“Captain, are the Jedi onboard?” Padme asked.
“Yes my Queen.” The captain answered
“Take us to Naboo then.” Padme said.
“It will be done my Queen.” The captain returned.
“And please have Qui Gon Jinn, Obi Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker and Jar Jar Binks come to my quarters.” Padme finished turning off the intercom.
“Sabe, Eirtae we must prepare for our guests…” The Queen said with a sly grin.
UrbanChaos
01-29-2011, 01:05 AM
Comments? Questions? Ideas? feel free to do all three!
jimmyf1
01-29-2011, 06:29 AM
looking good;)
keep going.
lindsaylover
01-29-2011, 08:43 AM
Very hot, loving it. The sex scenes are great, and I like how you're working with the plot. Please keep posting.
irishcdn
01-29-2011, 08:39 PM
great addition....cant wait for the next 1
puckstop101
01-30-2011, 01:20 AM
nice addition
collegedude33
01-30-2011, 07:28 PM
excellent addition. You have indeed improved a lot. Can't wait until more updates
Lazerous
01-30-2011, 11:20 PM
good addition
UrbanChaos
02-08-2011, 04:31 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 8: Paying Off Debts
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Queen Amidala was traveling through space after just leaving Coruscant, she and the others where on there way back to Naboo. Help had been promised by the newly elected Chancellor Palpatine, but the help would not arrive until a day or two. So the Queen decided to go back and gather a resistance so when the time came they would be able to take back all of Naboo in a swift and precise strike.
“You must strike with your whole body.” Obi Wan instructed Anakin, Obi Wan had just been made a Jedi and was already given a Padawan, the Padawan being Anakin. Qui Gon smiled watching Obi Wan teach Anakin how to fight with a practice saber, not to long ago Qui Gon had done the same to Obi Wan.
“Reset and try again.” Obi Wan said getting into a ready position, he held his lightsaber in front of him and slightly tilted. But before Anakin could lunge a knock came at the door.
“Come on in.” Qui Gon yelled, a few seconds later Jar Jar walked in lazily his hands swaying at his sides.
“Whats yousa guys doin?” Jar Jar asked staring at Obi Wans light lightsaber.
“Practicing.” Anakin replied preparing to strike at Obi Wan.
“Well mesa is supposed ta tell yousa guys wes be wanted in the Queens Chambers.” Jar Jar said still awe struck by the bright light coming out of Obi Wan’s lightsaber hilt.
“Do you know why Jar Jar.” Qui Gon asked watching Anakin circle around Obi Wan.
“Mesa not really sures, but if ids have to be guessin, I woulds say it probablys got somethin to do with landings in Naboo.” Jar Jar replied.
“Well we had better not keep our Queen waiting then.” Obi Wan said turning off his lightsaber and clipping it to his belt. Qui Gon nodded and opened the doors into the hallway.
The group followed Anakin who was cheerfully leading the way, none of them said anything but they all wondered why they had been called to her Chambers.
They opened the Queens doors and walked in, the Queen was seated on a throne looking chair. Her handmaidens, Sabe and Eirtae, standing on both sides but Padme was no were to be seen. The Queen wore the traditional red gown, her hair was intertwined in a gold head piece, her make up was fully applied, the handmaidens simply wore their orange gowns with their heads bowed.
“I would like to thank you all for your continuing bravery.” Queen Amidala spoke to the group who had assembled themselves into a line.
“It is nothing my Queen.” Qui Gon replied bowing his head slightly.
“Don’t be so modest your help is greatly appreciated. So appreciated that the handmaidens and I would like to repay you a little on the way back.” Padme said standing up.
Padme put her arms out, and the handmaidens walked forward, Eirtae unlatched the velcro straps and Sabe pulled the gown off setting it to the side. Padme stood their wearing a red velvet bra and panties. She but her hands on her hips and smiled seductively. Everyone’s eyes were locked on the gorgeous figure of the Queen.
Obi Wan yanked his gaze away to look down, he saw that his pants were already pulled down, Sabe who had apparently pulled his pants down, was jerking his cock slowly, his cock had already became its full seven inches just by looking at the Queen.
Obi Wan looked to his side seeing Jar Jar beside him, his pants too had been pulled down for him and his massive 12 inch dick was fully erect. Obi Wan saw Anakin whose pants were down too, his six inch dick already hard. At the very end of the line was Qui Gon his ten inch cock was being jerked by Eirtae.
Padme pulled her bra off and tossed it towards Jar Jar, the arm whole caught on Jar Jar’s dick, her tits were perky and her nipples were rosy red, Padme took her panties off and tossed them to Obi Wan, who caught them and dropped them into his pants. He had finally collected all the panties,, he now had Padme’s, Sabe’s, Eirtae’s and now Queen Amidala’s.
Padme laid down on a nearby table and waved the four guys over.
“Obi Wan stick your dick in my pussy and start fucking me, Qui Gon come up to my mouth so I can blow you, Jar Jar get your cock over to my hands so I can jack you off, an Anakin climb on top of me and fuck my tities.” Padme instructed with a grin, she secretly held a crush for Obi Wan and that’s why she wanted him to fuck her tight snatch.
Soon all four had gotten into their stations, Obi Wan began to thrust his cock in and out of Padme’s tight snatch and moaned with pleasure. Jar Jar stood content getting his twelve inch cock jerked by Padme’s left hand, Qui Gon gently slid his cock into Padme’s mouth and started to face fuck her, he was pleasantly surprised to find that Padme could deep throat all of his ten inch cock without gagging. Anakin was already on top thrusting his dick in and out of Padme’s tit’s pinching her nipples slightly as he thrusted. Then an idea popped into Anakin’s head he quickly hopped off of Padme’s chest and stood by Obi Wan. Padme whimpered a little when she no longer felt the steady thrust in her breasts, but Qui Gon was still ramming his cock down her throat at full speed. Jar Jar, who saw that Padme’s breast were now unoccupied climbed on top and put his dick in between her tits, he started to thrust back and forth his 12 inch dick never fully disappearing into Padme’s luscious tits, with one hand Padme was now rubbing Obi Wan’s cock as it thrusted in and out with the other she gently rubbed the head of Jar Jar’s cock
Obi Wan slowed his thrusting speed down understanding what Anakin was doing, Anakin gently slid his cock beside Obi Wan’s, Obi Wan pulled out and then they both gently slid their cocks into Padme’s pussy together, Padme’s eyes widened at taking two dicks at once she tried to yelp but Qui Gon only shoved his cock further down her throat silencing her. Gently Obi Wan and Anakin sped up sliding their dicks in and out simultaneously. Padme felt an explosion of pleasure and came all over Anakin and Obi Wan’s cocks, this just lubed them up making it easier to slid in and out.
Obi Wan looked over to see Sabe and Eirtae naked, they were passionately kissing each other while fingering each other’s pussies.
“Mesa ganna cum.” Jar Jar cried.
“Everyone cum on three.” Anakin grunted.
“One… two… three!!!” Anakin yelled. Anakin and Obi Wan both came at the same time spraying stream after stream of thick cum into her snatch to the point were it was starting to leak out. Jar Jar stood up a little and aimed his cock down spraying Padme’s chest with his thick cum, Qui Gon gave one last mighty thrust and released his cum down Padme’s throat. Anakin and Obi Wan pulled out their dicks wet with cum, but Obi Wan’s dick was already hard again.
Padme quickly got on her knees wiping cum off her chin and cum dripping out her snatch.
“Let me help you Obi.” Padme said with a wink, her makeup almost all ruined. She grabbed his dick and put it in her mouth and started to bob her head back and forth deep throating Obi Wan’s cock.
Sabe strutted over to Jar Jar dying to try his 12 inch cock. She rubbed it a little and it slowly became erect again. Jar Jar lifted her up and slammed her against the nearest wall burring his cock in her pussy, she gasped for air never having something penetrate that far. Jar Jar began to violently thrust his hips back and forth she yelped in pleasure never having something so big in her pussy her legs tingled and she began to cum spurting the liquid all over. Jar Jar sloppily licked Sabe’s tits with his huge tongue she felt like she would burst from the pleasure.
Eirtae led Qui Gon to a chair and sat him down, his ten inch cock standing straight up. She gently guided herself down and on to the cock, she started to bounce up and down, Qui Gon watched as her tits bounced in rhythm with her ass. She moaned as Qui Gon started to massage her tits with his hands.
Anakin looked around gently rubbing his cock, he saw Obi Wan getting deepthroated from the beautiful Queen who reminded him of Padme a little. He saw Sabe moaning as her snatch got pounded from Jar Jar’s 12 inch cock, his tongue flopping as he licked her tits. He wished Padme was here that’s who he really wanted to fuck. Finally he looked over to see Eirtae bouncing on Qui Gon’s cock he licked his lips watching her juicy ass bounce up and down. Eirtae looked back with a smile her tits jiggling from the bouncing.
“Go ahead Ani.” Eirtae said with a smile. Anakin quickly walked over to Eirtae who was still bouncing on Qui Gon’s cock. Anakin guided his cock into Eirtae’s ass it was tighter then any pussy he had ever been in. she yelped in pain but Anakin kept pushing. Soon he was all the way inside, she rocked her ass a little loving the feeling of having to cocks in her. She started bouncing on Qui Gon’s cock as Anakin started to thrust in and out of her ass, Anakin wrapped his arms around her and started to fondle her tits. Eirtae’s pussy exploded with cum drenching Qui Gon’s cock she had never felt so much pleasure.
“You want a super deepthroat Obi?” Padme asked seductively. Obi Wan nodded his head quickly sure he would like what happened next. Padme started to bob her head back and forth, then out of no were she deep throated all of Obi Wan’s cock. But Obi Wan soon realized that she is not done, she sucked in Obi Wan’s balls, his whole cock and balls now down her throat and in her mouth. Obi Wan’s eyes widen at the sudden burst of pleasure. She sucked on the cock in her mouth. Obi Wan moaned and then released his cum into her throat, Padme felt the warm cum in her throat. She’d fallen in love with the feeling of warm cum going down her throat. Obi Wan’s cock went limp, and she gently took the cock out with a sexy smile.
Padme stood up and took Obi Wan to the bed were she laid down pulling Obi Wan on top. Obi Wan began to kiss her passionately. His cock dripping cum on her.
“Mesa gann cum!” Jar Jar shouted excitedly.
Sabe quickly dropped on her knees, just before a shower of cum began to rain down on her face covering her entire face and dripping down on to her tits. She couldn’t believe how long Jar Jar was cumming, the sticky substance was flowing out in one thick stream, but slowly it began to trickle, and soon it stopped leaving Sabe drenched.
“Cum for me!” Eirtae screamed in pleasure, Eirtae slammed her ass down on Qui Gon’s dick one last time and Qui Gon gave one last grunt before releasing his cum into Eirtae’s tight snatch he shot stream after stream until it began to leak out of her pussy. Anakin pulled his cock out of Eirtae’s ass and gave it a few final strokes before firing shot after shot of cum onto her back.
Obi Wan pulled away from Padme after kissing her passionately, he saw the Queens makeup had smeared quite a bit, without thinking he wiped it off with his hand, the Queen’s eyes widen at what Obi Wan had just done, without her makeup they would know that she was…
“Padme!” Obi Wan yelled loud enough to get everyone’s attention, everyone turned their head towards her and saw that she was in fact Padme.
“You got me.” She said with a laugh.
“You’re the Queen?” Qui Gon said angrily figuring out that she had come with them on Tatooine.
“I know what I did was irresponsible, and I guess I owe you a little more now too.” Padme said seductively. Qui Gon smiled, he would be happy to fuck her on a regular basis.
“We will be landing on Naboo in fifteen minuets we must get the Queen ready.” Sabe said, now both her and Eirtae standing at the door naked.
The guys gathered their clothes and walked out in single file Obi Wan being the last slapping Sabe’s toned ass before leaving, she giggled and shut the door after he walked out.
They had to get the Queen ready. Naboo awaited them…
UrbanChaos
02-08-2011, 04:33 PM
Please feel free to ask questions and give ideas
irishcdn
02-09-2011, 08:47 AM
great addition
lindsaylover
02-09-2011, 03:17 PM
Love what you're doing with the plot, along with the sex scenes. Are you planning on continuing on with the other movies?
kieran
02-09-2011, 03:23 PM
Not caught up on this story for two chapters brilliant as always keep it up!
UrbanChaos
02-09-2011, 09:01 PM
@lindseylover
The idea is to continue through all the movies and even past after ROTJ with the solo kids I havent figured out what to do with Ahsoka though i really hate the clone wars show because i think it messes up the movies and books in thousands of ways, so the end of these stories will come when i get tired of writting them or run out of time, which with my work wouldnt be a suprise
lindsaylover
02-10-2011, 10:21 PM
Wow, that's great. I haven't seen much of the Clone Wars (I keep meaning to), but I'd love to see what you do with the other movies when you finish with Phantom Menace. Thanks!
UrbanChaos
02-11-2011, 01:54 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 9: The Making Of A Resistance
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Obi Wan stepped down off the landing ramp and into the lush forest of Naboo, Padme wanted to rally support so they could retake Naboo from the
Trade Federation. She wanted to first gain support from the Gungan people, Jar Jar had agreed to go on ahead and arrange a meeting with them in the Sacred Place.
Padme stepped off the ship behind Obi Wan dressed as the Queen. Sabe and Eirtae beside her. Qui Gon Jinn, Obi Wan’s old master, stepped off behind her accompanied by Anakin. The group followed Obi Wan who was fairly confident that he had deciphered Jar Jar’s directions.
The journey didn’t take long and they were soon at the Sacred Place Padme walked to the front and saw Boss Nass sitting on a statue awaiting her. Padme walked up and stood a few feet from Boss Nass, she bowed slightly and prepared herself for her practiced speech.
“Boss Nass, our planet is being attack by an evil force that seems unstoppable. I know our people have never gotten along before, but that is the past and a new beginning is in front of us we desire your help so that we may rid our planet of the attackers.” Padme spoke raising her voice slightly so the Gungans around would hear her.
“Yes mesa is awares of the current threats, but whats the Gungans peoples ganna gain.” Boss Nass replied clicking his teeth.
“We can offer you trade and an alliance.” Padme answered with hope that would be enough.
Boss Nass tilted his head considered the proposal.
“Wesa except yousa propsal.” Boss Nass said with a grin.
“Good we can work out the terms when the threat is eliminated.” Padme sighed with relief.
“Now wesa can celebrate the new alliance, woulds yousa do the honors of joining us?” Boss Nass asked getting up and shuffling to the side.
“I would be delighted.” Padme said taking Boss Nass’s hand, as the handmaidens fell into step.
“I am sorry mysa Queen the offers only for yousa.” Boss Nass stated.
“Sabe, Eirtae please stay here I should be back within an hour or so.” Padme instructed them, not really sure what a Gungan celebration would be like. But she was excited to find out.
Boss Nass led Padme toward a rock structure that appeared to be a cave from the outside. But as they went in Padme saw pillars that had been carved out of the rock, the further they went the more decorative it got, statues pieces of furniture and the occasional Gungan guard standing at attention. Boss Nass led her a little further until he stopped at a door he opened it and quickly walked in the shadows engulfing his body.
Padme’s heart jumped a little, she sucked in a deep breath and then walked into the dark room, it was pitch black and she slowly walked around trying to figure out where she was. Then a bright light turned on, temporarily blinding her. She rubbed at her eyes trying to focus, and slowly her vision returned. When her eyes were fully adjusted she saw a mass of Gungans naked all stroking their dicks, their cocks varied from fourteen inches to about nineteen inches, then she saw Boss Nass who was also naked, his cock appeared to be twenty inches.
“With alls the Gungan womens still hidden in the underwater city, wesa were excited yousa excepted ousa invitation.” Boss Nass said rubbing his dick.
“This… wasn’t quite what I… expected.” Padme stuttered.
“Wesa understands if yousa would like to refuse, wesa will be honest in sayings it would disappoint us ifs are new Queen rejected though.” Boss Nass said sadly. Padme knew she needed Gungan support, and this new alliance was very important it could lead to all kinds of advancements for her planets. And besides, she had fallen in love with Jar Jar’s huge cock.
“Of course not I would be honored to… attend.” Padme struggled to find the right words. Before she knew it two Gungans had removed her red gown and gently set it aside, she was now simply wearing a black bra and some black panties, she had no idea how hot Naboo would be so she had tried to dress light.
Padme quickly unclipped her bra and tossed it to the side, she quickly did the same with her panties. She slowly strutted towards the nearest Gungans waving her hips as she walked trying to look extra sexy. She got on her knees and started to jack off two cocks with her hands, then leaned in and started to suck on the cock closest to her face, she tried her best to deepthroat as much of the cock as she could but it was simply massive. She watched out of the corner of her eye as Gungans closed around her forming a tight circle. Cocks slapped all parts of her body and hands groped at her luscious tits and firm ass.
Padme switched cocks with her hands trying to jerk as many cocks as she could but their seemed to be hundreds of them all around her. She let the cock in her mouth slid out, the Gungan stroked his dick a couple of times and then started to spray cum all over Padme’s tits covering them in the sticky substance. Padme quickly stuck another cock into her mouth and started to deep throat that one. Then she felt the cock in her right hand pulse a little and she felt a warm liquid spray onto her left shoulder. It covered her entire arm, then she felt a dozen hands pick her up, she hovered a few feet in the air but clamped down on the cock in her mouth. She was flipped around so her tits were facing the ceiling and she was gently put down on a table, she used her tongue and swirled it around the tip of the cock that was still in her mouth. She heard the Gungan moan a little then felt him pull out of her mouth, he sprayed cum from her head down to her pussy droplets of cum rained down on heavenly body. Her beautiful body began to glisten from the cum.
She reached out with her hands and felt two cocks placed in them she started to jerk them furiously stroking with all her might, another cock was inserted into her mouth and she felt rough hands grasp at her chin, she was soon feeling violent thrusts and the cock in her mouth, it was about fifteen inches, and to her amazement she was able to deep throat it. Then she felt a cock slowly pushing into her tight wet snatch, then in a sudden burst she felt the fourteen inch dick thrusted into her pussy. Before she knew it a Gungan had climbed on top of her and had seated himself on her placing his cock in between her soft tits, the dick in her tits was a lot gentler then the one in her pussy he gently started to thrust in and out massaging her tits as he went. Her pleasure intensified as she felt dozens of cocks slapping against her naked body, hands still grabbing every soft exposed part of her body.
The cock in her mouth thrusted into her mouth one last time before cumming into her mouth, the warm liquid coating her throat, she swallowed every drop. And the warm feeling in her throat made her whole body tingle, she moaned and started to cum, the cock in her snatch thrusted violently. She felt the cock in her pussy pulse slightly and then felt thick streams shooting in, the cum started to leak out making a rather large puddle.
The Gungan fucking her tits was on the brink of cumming, she felt the cock in her mouth and pussy disappear. Soon her pussy was being sloppily licked by a huge Gungan tongue, her pussy tingled with excitement. She tilted her head up and sucked on the cock that was gently fucking her tits, the Gungan gasped at having his cock sucked, he grunted and started to cum, the cum shot all over Padme’s face, coating it in the warm sticky liquid. She felt her pussy explode cumming for a second time.
“Enough!” she heard Boss Nass yell. This startled her hoping she hadn’t done anything wrong, she felt the Gungan on top quickly get off and all the dicks stopped smacking her beautiful nude body.
“Mesa turn.” Boss Nass finished, Padme grinned and slipped off of the table and on to all fours. she began to crawl like a Nexu swinging her ass in the air like she was ready to pounce on any cock in her way. The Gungans made two lines on both sides of her leaving an isle towards Boss Nass who was seated in a small throne stroking his twenty inch dick, he clearly had the biggest cock. Her body glistened with wet cum and it slowly dripped off of her body as she continued her crawl towards the huge cock. The Gungans on both sides of her continued stroking their dicks as she teased them with the sway of her firm ass.
She approached the cock and it was about the size of her forearm, it was absolutely massive, yet she had a desire to deep throat it all, she had never been so turned on her snatch dripping with juices in anticipation. She purred as she grabbed the cock with both hands and gently started to stroke it. Padme lifted herself up a little and started to suck on the tip of the huge cock, gently she started to force it farther and farther down. The Gungans around her started to gasp amazed by how far she had taken it down her throat, she knew she had about ten inches down her throat about half of the cock. But lust took over and Padme wanted more, she wanted all the cock down her throat. She forced another five inches down her throat, put she wasn’t done she had to prove she deserved to be their Queen that she was the best fuck partner in the galaxy.
She maneuvered her tongue a little making more room and pushed another three inches down her throat, she now had 18 inches of cock in her throat more then she ever had, she let spit slip out of her mouth hoping to lube the cock up a little. She slid the last two inches in and she had officially deep throated the whole twenty inch. Her cheeks blushed with a sudden burst of pride. And all the Gungans gasped in amazement.
“No ones evers been able to deepthroats mesa cock befores.” Boss Nass said in disbelief.
But Padme wasn’t done yet, she had to prove to them they had chosen correctly when they excepted her as their Queen. She sucked as much air in through her nose as she could. Then she let all the air out through her mouth, she pushed down as hard as she could and sucked in through her mouth as much as possible and then she felt it, Boss Nass’s balls popped into her mouth. She had just completed a super deep throat on possibly the biggest cock she would ever see. The Gungans all murmured in amazement, Boss Nass yelped in pleasure. Padme started to suck on the cock and balls in her mouth.
She felt the cock tremble in her throat and then felt the warm liquid spray cum directly into her stomach, the cock trembled violently as it filled her stomach to the brim with cum, but amazingly it hadn’t stopped, she felt the cum rise into her throat slowly working its way up. Boss Nass’s dick was like a hose full of cum she felt the cum reach her mouth and start dribbling onto her chin. The slight dribble turned into a steady stream flowing down onto her tits.
Finally the cum ended, and the dick slipped out of her throat.
“Mesa never seen such perfects super deep throatings.” Boss Nass spoke amazed.
“Let us ends the celebrations.” Boss Nass said still noticeable amazed with Padme.
The Gungans moved into a circle around her, furiously jacking at their cocks. She closed her eyes knowing what would happen next. She felt the first big stream of cum hit the front of her chest covering her tits in the sticky liquid, the next stream hit her back, and soon their wasn’t a part of her body that wasn’t being sprayed with the warm substance she relished the feeling of cum hitting every part of her body at once, the shower of cum seemed to last forever until it slowly stopped.
Padme slowly opened her eyes and saw most of the Gungans sitting or laying down, exhausted from the amount of cum they had just released. She looked down and saw a huge pool of cum that had dripped off of her. Her body was completely drenched, her whole body now glistened in the light.
“Yousa clearly deserves to bes our Queen. Wesa woulds like to be presentin yousa with the highest reward and rank the Gungans peoples have. The Slut Of Naboo.” Boss Nass stated proudly.
A wobbly Gungan approached her and clipped a necklace around her neck, he walked a few feet away and collapsed once again on the ground. She looked down at the necklace. It had gold pearls all the way around, and on the very front of the necklace was a red gem type stone, carved on the inside of the stone was the letters SN, she figured it stood for Slut Of Naboo. She blushed with pride feeling proud at what she had accomplished.
“Yousa can super deepthroat better thens any Gungan females. The pearls are gold, thes most valuables item wesa have, they haves turned gold froms being in theirs clams since the makings of Naboos. The stone is founds on thes bottom of the oceans, it changes colours in differents sun lights. The intials stands for Slut Of Naboo.” Boss Nass explained. Padme rolled the stone in her palm looking it over.
“Yousa mays use the restroom firsts my Queen.” Boss Nass said pointing to a door bowing slightly as he spoke. Padme got up and tried to collect her clothes without getting to much cum on them, then strutted towards the washroom trying to look as sexy as possible for the Gungans.
Outside the door stood Obi Wan with a holo recorder. He had just recorded the entire event. He had knocked out the Gungan guards with the force. He grinned having another holo vid for his collection. He wished he would have been able to capture their speech but unfortunately he was to far away. He had no knowledge about what she had just received from them.
Obi Wan quickly strode out of the hidden cave back to the ship, he returned his camera and put the holo vid with the others and returned to the group. Where Anakin, Sabe, Eirtae and Qui Gon Jinn stood chatting. Obi Wan joined them and about an hour later Padme returned to the group, she stood at the edge of the forest wearing a red velvet tank top with a low V cut to show her cleavage, she had gold armbands on both arms. She wore black skin tight slacks hugging her perfectly toned ass. On her waist she had a gold colored belt with a black holster attached to it, in the holster was a silver blaster. Sabe noticed that on her neck she wore a new gold necklace she had never seen before, she noted to ask about it later.
“It feels like a good day for a resistance.” Padme said grinning as she crossed her arms. As she spoke hundreds of Gungans dressed in ceremonial warrior armor stood up behind her…
**I felt like the Gungan gang bang had been done before, so I attempted to do it a little different hope you enjoyed it.**
UrbanChaos
02-11-2011, 01:55 PM
Please feel free to ask Questions comment or give an idea!
irishcdn
02-12-2011, 09:29 AM
great story cant wait for the next one
UrbanChaos
02-15-2011, 10:03 PM
Yeah the next one might be awhile hopefully not more then a week or two
irishcdn
02-15-2011, 11:16 PM
cant wait. great series
morgan87
02-17-2011, 12:33 AM
good job
UrbanChaos
02-25-2011, 11:28 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 10: Celebration
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Padme led Obi Wan, Qui Gon, Anakin and a small invasion force through underground tunnels underneath Theed the capital of Naboo. The Gungans had decided to lead the majority of the trade federation army to an open field as a distraction. While Padme and the small resistance force would capture Viceroy Gunray.
Meanwhile the newly appeared Sith strode the halls talking to his master with his communicator.
“You were correct Master the young Queen returned to Naboo just as you said.” The young Sith spoke, his black hood up hiding his black tattoos on his red skin.
“Good, remember Darth Maul I want her alive, the rest you can do as you please.” The Sith Master replied.
“It shall be done my master.” Darth Maul said bowing his head and then turning off the communicator and quickly walking down a long corridor, Darth Maul knew her first objective would be the Viceroy.
Padme broke away from the group blaster fire whizzing past her head. She had led the group right into a trap, the Jedi were right on her heels deflecting blaster fire as they went, she finally reached the door.
“Wait here.” Padme instructed, she would’ve liked to have the Jedi with her but she couldn’t chance them getting trapped in there. The Jedi nodded deflecting more fire, as the door opened she saw Obi Wan slice at a battle droid leaving two fried pieces. Anakin had gone to secure a ship as a back up plan.
Padme entered the room, her blaster leveled ready to fire. She quickly scanned the room looking for the Viceroy, but there was no sign of him. She let out a sigh. She was too late, he had escaped she blew a stray hair out of her eyes in frustration. Then an invisible force yanked the blaster out of her hand sending it scattering across the floor.
A hooded figure stepped out of the corner.
“Hello my Queen.” The figure said.
“Who are you… I am the Queen of Naboo and part of the Galactic Senate and I demand to know.” Padme stated as nobly as she could. But all the figure did was tilt his head slightly, the hood hid his face and she had no idea who she was speaking to.
Darth Maul tilted his head a bit taken back by the women, she was stunning, the red velvet tank topped tight against her tits. Her black slacks hugged her perfect ass, sweat glistened down her neck and biceps. He immediately felt lust for the young women. Gently he pulled of his hood and tossed his robe to the side. He now just wore a black training outfit.
Padme gasped a little seeing a red humanoid with black tattoos all over his body.
“Who… who are you.” Padme stuttered.
“My name is Darth Maul and you will be coming with me my Queen.” Darth Maul snarled.
“I hardly think so.” Padme said crossing her arms with a stern look on her face. In truth Padme was terrified of this man but was unwilling to show that, her mind raced with ways to escape.
Darth Maul was a little taken back by the angry tone in her voice. And slightly turned on. He felt his cock harden a little at the thought.
Padme’s eyes raced across the room looking for away out, the door
behind her was already locked and Darth Maul stood between her and windows. She examined the man looking for a sign of weakness. Her heart jumped a little when she saw the slight bulge in his pants, could he actually have a hard on for her? She hesitated then took a step forward, though she was horrible frightened by the man.
“Perhaps we could work something out.” She asked seductively.
“I am a Sith, there is no bargaining with me.” Darth Maul spoke, though in truth he really did want to fuck her.
“So you say, but your friend is saying something else.” Padme said sexily now just a foot away and stroking his cock through his pants.
Darth Maul had the strongest urge to fuck her, but he had orders from his master, plus there were Jedi right outside the door. But on the other hand he was a Sith he thought, he was supposed to be corrupt and evil.
He grabbed at the front and ripped at the red velvet shirt, the shirt ripped in half in the front exposing her tits, she smiled happy that he had accepted her offer. She slid a hand down his pants and gently stroked at his cock, he forcefully pushed her down to her knees ready to receive a blowjob.
Padme pulled down his pants, his cock sprung out, it was about seven inches long, it was red and the black tattoos were even on it. She was slightly surprised to see them on it but Padme was sure it wouldn’t interfere with her blowjob.
Padme gently spat on the cock and started to stroke it quickly. She continued to stroke as she bent her head down and started to suck on his balls. After a few seconds she lifted her head and put the cock into her mouth and started to bob back and forth, she delicately slid her tongue along the bottom of the cock shaft.
Then she felt Darth Mauls rough hands grip the back of her head, he forced her to deep throat his whole cock, she gagged for breath as Darth Maul moaned with a wicked grin, she felt her head being consistently forced back and forth, she did her best to resist his hard slams but eventually gave into the rough rhythm. She was continually forced to deep throat his cock, she felt a little dizzy and her throat began to hurt but Darth Maul still held her head, slamming her back and forth.
Darth Maul gave Padme one final slam forward and sprayed cum down her throat he moaned as he released his long built up cum. She swallowed every drop.
Darth Maul shoved Padme and she fell onto her back, her panic increased as Darth Maul pulled out a lightsaber and ignited it, two red beams shot out from both ends, he pointed it directly at Padme.
“Now let’s go.” Darth Maul said with a wicked grin.
“I though we had a deal?” Padme asked frightened
“I agreed to nothing.” Darth Maul spat.
Suddenly the door exploded clattering into the room, Obi Wan and Qui Gon stepped through. They saw the Queen on her back with Darth Maul standing over her. Qui Gon released a force blast sending Darth Maul through a window. Glass exploded as Darth Maul tumbled down.
Qui Gon ran to the window while Obi Wan rushed to Padme’s aid. Obi Wan helped Padme up and noticed the ripped shirt, Darth Maul had probably slashed it with his lightsaber. He noticed her perfect tits and his eyes were instantly glued to them.
“Obi, it’s not like you haven’t seen them before.” Padme said smiling.
“Obi Wan lets go!” Qui Gon yelled before he jumped out the window, Obi Wan assumed the Sith had survived the fall.
He tore his gaze from the beautiful sight and ran to the window, where he leapt out. Qui Gon was battling the Sith blocking every blow from the dual bladed weapon. Obi Wan rushed forward and started to help his old master, they slowly pushed Darth Maul back. But then surprisingly he turned around and ran at full sprint. A ship lowered out of the sky and the Sith jumped up and in to it escaping their grasp.
Grudgingly the duo walked back towards the building, angry for letting the Sith escape.
The Jedi pair walked back into the huge palace and took a lift back up to were they left Padme.
As they stepped out they were informed the battle was a success, Padme had trapped the Viceroy in a room and was in the process of negotiating. They walked by several guards and Obi Wan managed to make out a few of their conversations. A few were talking about how the Gungans had won their battle with the droid army, others were talking about how a huge portion of the blockade had been destroyed by a mysterious pilot, but most were discussing how hot Padme looked with her ripped shirt.
They walked into the room where Padme was negotiating with the captured Viceroy. He noticed that the Viceroy was cowering a little and agreeing to every term she stated, she still hadn’t changed her shirt and all the male guards in the room were attempting to hide their erections. Obi Wan noticed Padme would occasional swing her chest a little and her tits would pop out a little.
After about an hour or two of negotiations Padme was finally satisfied with the terms, she waved at the guards and they quickly approached grabbing the Viceroy by both arms and dragging him away.
“You two should get ready its only a few hours until the celebration.” Padme said turning to Obi Wan and Qui Gon.
“Celebration?” Qui Gon asked puzzled.
“Yes, for winning the war and for finally bringing peace between us and the Gungan people.” Padme explained a little bored.
“Of course, must have slipped my mind. I assure you we’ll be there.” Obi Wan stated happily.
“Panaka please show the Jedi to separate rooms so they can prepare themselves.” Padme said to one of the guards.
“Of course my Queen. Please follow me.” The guard spoke waving the Jedi to follow him.
The guard led Obi Wan and Qui Gon down twist and turns to their final destination.
“These are your rooms, we will come and get you when the celebration begins.” Panaka said before quickly turning around and walking away.
Obi Wan walked into his room, it was nothing special just a bed and a dresser. Obi Wan sat down on the bed not really sure how to prepare for the celebration but he figured a shower would be a start. He saw a door that he assumed would lead to the bathroom. His guess was right and he started to clean himself up.
*
Obi Wan emerged from the bathroom to see Anakin already washed and groomed.
Obi Wan quickly put on his robes which looked liked they had been recently cleaned for him. And soon after heard a knock at the door, Anakin opened the door to see Panaka who was informing them the celebration was about to began.
Obi Wan and Anakin walked out of the room to see Qui Gon already outside ready to go.
Panaka once again led them down a twist of hallways and outside into the bright sunlight. Thousands of people had gathered in the street, all with streamers and confetti. Panaka led the group to the very front of the street where Padme was standing in an elegant white gown with Chancellor Palpatine standing next to her, Qui Gon was stationed a few feet away from her with Obi Wan next to him and Anakin beside him.
Padme saw Anakin staring at her out of the corner of her eye and turned to him and gave him a smile. She noticed that Palpatine had been staring at her with lust in his eyes the whole time as well, she saw Palpatine lean in to say something to her.
“I’m sure you have not forgotten our deal my Queen.” Palpatine said with a wicked grin. Palpatine had come through with his end of the deal, he had delivered the army he had promised and eradicated the remaining enemy forces.
“Of course not, I will meet you in your quarters after the celebration.” Padme whispered harshly angry he had brought it up here.
The celebration continued and Padme received a glowing ball from the Gungans, it was a symbol of their new found peace with each other.
Padme looked at her watch and saw it was about eight o’clock, the sun was just setting as Padme waved Sabe over to her.
“I need to get to my… meeting, do not disturb me.” Padme instructed Sabe.
“Yes my Queen. And good luck with your err… meeting.” Sabe replied. Well aware of what Padme was going to have to do.
Padme strode toward were Palpatine’s quarters were, he had disappeared from the celebration a while ago. As she walked through the packed streets she got the usually clapping and waves from the huge crowd the noise was extremely loud as they walked. She enjoyed people calling at her saying their congrats and their thanks and she especially enjoyed when people would yell out how hot she looked. She did shook a few hands along the way, she enjoyed being around people and she wanted to be in a good mood before meeting with Palpatine. Panaka led Padme through the crowd, she liked having him as head of security he always did a great job.
Panaka led her to Palpatine’s room.
“I’ll be right outside my Queen.” Panaka said sounding over protective.
“Awe don’t you think I can handle myself?” Padme asked pouting her lip a little being sarcastic.
“Oh I’ve seen you handle yourself, I just don’t want that sleaze bag getting carried away.” Panaka said knowing what Padme was going to do with Palpatine, he had been lucky enough to fuck her a few times himself. Padme often got lonely and loved having people around.
Padme walked into the room to see Palpatine looking out the window at the celebration, the shouting outside was audible.
“Well Palpatine I am here to finish our agreement.” Padme said in a surprisingly happy tone, she must have been in a good mood from the celebration.
“Indeed you are. You have a beautiful planet.” Palpatine said still staring out the window.
“Thanks I’ve done a lot to keep it that way.” Padme replied hoping Palpatine might have changed his mind.
“I can tell. But back to our arrangement.” Palpatine said finally turning to see look at Padme.
He pulled off his blue robe and his cock was half erect, Padme slipped out of her white gown and set it on a nearby chair. Her naked body glowed in the setting sun, her nipples became erect, and Palpatine smiled seeing her toned body
Palpatine’s dick grew to its eight inches seeing Padme’s gorgeous naked body. Palpatine walked over to Padme and groped her tits while she gently jacked his cock.
“So what were the conditions of our deal?” Palpatine asked with a grin.
“You are only allowed to fuck my pussy” Padme stated, she hated this man but she was still in a surprisingly good mood.
“No blowjob?” Palpatine asked sadly.
“We already finished that part of the deal.” Padme said firmly.
“But you do it so well.” Palpatine said hoping she would blow him.
Padme licked her fingers and then rubbed her hand on Palpatine cock gently jacking the cock with her wet hands.
“That’s as close as your getting to my mouth.” Padme said smiling glad she could at least take that from him.
“Fine.” Palpatine sighed as he gently pushed Padme onto the bed.
Padme rolled on the bed and got on all four the plush bed feeling good on her hands and knees. Palpatine grabbed her waist with his hand and slowly guided his cock he looked at her back, which was all he could see in the position they were in, it was tan and tone just like the rest of her beautiful body her brown hair in a bun like style.
Palpatine gently started to thrust his hips, his cock being swallowed by Padme’s tight pussy. Palpatine was so gentle Padme thought, something she never would have expected. She heard him moan and she couldn’t help but let one out too, her pleasure was increasing as the cock rocked in and out of her pussy.
She felt Palpatine’s dick slid out and she whimpered a little, she looked over her shoulder and saw him sitting on a chair, his dick straight up in the air. Padme walked over to him and stood directly over his cock.
Padme gently lowered herself over Palpatine’s cock, she hovered a few inches above it before slamming her hips down engulfing the entire cock in a matter of seconds, she moaned bursting with pleasure.
“Fuck your tight.” Palpatine muttered in surprise putting his hands on Padme’s hips to help her thrust up and down. Padme smiled at the complement putting one hand on her new gold necklace.
Padme slammed down one more time and started to grind Palpatine’s cock swaying her hips back and forth, groans increased from Palpatine as he reached around and grabbed Padme’s firm ass and squeezed it tightly. Padme squealed in delight before resuming her bouncing on his cock.
Palpatine buried his face in Padme’s gorgeous tits he sucked on her nipples and griped her ass harder feeling himself on the verge of cumming, Palpatine leaned back in his chair trying to regain composure, but when he leaned back he saw Padme’s body glistening in the setting suns rays, sweat gleamed down as her body bounced up and down. Her tits followed her body’s rhythm and her perfectly toned tan body rocked up and down, she was biting the bottom of her lip a little from the pleasure.
Palpatine felt his cock pulse a little and he knew it would only be seconds before he came, he opened his mouth to tell her but her eyes were closed and she was clearly enjoying riding his cock. Who was he to stop her? He smiled as he resolved to cum in her, after all she hadn’t specified he couldn’t.
Padme slammed her firm ass down one last time and Palpatine’s cock exploded with cum, Padme’s eyes snapped open in horror feeling the warm cum spurt into her warm tight snatch. Padme quickly jerked her body up getting Palpatine’s cock out, but by that point it was too late the last few drips were coming out of Palpatine’s cock. Padme stared at Palpatine dumbfounded.
“What the frakk was that!?” Padme spit venomously.
“Was that not part of the terms?” Palpatine said innocently.
“You kriffing knew it wasn’t!” Padme said furiously.
“Sorry.” Palpatine said shrugging his shoulders.
Padme grabbed her white gown furiously and quickly slipped it on, her hatred for the man burned deeper then ever, she hoped that she wouldn’t get pregnant from this old man. She stormed out of the room and down the hall towards her own quarters, what she needed now was a good night’s sleep.
Obi Wan was leaning against a wall looking out a large window at the city streets below, he heard Padme storm past him fuming about something. He shrugged it off not to worried he heard Sabe approaching but didn’t turn to see her.
Sabe Wrapped her arms around Obi Wan’s waist and stared out the window with him, Obi Wan put his arm around Sabe’s shoulder and pulled her in tighter kissing her on the top of her head as he did so. They stared out the window for a few minuets looking at the beautiful city.
“So what happens now?” Sabe asked curiously.
“Huh?” Obi Wan replied snapping out of his trance.
“I mean our adventure is kinda over now isn’t it?” Sabe continued. Obi Wan locked eyes with her and thought about his answer.
“I think our adventure has just begun.”
End Of The Phantom Menace
UrbanChaos
02-25-2011, 11:30 PM
This was supposed to be out a week ago but i kept rewritting a bunch of parts and eventually took out a sex scene between Obi Wan Sabe and Padme, plus i really wanted to try an end the phantom menace as best as i could, hope you enjoyed stay tuned for attack of the clones
mandog
03-01-2011, 08:28 PM
very nice, cant wait for clone wars
Natsu
03-02-2011, 04:49 PM
sweet man
irishcdn
03-02-2011, 08:58 PM
bring on clone wars
UrbanChaos
03-06-2011, 10:42 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 11: Reuniting
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
“Your sure she asked for us?” Anakin asked for the hundredth time.
“Yes I’m sure.” Obi Wan laughed as he stroked his beard. He looked away from the lifts buttons to watch his nervous apprentice try to unsuccessfully calm himself. He knew Anakin’s feelings toward Padme, but it had been almost four years since they had seen each other. While Obi Wan one the other hand had seen her a numerous amount of times during the last four years, he had never told his apprentice Anakin about it because Obi Wan knew Anakin had to focus on his Jedi training.
But with Anakin training Obi Wan found he had a lot if free time on his hands. Free time that he frequently spent with Padme and Sabe, who always kept his hands busy.
“But she specifically asked for us right.” Anakin asked nervously breaking Obi Wan from his thoughts.
“Well she only asked for me, so I guess you should leave.” Obi Wan said jokingly.
“Sorry master I’m just nervous.” Anakin stated smiling at his master’s lame joke
“You? Nervous? The man that fought a horde of tusken raiders?” Obi wan asked sarcastically
But before Anakin could answer the lift doors opened with a whoosh. And their old friend Jar Jar Binks was excitedly shouting and soon shaking their hands.
“Mesa so excited to see usa!” Jar Jar practically yelled.
“Yeah good to see you to, is Padme around?” Anakin asked trying to look over Jar Jar’s shoulder
“Padmes in the living rooms.” Jar Jar stated with a point.
Anakin quickly pushed passed Jar Jar and strode into the living room were he saw Padme seated, her back to him.
“Padme?” Anakin spoke quietly.
“Ani!” Padme said excitedly as she turned around.
“You’ve grown so much.” Padme continued as she inspected the young man.
“You’ve grown too, I uh I mean more beautifully… in a senator kind of way.” Anakin stuttered feeling stupid as he spoke, he heard Obi Wan chuckling in the background.
“I think what my apprentice is trying to say is its good to see you to.” Obi Wan cut in. Anakin just nodded stupidly.
Padme led the two into the living room were they all sat down, Anakin sitting the closest to Padme.
“Sorry to inconvenience you like this but since the attack on my life on the landing pad I’ve felt… worried.” Padme explained slowly putting her hand on Anakin’s.
“Padme I promise we will find the people that attacked you and bring them to justice.” Anakin said sincerely.
“I’m a little tired I think I’m going to turn in early.” Padme said smiling sweetly.
Padme got up and walked towards her room her ass swaying sexily as she walked. She had apparently worked hard to keep her amazing body, if anything her body becoming even more beautiful, her ass firmer, tits a little larger and her body was a little more tan now. Anakin lusted to hold her again.
“Smooth.” Obi Wan chuckled breaking Anakin from his thoughts.
“Let’s just patrol.” Anakin murmured.
><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><
Night soon fell on Coruscant, the talk between Anakin and Obi Wan was minimal. Obi Wan was to engrossed with the lightball tournament to make conversation and Anakin was focused on what was going on in Padme’s room. He could swear that he had heard her moan several times through out the night. He had been stretching his force awareness into the room, but he couldn’t sense much, though her adrenaline seemed to spike a few times.
“Did you sense that?” Obi Wan asked Anakin his eyes widening.
“The sudden sense of danger in Padme’s room?” Anakin answered staring at Padme’s door.
Both Obi Wan and Anakin jumped up off the couch and sprinted to Padme’s door. The door whooshed open, and Anakin had flipped on his lightsaber, he focused his force senses and sliced cutting two bug like things in half.
“Their!” Obi Wan shouted pointing at a hovering droid just outside the window. The droid backed up a few inches preparing to take off, Obi Wan threw a tracking device smashing the window and attaching itself to the droid. The droid quickly shot off racing down the busy streets of Coruscant.
“Stay with Padme.” Obi Wan yelled before quickly sprinting out the door.
Anakin looked over to Padme’s bed with adrenaline rushing through his veins. Padme was cuddled up in a corner holding blue blankets up to her chest. Her lovely body mostly hidden.
“You always sleep naked?” Anakin asked jokingly as he clipped his lightsaber back on his belt.
“Only when I’m fantasizing.” Padme said beginning to blush. Anakin looked at the blanket closer and saw a fairly large damp spot. He looked up again saw that Padme had pulled the blanket down to he waist reveling her perky tits.
“Want to know what I was fantasizing Ani?” Padme asked sexily.
“Yea… Yeah.” Anakin stuttered.
“I was fantasizing about you sticking your cock in my pussy.” Padme answered licking her lips.
Padme pulled the covers off her body and hopped out, she slowly walked across the room swaying her hips as she did. Her body glowed in the moonlight, she was just as beautiful as Anakin remembered, her whole body was tight and toned with just a little pubic hair above her snatch.
Padme gently pulled Anakin’s pants down and started to jack his of his cock. Artoo Detoo who had been sitting quietly up to this point, quietly turned on his holo recorder as he had been instructed to by Padme and started to record every frame.
Anakin slid two fingers into Padme’s pussy and gently started to thrust in and out, her pussy was already soaking wet. Her mouth opened and her body shuddered as she laid down on the bed.
Padme moaned in pleasure as Anakin began to lick and suck her tight wet snatch. He thrusted his fingers in harder and faster as he sucked on Padme’s clit. Her moans intensified with each thrusted, her whole body shivered and her juices shot out onto Anakin’s face.
Anakin stood up with his dick fully erect, Padme giggled excited to be fucked by Anakin again. She put her hands in her thick brown hair and bite her lower lip. Anakin prodded Padme’s snatch listening to her squeal in delight as he did. He thought back to studying in the Jedi academy, he had fooled around with some of the girls there but he had always wished they were Padme.
Anakin slid his dick all they way in and relished the feeling of Padme’s tight pussy. He slowly started to thrust he soon fell into a rhythmic thrust watching her whole body thrust up and down every time he fucked her, he enjoyed watching her slightly larger tits bounce, her moans grew louder with each thrust.
Padme leaned forward grabbing onto Anakin’s shoulders, Anakin grabbed her firm ass and lifted her into the middle of the room. Padme used Anakin’s shoulders as leverage and started to bounce up and down again.
“Fuck me harder Ani.” Padme moaned in ecstasy.
Anakin hugged Padme tightly pressing her luscious tits against his chest, he then used the force to increase Padme’s ass, she groaned feeling the force tighten around her ass and forcing it down at an abnormally fast rate. Padme surrendered herself to the movement of the force and embraced Anakin with a kiss. She slid her tongue into his mouth and they were lip locked in their passionate kiss.
Anakin’s body tingled feeling Padme’s naked body pressed against his, he watched her shiver with pleasure, and he knew he was seconds from cumming.
“I’m going to cum!” he exclaimed.
“Cum in me Ani! Do it inside!” Padme shouted in ecstasy.
Anakin hugged Padme tighter, he slammed Padme’s ass down with the force as hard as he could and then released his cum, it spilled into her womb over filling it with the warm cum, Padme squeezed her eyes shut in pleasure. Anakin gave one last grunt and the last bit of cum dribbled out.
Padme slowly bouncing up and down and Anakin carried her over to the bed, he crawled into bed with Padme’s legs still wrapped around his waist. Anakin’s cock softened and slipped out of her tight snatch and a drop of cum dripped down her thigh.
Anakin watched Padme fall sleep and then closed his eyes, he was happy to have Padme in his arms again then he too fell asleep.
R2-D2 turned of his recorder and gave a cheerful whistle he had just added another video to his collection…
irishcdn
03-07-2011, 07:55 AM
great story cant wait for the next one
UrbanChaos
03-30-2011, 12:51 AM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 12: Card Shark
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
*Editor note I hope that everyone has decent understanding how Sabacc works, it will make this chapter easier to understand, but as always please enjoy*
Anakin woke up to the sun shining on his face, he looked to his side only to find out that Padme had already left. He yawned and quickly jumped up throwing the sheets to the side. He quickly dressed himself and walked into the living room stretching as he went. He looked and saw Padme dressed in a yellowish orange robe, she was quietly talking to Obi Wan.
“Ah, Anakin your up.” Obi Wan said noticing his Padawan.
“What’s going on?” Anakin asked sensing something was wrong.
“Well I have good news and bad news, I have new information on Padme’s assassins, but not enough yet. I have to travel to Kamino to learn more.” Obi Wan started
“And Obi Wan wants you to escort me to Naboo and be my body guard while he does this.” Padme finished with a hint of a smile.
“Whatever you’d like master.” Anakin said bowing his head slightly. Anakin was fairly excited to finally get away from his master, they were like brothers but occasionally… more like often Anakin thought, he got tired of Obi Wan always wanting to do the right thing, he could get very rigid about the republic ways.
Not like Qui Gon, it was odd how different Qui Gon was from Obi Wan even though they had once been master and student. However Anakin would not trade his master for anyone, not even Yoda. But he was looking forward to a break from Obi Wan.
“I’ve already bought you tickets to Naboo, stick to city transits and make sure to look like refugees. I gave the tickets to Padme already because frankly, I don’t trust you with them.” Obi Wan explained
“I understand.” Anakin laughed giving his master a playful push.
“Well I need to finish dressing.” Padme said before walking off, her walk was elegant like all monarchs, but it showed just how perfect her ass was.
Anakin said goodbye to his master and sat down on the couch waiting for Padme to come out of her room so they could leave. He decided to turn on the vidscreen and watch some of the Sabacc tournament on.
He watched as several players bombed out, while other players simply ran out of chips. Anakin had always wanted to try Sabacc, but being a Jedi it gave him an unfair advantage.
It was down to an Ithorian and a human named Dessel. Dessel seemed to know everyone’s move before they themselves knew. At the end of the round a shift light started to blink wildly, the red and blue lights blinking on and off. The gained speed until it was just a purple blur.
Then it stopped, the light it left was red. The cards that were not locked in changed, a small smile came across Dessel’s mouth. He reveled his cards slowly and when he showed them it revealed a perfect sabacc. Dessel reached across the table and dragged all the chips to his end leaving the Ithorian empty handed. Dessel had just won the tournament.
Padme cleared her throat and Anakin snapped his head to the left to see Padme standing there with two suitcases.
“Sorry Padme I was… distracted.” Anakin said with his cheeks beat red with embarrassment, Anakin knew Padme had probably been standing their awhile.
“Sabacc is an interesting game isn’t it?” Padme asked with a wink teasing Anakin.
Anakin quickly stood up and grabbed Padme’s suitcases. Padme lead the way out of the apartment complex.
They walked in relative silence taking public transports to the main space port. R2-D2 and C-3PO always a few steps behind, C-3PO chattered about irrelevant things for most of the journey. But Anakin enjoyed spending time with Padme, even with her large orange cloak her shapely curves were visible and her stunning beauty was still evident.
They finally did get to the right hanger, Padme handed the tickets to a republic guard, as Padme boarded the male guard tried to get a look at Padme’s ass but the cloak wasn’t quite tight enough. And Anakin could feel his frustration through the force, he snickered a little but boarded the old ship behind Padme.
They walked down a corridor and took a left, Anakin noted just how large the transport ship was. The steel walls were rusted and a few panels were missing. Wires looked as if they had been ripped from the walls and occasionally a drop of liquid would drop from the roof.
They found their traveling quarters and walked in, the hydraulic door squeaking as it slid open and closed.
“Well this is… nice.” Padme said scanning the room. A bench was connected to the wall with large bolts, a window was at the far end with a table underneath of it. A bed was across from the bench with old blankets that looked like they hadn’t been washed in… well they had probably never been washed Anakin thought.
Anakin slid past Padme and set the bags down, then sat down on the cold metal bench. He leaned his head back and closed his eyes resting. He heard Padme going through the luggage, he opened his eyes slightly and saw that Padme had tossed the old worn blankets to the floor and was spreading out a large blue blanket, she had already placed a pillow at the front of the bed.
“How long do you think it will take to reach Naboo?” Padme asked Anakin still looking around the room.
“A day, maybe two at the most.” Anakin answered reclosing his eyes.
“It takes me nine standard hours to get to Coruscant from Naboo.” Padme said her mouth gaping open, apparently not to thrilled about spending that long on the ship.
“Your ship has a state of the art hyperdrive. This however has one that barely meets republic standards.” Anakin replied calmly.
Padme watched as Anakin slowly drifted to sleep, the Ship had just broken free of the Coruscant atmosphere and was entering hyperspace.
Padme already felt boredom creeping into her mind. She pulled out a data pad and started to surf the holo net. She spent what must have been hours randomly looking up information on the latest scandals with the celebrities, and looking at online stores.
Boredom again seemed to be starting though, Padme looked at the time and she had only been on the ship for three hours. She decided to stretch her legs with a walk.
“If Anakin wakes up tell him I went to stretch my legs.” Padme instructed C-3PO.
“Of course my Queen we will wait patiently to tell him.” C-3PO chimed in happily.
Before leaving Padme pulled off her large orange cloak and sat it to the side. She was now wearing a short dress, a similar orange to her cloak. The short dress barely went past her hips, hardly covering her ass. If she bent over you would be able to see her gold thong. Her lips curved in a smile her thong and bra was the only true Naboo thing she wore, aside from her slut necklace of course, the Naboo symbol had been printed in dark red on the front of her thong.
She stepped out into the hall, her legs a little wobbly from sitting for so long. Her hair remained in a golden hair piece though her dark brown hair had become a little frazzled from the stress of the day.
As she walked through the old ship she saw just how rusty it was. Newer panels had been carelessly welded over the old. Odd smells would occasionally reach her nostrils. Sometimes she would see passengers and exchange a smile with them. Her beauty always attracted a lot of attention.
She seemed to be getting to the heart of the ship, there were far less people her and the repairs were more desperate in this part of the ship.
Padme rounded the corner to see three men sitting on crates. They appeared to be playing a card game. One was human another was Selkath and the last was green Twi’lek.
Padme carefully looked over the humans shoulder and saw chips on a larger crate, they seemed to be playing Sabacc. Padme had heard of a tournament being held on Coruscant so it made sense that these were probably fans.
“Its not what it looks like.” The Twi’lek said defensively when he finally saw Padme. The Selkath attempted to hide the cards with his pale blue webbed hands.
Padme hadn’t considered that these men were not supposed to be playing cards. But the more she thought she remembered that it was only legal in gambling facilities that way Coruscant could easily tax patrons for playing.
“Calm down Nu’ru she is probably just interested in the game.” The human male explained.
“It’s Sabacc right?” Padme asked, being a Queen she had never even thought about gambling, the only gambling she had ever done was in politics.
“Yes it is, my name is Dessel by the way, but just call me Des.” The human said smiling innocently at Padme. She had noticed that Des had traced her body with his eyes several times, from her long slender exposed legs to her deep brown eyes. Though the Twi’lek had also stolen a few glimpse, in fact so had the Selkath she had now noted.
“Nu’ru, Shaelas and me were playing a friendly game of cards, want to join?” Des spoke in a very friendly tone. Padme thought deeply she had no idea how to play Sabacc but she was supposed to be a refugee, and wouldn’t a refugee play cards?
“She obviously doesn’t know how to play.” Nu’ru hissed, the Selkath added a few slurping sounds, Padme only knew a little of the Selkath language but if it was anything like Wookie he was just agreement.
“Well we can teach her. So what do you say…” Des trailed off not knowing her name.
“My name is Padme, and yes I’m in.” Padme smiled sweetly eager to learn the new game. Padme grabbed a crate from the hall and slid it over to the table were the three men made room for her scooting their crates over with a scraping sound.
Des explained the game to Padme, and helped her with the first few hands. Soon Padme felt like she had a good enough handle to play her first hand solo.
Padme was not as good as them but still managed to win a few hands, though they had probably let her win she thought, but it was still more fun then she had experienced lately.
“Now that you’ve got the hang of it.” Des started
“Why don’t we make it more interesting?” Nu’ru finished with a smile
“I…I don’t understand.” Padme’s smile was fading to a frown.
“Betting, you do have credits right?” Des cut in.
Padme’s smile returned and she slipped a hand down the front of her orange dress and pulled out a few republic credits, and set them on the table.
“Let’s play some Sabacc.” Padme stated grinning. Des and the others chuckled, and soon the next hand was dealt.
Padme soon found she was horrible out matched. The senior players easily taking her credits within the first few rounds. She had already ran out of chips but she desperately wanted to play the next round, however that required twenty credits.
“Padme you in or out?” Des asked not looking up from his cards.
“Ummm in.” Padme answered, her heart quickened knowing she didn’t have the credits, but if she won she wouldn’t need them she thought.
“Comin up.” Twi’lek said showing his cards, since Nu’ru showed his cards the round was over, and Padme hoped she had strong enough cards to win.
Nu’rus cards totaled seventeen a pretty weak hand, and lucky for Padme because she had -18 which beat that, the Selkath showed his and cursed the total amount was only sixteen. Padme’s heart beat faster all she had to do was beat Des. She nearly died in anticipation as he slowly flipped his cards.
Twenty one, Des had twenty one. He beat Padme and was sure to notice she cheated him.
“Padme your twenty credits short here.” Des said after inspecting the chips.
“Yeah I… actually… don’t… have… anymore.” Padme slowly answered her cheeks blushing and her stomach doing flops.
“ Well you have to pay.” Des answered getting very serious.
“How about I pay you a little later once we reach Naboo?” Padme asked trying to add extra innocence to her voice.
“No.” Des answered firmly.
“Well how can I pay you then.” Padme asked swallowing nervously.
Dessel leaned back on his crate a little thinking hard, then a wicked grin crossed his face
“How about ten creds a strap.” Des finally said.
“Wha… what?” Padme asked confused.
“On your dress you pull off the shoulder straps, ten creds a piece is more then fair.” Des replied.
“I guess I don’t really have a choice.” Padme grumbled, she hesitated but did pull her straps off.
Padme tried to push her arms closer so her dress wouldn’t fall down. This emphasized the size of her tits and she noticed that they all had growing hard ons. Padme assumed that those would throw their game off.
“How about I get in this round free, but if I lose, I also lose the dress?” Padme said smiling sexily.
The trio looked at each other and exchanged nods.
“That’s… expectable.” Des finally spoke up.
Shaelas dealt another hand. Padme looked at her cards and saw she had… complete bantha fodder, she cursed in her head.
Shaelas slurred something in his language and showed his cards. A true sabacc, nothing could beat that but an idiot and that never came up. The rest of them just tossed in their cards, and then all eyes settled on Padme.
Padme released a long sigh before standing up, she hesitated for a second, worried that someone might come down the hall but the chances of that happening were very slim.
Then she grabbed on to the bottom of her short dress and started to pull, she gave her body a little shake to help get the tight fitting dress off, when she did get the dress off she set it to the side. She stood their almost naked, all that was left was her gold bra and thong.
“Naboo symbol, very patriotic.” Des said after inspecting her almost nude body and seeing the red symbol engraved on her thong.
“Last hand, if one of us wins we get to fuck you, if you win you take all the credits.” Nu’ru blurted barely able to contain the bulge in his pants after seeing Padme’s tone body
“Deal.” Anakin said turning a corner.
“This your boyfriend?” Des asked with a scoff.
“Yes actually.” Padme said thankful Anakin showed up when he did. The draft was rather cold and her nipples had gotten hard and had begun to poke at her bra. She crossed her arms trying to retain some body heat.
Anakin sat down on the crate that Padme had just sat on and waited for Des to deal. Padme stood behind Anakin trying to block the view of her near naked body.
“You’re Dessel, winner of the Coruscant tournament, aren’t you?” Anakin asked as Dessel skillfully dealt the cards.
“Correct.” Des said with a shy grin.
Anakin looked at his cards he had never played Sabacc and only had a rough understanding of the game, but the thought of seeing Padme fucked by these strange men was not an option.
Anakin took a deep breath and felt through the deck, saw every card, and then used the force to sense his opponents. All of his competitors had less then seventeen, and seventeen was what Anakin just happened to be holding.
“Comin up.” Anakin said just before showing his cards, there were several swears underneath the opponents breaths after being caught with such bad hands.
“Well we will just be on our way.” Anakin said nodding his head as he stood up. But before he could fully stand up Des grabbed his wrist and pulled him down.
“The deal was that whoever wins gets to fuck Padme” Des said releasing Anakin’s wrist from his vice grip.
“And you won.” The Twi’lek said lifting his shirt a little to show off a DL-21 blaster pistol. The Selkath nodded in agreement.
Anakin looked at Padme innocently, he knew that he could easily slice them in half with one swipe of his lightsaber but that would just produce a lot of problems.
Padme sighed and nodded to Anakin she knew this was their only option.
Anakin turned around and slid Padme’s thong off and set it on the table, then leaned forward and started to lick Padme’s snatch. She purred as she felt Anakin’s wet tongue explore her pussy, she leaned in and grasped Anakin’s short hair massing his head as he intensified his licking. Her purrs turned into groans as Anakin hit all the right spots, he was very familiar with Padme and he knew she was feeling a lot of discomfort in front of these strangers, so he decided to make it as pleasurable as possible.
Anakin inserted two fingers and slowly started to thrust in and out with them, her now wet pussy quivered with pleasure and her groans had started to grow louder, Padme leaned in closer her tits pushing against Anakin’s face her breasts almost popping out from the confining bra, Anakin nuzzled his head in her warm soft tits.
“Oh Ani.” Padme murmured with her eyes closed tightly enjoying the finger fuck. Her body wiggled in rhythm she was in almost a trance like state from the enormous amount of pleasure she was receiving. Anakin started to massage Padme’s breasts with his free hand, he started to kneed her tits like doe, her breast still remained inside her golden bra.
Anakin explored Padme’s tight wet snatch with his fingers further his fingers never having been so deep, he gave a viscous twist with his two fingers sending Padme over the edge, her body shook and she gave one last squeal as juices rushed out of her snatch.
Anakin stood up and grabbed Padme by the hips he gently twirled her around, he noticed that the three Sabacc players had pulled out their cocks and were stroking them.
Padme unclipped her bra and tossed it to the side finally exposing her tits, Padme laid down on the crate that they had just used for playing Sabacc, the three players now had a perfect view of Padme’s slender tone body. Padme dared a look at the Selkath dick very curious about what it would look like, it was roughly nine inches long and wider then most cocks, and a paler blue then his skin.
Padme looked back to Anakin who had just discarded his pants, he gently started to prod Padme’s pussy, playfully teasing her, a small amount of pleasure that felt like an electric shock flowed through her body in little spurts. Then Anakin penetrated sticking his cock all the way in, Padme moaned excited to have a dick in her finally. Anakin started of slow gently thrusting in and out relishing how warm Padme’s tight snatch was, he grabbed onto Padme’s thighs for extra support. He saw that the Sabacc players had shed various parts of their clothes, and were now furiously jacking their cocks.
Padme had closed her eyes to try and intensify the feeling of Anakin’s cock, but felt a webbed hand cupping one of her tits, she opened her eyes and looked over, the Selkath changed his facial expression to something that Padme assumed was a shy smile. However, surprisingly Padme didn’t mind.
“You like those?” Padme asked now smiling at Shaelas, Padme reached over with her hand and started to stroke the Selkath’s pale blue member, the cock was actually fairly cold compared to other cocks, she wondered if it was because he was a water based species.
Anakin increased his speed fucking Padme at a decent pace, letting her body build up a craving for more, Anakin knew how much Padme liked to be teased. He watched and noticed that Padme had started to jack off the Selkath, what did he expect though, Padme always got swept up in the moment. That was something he truly loved about her.
Padme felt yet another hand feeling her smooth skin and looked to her other side to see Dessel stroking her soft skin, Padme couldn’t help but reach over and grab Dessel’s shaft with her free hand and jack it off for him. As Anakin started to fuck her harder Padme sped up on jacking off the two cocks in her hands, moans started to come from everyone now.
Padme looked up to see a green cock hovering a few inches above her face, Nu’ru slapped his cock on Padme’s face a couple of times and Padme licked the tip of it before the Twi’lek shoved his dick all the way into her mouth and down her throat, Padme suppressed gagging from the sudden meat in her throat and was soon sucking on it.
Padme felt her tits being groped but she didn’t know who was doing it, she was to busy sucking on the dick in her mouth. She delicately massaged the member in her mouth with her tongue running it up and down the shaft, as it was thrusted in and out of her mouth.
Anakin finally reached full speed with his thrusts, he was fucking Padme’s tight snatch without mercy. Padme bucked her hips wildly, she looked over a little to see the Selkath lean in with a wide open mouth, then she felt her entire tit being consumed into the Selkath mouth, Padme tried to groan in pleasure but the cock in her mouth stifled them. She felt the Selkath’s large tongue exploring her breast gently licking her nipples, while at the same time gently biting down on them. Her other breast was being rubbed by Dessel’s hands, who skillfully massaged her body. Every ounce of her body felt like it was in heaven.
Anakin looked at Padme, who was naked and jacking off basically strangers and wondered how she could have possible landed herself in this situation, but he didn’t really care, even now she was the most beautiful women he had ever seen. Anakin knew that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with her.
Anakin was still violently thumping Padme’s snatch, when she looked at him with her big brown eyes and flashed him a sexy grin. Anakin could no longer contain himself he gave a few final thrusts and then pulled out his cock exploded in hot streams of fresh cum spraying down Padme’s tone body.
And before she knew it the Selkath had leaned back leaving Padme’s tit moist from his sucking, and his pale cock sprayed one thick stream of cum shooting across her chest, but like his cock it was colder then all the other cum she had been sprayed with, but before she could even finish her thought Dessel had grunted and was shooting warm cum onto her tits, she felt the cock in her mouth violently ripped from her mouth and then felt the hot cum splash across her face.
Padme tried to wipe the cum from her face with her now free hands as she sat up. She saw that all the guys were refastening their pants.
“Well I guess your gambling debts have been paid.” Nu’ru said with a satisfied smirk.
“Your welcome to play with us anytime.” Des added after reclipping his belt.
“I’m sure.” Padme laughed putting on her gold bra and thong. She didn’t want to get her dress stained with cum so Anakin had said he would extend his force awareness to make sure no one was in the halls on the way back.
Padme and Anakin said their good byes and walked back to their room, stopping occasionally when someone was come so Padme could hide her half naked body.
They entered their room were Padme flopped onto the bed exhausted, Anakin soon joined her after taking off some of his garments. He settled in beside Padme and wrapped his arm around her.
“We should get some sleep, Naboo is still a long journey away.” Anakin said with his tired eyes half open. There was a long pause before Anakin looked over to see Padme had already fallen asleep. Her chest rising and falling in a steady rhythm, Anakin smiled and closed his eyes waiting for the darkness to consume him. His last thought being the way he would propose to Padme on Naboo.
UrbanChaos
03-30-2011, 12:52 AM
As always comments are appretiated
Natsu
03-30-2011, 03:29 PM
very good
loobinator69
04-07-2011, 01:07 PM
Thank you. this is one of the best stories on the site. you obviously know the star wars storyline very well. is there a website to learn sabaac? i was sort of confuused in the last story.
UrbanChaos
04-07-2011, 02:59 PM
@loobinator69
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Sabacc
I'm glad you enjoyed it, I make sure link it to the movies as best as I can
irishcdn
04-07-2011, 08:48 PM
come on post the next chapter
UrbanChaos
04-07-2011, 08:54 PM
@irishcdn
lol, its almost done another few days and it will be out, most likely some time saturday
jdawgg
04-07-2011, 08:55 PM
hurry up dude. im waiting for the next bit as well. though waiting is giving me time to get my own stories posted. just started, got 2 in the general section. not quite as good as urs, though
UrbanChaos
04-07-2011, 09:33 PM
@jdawgg
lol just be patient I'm working on it right now, I might be able to get it done for friday, and I'm going to have to look at your stories now, Btw I'm just curious if your name has to do with hollywood undead?
jdawgg
04-08-2011, 02:37 PM
@jdawgg
lol just be patient I'm working on it right now, I might be able to get it done for friday, and I'm going to have to look at your stories now, Btw I'm just curious if your name has to do with hollywood undead?
haha it does. was wondering if anybody would ask me that
jdawgg
04-08-2011, 10:54 PM
@jdawgg
lol just be patient I'm working on it right now, I might be able to get it done for friday, and I'm going to have to look at your stories now, Btw I'm just curious if your name has to do with hollywood undead?
its friday dude.
UrbanChaos
04-09-2011, 12:45 PM
lol I said might it will be out later tonight, editing is going to take sometime
irishcdn
04-09-2011, 04:48 PM
lol some1s impatient lol
iamsocool
04-09-2011, 05:48 PM
Yeah just keep waiting
irishcdn
04-09-2011, 07:55 PM
its almost saturday!! lol
UrbanChaos
04-09-2011, 10:34 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 13: Picnic On The Beach
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Anakin was relieved as he walked down the landing ramp onto Naboo. The long journey on the old rustic ship was not his idea of a good time. Though he had enjoyed his time with Padme.
Padme had told him that instead of the staying at the royal Palace they would stay at a vacation home that was placed on a distant island for seclusion. It was an ideal place for Padme to hide from her would be assassins. But luckily they had better transportation, Padme had a private ship used for important visitors waiting to pick them up.
They entered the cozy ship and Padme had said it would only take an hour or two to get to their destination. Padme had sat herself down into the pilot’s seat while Anakin remained in the cargo hold. The small ship only had two rooms, the cockpit and the cargo hold, which doubled as sleeping quarters. It was a very high class ship Anakin noted, a true testament to Naboo design. The entire outlay of the ship was meant to be sleek and stylish, yet retained a practical side to every feature.
The journey only felt like minuets to Anakin, he had a short conversation with Obi Wan over his communicator, he had said he believed a bounty hunter named Jango Fett had something to do with the attack on Padme but before he could get a definitive answer he had taken off. Obi Wan was now following him to Geonosis. The rest of the trip Anakin had spent in a meditative state, being with Padme had brought up a lot of emotions, there is no emotion, there is peace. That was part of the Jedi code Anakin struggled with, it seemed his emotions always got the best of him.
Before Anakin could fully finish his thought he heard the ship gently landing, he opened his eyes and stood up, his legs were very sore from sitting cross legged. He grabbed Padme’s bags and walked out of the cargo hold and down the landing ramp where Padme was waiting for him.
“Beautiful isn’t it?” Padme asked looking around at the water falls and lush greenery surrounding them. Anakin looked around and saw that it was very beautiful. He opened his mouth to agree but saw that Padme was opening the door to the private home. He quickly shut his mouth and followed her in.
The house looked more like a small palace, with marble pillars and gold tapestries on the walls, it was more eccentric then he had anticipated. The people of Naboo always liked it when others marveled at their beauty, that was especially true in Padme’s case, she loved flaunting her good looks.
Padme gave Anakin a quick tour of the house, showing him all the rooms and features. She stopped at one of the rooms and waved a hand to it.
“This is your room Ani.” Padme said smiling sweetly.
“Thank you.” Anakin returned stepping past her and setting a small duffel bag onto the floor, he smiled looking at the large room. There was a bed that could easily hold two with red velvet blankets. Large windows were around the walls letting in natural light and showing a great view of the lush outside. He was fairly sad that it was his room and not their room. In truth Anakin had assumed that he and Padme would share a bedroom.
“I have to get settled and then I have some of my senator duties to attend to.” Padme told Anakin before giving him a wink and leaving.
Anakin was left standing with a dumb grin on his face, Padme confused him a lot, he never knew if she had the same feelings that he had for her. Even though it was forbidden, he loved Padme. He fell back and slumped into a white chair. No wonder Jedi weren’t supposed to have emotions, it just made things complicated. Maybe being a Jedi wasn’t the only way, he had heard that Sith use their emotions to strengthen themselves.
He shook his head and quickly stood up instantly banishing the thought from his head, he should never have thought that. He had other things to do anyway. He strolled out of the room to do a perimeter check of the building.
He checked the whole building, it was fairly secure. The building had a state of the art security system, plus some security droids. He walked by Padme’s office and saw her hard at work looking over some papers, a crease ran through her forehead showing how deep in concentration she was. He looked at the clock, almost noon. He should probably make lunch, or better yet a picnic! That would win Padme over for sure Anakin thought.
Anakin rushed back to the enormous kitchen and quickly grabbed a basket, he tossed in various fruits and snacks, and swiftly grabbed a couple premade sandwiches stuffing them in the basket with the other food. He dashed out of the room and to the nearest closet where he grabbed a nice blanket they could use for sitting on.
He inspected all the items he had gathered and smiled, it would be perfect.
He strode towards Padme’s office and took a few steps in.
“Hey Padme… It’s almost lunch and I thought… well I thought maybe we could go on a picnic?” Anakin stuttered, he hadn’t anticipated being so tongue tied.
“Ani that’s a wonderful idea.” Padme looked up and spoke excitedly.
“Let me just change quick.” Padme said standing up and then walking out.
Happily Anakin strolled out of the room and waited outside, the hot sun beating on his face. Naboo was a lot nicer then Tatooine, the sand was different too, it was smoother, he still didn’t like sand though. He heard Padme coming out and turned to look at her.
His jaw almost dropped, Padme was wearing a light brown dress with a floral pattern. Her cleavage was clearly visible, the dress tightened around her gorgeous waist and when Padme did a twirl showing him the dress her ass was perfectly accentuated by it, the dress was fairly see through and Anakin was almost positive that she had no under garments of any kind. Anakin felt his pulse quicken and dirty thoughts flow through his mind.
“Do you like it.” Padme asked shyly.
“You look so beautiful.” Anakin answered instantly, making Padme blush.
“Come on I know the perfect place.” Padme cried grabbing Anakin by the hand and pulling him off towards the dock.
Anakin obediently rowed to a secluded island that Padme said she used to go to as a little girl, she talked about her childhood on the way but it was only about ten minuets until they reached the island and were disembarking the row boat.
Again Padme took Anakin by the hand and guided him down the beach until they found a suitable spot. Anakin laid out the blanket, and put out the food.
Padme really seemed to like the picnic Anakin thought, they had talked about a lot of stuff during the picnic. Padme was the first person he had ever really opened up to.
“Hey what are those called?” Anakin asked pointing at a brown beast that was eating grass.
“Shaak’s, we used to play with them as children.” Padme replied blushing as she remembered a memory. When she was growing up her and some of Padme’s friends would come here for a vacation. They had many picnics in the very spot Padme was sitting in, they often they played truth or dare. One time Padme had chosen dare and she was dared to suck a Shaak’s dick. She hesitated at first but of course she couldn’t look like a coward in front of her friends. The Shaak’s dick was rather large she remembered and it had drenched her in cum, she had to throw those clothes out because of how badly stained they were. Padme wondered if that was the first time she had ever given a blow job.
Padme noticed how wet her pussy had become, then saw that Anakin was next to the Shaak, was he about to ride it she wondered.
Anakin forced jumped up and onto the Shaak, the Shaak instantly started to buck and quickly unsaddled Anakin who plummeted to the ground. He smashed into the dirt relatively unhurt. He snickered he should play a prank on Padme and pretend he was really hurt he thought, Padme had been a little too stiff lately.
Padme laughed as she saw Anakin bucked off the Shaak. Her smile faded as she waited for him to get up, but he never did. She sprang to her feet and hitched up the bottom of her dress and ran to where Anakin was.
“Anakin!” Padme called frightened, she was upon Anakin in a matter of mere seconds, and started to shake him.
Anakin rolled over laughing and Padme could barely contain her rage, but then she thought about how funny it actually was and so she too burst out into laughter. Anakin grabbed her and pulled her down, and they both rolled until Anakin was on top pinning her down.
Anakin could feel Padme’s hot breath on his face, her small body being crushed under his muscled frame.
Anakin stood up after getting a little aroused and pulled Padme up with him.
“Let’s go for a swim Padme.” Anakin said still chuckling.
“We cant we don’t have any swimming garments.” Padme said shocked at his suggestion.
“I know.” Anakin said with a smirk then he pulled of his clothes and tossed them to the dirt leaving him naked.
“Let’s go!” Anakin added before he sprinted to the water.
Padme watched in shock as his cock dangled while he ran. She looked around, she didn’t see anybody and she knew that there was no one around. But there was always the possibility that someone would go by. As she contemplated she saw Anakin waving her over into the water.
Padme let out a sigh and then reached to the back of her dress, she unzipped the back all the way and then hesitated one last time before pulling off her dress and setting it neatly on the ground besides Anakin’s clump of clothes. Then she ran towards the water clumsily trying to cover herself with her hands.
She dove into the water. The water was warm from the heat of the day. She let the water cover her and kept her shoulders underneath the water to make sure she was decently covered.
“Come on Padme live a little!” Anakin shouted popping up behind her and wrapping his arms around her flat stomach and pulling her up and out of the water exposing her luscious tits.
“Quit it!” Padme laughed splashing around, trying to get Anakin to let go.
“Hey what’s between my thighs?” Padme asked quizzically feeling something soft but yet hard between her thighs.
“Maybe you should dive under and fined out.” Anakin said with a smirk.
Padme took a deep breath and dove under the water. She opened her eyes and to her surprise she found Anakin’s shaft hard as rock right in front of her face.
Padme popped out of the water sputtering at spitting out water she had swallowed.
“Anakin!” Padme cried in confusion.
“Come on Padme let’s fuck right here, right now.” Anakin insisted. Padme was intrigued by the thought she had never fucked in the water before and she was always happy to try something new.
“Anakin I know from experience that reporters send cameras here to spy on me, we could easily get caught.” Padme plead with Anakin.
“Don’t worry so much, we’ll be fine.” Anakin argued, Anakin knew he was letting his emotions get the best of him but right now he didn’t care.
Padme felt like she hadn’t been herself since she had taken a larger role in diplomacy on Coruscant, she felt the gold necklace on her neck she had received from the Gungan gangbang for being the number one slut on Naboo.
Padme took a deep breath and dove back under the water. She found Anakin’s large shaft and then shoved it in her mouth, Padme knew she had a limited amount of time, she could only hold her breath for so long. She bobbed her head back and forth furiously. She cupped Anakin’s balls into her hand and gently started to massage them. She felt Anakin’s hands tangle into her free flowing hair and push her head forward forcing her to deepthroat his cock. Padme felt his shaft pulse, Anakin let go of her head and Padme felt his cum explode into her mouth.
She felt the air in her lungs become depleted, she rocketed to the top of the water and popped out with a huge splash spitting out cum and water struggling for breath.
“Well that was a first.” Padme sputtered with a wink.
“A first for both of us.” Anakin added with a chuckle.
Before another word was said Padme had laid back and was gently floating on the water her long her free floating in the warm water, her beautiful body sparkled in the sun light.
She felt Anakin grip her thighs with his wet hands and pull her floating body in closer, he gently prodded her pussy with his rock hard cock. She felt his dick gently sliding into her snatch, she moaned loudly excepting his cock further in.
Anakin started to thrust in faster the warm water made both his and Padme’s body tingle with each thrust, Anakin could feel her juices mixing with the water. Anakin scooped Padme’s body up and out of the water her perky tits pressed against his chest.
With his cock still buried in her pussy he carried her out of the water and onto the beach. The water dripped from both of them as Anakin’s feet dug into the white sandy beach. Padme popped his cock out of her snatch and lowered her self to the ground.
Anakin leaned in and kissed Padme, his tongue exploring the inside of her petite mouth. His fingers traced Padme’s moist pussy and he felt Padme’s hand tighten around his cock.
“The Shaak’s are watching.” Anakin pointed finally breaking away from the kiss.
“Then let’s give them something to watch.” Padme whispered seductively.
Padme grabbed Anakin’s forearm and pulled him to the ground, Anakin laid down, his back making an imprint on the white sand. Padme climbed on top of Anakin, her snatch hovering over Anakin’s cock. Anakin was impatient as ever and grabbed Padme by her waist and forced her down, he fored her to take all his cock at once. Padme squealed from half surprise and half pleasure.
Padme took the hint and started to buck her hips up and down, Anakin reached up and cupped Padme’s tits in his hands gently massaging them and pinching her nipples. Padme groaned thrusting her hips faster, she felt Anakin’s hands start to caress the rest of her body. Working his way from her breasts to her ass.
He tightly gripped her firm ass and helped her thrust up and down faster, making sure that she was slamming down on his cock as hard and fast as possible. The smacking sound of skin against skin was well above audible and the distant sound of the Shaak’s moaning where almost completely drowned out by the loud groans of Padme.
Anakin had been warding off the need to cum for a long time but he knew he was out of time.
“I’m going to cum.” Anakin panted.
“Not yet!” Padme shouted in between moans. Padme quickly got off Anakin’s cock she positioned her self so she was in between Anakin’s well muscled thighs and started to furiously jack his cock with both hands.
“Cum all over my face Ani!” Padme shouted enthusiastically. Anakin grunted and then felt his dick explode in a shower of cum.
Anakin looked at Padme who was smiling, her face was pasted in cum.
“I still have a lot of papers to sign.” Padme hinted grabbing a towel.
“Well let’s quickly pack up then.” Anakin said still a little winded from their activity.
Anakin and Padme quickly packed up the picnic area, and gathered their clothes.
“I don’t want to get my clothe wet.” Padme frowned realizing she was still wet from being in the water.
“So don’t.” Anakin answered simply stuffing his clothes in the picnic basket solving the dilemma. Padme just smiled and placed her folded clothes inside the basket as well.
Padme and Anakin made their way back to the house naked without saying much. Padme would often point out places where she and her friends would go and play, but Anakin was too distracted by her naked body to listen.
It was at this moment that a hovering droid cam well out of sight stopped recording and set a course back to its master who had sent it, having recorded all their amorous activity.
When they entered the house they split up, Padme went to her room to freshen up and Anakin went to his room to do the same. It had quickly turned to evening and the outside was slowly turning dark. Anakin made his way out of his room after a few hours in nothing but a pair of boxers and a black tank top. He made his way to Padme’s study, he peered in a saw her intently studying some papers wearing a similar outfit as him, she had a black lacy bra and thong to match, she probably thought he had gone to bed since it was almost eleven pm.
All Anakin wanted to do was go in and fuck her on her desk, but he resisted she was busy and she had to get some work done, taking a step back he slowly walking back to his room.
Exhausted he flopped into his bed and pulled his covers over him. He closed his eyes content to end his day.
Anakin fell asleep to the sound of moaning Shaak’s in the distant.
UrbanChaos
04-09-2011, 10:37 PM
After much pressure to finish this early lol, please enjoy the chapter and feel free to comment or leave suggestions
Natsu
04-10-2011, 02:59 PM
just as a thought are you going to use the shaaks as one of padame's lovers?
UrbanChaos
04-10-2011, 03:38 PM
^ i hadnt considered it but its to late in the story to throw it in now
Natsu
04-10-2011, 03:57 PM
actually this is THE moment in the chapter you wrote " Anakin fell asleep to the sound of moaning Shaak’s in the distant." empasis on MOANING. so seriously think about it.
UrbanChaos
04-10-2011, 04:42 PM
^ not bad, i could acctually work that into the next chapter, i ussally have the next 3 or 4 chapters planned but i like where your going with it... i had started writting the next chapter but i'm going to scrap it and work with your idea instead
jdawgg
04-11-2011, 02:52 PM
lol that was mostly from me. heh. also, urbanchaos, hope u enjoyed my 3 stories so far, in general section.
Natsu
04-20-2011, 02:17 PM
^ not bad, i could acctually work that into the next chapter, i ussally have the next 3 or 4 chapters planned but i like where your going with it... i had started writting the next chapter but i'm going to scrap it and work with your idea instead
sweet
kieran
05-05-2011, 04:12 PM
Love the story can't wait for the next :)
jdawgg
05-09-2011, 04:53 PM
still waiting on the next chapter
UrbanChaos
05-17-2011, 02:06 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 14: Picnic On The Beach
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Padme looked at the clock, eleven pm. She was sitting in her desk chair in her study looking over some papers. She was only wearing a black lacy bra and a black matching thong, she had made sure her cleavage was more then visible. She had hoped that Anakin would stop and fuck her senseless, after the picnic at the beach Padme yearned to be with Anakin all the time. Was she in love with Anakin? Padme had never really been in love with anyone before, but she had to admit she always enjoyed being around Anakin, she loved everything about him.
Padme pressed a hidden button under her desk and a vid screen appeared underneath her papers. Padme had installed security cameras all around the house, and a way to check them in every room. However she was the only one that knew about them or how to access them. She checked just outside her door and saw Anakin backing away and beginning his walk back to his room.
She cursed in her head, he probably thought she was to busy and decided to leave her alone. Her pussy ached from thinking about the picnic she and Anakin had.
Subconsciously her finger slipped down to her pussy and she gently stroked it through the cloth. The cloth quickly moistened, Padme’s arousal grew with each passing second. She moved the thong to the side a little and plunged her fingers inside. She desperately needed something crammed in her snatch.
She clumsily opened her desk drawer, she bit her lower lip trying not to let out any moans. She rummaged to the back of the drawer and pulled out a long pink dildo.
She brought the toy down to her pussy and gently probed the area, slowly massaging her clit. Then she plunged it all the way in, she quickly thrusted in and out. She felt pleasure but something was wrong, she pumped harder and tried her best to suppress her moans, but one or two leaked out.
Padme stopped with the toy about half way in, she frowned, she should have been enjoying this alot more. She flicked a switch at the end of the dildo and it instantly started to vibrate, a dull hum being emitted. Her frown quickly turned to a grin and she started to thrust the toy in and out again. She grabbed the desk with her free hand, her knuckles turning white from her tight grip. Her moans escalated along with her pleasure.
“Oh Ani.” Padme whispered rolling her hips in rhythm with the dildo. She attempted to fantasize about Anakin’s large cock, but she had never had to masturbate using her imagination, being a Monarch she literally had hundreds of servants willing to service her sexually.
She again stopped and turned off the vibrating dildo and tossed it in the drawer still wet from her cunt juices. She slumped back in her chair needing a cock now more then ever.
Then she heard it. Her ears perked and she listened intently making sure she had heard right. The sound of the Shaak’s mating call, the Shaak’s rarely mated and Padme wondered if she went and watched them if she would then be able to get herself to orgasm.
Padme quickly got up and grabbed a tunic hanging behind her. She put it on, she didn’t have time to get dressed so she decided to wear her black lacy bra and thong. She pulled the tunic around her tightly and rushed out side.
She gazed around intently looking for the Shaak’s. She saw what looked like lumpy shadows in the distance and assumed those were them.
Padme sprinted towards them, the wet grass making a sloshing sound as she ran.
Padme skidded to a stop as she finally saw them.
The large animals with light brown fur had made a sort of circle, the slow animals would wander around a little until they found a free mate and then mount each other and fuck. Padme had learned in school that the female Shaak’s had multiple wombs so when the mating came they would get pregnant from multiple males and then bear children for the rest of the year. This also meant that the male Shaak’s had a ridicules amount of cum because they only mated once a year, and Padme loved cum. Padme hadn’t realized that her finger had slipped down to her snatch and was massaging it while she observed.
Padme cursed wishing she had brought a dildo or some sort of toy with her, she already knew her fingers would not be enough. She swallowed hard knowing she had two choices, go back to the house and forget this crazy idea… or walk over there and fuck a Shaak. However Padme had no idea how the Shaak’s would act if she were to approach them. She had heard that in their mating state they could be very unpredictable.
She sighed knowing what she had to do, she set her tunic neatly on the ground and did the same with her underwear, the cool air of the night touched her body and her now exposed nipples hardened.
She carefully entered their mating circle trying to look friendly and not threatening. Then one noticed her, she had seen this one before, it was smaller then the rest and had probably just reached adult hood, it had often been shoved aside by other males and hadn’t gotten to fuck any females yet he would have to wait until the rest were done before he got his turn, but not with Padme. Padme decided to use that to her advantage this Shaak was most likely super horny and willing to mate with anything right now.
She reached out a hand and gently patted its side, it shivered at first when her cold hand touched its warm body but it soon faced Padme and nuzzled its face into her toned stomach, she felt its warm tongue lick her abs trying to entice her to mate with him.
She knelt down and saw the Shaak’s dick was already hard, it was slowly rocking its body back and forth trying to communicate with Padme through signals about his interests. His cock was rather large maybe seven to eight inches, not the biggest she had seen, in fact it seemed a little small compared to the size of the beast. However Padme wasn’t complaining all she wanted was to taste the meat.
She crawled a little on her hands and knees so she was underneath the Shaak about half her body was underneath while her bottom half stayed out. She now had a perfect view of the Shaak’s thick dick, she wiggled her ass a little in anticipation. Then she felt the Shaak’s long slender tongue licking her ass, she remembered from her studies as a young girl that Shaak’s communicated mostly through signals, she must have just signaled the Shaak to lick her. She didn’t mind though she kind of enjoyed feeling the tongue explore the back part of her body. It moistened all of her skin, though it did make her feel a little cold now from the cool of the night, she would just have to get the blood pumping she thought with a sly grin.
She grabbed the dick with both hands and gently started to stroke, the Shaak rustled a little from the touch but soon settled down. The dick was slipperier the she had expected. She stroked it a few more times before she gently put her mouth around the tip of it. The Shaak shuffled his feet a little after feeling Padme’s warm mouth encase the head of his cock but soon calmed down excited about mating with a foreign mammal.
Padme waited for the beast to calm down before she continued. She gently started to slide her mouth back and forth, slowly taking in more of the cock as she bobbed back and forth. She felt the Shaak find her pussy with his tongue and start to insert his long slender tongue in. she closed her eyes in pleasure, she felt her cunts warm juices start to flow down the side of her leg.
Apparently Padme had been enjoying the Shaak’s tongue for too long because he started to thrust his pelvis forward forcing Padme to take his dick further down her throat. Startled, Padme fell on her back the wet slippery cock popping out of her mouth, she heard the Shaak whine because of this. And so the Shaak repositioned him self over Padme her head right underneath his hind legs and cock.
The beast instinctively started to buck his hips down at Padme’s face but continuously missed her mouth with his member. Padme quickly reached up with her hands and guided the cock with the next thrust into her mouth. Padme made no movement she was afraid of being crushed by the massive pelvis continuously being thrusted down at her, her only movement was her hands guiding the dick into her hot mouth. She felt her spit start to leak from the corner of her mouth, the dick made a wet sloshing sound every time it slammed down into her mouth.
The Shaak kept face fucking her for several minuets before she felt the cock begin to swell. Normally Padme would feel a cock pulse a little and swell slightly before it came, however this cock continued to expand in her mouth. The Shaak had stopped moving and waited as the cock expanded larger. Padme’s eyes widened not sure what was happening. Her mouth began to ach beginning to feel the pressure against the sides of her cheeks. Finally it stopped expanding but she soon realized she had no possible way of pulling it out, logically she knew this was so the Shaak’s mate could no longer leave and was forced to take his seed, but that was no comfort to her.
Padme didn’t have to wait long before she felt the sticky liquid being poured down her throat like a hose. She swallowed as fast as she could but the liquid level was rising in her mouth. Who knew how long the Shaak would cum, she was his first mate of the night and that was probably meant the most cum he would shoot for all of the night. Finally there was simply no more room in her mouth and she couldn’t drink the cum down fast enough. The Shaak’s dick had expanded to tightly making her mouth air tight, her head began to swim. Things had become very hazy in her head.
Then she felt a warm liquid leak from her left nostril, she forced herself to concentrate and realized that the cum had no where to go so it took the only passage left. It didn’t take long until her right nostril began to leak the same sticky liquid, and soon both began to gush with the liquid.
And just when she was sure she would choke the seemingly endless supply stopped, and the dick retracted slowly. She immediately started to spit out the excess cum, she pulled the dick out of her mouth and rolled onto her belly spitting out cum, her belly was full of the hot seed. She wiped her face nose with her hands trying to blow out the cum that remained up her nose.
Then she was being rolled somewhere, the Shaak was pushing her someplace. She was rolling end over end so it was hard to gauge her position. Soon she found herself lying in the middle of a circle of Shaak’s. To her left she saw a female being fucked by a much larger male Shaak. Padme noticed her original mate had bowed its head.
The large mate stopped pumping and sloppily pulled his cock from the female. He slowly lumbered over to Padme, slowly he circled her looking at her every feature. Then he gave a loud audible roar, apparently it was a signal because soon after that two female Shaak’s came up beside her original mate and escorted him outside of the circle.
Then it clicked, she was some sort of gift! She had been given to the alpha male in exchange for mates. What happened next was anybody’s guess but she assumed she was going to get the fuck of a life time.
The Alpha Shaak circled her one last time and then reared up on his hind legs before slamming his front legs back down in between her arms and chest, the ground shuddered from the force. She looked down at her new mates dick and saw it was at least twice as big as her first. Then she felt his dick being thrusted, at first she felt it on her leg, he was apparently trying to locate her pussy. And then it was sliding on her thigh. And then just barely touching the top of her snatch.
And then it plunged deep inside her pussy, she instantly screamed from the meat being forced into her snatch. The pain at first seemed unbearable, but after about five thrusts the pleasure had started to creep in, and soon she felt like her body would explode in pleasure. She grasped the Shaak’s legs with all her might her nails dug into his rough skin. But that only made the Shaak pump faster, she screamed in pleasure but it was drowned out by the other moaning Shaak’s. She giggled wondering if Anakin could hear.
The Shaak’s head nuzzled into her tits sloppily licking at them and softly biting her rosy red nipples his body speed increased as he humped Padme’s naked body. She heard him growl again and instantly two cocks were put in her hands, she glanced to both sides to see that they belonged to two large male Shaak’s, all she was now, was a possession, a play thing. But how long would she be the Alpha males slave she wondered.
She started to pump her arms back and forth jerking the two new cocks in her hands, the constant slap of the Alpha Shaak’s ball against her skin was driving her crazy with pleasure. She gripped the cocks in her hands tighter willing her already sore arms to move faster. She clenched her teeth screeching in pleasure, her pussy gushed with juices from a fresh orgasm.
The cocks in her hands exploded in cum covering her face and chest in. The cock in her snatch swelled up and started to pump its potent seed inside. Her mind became fuzzy from the feeling of warmth encasing her lower half, she glance around and saw a wall of brown, dozens of Shaak’s surrounded her all with hard dicks. She reached out with her hands and just rubbed anything in the vicinity of her reach. The cock in her snatch finally stopped spilling cum and pulled out, put only for an instant before it was thrusted right back in. she closed her eyes in exhaustion warm sprays of cum hit her from all angles.
Her pussy was being violently humped by the massive Shaak and she knew this would go on until the early hours of the morning, her body had been experiencing ecstasy for what seemed like hours only now was she aware of the chilling wind on her nude body and how she hadn’t slept in almost twenty four hours.
The cock in her pussy swelled yet again and sent hot cum filling her to the brim again, but that was to much for Padme, at first she attempted to fight the blackness that slowly consumed her the warm cum that constantly splashed her only encouraged her to fall into unconsciousness, she fell asleep to the constant hump of the Alpha Shaak’s dick in her pussy.
<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
Padme woke up what must have been hours later with the sun shining on her face, it was just rising. She shivered and looked her body over. Every ounce of her body was covered in Shaak cum. Wobbly she stood up and surveyed the field. It was entirely trampled and covered in a glistening coat of cum.
Padme looked around with a frown, where had her clothes gotten to? She had looked to where they should be laying but nothing was their. They had probably been blown away by the wind or kicked by some Shaak she reasoned.
She wrapped her arms around her chest and started her walk pack to the mansion, even though the sun was up the temperature didn’t seem to rise any.
The walk to the mansion didn’t seem long, but that could have been because of her exhaustion or her splitting headache she had developed. In the haze she was in it didn’t take her long to find her room, but instead of washing herself off in the refresher she just quickly wiped herself off with a towel and jumped into her bead tossing the towel into the trash, she was determined to get a couple more hours of sleep.
Right before she fell asleep she saw a package on her desk from the Galaco clothing line, it was probably the black evening gown she had ordered not to long ago… her last thought was how sexy she would look for Anakin in it.
Natsu
05-17-2011, 03:29 PM
sweet man good story.
UrbanChaos
05-18-2011, 08:02 PM
For those who care i fucked up on the title of this chapter so chapter 13 and 14 are both "Picnic on the beach"... chapter 14's title is acctually "Long Nights"
jdawgg
05-19-2011, 07:42 AM
lol awesome chapter urbanchaos. keep up the good work
Malcho1234
06-07-2011, 12:45 PM
Good work. I hope that you'll update soon.
loobinator69
06-07-2011, 07:35 PM
nice! also, i know others got inyo a big thing about the shaaks (on that, any relation to jedi shaak ti?) but, after the picnic there was that thing about the droid recording it. was that padmes, or some one elses?...
UrbanChaos
06-08-2011, 02:48 PM
@loobinator69 This http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Shaak is the Shaak's that are being talked about in the story, as for the droid that loose end will be tied up in the next chapter... and i plan to mention it again much later down the road.
lilshepherd
06-10-2011, 02:26 PM
When is the next one comeing out?
UrbanChaos
06-10-2011, 03:58 PM
^hopefully next week or the week after
loobinator69
06-17-2011, 09:15 PM
its next week! lol.
jdawgg
06-25-2011, 08:38 PM
its next week! lol.
lol its the week after as well
UrbanChaos
06-26-2011, 04:52 PM
The story itself is done, however i still need to edit it which i hate doing so i tend to put it off also i want to add an additional scene because it seems to short... But because i like you guys i will try to have it done tonight, which means it will be out very late tonight
jdawgg
06-26-2011, 08:35 PM
The story itself is done, however i still need to edit it which i hate doing so i tend to put it off also i want to add an additional scene because it seems to short... But because i like you guys i will try to have it done tonight, which means it will be out very late tonight
aww thanks urbanchaos, i like me too. my fiancee likes me as well. and we both like the what if's, as well.
edit: we both like you as well
lulz afterthought.
UrbanChaos
06-26-2011, 10:18 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 15: Desire By The Fire
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Anakin woke up frightened and gasping for air, his covers drenched in sweat. He calmed his mind with Jedi mediation, he had been having nightmares… maybe visions of his mother, she was in great pain and suffering. Something was very wrong, and it didn’t sit well with him. He was trying to calm his mind and spirit with the force but it didn’t seem to work.
He stepped out and onto the balcony in the boxers and black tank top he had fallen asleep in. it was mid afternoon and the hot sun was beating down on his face. He took a deep breath and looked at his serene surroundings, it helped him calm down a little but not enough. In the back of his mind Anakin knew the only way he could settle himself down was to go to Tatooine and find out what was wrong. However at this moment it was not an option.
He closed his mind and focused on last night, he had slept fitfully, waking up dozens of times. Every time he had woken up he had heard the Shaak’s moaning and groaning whenever he had woken up. He wondered what they could have been doing all night, he noted to ask Padme about it, she was always giving Anakin little tidbits of information on Nabooian culture and facts.
Anakin heard a beeping from in his room, he slowly waltzed back into his room and picked up his data pad, he had set it so if any information about Padme was reported he would be notified.
He grabbed his sleek silver data pad and scrolled through the articles of a about a dozen tabloids. Every article was the same…
Queen Padme Amidala secretly returns to Naboo with a special someone! They were seen on the beach near her summer mansion getting intimate! But wait that’s not all! In the middle of the night she was seen getting down and dirty with some Shaak’s! Want her under garments from that night? Bid for them on Galactic Trades! Pictures below!
Anakin scrolled down to the pictures, his heart sank, it showed him and Padme fucking… though the pictures were a little hard to make out, in fact if he hadn’t been their he wouldn’t have been a hundred percent sure they were of him and her. And the Shaak pictures were even worse. He couldn’t even be positive they were her, they were taken in the dark and at a distance.
He groaned, never the less the smartest move would be to leave Naboo, Padme’s would be assassins would certainly follow up this lead. Their only choice would be to leave Naboo and travel to another world. Anakin went back into his room and put on his normal Jedi clothes, the flowing tunic felt natural as he stepped out into the hall. He watched as a young servant noticed him and hurried over.
“Mistress Padme requests your presence in the dining hall.” The servant gave a curt nod and then continued to hurry down the corridor.
Anakin strode towards the dining hall, looking at all the extravagant items in the house. He looked outside the windows and saw the lush forest and water falls that surrounded the palace. He strode into the dining hall and saw Padme delicately sorting through a basket of fruit trying to choose which one she wanted. She wore a long smooth gold and white dress, the sleeves went about three quarters down her arm and the dress ended at about her ankles with a long slit going up her right leg and ending at her thigh. He walked over and sat adjacent to her.
“Good morning.” He said smiling.
“Afternoon.” She corrected finally choosing on a pear like fruit. Anakin watched as she picked up her knife, and just before she cut into it, Anakin waved his hand and the fruit began to levitate. He waved it forward and the fruit slowly moved towards him until it gently sat itself on his plate.
Padme giggled while Anakin cut the pear like fruit for her, then with a flick of his wrist all the pieces he had cut all floated in mid air and floated back towards Padme. Anakin held them in mid air right in front of her face as Padme chose and then took bites out of each of them, the two giggled at the childish nature of what he was doing.
They continued their lunch in relative silence, occasionally Anakin would ask about politics and she would ask about the Jedi ways. Near the end of the lunch Padme folded her napkin and set it on her white and gold dress.
“So what’s on the agenda for today my Jedi body guard?” Padme asked with a giggle.
“Actually we need to find a new planet to hide on.” Anakin replied seriously.
“Oh… Well how about we meet in the den this evening and discuss it further.” Padme suggested a little taken back by Anakin’s seriousness.
“As you wish my Queen.” Anakin said as he stood “I will go and make a list of suitable planets.” He finished before walking out.
Padme sighed, she didn’t really want to talk about business. She had wanted to set Anakin straight about their feelings for each other, she had planned on telling him that they could not be together, that their intimate meetings should mean nothing, but perhaps their was still time for that.
<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
Padme flicked the final switch and the fireplace lit up with an instant fire. She sat on the edge of the couch and double checked her work, a few candles had been lit, she had dimmed the lights and of course she was wearing the new dress she had purchased. She gently smoothed it out the wrinkles with her hand and waited for Anakin to arrive.
Anakin walked through the door and stopped dead in his tracks.
“Padme, you look… stunning.” Anakin hesitated slightly at seeing the black evening gown she wore. It had no straps for her shoulder, instead the dress ended at about half way up her tits just far enough to cover her nipples. The dress accomplished not being held up by any straps by being super tight around the breasts and waist. For her arms she wore long black gloves that ended at about the same height as the top of the dress. The dress itself ended well below her feet but was tight fitting all the way, the only other added feature to the dress was the long black scarf she wore tied to her neck that dangled down to the bottom of the dress.
“You can close your mouth and sit down now Ani.” Padme giggled patting the couch seat next to her. Anakin clumsily made his way over the seat without taking his eyes off of Padme.
“Now, you said we need to go to a new planet?” Padme asked leaning in so Anakin could get a nice shot of her cleavage.
“Yeah, you see if you look at my data pad your cover has been blown.” Anakin cleared his throat a little and handed the data pad to Padme. Padme scrolled through the evidence Anakin had collected. She hummed and hawed and saw that she and Anakin had been caught on the beach and they had even managed to see her with the Shaak’s, though the quality was lacking in all pictures, but Anakin was indeed right, they needed to move.
“I’ve also included a list of planets that would be suitable.” Anakin interrupted. Padme saw a list of planets, Alderaan, Dantooine, Kashyyyk maybe a little Wookie nookie was in order she giggled, but the one planet that really caught her eye was Tatooine. She hadn’t been their since she had first met Anakin, his mom did say to come back anytime, and that night she had spent with her was awesome.
“What about Tatooine?” Padme asked.
“A good choice my Queen.” Anakin replied his heart skipped a beat when she mentioned the name of his home planet.
“Good then we leave tomorrow.” Padme decided.
“May I be perfectly honest with you?” Anakin asked sheepishly.
“Of course.” Padme replied slightly confused, she reached over and clasped his hand.
“The fact that we’re together torments me… the knowledge that we can never be burns my very soul.” Anakin started.
“Don’t talk like that Anakin.” Padme interrupted letting go of his hand.
“No you don’t understand, I need to be with you I… I love you.” Anakin confessed.
“No you don’t understand, I’m a senator and you’re studying to be a Jedi we can’t be together.” Padme responded shocked at his confession.
“I know but…” Anakin stopped and reached over to put his hands Padme’s.
He gripped the top part of Padme’s dress with his hands and yanked down, her young luscious tits popped free.
“Ani!” Padme yelped in surprise. But it was to late Anakin had already buried his head in between her gorgeous tits. She could feel him slurping and sucking her rosy red nipples,
“Padme I want to be with you for the rest of my life.” Anakin whispered.
“If we do, we can never go back.” Padme breathed back. Anakin’s response was to put his hand under her dress and delicately started to rub the fabric of her panties. He caressed her clit a little harder making her moan ever so softly. Padme’s hand floated down and into Anakin’s pants, she gently started to stroke the head of his penis. She leaned in and started to kiss Anakin, with her free hand she reached to her back and found the hidden piece of velcro. The sound of the flickering fire was interrupted by the rip of velcro, Padme tossed the large bottom portion of her dress to the side, leaving her black lacy panties and long slender legs exposed. She pulled Anakin’s pants down to his knees and then swung her leg over so she was sitting on Anakin’s thighs facing him. Anakin ripped Padme’s panties and tossed them towards her dress.
He grabbed her ass with both hands and pulled her forward, her pussy grazed his cock. She placed her arms over his shoulders and gently started to rock back and forth her snatch teasing his cock. He tightened his grip on her ass and lifted her in the air putting her down on his cock, her pussy tightened around his meat, she groaned a little as it made its way all the way in. She started to hump her waist up and down violently fucking Anakin’s cock Anakin shifted his hands up to her breast and started to massage them. She leaned forward allowing Anakin the ability to suck on her nipples. He once again shifted his hands back down to her firm ass squeezing them tight. Anakin shifted his weight and then stood up, Padme squealed in delight never losing her rhythm on Anakin’s shaft.
He sloppily kicked his pants off from his ankles, Anakin walked a few feet forward and set Padme’s back up against a wall, he started to brutally slam his dick into her tight wet snatch. Padme gasped for air as Anakin ravaged her pussy, her hands gently traced down his back. Padme pushed on Anakin’s shoulders a little and his rod popped out from her pussy, she dropped from Anakin’s grip to her knees on the floor. She grabbed his dick with her and which was still lathered with her cunt juices. She jerked it back and forth as her eyes watched Anakin pull off his shirt and toss it to the side. She crammed the dick into her mouth, her big brown tender eyes locked with Anakin’s as she bobbed back and forth. Anakin could feel the cum welling up inside him she looked so sexy with his meat in her mouth, he felt Padme reach up and begin to play with his balls. At that moment Anakin knew he could no longer contain himself with a grunt he let all his cum explode in to her mouth, her cheeks bulged for a moment while she tried to keep up with the load being delivered in her mouth.
“Tasty.” Padme gulped the last bit as she wiped her chin of a trickle of cum.
“And we’re not done yet” Anakin grinned devilishly, he pushed her down so her face slid into the white rug.
“Hey!” Padme protested, she felt Anakin grab her hips his dick prodding her wet cunt. She dug her fingers into the carpet as Anakin took his first slam into her tender pussy. Her moans grew louder with each thrust, her body falling in motion with his hits. She closed her eyes tight and bit her lower lip envying her own pleasure.
“FUCK ME HARDER!” Padme demanded, and Anakin was more then happy to oblige his pounds increased in both rate and pressure with a bit off added force help. He smacked her ass with and open hand leaving a nice red hand mark, he smacked it once more relishing the small ripples that formed on her perfect toned ass, Padme’s face remained hovering near the ground with her ass high in the air so Anakin could easily give her pussy the pounding she so desperately needed she looked over her shoulder to give Anakin a sexy wink through gritting teeth. Anakin could feel just how close he was to once again cumming.
Anakin pulled out of Padme, he could hear her whimpering from the lack off pleasure. He put his hands on Padme’s golden butt cheeks and pulled them apart, he set his rod in between her cheeks and then pressed them tight together so it was sandwiched in. Padme caught onto the idea and started to rock back and forth, the end of Anakin’s dick popping in and out of her cheeks.
“Ganna cum!” Anakin exclaimed right before jizz rocketed out of his cock and splattered Padme’s back, Padme slowed to a stop and heard Anakin fall back onto the couch with a huff. She turned around and saw Anakin comfortably set himself in the couch his head resting on the couch arm. Padme crawled up and onto Anakin, she rested her head on his muscled chest.
“Maybe we can make this work.” Padme whispered to Anakin.
“No Padme, we will make this work.” He replied before wrapping his arms around her petite body. He closed his eyes happily waiting for the sleep that would engulf his tired body.
Hope you enjoyed the newest chapter of the what if's! The next will feature their dirty deeds on Tatooine! please feel free to leave questions comments and ideas. Hopefully the next chapter will be out next week or even the end of this one, I'm super excited for this one, so long for now. :wave:
@loobinator69 it is now next week lol
@jdawgg good to see a canadian brother here p.s. hope you and your fiancee enjoy
loobinator69
06-28-2011, 09:21 PM
another great story.
sigh... some wookie action would be so hot... but the next movie to have it is III. and thats just a short segment. course, if you do clone wars, you can make up whatever you want.
oh and thanks for wrapping up the whole droid thing.
JKnight
07-01-2011, 07:01 PM
very good, have to admit when I seen Episode 1 the first time, the scene in Anakins house at the table, my thought was, "What else could jar jar do with that tongue"
jdawgg
07-01-2011, 11:45 PM
we both enjoyed the newest chapter, and we think you should contiune on with this story.
loobinator69
07-05-2011, 08:47 PM
very good, have to admit when I seen Episode 1 the first time, the scene in Anakins house at the table, my thought was, "What else could jar jar do with that tongue"
haha lol. that would be hot.
loobinator69
07-05-2011, 08:50 PM
not to repeat earlier posts, but its next week again.
UrbanChaos
07-05-2011, 10:12 PM
^generally i write six to seven page chapter which ussually takes a little over a week, I'm at page twelve with this one and almost done, trust me the waiting will be well worth it
loobinator69
07-06-2011, 08:33 PM
there all worth the wait.
jdawgg
07-06-2011, 11:39 PM
like lobinator said, its next week again in 6 days
dumbo
07-09-2011, 09:14 PM
another excellent story, I'm sure it is worth the wait!!!!!
UrbanChaos
07-14-2011, 05:22 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 16: Tatooine Heat
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
*First let me apologize for this chapter being so late, but this crazy thing called real life kept getting in the way of me posting it and then when i did have time a re-wrote the ending... five times (the ending of this story will effect the entire series so i wanted it just right) and then i decided to beef up portions of the story, anyway this is my long winded way of saying enjoy!*
Padme’s eyes fluttered open, she was still lying on the couch from the night before. Though a few things had changed, Anakin was now gone and a wool blanket lay on top of her. She assumed Anakin had placed it on her.
“So your finally awake, ships ready to go whenever you are.” Anakin said peering in and then disappearing.
“I’ll be ready in a minute flyboy.” Padme called after him smiling.
She leapt up from the couch and wrapped the blanket snuggly around her before racing out and into the hall. She skidded to a stop mid hall, the towel had been snapped off of her she turned around now full nude to see Anakin leaning against the wall holding it.
“You look so much sexier with nothing on.” Anakin winked.
“Hey!” Padme exclaimed surprised, but her exclamation was to Anakin’s back since he had already turned and was running down the hall laughing.
Padme stood their dumbfounded, a grin crept across her face, it looked like their new found relationship was making Anakin a happy man. And she had to admit she too was a lot happier already. She turned and started to skip down the hall towards her bedroom. She dumped a bunch of clothes into her suitcase and then quickly sorted through to find one she would wear now. She started off with a light blue see through bra and a thong to match, she continued to rifle through her clothes and found a long sleeved blue shirt, one that ended well above her belly button. She found the matching pants that started well below the belly button. Satisfied she grabbed a matching blue robe with designs on it and shut her suitcase.
She half carried half dragged the suitcase down to the landing pad where Anakin was leaning against the sleek silver Nabooian designed ship.
“Aw I liked your other clothing choice.” Anakin frowned in disappointed.
“Which one?” Padme asked a little confused.
“The one you were wearing in the hall.” He teased.
“Perhaps on planet as hot as Tatooine it would be a smart choice.” She winked back. Anakin kissed her cheek and then grabbed her suitcase and walked up the landing ramp disappearing inside. Padme took one final deep breath, and gazed at Naboo, she wasn’t sure when she would be back. But she promised herself she would come back sooner then last time. Satisfied she followed Anakin up the ramp.
She took her seat in the pilot’s chair and prepped the engine, she heard Anakin enter the cock pit and buckle himself in beside her. She engaged the engines and the ship began to hover in the air. Then turned ninety degrees and dashed towards space, once she was in open space she hit the hyper drive, the stars stretched and they flashed into hyperspace. She unbuckled herself from her seat and stood up.
“I need to hit the refresher.” She told to Anakin.
“Why?” Anakin asked with a puzzled look on his face.
“Well somebody woke me up late so I didn’t have time to do my make up or hair.” She stated flatly.
“Even without that you’d still be the most beautiful thing on Tatooine.” Anakin winked.
“Still, I wouldn’t t be up to my standards.” She teased before exiting the room.
Anakin watched as Padme walked out of the room her ass bouncing was hypnotizing to say the least. He set the auto pilot and then settled in for a few hours of a trip.
<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
Tatooine came into view just as the cockpit door opened.
“Where have you been?” Anakin yawned.
“Taking a nap.” Padme answered happily.
“You should have told me, I would have joined you.” He commented.
“Well then I wouldn’t have gotten any sleep, would I have?” She said as she took her seat.
“Guess not.” He smiled
Anakin got the landing permits and correct landing zone. Padme brought the ship down in a circular landing bay. She then put her blue rob on and brought up the hood, Anakin did the same but left his hood down. They descended the landing ramp into the stifling heat, Anakin signaled a cart driven by a robot over he helped her in and then directed it to Watto’s shop. The droid took them through alley ways and down long streets, but they arrived in a matter of minuets. Anakin once again helped Padme out and they both approached the Toydarian she had seen so many years ago. Anakin said something in a language she didn’t know but she assumed it was the native tongue of Toydarians. She looked the little blue alien over, he didn’t look much different, he had certainly aged since the last time she had seen him. The sands of Tatooine had not been kind to him, he had a scruffy beard now and wore a ridicules looking hat, she couldn’t believe she had made Sabe have sex with him so long ago.
“Where is Shmi Skywalker?” Anakin asked returning to galactic basic.
“Ani? Little Ani?” Watto asked apparently just realizing it was Anakin.
“Where is my mother?” Anakin asked again his tone getting angry.
“I haven’t owned Shmi in a long time, remember, I let her go when you left.” Watto said knowing he had information Anakin wanted.
“I know you know where she is. Tell me now.” Anakin spoke getting angrier.
“You’ve been gone to long Ani, you know how it works. I need some dead beats taken care of and you need information.” Watto grinned having the upper hand.
“Things have changed, I’m a Jedi and you’re a low life who no one will miss.” Anakin replied fingering his lightsaber.
“Ani how about you take a walk, let me handle this.” Padme cut in breaking the tension.
“Are you sure?” Anakin whispered into Padme’s ear.
“I am a senator. Remember?” Padme said smiling.
Anakin nodded and walked away muttering. Padme waited until he disappeared into the crowd.
“Now I understand how the galaxy works, what do you need for the information?” Padme asked putting on a pleasant smile.
“Money, there are dead beats that owe me a lot of money, Ani gets the money he gets the information.” Watto explained scratching his chin.
“Well how about three hundred credits.” Padme suggested reaching into her robe and bringing out credit chips.
“Republic credits don’t work out here only money.” Watto said shaking his fist.
“You know with three hundred credits you could easily pay for a republic whore.” Padme added. She watched as Watto gulped and took the credits.
“You wouldn’t happen to know any?” Watto asked casually.
“How about we move into your shop?” Padme whispered sexily.
Padme followed Watto into his shop, he stopped and locked the door behind them, he turned around to learn that Padme had dispatched her robe and was standing seductively with her hands on her hips. Watto retrieved a stool and took a seat.
“Go ahead, impress me.” Watto waved his hand a little.
Padme started by turning around, she stretched her arm to the floor leaving Watto a perfect view of her round ass, she undid her belt and shook her ass letting her pants shake free. She smacked her but letting Watto see just how firm it was. Still being bent over she turned around giving Watto time to inspect her fine cleavage. She stood up again and unfastened her shirt tossing it to the side, she crossed her arms pushing her breasts together making them look all the more desirable. She reached to her back and undid her blue bra clip letting it drop to the floor. At this moment Watto undid what little covering on his pelvis he had letting his two semi erect dicks dangle free. Padme fondled her own tits bring one up to her mouth so she could suck on the nipple. She reached down with her free hand and took off her thong letting her pussy free. Watto checked her out from top to bottom, stopping to inspect her little slice of pubic hair just above her pussy.
“Seeing a little fluff on Tatooine is a turn on for most men, most women here shave it because of the heat.” Watto commented. Padme understood why, even in the store it was still ridiculously hot. Padme sucked on her finger and then inserted it into her pussy, gently thrusting it while she played with her tits. Watto started to stroke both his cocks enjoying the dirty show Padme was putting on for him.
“Now come suck my cock, I’ll let you choose which one.” He chortled. The very thought of touching Watto repulsed her.
“On Coruscant three hundred only gets you a dance.” Padme tried to come up with an excuse.
“I’m sure, but information is priceless no matter where you are in the galaxy.” Watto countered still slowly jerking his cock. Padme continued to slid her finger in and out of her slit, she would really rather not touch him but this was for Ani. She took a gulp and then slowly strode to Watto swaying her hips as she went. She gently knelt to her knees, she inspected the dirty grimy floor, there appeared to be cum stains, apparently she wasn’t the first in this position.
“No blanket?” She asked, she wasn’t too fond of dirt.
“A high class whore on Tatooine? That’s a first.” Watto joked.
“So, no blanket then.” Padme sighed. Watto’s answer was simple, he just continue rubbing his members.
Padme reached up with a shaky hand and grabbed the top protruding cock and started to rub it. She gently yanked on the light green dick, simultaneously both hardened completely, she could feel the first bit of pre cum slid down her hand. Watto put his hand in Padme’s hair and forced her head forward, she instinctively opened her mouth and the hole was filled with Watto’s second dick which was placed underneath of the first by a few inches. Because of this the top dick rubbed on the top of her hair, she continued jerking it but she got a little afraid it would cum in her hair. Padme decided she would just have to swallow her pride, which meant she would have to swallow Watto’s dicks. She furiously started to jerk her hand making sure the top dick was more then satisfied, for the bottom dick she started to deepthroat it, making special care that it snaked all the way down her throat before she pulled her head back, when she did pull her head back she would use her tongue to lick the head of the dick making sure to give it a little extra attention. She stopped jerking the top dick and instead put the tip of it against her palm, then gently started to rotate it in a ball like fashion. She felt Watto groping her tits, and pinching her nipples a little harder then she would like, but he clearly enjoyed the simplicity of just holding them. She put her second hand on his upper cock, and shifted both hands so they both had a position on the shaft so she was double jerking it. Padme let the dick slip out of her mouth, and then she moved one of her hands to the lower dick and jerked on them simultaneously.
At this point Watto stopped playing with her tits and latched his hands on to the seat of his chair. Padme stuck her tongue out and licked up hitting both cock tips, every so often after doing this she would suck on the tip of one of the cocks, until it made a loud popping sound from dropping out of her slippery mouth. Watto grabbed his dicks knocking Padme’s hands off and began to start jacking them off himself, Padme stood up a little and cupped her breasts pushing them up to give Watto a perfect shot at them, she hoped he’d at least lend her a towel for this. But in a surprise twist Watto aimed both cocks down, streams of cum launched from both cocks splashing the floor in a new coat of jizz.
“Wait… why did you spray the floor and not me? Not that I’m complaining.” Padme asked with a quizzical look.
“On Tatooine hired whores insist customers pay for that privilege, it’s all about the money here.” Watto panted.
Watto’s wings started to beat and he began to hover in mid air he slowly flew to the counter and disappeared underneath it. Padme started to re-clothe herself, Watto emerged from behind the counter and handed her a data card. Padme put her robe back on and took the card from Watto’s hand.
“What’s this?” Padme questioned suspiciously.
“Quardanents to the Lars homestead, Shmi married Cliegg Lars a few years back.”
“Ah, thank you then.” Padme said before giving a curt nod and then walking towards the exit.
“Oh wait!” Watto shouted, and Padme turned a little confused. “You forgot your money.” Watto laughed as he tossed her the cred chips.
Padme left the store with Watto still laughing behind her.
“Why’d you go inside?” Anakin asked as Padme practically ran into him outside.
“Oh… Uh… to get this data card it’s got quardanents to where your mom is.” Padme answered startled and a little worried Anakin knew what she had just done.
“Great! Lets get moving then!” Anakin cheered excitedly. He grabbed her hand and pulled her towards the ship.
They arrived at the ship in moments, Anakin strapped himself into the pilots seat.
“Plot the course.” Anakin said overly enthusiastic.
“Alright give me a second.” Padme replied getting annoyed, she couldn’t believe how excited Anakin was to see his mother. Padme typed in the destination and Anakin instantly took off for their course. Padme saw another file attached in the data card, she opened it up and saw it was her performance for Watto. She assumed it was intended for Anakin to see, nice try Watto she thought and then quickly erased it.
“Prepare for touch down.” Anakin told her. That was fairly quick she thought, but then she considered the fact that the home stead was just outside of Mos Eisley.
The landing ramp opened and Anakin unbuckled his straps and quickly made his way to the exit with Padme in tow. Once outside a young man and woman about Anakin’s age were waiting for them.
“Is Shmi Skywalker here?” Anakin asked before the man could say anything.
“Maybe, who are you?” the man replied a little taken back by Anakin’s forwardness.
“Sorry, I’m Padme and this is Anakin, Shmi’s son.” Padme cut in sweetly.
“Anakin, Shmi talked about you all the time. Come inside, my names Owen and this is my girlfriend Beru. My dad will want to talk to you.” Owen said waving Anakin to a stairwell.
They followed him down the stairwell into the house, from the outside it looked small but it turned out that the majority of the house was actually underground. Owen led them to a table where his dad was sitting.
“So you’re Anakin.” The man said in a gruff tone.
“And you must be Cliegg.” Anakin returned calmly.
“I’m sorry Anakin. But your mom was taken by sand people not to long ago. I rounded up twenty nine people to get her back, but the Tuskens were ready, they had set a trap for us, they killed twenty six of us and I lost my leg at mid thigh.” Cliegg spoke very sorrowfully, tears welled in his eyes.
Anakin’s face burned with rage, without a word he turned for the stairwell and hastily took off. Padme jogged after him concerned about what he was doing, she could hear the whole family following behind her. When they made it to the surface Anakin was unloading a speeder-bike from the ship.
“Anakin please don’t do this.” Padme pleaded knowing what he intended to do. Anakin turned to her and grabbed her shoulders with his shaky hands.
“Padme you know I don’t have a choice.” Anakin said with a horse voice trying to put a smile on for her. A tear ran down her cheek and she hugged him tightly.
“I know.” Padme whispered in his ear, Anakin gave her a kiss on the cheek and then broke the hug. He hoped on the speeder-bike and put it in top gear racing off into the suns which were preparing to set. Padme stood their watching his shadow until he completely vanished into the horizon.
“You must be tired.” Owen finally said breaking the silence, all Padme could do was nod.
“Go back inside and take your first right, it’s a guest bedroom, you look like you could use some rest. My dad and I have some farming we need to finish.” Owen spoke softly. Padme nodded again and turned to the stairwell.
She descended the stairs like an angel with a broken wing, she stepped into the guest bedroom and flopped on the bed. If Tuskens could kill twenty six men how could Anakin ever hope to survive? And even if he did survive the chances of his mother being alive were very slim, and that was supposing Anakin would even find the correct nomadic tribe. She shook her head forcing the thoughts to exit her mind, she couldn’t think like that she decided. She swung her legs over the side of the bed and sat up. She couldn’t sleep let alone rest while Anakin was out trying to find his mother. Padme attempted to find other things to keep her mind busy, it was still really hot in the house she finally realized. She tugged at her shirt a little trying to cool herself of a little. Then she heard a clatter of dishes, she figured Beru was probably preparing supper for everyone. Maybe she could help, that would help get her mind off of Ani.
Padme turned a corner to enter the kitchen and her jaw opened wide. When she entered the kitchen she was greeted by the naked back of Beru, her eyes drifted on her golden toned body, her body had obviously been well worked being a farmer here. Padme wanted to say something but the beautiful sight of Beru was breath taking. Beru apparently had not noticed since she was just humming and cutting some vegetables. But the moment wasn’t meant to last because Beru turned around dropping the dishes in shock of Padme standing their she instantly tried to cover herself with her hands, her cheeks went beat red with embarrassment, whoops Padme thought she hadn’t intended for her to be this embarrassed.
“Padme! I’m so sorry! I thought you were in your ship.” Beru tried to explain.
“It’s fine Beru.” Padme smiled trying to calm her down.
“But why are you naked?” Padme asked a little curious.
“Well, as I’m sure you’ve noticed the planet is scorching hot, so most people live underground, like us. But they also have some kind of cold air system. We’re unable to afford that, so when everyone leaves for work I just peel off my clothes, it helps combat the heat.” She explained.
“Makes sense.” Padme replied starting to understand, then she pulled on her shirt tie, letting her blue top fall to the floor, she did the same to her bra and proceeded to take off her pants and thong.
“There.” Padme stated pleased with herself and pilling the clothes on a near by table.
“What are you doing?” Beru asked shocked.
“Your right, I’m much cooler now.” Padme smiled.
“Let’s chat.” Padme said nonchalantly pulling out a chair and sitting down.
Beru conceded to Padme’s wishes and took a seat across from her.
“So how long have you been a senator?” Beru asked starting the conversation.
“Well I was made Queen of Naboo at a very young age, and after that I just stayed in politics.” Padme replied still smiling, she was having a trouble paying attention to what Beru was saying. She was more focused on her tits, they were slightly larger then hers but not as perky.
“Padme, if you don’t mind me asking are the rumors true.” Beru asked cautiously.
“What rumors?” Padme questioned now paying more attention to her.
“You know, the ones about you having sex for political favors. Are any of them true about any senators?” Beru wondered now blushing a bit.
“Well, some of them are true, politics can be a weird game.” Padme answered blushing a little herself now.
Beru stood up and opened the fridge.
“What about the rumors about you. Blue milk?” Beru asked pulling out a pitcher of milk.
“Yes please. To be honest yes, a lot of them are true.” Padme answered sheepishly.
“Really!” Beru exclaimed spinning around and in turn spilling the milk all over herself.
“Let me help you clean that up.” Padme said standing up and rushing over to Beru. Beru had already grabbed a cloth and was wiping herself up. But instead of grabbing another cloth Padme bent over and began to lick Beru’s stomach.
“What are you doing?” Beru asked in utter shock.
“Cleaning you silly, my handmaidens used to do it to me all the time.” Padme answered giggling.
Beru once again conceded to Padme’s wish and watched as Padme explored her body with her tongue. Padme started at her stomach and worked her way up to Beru’s breasts, taking care to suck her nipples. Beru backed up a little and hoped up onto the kitchen counter Padme continued to lick Beru, Padme’s hands now worked simultaneously rubbing and feeling Beru’s farming body, Padme’s tongue reached Beru’s neck never stopping its mission. Padme mounted Beru’s slender thigh so her pussy grinded on her leg. Beru pulled her in for a hug, her arms wrapping tightly around Padme’s petite body. Beru’s hands adventured around Padme’s body, the hands reached Padme’s firm ass and squeezed them tightly Beru’s right hand spanked Padmes ass several times, Padme whimpered from the pain but kissed Beru’s cheek with every smack. Beru left one hand to grope Padme’s ass while the other traveled to Padme’s snatch. Beru wasted no time and started to plunge her fingers in and out. Padme pressed up against Beru’s body sandwiching their tits together. Padme kissed Beru on the forehead and then broke free of her grasp, Beru’s fingers sliding free of Padmes moist cunt. She slid off of Beru’s leg and knelt down inspected Beru’s bald pussy. Perhaps Watto was telling the truth about women shaving on Tatooine. Padme stuck out her tongue gently licking Beru’s moist cunt. She prodded Beru’s wet snatch with her finger, then she slipped two fingers in slowly pumping it in and out. Beru whimpered and Padme started to lick her quivering pussy while she continued to thrust in with her fingers.
“Oh my…” came a voice from the door way, the girls both looked over to see C3PO standing with a hand to his mouth.
“So sorry mistress I had not realized you were engaged intimate relations, I was just showing R2D2 the finer points of moisture farming.” The protocol droid continued to explain.
“Don’t worry 3PO just come in and help me.” Beru spoke waving the droid in. The droid waddled in with R2 in tow
“What service is it that you require?” C3PO inquired.
“Show Padme your hidden feature.” Beru grinned devilishly at Padme. Padme watched intently as C3PO slid a metal plate down from his crotch, then a cock shaped piece of metal extended out.
“Initiate program 11769.” Beru told C3PO.
“What’s program 11769?” Padme asked curiously.
“Well Shmi caught me and Owen having sex once, and rather then get angry she upgraded 3PO to teach me to be a better lover.” Beru started to say.
“Are you saying 3PO feels pleasure?” Padme asked surprised.
“Yeah, well to an extent, I mean he is still a droid.” Beru tried to explain
“Well as long as we’re showing off toys… R2 show Beru our little secret.” Padme said. R2 rolled forward, a compartment slid open and out popped his own metal member.
“Changes shapes, sizes and vibrates.” Padme boasted about the little droids features.
Beru slid off the counter and knelt down to the little droid, she gently rubbed her hand on the R2’s member.
“I want something big.” Beru decided telling R2. The astro droid morphed his dick so it was about thirteen inches long and a decent width.
“Wow that is big.” Beru gasped.
Padme grabbed Beru’s armed and tugged her further to the floor, they positioned themselves so they were on all fours face to face. Both whimpered a little as the dicks prodded their moist cunts. Beru yelped as R2 plunged his massive metal cock deep into Beru’s pussy, Padme just moaned loudly as 3PO started to thrust in and out. Padme wrapped her arms around Beru’s neck and pulled her in for a passionate kiss, their tongues intertwined as they explored each others mouths. Beru reached up with a free hand and squeezed Padme’s tits, pinching the nipples as she moved from one to the other. Padme reached up and pulled the clips in her hair out, then shook he head wildly her shoulder length hair flying everywhere.
“Mistress Padme you’re very tight, and may I say it is an honor to have intercourse with someone with such royal heritage, in fact…” C3PO began.
“3PO! Shut up and fuck me harder!” Padme snapped cutting him off in mid sentence.
In response C3PO put his cold hands on her thighs and started to thrust faster, Padme could hear him muttering about manners but chose to ignore it, the tingling in her thighs told her she was close to something more important. Beru wrapped her arms around Padme’s neck. The look on Beru’s face was nothing but pure pleasure, her eyes were closed tightly and her mouth was half open unable to speak. She watched as Beru’s body trembled one last time and listened to her final yelp as her snatches juices sprayed everywhere, her body slumped forward the rod exiting her pussy. Padme opened her body to the pleasure and her tingle turned into a tremble which in turn turned into a spasm, her juices began to flow from her cunt. Then to her surprise she felt a warm liquid flush in from C3PO before he pulled out.
“Did C3PO just cum in me?” Padme asked panting.
“Yeah, illegal tech, its some good stuff.” Beru panted back. The girls were interrupted by the roar of a speeder bike. They instantly jumped up and rushed to put their clothes back on, Padme was the first to the stairwell still trying to fix her hair, Beru was hot on her heels.
Padme stepped out on to the warm sands of Tatooine, it occurred to her she had forgotten her shoes inside. her eyes adjusted and the sight that met her was Anakin and Owen digging a hole. Padme stared unbelieving that Anakin’s mom had died. Time seemed to shift to slow motion as Shmi’s wrapped body was lowered into the hole and Anakin alone pushed the dirt back on top. She watched as Anakin took a few steps back and dropped the shovel, his eyes locked on the fresh grave. Padme moved forward and grabbed his arm spinning him around so she could give him a hug, his arms instantly locked like steel around her petite body. He buried his head into her messy hair.
Padme could feel Anakin’s chest heaving with pain, hot tears streaked down into her hair, but above all else she could feel hatred and anger radiating off his body. The last sun made a dramatic exit from the sky, the only thing visible were two silhouettes locked in a hug in front of a fresh grave, a clear message that the future would not always be bright for the couple.
jdawgg
07-14-2011, 07:41 PM
well done urbanchaos. another great update
waita
07-15-2011, 01:02 AM
nice.......
goodie
07-24-2011, 05:58 AM
Awesome, awesome stories
loobinator69
07-24-2011, 09:41 PM
well done.
can't wait to see what this leads to.
Coolbro
07-27-2011, 05:02 PM
i love these
warriorfar9
08-02-2011, 09:20 PM
please make more
Coolbro
08-03-2011, 02:33 PM
Yeah
jdawgg
08-04-2011, 10:16 AM
urbanchaos, its been a bit over a week bro. whens the next part going up?
loobinator69
08-04-2011, 08:09 PM
did he say it would be in a week? everybody cant wait for the next chapter.
UrbanChaos
08-04-2011, 09:15 PM
^ I did not say a week this time, the story is actually done. but with my job ive been waking up going to work coming home and going to bed leaving me no time for editing. I might push to have it out tonight or sometime friday.
UrbanChaos
08-05-2011, 09:13 PM
I know I said I would post the next chapter today, but it still needs polishing (and a title), so I'm pushing it back until tomorrow (saturday)
irishcdn
08-05-2011, 09:25 PM
:( it better be good lol
UrbanChaos
08-06-2011, 09:43 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 17: Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Padme refocused her eyes on the sand dune she had been staring at for at least an hour. She had been sitting in the ship while Anakin had decided to take a nap. Anakin and she had been on Tatooine for the last couple days, in that time she had seen Anakin in various mood stages, anger, hate, pain, denial, and the occasional happy moment, but Padme had just chalked that up to him putting on a brave face for her. She now understood why the Jedi forbade intimate relations.
Padmes thoughts were interrupted by a red light that began to blink on the ships console.
“Anakin we have an urgent message incoming.” Padme yelled down the ships corridor, Anakin trudged into the cabin wearing his dark brown Jedi tunic.
“Who from?” He yawned as he wiped his weary eyes.
“Obi Wan, he wants us to forward it to the Jedi council.” Padme replied intently reading the message display. Padme’s delicate fingers worked the panel and she began to forward the message, then she clicked another button and a staticy image of Obi Wan flickered to life in the middle of the room. Padme then swiveled her chair to listen to Obi Wan. Both R2 and C3PO entered the room hearing all the commotion.
“I’ve tracked one of Padme’s assassins to Geonosis, but I’ve learned something more disturbing. The Commerce Guilds and Corporate Alliance have both pledged their armies to Count Dooku and are forming an... Wait... Wait!” The image showed two droidekas enter the transmission area and fire on Obi Wan, Obi Wan blocked several shots with his now lit lightsaber and backed out of view, then Padme cut that transmission and opened one from the Jedi council. Soon the whole Council filled the room in holographic form.
“Anakin I know that Obi Wan is your master but the council has agreed that your main priority is protecting Senator Amidala, stay with her and protect her at all costs. We will deal with Dooku and rescue Obi Wan.” Mace Windu told Anakin
“I Understand Master.” Anakin replied bowing slightly, Mace Windu nodded and then his image faded ending the message.
Padme looked at one of the many screens in the cockpit and then turned to Anakin.
“They'll never get there in time to save him. They have to come halfway across the galaxy. Look, Geonosis is less than a parsec away for us.” Padme said in despair as she began to flick more switches and hit new buttons.
“If he’s still alive.” Anakin returned gravely.
“Annie, are you just going to sit here and let him die? He's your friend... your mentor...” Padme turned to Anakin unbelieving of what she had just heard from him.
“He's like my father, but you heard Master Windu. He gave me strict orders to stay here.” Anakin answered setting his hand on hers stopping her from pushing anymore buttons.
“He gave you strict orders to protect me, and I’m going to save Obi Wan. If you want to protect me you will just have to come along.” Padme said pulling her hand free and pushing the navigational buttons.
Anakin grinned and sat down taking the helm, the air lifted from the ground and C3PO strapped into one of the passenger chairs while R2 took position next to him.
“Did I mention I hate space travel?” The protocol droid complained, R2 replied with a cheerful whistle.
The Ship entered the atmosphere and blasted into hyperspace, stretching the stars around them into blurs. Padme brought up tactical data on the display screen so Anakin could find the best landing zone.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The ship exited hyperspace and Anakin entered the atmosphere of Geonosis he brought it low to the ground weaving in and out, dodging towering rock formations.
“See those columns of steam straight ahead? They're exhaust vents of some type.” Padme told Anakin pointing at the steam.
“That’ll do.” Anakin nodded.
Anakin flew through the steam and brought the ship down in the middle landing on the very bottom. Padme unbuckled her straps and stood up, she inspected her clothes, she wore a tight white jumpsuit that hugged every inch of her body to show off her curves, it was so tight that a bra and panties weren’t an option, they would just show as a lumpy outline. Then came her silver belt were she had few metal pouches that kept an assortment of items, she clipped a small silver blaster to it just in case. On her biceps she wore silver metal armbands. For her shoulder she wore a short cape that was a cream colour. And finally her hair was pulled back into a bun so it wouldn’t get in the way. She looked to Anakin, who had just begun to descend the landing ramp, his traditional brown Jedi garbs dragged behind him. Padme followed Anakin down the ramp and onto Geonosis.
It was hotter then she had expected but cooler then Tatooine, though she was standing in a steam stack. Anakin opened a maintenance hatch and went in, Padme went in right behind him, her eyes adjusted to the darkness and they were in a cave of sorts. Padme cautiously followed Anakin, she could her an audible buzz and a loud clicking noise that seemed to come from the walls themselves.
“Wait… something’s not right here.” Anakin whispered coming to a stop and igniting his blue lightsaber. Then he swung to his right decapitating a brown bug like alien. Then the entire corridor exploded with bugs Anakin continued to chop down bugs, paring and sweeping as he backing towards an exit, Padme unholstered her blaster and started to fire into the swarm of bugs. She pegged one in the dead center of forehead killing him instantly, she fired two more shots into the crowd, they burned into an insectoids chest making his limp body crash into another.
“Come on!” she heard Anakin yell, he had cut open a hole in the exit hatch with his lightsaber. Padme fired two more shots and then ran for the exit, she blindly fired behind her hoping to hit any of the bugs. Then she felt something grab her leg she looked down to see a bug who had been chopped in half from the waist down, she rapidly fired down with her blaster sending a sticky goo splattering everywhere. She turned to run but another hand latched onto her ankle and then another grabbed her wrist, and another pulled at her arm sending her blaster scattering away. What seemed to be like a million hands all locked onto her like chains pulling her down.
“Padme!” Anakin shouted reaching out a hand to aid her. But a bug flew in and tackled him through the exit hatch, Padme squirmed kicking and scratching in every direction. Then she felt a sharp pain in the back her head, it sent her spiralling into a dark oblivion.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Padme’s eyes slowly opened. Her eyes adjusted to the dim light and she found herself in a jail cell, she was propped up in a chair and her hands were cuffed. The cell itself wasn’t to bad looking, there was a medium sized bed in the corner with decent covers, and a desk to the right of her, she was stationed in front of a solid looking metal door. Then to her surprise it swung open two of the bug like creatures stepped in a positioned themselves on either side of the door, shock sticks in hand. Then an older man stepped through. He had a thin gray beard and commanding eyes that demanded respect, yet they had a soft side to them. The rest of him showed power, he stood at attention so his brown cape trailed down to his feet. Then behind him came in a man dressed in silver mandalorian armor with two blasters holstered to his sides, behind him stepped in a young boy who Padme guessed must have been fifteen or sixteen.
“This is quite a crowd for one prisoner.” Padme said groggy.
“My dear, it is not every day we house a Senator.” The man replied with a smile.
“Charming, Dooku I presume.” Padme asked intrigued by the man.
“At your service.” The man answered bowing politely.
“Are cuffs really necessary?” Padme asked seeing just what limitations she could push with the man.
“For a pretty little creature like yourself? Of course not.” Dooku returned, then he uncuffed her and slid them into one of his pockets.
“Now come with me I’ll give you the grand tour.” Dooku spoke as he turned around exposing his back to her, either he was foolish or very arrogant. But Padme decided with two guards and a mandalorian trying to attack Dooku would be foolish.
Padme followed Dooku down halls and corridors, the structure was like catacombs and the constant buzz and flap from wings was enough to drive her mad.
“I think you’ll find this hall way most intriguing.” Dooku said waving a hand. Padme looked around and saw a lot of metal doors on the walls each numbered, she looked further down the hall and noticed the numbering ended at thirty.
“I’m not sure I understand, why are they numbered and what’s in them?” Padme asked curious.
“Take a look and find out.” Dooku replied pointing at one of the doors.
Padme cautiously approached the door. Door number one, a good place to start she thought. A small window was located on the top part of the door, she stood on her tip toes and slid back the window, to Padme’s surprise a pregnant green Twi’lek sat inside. In horror she saw scraps and scratches covering her body, with sticky liquid covering her body and Padme now noticed she was completely naked.
“Whatever is happening here is sick! And you can be certain I will be notifying the senate on my return so they can run a full investigation!” Padme practically screamed at Dooku
“Would you like to hear a story?” Dooku returned calmly.
“What does a story have to do with anything?!?” Padme blurted out furious.
“Follow me and you’ll find out.” Dooku spoke as he once again started down the hall, Padme fell into step.
“These insectoids are hive creatures, this building is basically one gigantic hive. Sometime ago a rival hive attacked this one and killed their queen, and if you haven’t noticed there are only male bugs here, there is only one queen at a time and the queen doesn’t give birth to the next until it is about to die. The bugs here became distraught so they sought help from an outside source, they just so happened to catch the attention of me. I came up with the brilliant plan of using other species as mates.” Dooku started the story thinking deeply.
“But isn’t that impossible?” Padme interjected with a frown, Dooku unlocked her cell and lead her in.
“Normal yes, this once again made the Geonosians frightful for their future. But I had already come up with a plan to counter that problem. Eorlax please show the senator here the solution.” Dooku commented to the Geonosian guard.
The guard proceeded to reach into a leather pouch and withdraw a syringe with a yellow liquid in the container.
“This was my genius creation. The yellow liquid bonds to your genetic code changing its structure.” Dooku began to explain.
“Changing it so people can give birth to these nasty bugs.” Padme filled in.
“Yes, but it does have a few benefits.” Dooku grinned.
“Yes well you’ll excuse me if I don’t think giving birth to bugs is a benefit.” Padme sneered.
“No I wouldn’t count that as a benefit either, the actually benefits are prolonged life, more fertility and of course once you reach your peak physical form you will never exit it, meaning when your ninety you’ll have the body of a twenty one year old.” Dooku listed starting to pace around the room.
“Well those benefits don’t help when your held hostage do they?” Padme glared at Dooku.
“I suppose not. If it helps I didn’t want to keep you here that was Poggel the lesser’s idea, he has an unhealthy attraction for you.” Dooku admitted clasping his hands.
“I saw the numbers one through thirty one the doors what does that mean?” Padme asked worried about the answer.
“As smart as you are beautiful. Well the average Queen gives birth to a child a day, but my serum only allows for the victim to give birth to one child a month.” Dooku started resuming his pace around the room.
“So you’ll get thirty people to take her place.” Padme cut in thoughtfully.
“You’ll be Queen number twenty seven.” Dooku smiled.
“And exactly what do you gain for your services?” Padme inquired.
“Their undying allegiance of course. Jango if you please.” Dooku answered and then waved at the mandalorian.
The mandalorian stepped forward and forced Padme into the chair, he then quickly spun to the back of the chair and grabbed her wrist pulling them down, Padme twisted but soon the man named Jango inflicted pain into her arms forcing her to seat still. The bug stepped forward and ripped the sleeve off of her shirt leaving her arm bare form the armbands down, then he stabbed the syringe into her arm injecting the potent liquid into her system, she felt the the liquid burn through her veins rapidly consuming any cells in its way.
“It will take about a month until the liquid completely coheres to your particular genetic structure, so enjoy it.” Dooku stated waving a hand in the air.
“Now will every one please leave me and the senator to ourselves.” Dooku continued, the guards shrugged at each other and left with Jango and the boy behind them, the door shut with a clang.
“I wanted to let you know that I truly am sorry about this predicament.” Dooku stated sadly.
“You don’t have to lie to me you know.” Padme practically spat at the man.
“I’m sorry but I go were the most profit is available. However if you were to give a counter offer perhaps something could be arranged.” Dooku said a hint of mischief in his voice.
“Isn’t it too late? You’ve already injected me.” Padme countered.
“Not at all, the liquid you were injected with is very complex, that’s why it takes a whole month to work. If I were to inject you with a certain toxin it would flush your system.” Dooku explained.
“How much money would it take for you to switch sides.” Padme said deciding even if he was bluffing it was worth hearing him out.
“I’m sorry but money is not a problem for me.” Dooku replied starting to slowly walk towards the door.
“Then what?” Padme pleaded, she did not want to turn into some kind of breeder.
“Several nights with a beautiful senator should do it.” Dooku spoke turning to face her.
“Deal… But only after I am safely away from here… And Anakin and Obi Wan too.” Padme added.
“That’s quite a hefty sum, for that, the price would make a steep incline.” Dooku whistled to Padme’s conditions.
“Name the price.” Padme whispered hoarsely.
“You become mine.” Dooku smiled devilishly.
“I… I don’t understand.” Padme replied with tears welling up.
“When I free you, you must leave Anakin and become my plaything.” Dooku stated bluntly.
“How do you know me and Anakin are together?” Padme asked curiously.
“Please, the way that boy snarls about anyone harming you, its obvious.” Dooku said with a twirl of his hand. Padme thought deeply about Anakin, she couldn’t bare think about him being hurt or even worse, killed, and if this was the only way for it to be avoided so be it.
“Deal.” Padme stated blankly looking at the floor.
“Now for some incentive.” Dooku replied unbuckling his pants and letting them drop to the floor.
“What!” Padme asked shocked.
“You didn’t think I’d let me new toy off that easy did you, a hand job will do fine.” Dooku grinned brushing Padme’s cheek with the back of his hand.
Padme shuddered at the touch of his hand, but this was the only way she could think to save Ani. Padme grabbed the soft cock with her and felt it begin to harden just from her touch. Padme slowly started to stroke the cock, her second hand drifted up to his balls, she gently messaged them in individually giving extra care to roll them in her palm. Padme gripped the cock tighter the usually and then slowly jerked back and forth emphasizing the strokes. Dooku grabbed his cock with his hand and slapped Padmes cheek with his meat, she flinched slightly but held still as he hit her other cheek. Dooku continuously slapped her cheeks apparently very entertained by it.
“Go ahead taste it.” Dooku offered, his dick dangled inches from her lips. Padme grudgingly licked the head of the cock, then swivelled her tongue licking various parts of the tip then she popped the tip into her mouth letting it sit there for a few seconds before snaking it down her throat agonizingly slow. After reaching the end of his cock she began to bob her head easily deep throating his meat.
Dooku reached down and tucked a few stray hairs behind Padme’s ear clearly enjoying the show. Padme let the dick pop out of her mouth and began to rub it with her hand again, then leaned in a little and began to suck on his balls. She sucked in the entire sack and let her tongue lick each area. The let it slip out of her mouth and wrapped both hands onto the cock furiously jacking it. Dooku put a finger on Padme’s chin and tipped it up so she was looking at the grin on his face. Dooku grunted and his cum sprayed all over her face covering her cheek and chin. Padme waited until he was done and then sucked on the tip of his cock stealing any last bit of cum.
“Well done, I’ll talk to Poggel immediately.” Dooku told Padme pulling his pants up. Padme watched as Dooku left the room and then grabbed a blanket to wipe her face clean.
She couldn’t believe what she had just agreed to, but it was better then the alternative and it meant that Anakin and Obi Wan would be freed, that was if Dooku came through for her. She wrapped the blankets around her and lay down on the bed trying to think of a better more reliable plan.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Boba Fett silently stalked through the halls, he had memorized every hallway and every secret entrance and exit just as he had been taught by his father Jango. He had already dodged several guards, he wasn’t sure why but he was some how drawn to go see the Senator named Padme. Boba slid into a hidden alcove as several more guards walked past. He then silently found the correct stairwell and descended it. He was now in the heart of the prison holding cells right where Padme’s cell was.
He walked up on the cell checking both directions of the hallway, then inspected the lock. Seriously a K-12 lock, this would be easier then herding a bantha into a pen Boba thought. He brought out his lock pick and got to work, within moments he heard the all too familiar click of the lock, he pushed the door slightly and it inched open. He wormed his body in trying to avoid any squeaking from the door, then he saw the Senator seating on the bed arms crossed staring at the floor. She was one of the most beautiful people he had every seen, he knew his dad couldn’t help her, he was under contract, but why couldn’t he help her?
“Senator Padme?” Boba cleared his throat, Padme’s head snapped up at the voice.
“H-How did you? Where did you? Who are you?” Padme stumbled through her words.
“My names Boba Fett, my father is Jango the one who helped capture you.” Boba introduced himself proudly.
“And what exactly is it you want young Boba the Fett?” Padme asked sarcastically.
“To apologize, my father does feel really bad for doing this but he would never break his contract, I however am not under contract and would like to help you.” The boy explained sincerely, Padme looked him over, his body language did show he was being truthful.
“How could you help me? You’re sixteen.” Padme replied with a snort.
“I’m also the son of a famous bounty hunter.” He said and then leaned over and stuck his lock pick into Padme’s cuffs, with a flick of his wrist the cuffs snapped off and dropped to the floor.
“That’s… impressive.” Padme nodded very surprised.
“Do you really think Dooku will help you?” Boba asked tilting his head at Padme.
“No not really.” She huffed.
“Then it’s a good thing I’m here.” Boba said confidently as he stretched his legs making himself more comfortable.
“Whys that?” Padme wondered.
“Because I have a plan. You see tomorrow their going to take you to the arena where you’ll be forced to watch Anakin and Obi Wan fight for their lives, Dooku will have you positioned up in the sky box with a lot of the important people including me and my dad. I simply lock pick your cuffs and you run free.” Boba explained proudly.
“Your dad won’t let me escape, he’s under contract remember.” Padme countered pointing out a flaw in his plan.
“Right.” Boba said thoughtfully rubbing his chin.
“Got it! When my dad steps forward to stop you I grab his blasters and point them at him and the others!” Boba exclaimed snapping his fingers.
“Wont your dad be upset with you?” Padme inquired.
“Nope, he’ll be proud, it’ll be my first job alone.” Boba nodded enthusiastically.
“If you’re sure. Now, what about payment.” Padme asked feeling better about this plan.
“Oh yeah, well I actually don’t need anything.” Boba said thoughtfully.
“Well then what do you want then?” Padme probed. Padme stifled a giggle when it came down to it all boys were the same, ready to rush into a blaze of glory without considering the costs or gains.
“Well… I live on Kamino surrounded by male clones with no women, I mean I’m sixteen and I’ve never kissed a girl so…” Boba hesitated with his words.
“So you want a kiss.” Padme filled in the blank, boys are no different Padme reminded herself.
“Kinda yeah.” Boba admitted.
Padme looked Boba in his young tender eyes and then pressed her lips against his, their lips locked and she felt Boba yelp in surprise then he began to extort their kiss. His tongue broke the barriers and grappled hers, his hand began to caress her arm. The boy reminded her so much of Anakin at that age, she let her hand drift and settle itself on his thigh rubbing it slightly. Her hand slid sideways a little and she felt the hardened outline of his cock, she listened to Boba whimper as she played with the outline, but he still refused to break their kiss. Padme’s hand reached into Boba’s pants and caressed his dick.
“What are you doing?” Boba asked confused, finally breaking away from Padme.
“I gave you your payment, now I’m giving you incentive.” Padme answered with a grin.
She slid down to the floor yanking Boba’s pants with her, she ended up between Boba’s legs where his dick had sprung straight up.
“Padme you don’t have too.” Boba said nervous.
“You wanted a kiss right?” Padme asked giving the tip of the cock a kiss.
“I should get back someone might notice I’m gone.” Boba pointed out hesitantly.
“Why are you so nervous?” Padme asked seriously. She watched the boy bow his head in shame.
“Is it because you’ve never been with a woman?” Padme asked putting the pieces together. She watched Boba nod nervously. Padme smiled, she would enjoy being his first.
Padme licked the shaft of the cock once and then deep throated the whole thing in one shot, she had forgotten how much smaller they where at this age. She bobbed her head snaking the cock down her throat each time, then licked the shaft with her tongue when she came back up.
“This feels so good Padme!” Boba cried in pleasure. Padme grinned a little, it was so easy to please a virgin she thought. She felt Boba’s hands feeling her tight stomach and latch onto the bottom of the shirt, then pulled up exposing her breasts he let the shirt sit on the top of her tits.
“Wow.” Boba gulped his eyes locking onto her tits, he reached out with a shaky hand groped them feeling each spot. Padme lifted her breast and wrapped them around Boba’s cock then began to move them up and down, sucking the tip of the cock each time it popped up. Boba simply continued to be engrossed by her breasts and kept kneading them like dough.
Padme stood up and slid her pants to the ground kicking them to the side then she sat on Boba’s thighs so they were face to face with her legs on the outside of his. She draped her arms on Boba’s shoulders and grinded her cunt grinded on the shaft of his cock teasing it with each centimetre of movement, Boba moaned loudly as one hand grabbed her tight ass and the other pinched her nipples. Padme held Boba’s cock as she gently lowered herself onto it, Padme’s snatch sucked all of Boba’s cock in squeezing it tightly.
“Oh fierfek.” Boba groaned in pleasure. Padme grinned he was too easy to pleasure, Padme then started to bounce up and down. Boba’s moan and groans grew louder he had now buried his face into her tits sucking on her nipples, his hands simply roamed around her body squeezing various parts. Padme’s hand stroked Boba’s balls with every bounce she made, her other hand was wrapped around his shoulder for support, she felt the slight expansion of Boba’s dick Padme knew he was close to cumming, in turn her snatch tightened in preparation. She pushed Boba down so his back was on the bed and planted her hands a few inches from his ears, Padme started to slam her ass down as hard as she could so her cunt gobbled up his cock. Boba’s hands traveled down to her firm ass, he gripped them as tight as he could helping Padme slam down.
Boba’s cock trembled, Padme let her body fall onto Boba and hugged him tightly pressing her tits tight against him, Boba wrapped his arms around her waist interlocking his fingers. Then his balls exploded launching cum straight into her pussy. Padme felt stream after stream of hot sticky cum cover her womb, what he lacked in sexual experience he gained in the amount of cum he had saved.
Padme laid on top Boba enjoying the feeling of his cock slowly deflating and slipping from her snatch until it finally popped free. A stray stream of cum slid down her thigh. Then she broke free of the hug and stood up, grabbing her pants and pulling them up. Boba followed her example and did the same with his garments. The Padme turned to him and extended her hand.
“I’m glad we could come to an agreement.” Padme stated professionally, Boba took the hand and shook it like a true business man and then pulled himself into her for a hug.
“Thanks Padme.” Boba replied friendly, Padme returned his hug tightly.
“If you ever need anything don’t hesitate to contact me. Now you better go before anyone notices you’re gone.” She returned giving him a push towards the door.
She watched the young man sneak out into the hall, she didn’t know why but she had a particular fondness for the boy. Maybe it was because he reminded her so much of Anakin or maybe it was because he had risked so much to help her, it really didn’t matter she had meant what she said when she had told him if he ever needed help to contact her.
Padme crawled back into her bed and wrapped the covers around her, they were still warm from Boba, she closed her eyes and thought about every aspect if the plan, working it through her mind so if any problem where to arise she could counter it.
*Hope you all enjoyed the newest chapter of The What Ifs, what will happen next? Will Boba's plan work? Can he really out smart his father Jango? or will Padme become Dooku's slave! Or does Anakin have an ace up his sleeve!?! find out in the next chapter! feel free to comment, give ideas and or ask questions!*
jdawgg
08-07-2011, 02:53 PM
awesome job once again, urbanchaos. keep it up
irishcdn
08-21-2011, 10:27 AM
urban..you gonna continue this? its been alittle while
UrbanChaos
08-21-2011, 04:49 PM
Yeah, I've just been really busy and tired lately... the next installment is almost done it might be out for tomorrow (monday), or maybe even tonight.
loobinator69
08-21-2011, 08:10 PM
its tonight...
depends on what time zone though lol
heck, its even tomorrow somewhere too.
jdawgg
08-21-2011, 08:38 PM
its tonight...
depends on what time zone though lol
heck, its even tomorrow somewhere too.
its tomorrow here, now, actually.
UrbanChaos
08-22-2011, 12:18 AM
I'm mountain time zone... so do with that as you wish.
jdawgg
08-22-2011, 05:28 PM
I'm mountain time zone... so do with that as you wish.
i dont know what mountain time is, bro. what province u live in?
UrbanChaos
08-22-2011, 06:51 PM
Alberta
irishcdn
08-22-2011, 07:44 PM
hes 2 hours behind easter standard time..lets put it that way.
jdawgg
08-23-2011, 06:23 PM
Alberta
cool. me and cheyennne are in nova scotia. what passes for a heatwave here in nova scotia, is happening this week.
irishcdn
08-23-2011, 06:34 PM
its funny...im from nova scotia lol
loobinator69
08-23-2011, 08:43 PM
its tommorow. or monday.
its actually tuesday.
im guessing the second i read a different story, you'll upload it.
UrbanChaos
08-23-2011, 09:50 PM
My monday went to shit srry guys, I can maybe have it up wednesday... maybe? Also I'm curious as to how hot your heatwave got jdawgg
jdawgg
08-24-2011, 06:21 AM
My monday went to shit srry guys, I can maybe have it up wednesday... maybe? Also I'm curious as to how hot your heatwave got jdawgg
not very hot. only like 22*c
irishcdn
08-24-2011, 07:30 PM
man idk where you are but it was high 20s here where i live in nova scotia. and its wednesday lol
UrbanChaos
08-24-2011, 09:47 PM
I know my days have been getting away from me I'm hoping (key word hoping) i'll have it done for friday... Man the 20s is good we've been hittin maybe 18
jdawgg
08-25-2011, 08:49 AM
man idk where you are but it was high 20s here where i live in nova scotia. and its wednesday lol
me and cheyenne live in halifax.
loobinator69
08-26-2011, 08:30 PM
its friday... man even congress is passing bills faster than this chapters coming out lol
the american one. im not too familiar with canadas government system.
so maybe itll be up on sunday?
UrbanChaos
08-26-2011, 08:49 PM
we have a parliament lol, and i really am sorry about not being able to get this done. But i will finish it tonight plus edit it, and cause i like you guys i'll put it out Tonight!!! I hope to have it out by 11pm alberta time.
UrbanChaos
08-26-2011, 10:45 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 18: No Chains To Tight
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Padme’s eyes snapped open from the sound of the metal door bursting open and slamming into the stone wall. Padme looked over to see two Geonosian guards standing outside, one was waving at her to come forward while making a clicking noise. Padme stood up and walked to the guards, she watched the first guard do a turning motion and then point at her, Padme took the hint and turned around putting her hands behind her back. She felt the cold metal feel of the cuffs being roughly put on her wrists, then she felt them being snugged so tight against her wrists that it drew blood. One of the guards slammed his stick against the door making a loud crack and sending sparks flying everywhere then he menacingly pointed it at her.
“Yeah I get it don’t try anything.” Padme huffed at the guards, one guard started walking down the hall while the second shoved her forward so she started walking behind the first, then the second followed closely behind. They walked up and down halls and finally up an extremely long staircase, at the very top she could see daylight. Slowly the light grew larger until she finally stepped through a wall of white and found her self outside. Her eyes slowly adjusted and she found her self in a coliseum like place. The building was almost nothing but stone seats with wall to wall bugs all chanting making it extremely loud, she had apparently been placed in a VIP section. Around her was a bunch of different official looking people, she saw Boba standing behind his father and then saw that Dooku had noticed her and was coming over to talk to her. The man easily slipped through the crowd and put his mouth so close to her ear his hot breath tickling her ear.
“You had better hope this dual ends quickly.” Dooku whispered into her ear.
“Why? And where’s Anakin and Obi Wan?” Padme asked angered by the mans mere presence.
“I’m afraid Poggel insisted they be killed in the arena, however, I did persuade him to hand you over to me.” Dooku explained in a hushed tone.
“What! But our deal was they would be freed as well!” Padme basically screamed at the man, though with the loud decibels from the hundreds of screaming fans no body else heard her.
“Well the alternative is still an option but I’m sure you don’t want to be locked in a cage here, and you would be wise to keep your emotions in check.” Dooku warned Padme.
“Why what happens if my emotions get out of control.” Padme asked still miffed.
“Well a side effect of the drug is you go into heat multiple times in a month, it’s to insure you mate without a problem, if your emotions get the best of you it could speed up the process.” Dooku explained calmly. Padme’s mouth opened in shock unsure of what to say.
“Oh look the festivities are about to begin.” Dooku said turning to see Obi Wan and Anakin being chained too two large pillars.
All the people in Padme’s booth rushed to the edge of the box trying to get a good view of the vicious animals being lead into the arena. She watched in her peripheral vision as Boba rushed by her sticking a lock pick into her cuffs and unlocking them in a heartbeat. Now all Padme had to do was wait for the perfect opportunity to escape. Padme managed to catch a glimpse of Obi Wan and Anakin in the ring, they seemed to be fairing quite well, but who knew how long that would last.
Padme inched her way closer to one of the guards who was too engrossed with the combat in the ring to notice her movements. Padme had it all planned out in her head. She took a deep breath then swung her leg kicking the guard in the stomach making him double over, she grabbed his shock stick and took two long strides swinging the stick at the second guards head, the stick connect showering sparks everywhere sending the guard crumbling to the dirt, green blood dripping down his head. One of the people in the booth realized what had happened and turned to Padme, who in turn lunged at him shock stick first, the stick caught him in the gut electrocuting him and dropping him into a smoldering heap. Jango turned and went to quick draw but to his surprise found his holsters empty, he turned to his son Boba who had one pointed at him and the other pointed at the others in the box.
“Hands to heaven folks.” Boba said beaming with pride, one by one everyone in the box raised their hands the last being Jango who grudgingly put his up. However Dooku kept his hands clasped behind his back.
“Hands up Dooku.” Boba repeated his smile fading.
“What are you going to do boy, shoot me?” Dooku asked a smile hinted at the edge of his lip.
“I might.” Boba replied his confidence fading with his smile
“Then Jango would have to kill you.” Dooku pointed out, putting his hand on his hook handled lightsaber.
“Don’t try it Dooku.” Mace Windu commanded stepping through the arch way, his purple lightsaber lit and in hand.
“Why not?” Dooku asked sarcastically.
Dooku was answered by dozens of Jedi appearing in the stand, then several large passenger size war ships dropping from the sky. This resulted in a free for all bloodbath. The box Padme stood in erupted in panic everyone fleeing for their lives, one ship hovered directly in front of Padme’s box with a trooper in full white armor waving at her to get in a second was spraying shots into the box of VIP’s. Padme sprinted to the ship and grabbed the hand of the trooper who in turned pulled her in. Padme’s adrenaline was at an all time high as the ship tilted up and began to head for space, the doors around her closed in preparation for no oxygen, a dim red light turned on so Padme could see inside the haul of the ship. She looked around and saw to benches facing each other, with several view screens streaming tactical displays. She saw the original trooper who had saved her along with the second sitting on the bench
“What’s happening here?” Padme demanded.
“Ma’am, our mission was to locate and rescue you.” The trooper who had saved her replied briskly snapping to attention
“Well that’s all fine and good but who are you?” Padme asked sternly.
“We are part of the clone army that was long ago ordered by the republic, master Yoda gave us the specific task to save you, ma’am.” The soldier swiftly answered.
Padme opened her mouth to say something but a burning sensation began to attack her loins. She quickly braced herself on the metal wall of the ship, the troopers instantly came to her aid helping her sit down on the bench.
“Ma’am what’s wrong?” The second trooper asked concerned. Padme again tried to speak but she was hit by a wave of pain. This must have been what Dooku had meant when he had told her about going into heat.
“Your names… what are your names?” Padme managed to say wheezing a little. The clones looked at each other clearly confused.
“I’m Cody and this is Chez.” The first clone said then pointed at the other.
“What are your orders Cody?” Padme questioned trying to keep herself together.
“To save you and care for your every whim ma’am.” Cody answered hesitantly.
“Dooku did something to me, something bad. I need you to fuck me.” Padme told Cody through tightly closed eyes.
“But…” Cody started.
“Now!” Padme cut him off angrily.
Cody and Chez slowly and hesitantly took their groin armor off and then pulled their soft cocks out of the black jumpsuits they wore under their white armor. Then they simply hovered over Padme not sure on what to do.
“Should I? Do you? How umm?” Cody spoke with confusion in his voice, he looked back to Chez who shrugged as unsure as him.
“Oh for frak’s sake Cody! Take my pants off and stick it in already!” Padme screamed at the awkward standing trooper.
Cody did as he was instructed and pulled Padme’s tight white pants off, he titled his head looking at Padme’s small slit and the clean cut hair above it. Cody shuffled into place and put his cock so it was just barley scrapping the edge of her snatch. Padme was completely fed up with Cody’s lack of confidence wrapped her legs around him and pulled him in, making him plunge his stiff dick all the way in.
“Yessssssssssssss!” Padme squealed, her throbbing pussy finally satisfied. She felt Cody squirm in her legs clearly uncomfortable with what he was doing, she loosened her grip with her legs giving him the ability to pump. He started thrusting slow, as if he thought he might break her if you he thrusted to fast. Padme however was completely fine with it, having a dick in her was like scratching an itch she had had for hours. Her head rolled over a little and she saw Chez looking nervous, he clearly had no idea what he was supposed to do.
“You can come over here Chez sweetie.” Padme said sweetly. Chez slowly moved towards Padme and stopped beside her head. Padme reached up with her hand and started to stroke his shaft. Out of what was probably envy Cody started to thrust harder trying to please Padme and get her attention back to him, Padme sped up her strokes on Chez and gave Cody a seductive wink.
Padme pulled Chez in and put her lips on the tip of his cock giving it a small kiss. Cody planted his hands on the bench and pumped as hard as he could, his balls making a loud smacking sound against Padme. Padme stuck Chez’s dick into her mouth letting it slid about half way in, then she used her tongue, twirling and twisting it around the meat in her mouth. Padme reached down with her free hand and massaged Cody’s balls. Chez started to pump his hips pushing his dick further down her throat, Padme continued her ballerina like moves with her tongue on the cock in her mouth but listened to Cody’s grunts. They had started off slow and quiet but like his thrust had gained momentum, she felt Cody give one final strong thrust then felt a spurt of cum launch into her womb, Cody froze as his cum gushed into Padme. Chez pulled his dick from her mouth and moved to where Cody was just pulling his cock. Cody moved to where Chez had once stood and Padme began to lick his cock clean. Chez inserted his cock into her pussy, amazingly it felt exactly the same as Cody’s. Padme licked the shaft off Cody’s limp cock, her body was now rocking with the flow of Chez’s thrusts. Cody pulled off his armored gloves and slipped his hand under Padme’s shirt feeling her breasts. She let Cody do what he wanted while she turned her concentration to Chez, she twirled her hips while Chez pumped in and out. She saw the famous face all guys made right before they came, yet again her womb was pumped full off semen, she felt the hot spunk flow, invigorating her body. Chez pulled out after waiting a few extra seconds.
Padme’s head was swimming, she felt like her body had just been destroyed by the amount of adrenaline her body was forced to release because of the way her body now craved sex from the genetic changes that had been taking place, while it made things extremely sensitive and pleasurable, her body felt like bantha fodder after the fact. Her only hope would be if the doctors could find a way to cure her. Padme was snapped out of her daze when she felt Cody attempting to put her pants back on for her. Chez put his hands into the mix helping Cody by pulling it up her left thigh.
“What are you guys doing?” Padme asked almost bursting out in laughter.
“Well, I uhh… I figured that I uh took em off so I’d better put em back…on…I guess?” Cody answered grasping for the right words and rubbing the back of his neck. Padme looked over at Chez who was nodding enthusiastically.
“He doesn’t speak much does he?” Padme asked giggling at the two men.
“No ma’am he doesn’t, he’s hell of a fighter though.” Cody replied regaining his composure and giving Chez a respective nod.
“And I take it you two don’t know much about sex either.” Padme said in a presuming tone.
“Well we are clones, and there weren’t a whole lot a females around.” Cody finished snugging Padmes pants up.
“Fair enough.” Padme nodded in agreement.
Before Cody could answer a voice crackled over the intercom declaring they had landed on the large frigate Ralroar, one of the larger Mon Calamari ships. Cody and Chez rushed Padme off the transporter ship and took her to the infirmary.
The medical droid made Cody and Chez wait outside while the droid did its examination. Padme stripped down to her now shivering nude body, while the droid poked and prodded, taking her blood sample and comparing it too various charts.
“I believe I have found your ailment and its causes.” The silver metal droid fashioned like a human spoke.
“And a cure?” Padme asked hopefully.
“It appears that whatever you were injected had an L-39 bonding agent with a Mak-14 corrosive solidifying number. Along with some other very nasty ingredients.” The droid explained.
“Yes, but is their a cure.” Padme asked her voice very serious.
“Impossible to know I am going to attempted several medical procedures, that should flush your system. However you must be unconscious and I do not have a time frame of how long.” The doctor answered crisply holding up a long pointy needle. Padme closed her eyes and laid down on the medical bed she was sitting on.
“Proceed doctor.” Padme said.
She felt a sting in her left arm, then her arm began to feel numb. She attempted to move it but it remained in place, the numbness spread quickly over taking Padme’s body until it was flowing up her neck and into her head… the she felt nothing, as if she was drifting in a black void of nothingness…
Hope you enjoyed chapter 18, I know the chapters are coming out slower but i hope to speed up. Question and comments are welcomed.
irishcdn
08-27-2011, 12:53 PM
good addition
jdawgg
08-27-2011, 07:45 PM
we like u alot to urban, not just me and cheyenne, but all of us posting here while waiting for a new edition. we dont mind the wait. gives us time to chat. also, great new chapter
loobinator69
08-28-2011, 07:05 PM
great new chapter. definitely wort the wait. if it wasnt good, we wouldnt keep waiting for a new chapter, so you know its good.
UrbanChaos
08-28-2011, 08:17 PM
I post on several different sites but i usually post my stories here a couple days earlier, and i only really converse with you guys, cause i like you guys the best ;)
jdawgg
08-29-2011, 08:43 AM
great new chapter. definitely wort the wait. if it wasnt good, we wouldnt keep waiting for a new chapter, so you know its good.
hate to call u a liar, but if it wasn't good, i'd still wait for the new chapter anyways. its a good read.
loobinator69
08-30-2011, 08:13 PM
hate to call u a liar, but if it wasn't good, i'd still wait for the new chapter anyways. its a good read.
yes, but if it was total crap, i wouldnt read.
though it happens to be pretty damn great. not good, great.
UrbanChaos
09-02-2011, 03:48 PM
Hey just a quick update and question
1: chapter 19 will probably be out this weekend, unfortantly its fairly short but its going to wrap up the second movie
2: Are you guys satisfied with just the "what ifs" or would you like more variety (heads up I already have another story in production) of course i would never let this thread die
feed back would be appreciated
dexterjester0
09-04-2011, 06:12 PM
Very nice, I enjoyed it
loobinator69
09-04-2011, 07:16 PM
its the weekend.
im very happy with the what ifs. have you ever thought of doing a harry potter or avatar story? theyd probably be amazing if you wrote them
UrbanChaos
09-04-2011, 08:21 PM
I was always a big fan of avatar so the thought had crossed, Harry potter however i've never seen or read I've always meant to just never got around to it.
jdawgg
09-05-2011, 10:07 AM
im also very happy with the 'what ifs' also it's now monday. hehe and avatar would be an awesome story if u wrote one.
loobinator69
09-05-2011, 07:24 PM
avatar would be pretty awesome
but...
then youd post on what ifs less... lol.
UrbanChaos
09-05-2011, 08:48 PM
^That i would
jdawgg
09-06-2011, 06:59 PM
avatar would be pretty awesome
but...
then youd post on what ifs less... lol.
as would i.
jdawgg
09-06-2011, 07:01 PM
lol if u postin the next chapter tomorrow, i wont be able to read it until saturday, urban. got 3, 12 hour night shifts ahead of me starting tomorrow. 5pm-5am wednesday-friday. so basically wednesday-saturday, as im off 5am saturday morning
loobinator69
09-06-2011, 08:13 PM
^wow. thats a lot of hours. what job do you do?
Lazerous
09-06-2011, 10:27 PM
Sounds like a nurse or air traffic controller!
jdawgg
09-07-2011, 08:38 AM
^wow. thats a lot of hours. what job do you do?
i work at a printing plant. 1st pressman printing up papers. and flyers and all that boring shit. makes me $13/hour.
UrbanChaos
09-07-2011, 01:13 PM
It probably wont be out till saturday or sunday
Lazerous
09-07-2011, 06:03 PM
That sounds kind of hazardous working 12+ hours around heavy machinery.....
loobinator69
09-07-2011, 07:57 PM
$13 canadian huh... whats minimum wage in canada, since the currencies are close to equal now?
^printing presses arent that heavy. at least, its not easy to die from one.
UrbanChaos
09-07-2011, 08:25 PM
Minimum wage is 8.80 but only people in the food industry ussualy make that
loobinator69
09-11-2011, 07:15 PM
a week ago you said we'd get the next chapter that weekend. its a week after that weekend.
are you working on the avatar story, or this one to post a chapter? ive been checking everyday, hoping for a new chapter.
thank you for making a story so good i check everyday for a new chapter, and i know others do too.
jdawgg
09-11-2011, 07:21 PM
a week ago you said we'd get the next chapter that weekend. its a week after that weekend.
are you working on the avatar story, or this one to post a chapter? ive been checking everyday, hoping for a new chapter.
thank you for making a story so good i check everyday for a new chapter, and i know others do too.
urbanchaos said the new chapter would be up saturday or sunday. its 39 minutes from monday for me now
UrbanChaos
09-11-2011, 08:01 PM
So yah... I do ask for your patience, i remember waiting for Avatreks threads just as i'm sure you wait for mine. Things in life do come up and their are days when i just dont feel like writting... lately the thing in my life has been dead island lol... but still, i try to give you guys a time frame because thats the window i give myself of course these time frames are estimates, another reason is, i like you guys (and girls), i remeber waiting for certain stories to come out, but if you want quality work you need to wait and give it time... If you look at my first post to my last you will see major improvment because of the time i take now, i used to post every couple of days and honestly they werent that good (Dont believe me? go take a look.) So yes i had planned having it out yesterday things didnt work out. My apologizes. The story is super close to being done and i hope to finish it tonight and maybe have it out tomorrow (no guarantees). So yah... hope that explains things little?
UrbanChaos
09-12-2011, 04:27 PM
Chapter 19 will be out by seven o'clock alberta time sharp (Also i would please ask you to read above post if you have not and have questions on my posting times)
UrbanChaos
09-12-2011, 06:09 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 19:
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
* Editor Note: “\/\/\/\/” means either time passing or change of location*
Padme’s eyes fluttered open, a momentary wave of panic washed over her as she realized she was hovering in mid air. Her mind was tired but she forced herself to concentrate, a crane like device was lifting her out of a large bacta tank, it gently lowered her onto a medical bed. The door whooshed open and the same med bot walked in with her clothes on a hanger.
“Am I… ok?” Padme asked, her voice sounding weaker then she had expected .
“I took the liberty of having your clothes washed.” The doctor replied.
“Thank you, but what about my health.” Padme pushed the question as she started to redress herself.
“Your sickness had spread farther then I had anticipated, I could not cure your disease as a whole. Rather I had to treat individual aliments in the hopes of combating the root of your problem.” The doctor explained as it checked her vitals.
“Doctor, I just want to know how I’m doing.” Padme said with her voice growing with strength.
“Well, first, instead of putting you into a comatose state for a little over a week it turned into a little over a month.” The doctor stated writing on a clip board.
“But that’s good right? That means I’m cured then.” Padme asked with her hopes high.
“Yes and no. We did manage to scrape away much of the genetic sludge that had bonded to your DNA, then we replaced many cells on a molecular level.” The doctor began.
“I don’t care about the procedure I care about the results.” Padme cut in firmly.
“Of course, my apologies Senator Amidala. We did manage to get rid of ninety nine percent of your aliments.” The droid explained.
“So what’s left then?” Padme asked disheartened.
“Well for starters you are now much more fertile then most humans, your body will be physically stronger and from what we can tell you will age at a much slower rate.” The droid listed off.
“Well that’s not too bad I guess, how much slower will I age?” Padme asked taking a deep breath.
“We’re not sure, our best guess is by the time your sixty you will look like your thirty, maybe even younger.” The doctor answered.
“I see.” Padme murmured.
“A ship is waiting in docking bay A for you.” The doctor told Padme before moving onto look at more charts.
Padme slowly got off the bed at walked to the door, her legs felt heavier then she remembered in fact her whole body was already tired. She had barely managed to make it to the door how was she supposed to make it to the bay?
Padme opened the door and would have fallen over if a pair of hands hadn’t grabbed her.
“Cody?” Padme asked looking up.
“Yes ma’am.” Cody answered putting her arm over his shoulder.
“And Chez.” Padme said looking the other direction, Chez nodded and then lifted her other arm over his shoulder.
“Didn’t know I was that special.” Padme giggled as she half walked and half got dragged to the docking bay.
“On the contrary Chez insisted we check in on you weekly.” Cody interjected.
“Chez talked? That must have been a first.” Padme said amusing herself.
“He talks, he’s said a total of eight nine words too me in the twelve odd years we’ve known each other.” Cody chimed in.
“You counted?” Padme chuckled.
“It’s hard not too.” He answered now laughing a bit himself. Their jokes were cut short by Chez’s dagger like stares.
They finished the last bit of their journey in silence, when they entered the docking bay Padme immediately spotted Anakin, who at the same time spotted her and jogged to her location.
“I can take her from here troopers.” Anakin told Cody and Chez before scooping Padme up into his arms, her head rested on his forearm while her legs dangled over his other arm.
“Sir.” Cody replied before both him and Chez snapped to attention, and walked away.
Anakin took Padme to the ship without a word and set her in the small on board bedroom, then left to start the ship. Soon the ship had blasted into space and Padme could feel it enter hyperspace. Anakin reentered the room and took a seat.
“How are you feeling?” Anakin asked concerned.
“I’ve had better days.” Padme grumbled back.
“So… how bad is it.” Anakin asked quietly.
“Well I’m sure you know what happened…” Padme started
“I do.” He cut in.
“Well to sum it up, I age slowly, I’m stronger and I have increased fertility.” Padme answered.
“That’s not bad at all.” Anakin said smiling.
“No not really, I just wished I had had a choice.” Padme replied softly.
“Just try to get some rest.” He said standing up and patting her on the shoulder and then leaving Padme to her thoughts. And she had a lot to think about, one choice in particular stuck in her mind.
\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/
“Padme.” Anakin’s voice rang out softly.
“Huh.” She answered groggily.
“We’re on Naboo.” Anakin told her. Padme rubbed her eyes with a yawn and stood up. She felt a lot stronger then she had just hours ago. Padme exited the ship, elegantly descending the ramp like the royalty she was. Anakin had landed at her resort house, he had probably decided it would be the best place for her to get some rest. Padme entered the house and went to her phone she had a few calls to make.
\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/
“Anakin, can you come out on the patio?” Padme yelled. Anakin hustled to the back door and stepped out into the setting sun.
“What’s all this?” Anakin asked surveying the scene, he saw C3PO and R2 standing about a meter from Padme and a man in red standing to the side of her. Padme herself was wearing a long white sleeveless dress with extensive designs, she also wore a matching headdress.
“Anakin I’ve had time to think it over and… well when I was in that prison my only thoughts were about trying to reunite with you, and then I realized that all I want is to be with you.” Padme explained, her big brown eyes locked with his.
“I felt the same way, that’s why I bought you this.” Anakin said before pulling out a small gold ring with a gem on top from his Jedi robes.
Anakin felt like he was in slow motion as he walked up to Padme and took her soft delicate hand, he slid the gold band onto her ring finger. Her hands clasped his, and the Naboo holy man gave his wedding speech. Anakin’s ears failed him, he heard nothing the man said, he was to busy plotting out his life with Padme as his co-pilot. He did hear one sentence though, the only one that mattered.
“You may now kiss the bride.”
Anakin gave no hint of hesitation, he pressed forward and his lips locked to Padmes. His arms wrapped around her waist and he tilted back lifting her off her feet. The kiss was finally broken by Padme who started to giggle and started to rub her nose against his. Anakin lifted his new bride and carried her into the house, Padme’s mouth opened to ask where he was taking her but she snapped her mouth shut, she had a pretty good idea of where they were heading.
Her guess was soon proved right as she found herself being flopped on a bed. Anakin was soon on top of her breathing heavily, his hands fumbled as he looked for a way to pull her dress off.
“Slow up flyboy, you have to earn that.” Padme teased as she pulled her headdress off and tossed it to the side, then lifted the bottom of the dress to show a clean white thong. Anakin bent down onto his knees and inspected the sight, he slid the thong to the side and prodded at Padmes moist snatch with his finger. Slowly he slid his finger in, quiet whimpers came from Padme until his whole finger rested inside. His tongue began to lick her pussy, and his finger began to thrust. His tongue penetrated the pink barrier brining loud moans from Padme. Anakin flicked Padme’s clit and gave it a lick, he could feel Padme shiver in pleasure. He pressed his advantage sucking on the clit and increasing the speed of his finger, in no time at all Padme began to quiver Anakin swiftly wrenched his finger to the side sending a wave of Padmes juices shooting out. Anakin licked his lips savoring the taste.
Anakin stood up and sat beside Padme who was unzipping her wedding dress. Padme stood up then slowly and elegantly stepped out of her dress, Anakin couldn’t tell if she was simply teasing him or if she couldn’t help but be sexy. Before Padme could turn around Anakin was up with his trousers dropped, quickly taking Padme from behind he roughly inserted his cock into Padme’s cunt, Padme instinctively lurched forward grabbing the back of a chair. Anakin firmly grabbed her ass and started to pound. Padme’s body swayed in rhythm, her eyes were shut tightly and she began to chew on her lower lip. She heard the door whoosh open.
“Oh my!” C3PO exclaimed waving his hands and rushing out, she looked over and saw that R2 simply positioned himself in the corner of the room, he seemed to enjoy watching Padme’s petite body being rammed by Anakin’s large muscled frame. She felt Anakins rough hands feel their way to Padme’s tits, gently cupping them and pinching her nipples. Without warning Padme twirled around too face Anakin, his brow was already heavy with sweat, she took his hand and pushed him into the chair, then mounted him so they were face to face.
Padme hugged Anakin tightly pressing her chest especially tight. She grinded her pussy against his rock hard dick, she could feel his pre-cum coating the outside of her pussy. Then she engulfed his dick in her tight snatch and started to pump up and down fucking his meat, Anakin kissed Padme passionately his hands tracing her body. Padme used her hands to delicately massage Anakin’s large shoulders trying to coax the cum out of him, Anakin leaned in a little and began to suck on one of her nipples. Padme’s slams grew more intense as she focused on the cum she so desperately desired. Her left hand drifted down to Anakins balls and started to manipulate them. At that Anakin couldn’t help but start to thrust up meeting Padme half way and making a loud slapping sound as meat met ass. Padme’s hands left their other duties and began to run her fingers through his hair moaning. Anakin finally let loose letting his cum spray like a hydrant into her snatch.
Anakin picked her up and flopped into bed with her in his arms, Padme rubbed Anakin’s semi erect cock getting it ready for the rest of the night…
\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/
The sun was just setting on Coruscant as three Jedi masters stalked the mighty halls of the Jedi temple, their figures casting large looming shadows on the walls around them.
“Do you believe what Count Dooku said about Sidious controlling the Senate? It doesn't feel right.” Obi Wan asked Yoda.
“Becoming unreliable, Dooku has. Joined the dark side. Lies, deceit, creating mistrust are his ways now.” Yoda answered wisely rubbing his chin.
“Never the less, I feel we should keep a closer eye on the Senate.” Mace Windu added.
“I agree.” Yoda said nodding.
“Where is your apprentice?” Mace asked turning to Obi Wan.
“On his way to Naboo. He is escorting Senator Amidala home. I have to admit, without the clones, it would not have been a victory.” Obi Wan commented.
“Victory? Victory you say?” The small Jedi master asked stopping and turning to Obi Wan.
“Master Obi-Wan, not victory. The shroud of the dark side has fallen. Begun, this Clone War has!” Yoda continued gravely.
“Do not forget we have three Sith on the loose, and we no not who they are allied with.” Mace reminded.
With that the three Jedi parted each to attend their own agendas, Obi Wan wanted to get some sleep. Sleep had eluded him lately, he was constantly haunted by a man dressed in black armor causing chaos and destruction, and yet he had a strange fondness to the man, as if he knew him some how...
End Of Attack Of The Clones
PLEASE READ: I thank all my readers for staying tuned and faithfully reading my chapters, I hope you have all enjoyed the last two tweaked movies. And are prepared for the twists and turns of the third, now I know that a lot of you would like to see my take on “The clone wars tv show” however I will not be writing it for multiple reasons
1) The clone wars doesn’t have an ending yet so it would be impossible to move on to the third movie.
2) I do not watch the clone wars… plain and simple it makes me infuriated, because I am such a huge fan boy every detail needs to be perfect and they tend to ignore even the most basic facts, example they made mandalorian’s have a legit society, when its been stated numerous times Mandalor doesn’t have a social structure a school or a real form of government, yet they decide that mandalorians are civilized. Not too mention they would never allow Anakin to have a Padawan. (sorry I’m ranting now)
3) Though I will say Ahsoka is a sexy character and I wish they had introduced her in a different way. She may even feature in a chapter or two down the road with my take on her!
I know there is a lot of moaning and groaning about my “promises” and “release times” (Please read post #176) And I'm not pointing fingers at anyone. Now I’m not sure how to solve this communication problem so if you have an idea do tell, if I get no reply or sollution brought to me about it then I dont want to hear any complaints about it. Anyways I hope you enjoy these stories :icon142: and I look forward to the third story.
Side not I often use refferance pictures for my stories if people want to see em please just say so and I'll start posting them with the story!
loobinator69
09-12-2011, 07:10 PM
great ending to the story. great explanation to the clone wars why you won't do it, and cant wait for revenge of the sith (or the avatar story).
its a little early to ask, but will you do the force unleashed series of games?
jdawgg
09-12-2011, 08:30 PM
i think im one of the ones moaning and groaning about the release times, only cuz i like this story too much.
also, are you gonna be doing episodes 4,5, and 6? great new chapter. cant wait for next one.
UrbanChaos
09-13-2011, 01:20 PM
Yah I'll be doing episodes 4,5,6 and I hope to move into the extended universe after that
as for force unleashed... I hadnt given it much thought, my stand point on the game is the same as the clone wars tv show, it's just ridiculous and they mess with stuff they just shouldnt mess with, but i guess that dosent mean i couldnt write a story on it, at this point we'll just have to see.
And i just realized i didnt title the last chapter... whoops. lets call it... "The Dark Side Rises"... yup just made that up just now, deal with with it.
jdawgg
09-13-2011, 04:48 PM
Yah I'll be doing episodes 4,5,6 and I hope to move into the extended universe after that
as for force unleashed... I hadnt given it much thought, my stand point on the game is the same as the clone wars tv show, it's just ridiculous and they mess with stuff they just shouldnt mess with, but i guess that dosent mean i couldnt write a story on it, at this point we'll just have to see.
And i just realized i didnt title the last chapter... whoops. lets call it... "The Dark Side Rises"... yup just made that up just now, deal with with it.
lmao well that title does work, so i'll deal with it.
loobinator69
09-13-2011, 08:22 PM
well, will you have time for 4,5,6 with an avatar story as well? and on the avatar story, will you go into the legend of korra stuff?
for those who dont know what it is, wikipedia it.
UrbanChaos
09-13-2011, 10:06 PM
I've thought about time, pretty deeply and right now I have a second star wars story in production (unrealated to the what ifs) a third that has nothing to do with star wars or avatar and features a young man named kyle. But I am a pretty big fan of Avatar (as of now I'm not too sure what I'm going to write on) but the point is time wise it's nice to work on several different stories at once since often need to take a break from a story and take a fresh look at it, so working on a different story helps.
As for Korra it hasnt aired yet so its hard to predict right now, in my mind i would like to write a chapter for every new episode that comes out each week (so people can watch the show and then get a sexual take on it) however i know i would not be able to do that and maintain The What Ifs. but to truly answere your question loobinator, yes i do plan on doing some Korra stuff. (also super stoked that Michael Dante DiMartino and Bryan Konietzko are writting the show!)
loobinator69
09-20-2011, 08:30 PM
well, whatever you choose to write, im sure we'll all enjoy whatever it is.
also, if you could post a link here? im subscribed to this thread, so id want to be able to find and subscribe to the next on quickly too.
hornyat40
09-22-2011, 01:49 PM
continue
dumbo
09-23-2011, 05:41 AM
good job excellent job, it is great to have such a talented writer in the forums
UrbanChaos
09-23-2011, 10:39 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 20: An Outfit To Match
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Begin: Revenge Of The Sith
Padme moved from pillar to pillar being careful not to be seen, she had been shadowing Anakin for sometime now. Some how they had managed to cover up their relationship for the entire clone wars so far, if anyone knew about them it would’ve been Obi Wan but he didn’t let on, perhaps he was simply a good friend. Padme had heard Anakin had gone on a desperate mission to save Chancellor Palpatine from the Trade Federation. People had been saying that a problem had occurred and she had to see him just to make sure he was ok. Right now he was in the middle of a group of people, she breathed a sigh of relief seeing that he appeared fine. She watched a little longer as he made his way to the back of the group and spoke to Bail Organa, Padme figured Anakin could probably sense her. As good as she had gotten at stalking shadows, she was no match for the force. She watched Anakin ask Bail to excuse him, she slid behind the large pillar and waited.
Anakin rounded the pillar and pulled Padme in for a tight hug.
“What are you doing here?” Anakin asked excited to see his wife.
“There were whispers . . . that you'd been killed. I've been living with unbearable dread.” Padme explained, her voice faltering a bit.
“I'm back, I'm all right. It feels like we've been apart for a lifetime. And it might have been ... If the Chancellor hadn't been kidnapped. I don't think they would have ever brought us back from the Outer Rim sieges.” Anakin started his own voice feeling weak. He brought Padme closer and began to kiss her passionately.
Padme quickly broke this kiss taking a few steps back knowing that if anyone saw them they would be in a great deal of trouble.
“Wait… Not here.” Padme hesitated looking around carefully.
“Yes, here! I'm tired of all this deception. I don't care if they know we're married.” Anakin said getting frustrated. Padme understood Anakin’s frustration, she did want him, in fact having sex right her in the Senate building kind of turned her on.
“Anakin, don't say things like that. You're important to the Republic ... to ending this war. I love you more than anything, but I won't let you give up your life as a Jedi for me . . .” Padme forced herself to say.
“I've given my life to the Jedi order, but I'd only give up my life, for you.” Anakin stated locking his eyes to hers.
“I wouldn't like that. I wouldn't like that one bit. Patience, my handsome Jedi . . . Come to me later.” Padme said playfully, her finger tracing his chest.
“Wait… you’re trembling. What’s wrong?” Anakin asked, his eyes narrowing.
“Nothing… I’m just excited to see you.” Padme replied hastily.
“Why are you frightened? What’s going on!” Anakin demanded his voice showing a hint of anger.
“You've been gone five months . . . it's been very hard for me. I've never felt so alone. There's . . .” Padme tried to explain.
“Is there someone else?” Anakin asked, his voice sinking.
“No! Why do you think that? Your jealousy upsets me so much, Anakin. I would never do anything to betray you, yet you still don't trust me. Nothing has changed.” Padme answered rebukingly.
“I’m just afraid of losing you.” Anakin said quiet and sheepishly looking at his boots.
“Anakin... Something wonderful has happened.” She told him making him look up again. The stared at each other for a long time, Padme’s lips trembled as she prepared her words.
“I’m pregnant Annie.” She continued slowly. She watched Anakin’s eyes widen in fear and disbelief.
“That’s… That’s wonderful!” Anakin said his eyes jumping to immediate joy. He pulled her in for a tight hug.
“You need too leave Anakin, people will get suspicious.” Padme whispered with a tear running down her cheek. She looked up at Anakin who in turn nodded.
“I’ll see later tonight.” Anakin replied letting her go and rushing into the Senate building.
She watched Anakin hustle into the building, her heart was still thumping from what she just told him, she was a Senator not a mother, the idea of raising a kid frightened her. Her mind ran rampant with worries and fears.
“Marriage can be very tough.” A voice said behind her.
“Who…” Padme started to say whirling around.
“Bail Organa.” Padme said smiling while she put her hands on her hips. If their was ever was a trustworthy man it was Bail.
“How long have you known.” Padme inquired still smiling.
“I’ve had my suspicions.” Bail replied rubbing his chin.
“Come, we have much to talk about.” Bail said with an inviting grin, he wrapped his arm around Padme’s shoulder and began to lead her to the Coruscant shopping district.
Bail lead her through the wealthy part of the district were she could see many extravagant expensive clothes in the windows. Bail and her made idle chit chat until he showed her one of his favourite coffee shops, they sat down each ordering a caf but it wasn’t until about half way through did Bail get down to business.
“So you’re having a child?” Bail asked calmly, Padme took another sip of her caf and thought about her answer carefully. This was politics and people tended to use dirty little secrets against each other for their own gain, on the other hand Bail had been like a father to her, and on top of that he had helped her on numerous occasions.
“Yes.” She sighed.
“Anakin’s the father?’ He asked coolly.
“Right again.” She answered.
“Isn’t that… frowned upon?” Bail wondered.
“You’re three for three.” Padme said finishing off the last bit of her drink.
“I take it that that news is… frightening.” Bail said leaning back in his chair.
“It is a little nerve racking.” She admitted.
“Well you know what you need to do right?” Bail asked. Padme looked at him curiosity in her eyes.
“Go shopping of course!” Bail laughed, Padme giggled at his answer knowing it was true, she hadn’t been shopping in what felt like ages. She flashed back to the days of being a young senator, fresh meat as far as the other senator’s were concerned. They had all tried to take advantage of her and humiliate her, but Bail stepped up and put an end to the whole thing. He attempted to forge a friendship with her, and he soon became her mentor. One of their earliest outings was shopping.
“That sounds lovely.” Padme said, her voice holding a hint of excitement.
Padme and Bail ducked in and out of stores chattering excitedly, they made their way into the small boutique store called Imperial Elegance. It was probably one of Padme’s favorite stores, they tried on a multitude of stuff, Bail found himself a new blue jacket and trousers to match. But Padme had drifted into the lingerie, she wanted something to surprise Anakin with. To her surprise she had found a cute gold number that was made out of Naboo silk. She grabbed that and another blue dress she had been eyeing, she made her way to the changing room to try them on.
She looked in the mirror at the gold bra and thong, on the thong it had a common Nabooian symbol in a rose like red, on her legs she had a similarly coloured pair of stockings.
“How you doing in there Padme?” Bail asked knocking at the door.
“Well it looks nice but I’m not sure I should spending money right now.” She called back.
“How about we make a deal?” Bail proposed.
“A deal?” She asked back curiously.
“How about I buy your clothes and you model them for me?” he explained. Padme was already sold on the deal but she wondered if he knew that she had grabbed more then the dress.
“Sounds like a marvelous idea.” She replied back putting on her original dress. She slipped out of the changing room with her clothes in arm and a smile on her face.
Bail lead the way to the till slipping the cashier a rather large amount credit chip, more then enough to pay for his and her stuff plus a tidy tip. Bail exited the store to see his new jacket in the daylight leaving Padme to pay. The female cashier gave Padme a sly smile seeing the lingerie she had picked out. Padme met him outside with her things in a bag, Bail had already flagged a taxi and took Padme’s hand helping her inside. The taxi was relatively quick taking them to Padme’s and Anakin’s large apartment, Padme went to the room to change for Bail, they talked through the open door about Padme’s possible problems, more specifically about having a child.
Padme exited her bedroom in the blue dress Bail had bought her with a triumphant jump.
“Ta-daaaa!” Padme exclaimed enthusiastically.
“Superb!” Bail clapped watching Padme twirl for him to show him a complete three sixty view of the dress.
“Do you like it?” Padme asked in cheerful tone.
“It looks fantastic on you, really emphasizes the curves.” Bail commented eying Padme up and down. Padme turned to face Bail who had made him self very comfortable on their L-shaped couch. Then her hand slid to the back of her dress and unzipped it slowly and letting it drop to her feet so she was left standing in the gold underwear he had just bought her.
“Padme?” Bail asked with his eyes wandering on Padme’s athletic frame.
“You said you wanted to see what you bought me.” Padme answered innocently.
“You certainly look stunning in it.” Bail said clearing his throat uncomfortable.
Padme took a few elegant steps forward and knelt to her knees unzipping Bails pants and letting his rigid cock pop out.
“Padme! What are you doing?” Bail exclaimed not sure what to do.
“I don’t like people paying for stuff for me. I’d rather earn it.” Padme explained slowly licking Bail’s stiff cock. Through licks Padme watched Bail survey the room and settle in apparently fine with these turn of events.
Padme licked up the shaft and then deepthroated it on her way back down. Padmes head bobbed up and down, Bail feeling braver started to cop a feel at Padmes tits. Then in a surprise turn of events he grabbed Padme’s head and forced it all the way down his shaft.
“You have no idea how long I’ve been waiting for this.” He told Padme as he brought her head up slightly and then slammed her back down onto his cock. Then after a few slams unloaded his sack full cum into her mouth.
He finally released Padme’s head, she came up sputtering and spitting cum from her mouth.
“Rough aren’t you?” Padme smiled and wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. Bail didn’t wait long and scooped Padme up from the floor squeezing her ass tightly. Padme hugged Bail as he walked into the kitchen that was adjoined to the living room he dropped Padme on the kitchen table sending assorted fruits and dishes scattering in random directions. Bail moved Padme’s underwear just enough with his finger so he could stick his dick in. he slowly pumped his thighs getting a feel for Padme’s subtle movements and moans, then he placed his firm hands on her waist and began to thrust harder. Padme’s hands instinctively gripped the table for support as she was maliciously pounded by Bail. The table rattled as Bail smashed into Padme’s tight snatch making her shake on the table, even with her additional support she was no match for Bail’s roughness, he was a lot more rough then Anakin had ever been. Bails pounding continued, bringing Padme’s pleasure higher and higher. Padme’s hips bucked trying to cash in on her pleasure, her body took a mind of her own as she bit her lower lip feeling a shiver of pleasure desecrate her petite frame her pussy began to over flow with her own juices, her cum flowed out and onto Bail’s thrusting cock.
Bail pulled out and with his finger flicked the outside of Padme’s soaking snatch sending more shivers through her body. Then climbed up onto the table positioning himself on top so his cock was resting in between her tits, Padme used her hands to push her breasts tight together allowing Bail to fuck them easier. Bail’s hips once again started up thumping up against Padme’s tight tits, his hands worked on her nipples, pinching and pulling a little harder then she would have liked. With every thrust Padme would suck on the tip of the cock when it appeared, she knew Bail had to be close, with one hand she managed to grab Bail’s ball sack and massage it gently. With a final grunt and a final thrust Bail unloaded on Padme’s face firing shot after shot of warm sticky cum.
Bail took several deep breaths before getting off Padme and helping her up.
“I think it’s safe to say you earned your clothes.” Bail smiled pulling his pants back on.
“So how long have you been waiting to fuck me?” Padme asked curiously finding a cloth for her face.
“Since the first day you walked into the senate building wearing that ultra tight black dress.” Bail answered with a dumb grin on his face.
“You should probably take off before Anakin gets home.” Padme said changing the subject.
“I’ll show myself out then.” Bail responded straightening his jacket and then leaving.
Padme watched the man leave and then went to the couch so she could lounge as she waited for Anakin…
UrbanChaos
09-23-2011, 10:42 PM
I ended this one more abruptly then I would have liked but I found myself dragging it out and it's been more then two weeks and I figured you guys would just want to read it... so here you guys go!
jdawgg
09-24-2011, 01:27 AM
well done brother...its still as good as ur other ones, and i didnt mind the wait. been working way too much now
UrbanChaos
09-25-2011, 06:48 PM
^I hear that.
Just a quick update excpect this next chapter to be out later then usual simply because, for those of you who dont know, I sift through the script of the movies so i can take quotes and acutal speech from the characters so i can follow the movies closely... so i doubt it will be out this week
loobinator69
09-25-2011, 07:45 PM
good chapter. im sure the next will be worth the wait too.
jdawgg
10-06-2011, 05:33 PM
not to be picky or annoying but how is the next chapter coming along? im curious to know how others write their stories
UrbanChaos
10-06-2011, 09:45 PM
The oil site I'm currentlly working on blew a generator then we blew a compressor and its turned into a cluster fuck of problems so I've been working from six in the morning till seven at night so i dont get home till eight thirty and when i do get home i shower, eat and go to bed. Leaving me no time for anything, I almost finshed the story last week and then everything went to hell so I hope to finish it this weekend but my job might turn into 12 day push this weeks, depends on how much we can get done tomorrow.
It may be my stress and tiredness talking but I've considered abandoning this thread or handing the reins over to someone else who can handle it better and writting semi regularly. I had originally intended to have weekly or bi-weekly installments, a day that you guys would know when it would come out so i didnt make you guys wait like this, but that flopped. I've been seriously reconsidering this thread, i guess we'll just have to see in the coming days what happens...
loobinator69
10-08-2011, 08:15 PM
no urban... dont stop the thread! we dont mind the wait too much, so long as you keep posting every so often. and i dont think you could find anyone who would be as good a replacement, except maybe avatrek, whos stopped posting.
UrbanChaos
10-10-2011, 04:06 PM
Next Chapter will be out tonight at 8pm alberta time (or so I hope)
UrbanChaos
10-10-2011, 07:00 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 21: When Wampas Attack!
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Anakin moved swiftly through the Jedi temples hallways, his legs carrying him quickly in long strides. He was supposed to be at the briefing room over an hour ago but he had gotten held up with Padme. He rounded the final corner to see Obi Wan leaning against the wall.
“You missed the report on the outer rim sieges.” Obi Wan said without looking over.
“I'm sorry, I was held up. I have no excuse.” Anakin said bowing slightly to Obi Wan.
“In short, they are going very well. Saleucami has fallen, and Master Vos has moved his troops to Boz Pity.” Obi Wan told Anakin.
“What’s wrong then?” Anakin asked hearing disappointment in his masters voice.
“The Senate is expected to vote more executive powers to the Chancellor today.” He answered letting the disappointment seep through his voice.
“Well, that can only mean less deliberating and more action. Is that bad? It will make it easier for us to end this war.” Anakin argued.
“Anakin, be careful of your friend Palpatine.” Obi Wan warned turning to face Anakin.
“Be careful of what?” Anakin questioned curiously.
“He has requested your presence.” Obi Wan replied beginning to walk down the corridor.
“What for?” Anakin asked curiously a few steps behind his master.
“He would not say.” Obi Wan answered suspiciously.
“He didn't inform the Jedi Council? That's unusual, isn't it?” Anakins own voice full of suspicion.
“All of this is unusual, and it's making me feel uneasy. You're probably aware that relations between the Council and the Chancellor are stressed.” Obi Wan said uneasily.
“I know the Council has grown wary of the Chancellor's power, mine also for that matter. Aren't we all working together to save the Republic? Why all this distrust?” Anakin asked his master.
“The Force grows dark, Anakin, and we are all affected by it. Be wary of your feelings.” Obi Wan advised his pupil.
“May the force be with you master.” Anakin offered his peace to his master before turning leaving for the Senate.
“And with you my pupil.” Obi Wan replied watching Anakin leave.
Anakin’s journey was a short one since the Senate building was only a few blocks from the temple. And after security gave him a quick scan he soon found himself in Palpatine’s office.
“You asked for me?” Anakin said entering Palpatine’s office.
“Anakin, this afternoon the Senate is going to call on me to take direct control of the Jedi Council.” Palpatine blatantly said.
“The Jedi will no longer report to the Senate?” Anakin asked confused.
“They will report to me . . . personally. The Senate is too unfocused to conduct a war. This will bring a quick end to things.” Palpatine explained.
“I agree, but the Jedi Council may not see it that way.” Anakin told Palpatine taking a seat,
“There are times when we must all endure adjustments to the constitution in the name of security.” Palpatine tried to explain to Anakin.
“With all due respect, sir, the Council is in no mood for more constitutional amendments.” Anakin argued refusing Palpatine’s explanation.
“Thank you, my friend, but in this case I have no choice . . . this war must be won.” Palpatine countered trying to use logic against Anakin.
“Everyone will agree on that.” He admitted nodding his head slightly.
“Anakin, I've known you since you were a small boy. I have advised you over the years when I could ... I am very proud of your accomplishments. You have won many battles the Jedi Council thought were lost . . . and you saved my life. I hope you trust me, Anakin.” Palpatine started to appeal to Anakin’s pity.
“Of course.” Anakin answered eager to help his old friend.
“I need your help, son.” Palpatine spoke softly.
“What do you mean?” Anakin asked suspiciously remembering his masters warning.
“I fear the Jedi. The Council keeps pushing for more control. They're shrouded in secrecy and obsessed with maintaining their autonomy . . . ideals. I find simply incomprehensible in a democracy.” Palpatine began to explain.
“I can assure you that the Jedi are dedicated to the values of the Republic, sir.” He reassured Palpatine
“Nevertheless, their actions will speak more loudly than their words. I'm depending on you.” Palpatine said.
“For what? I don't understand.” Anakin shook his head slightly trying to understand the Chancellors words.
“To be the eyes, ears, and voice of the Republic . . .” Palptine started to explain his plan.
Anakin thought carefully about Palpatine’s words, it sounded an awful lot like Palpatine wanted to use Anakin as a spy.
“Anakin . . . I'm appointing you to be my personal representative on the Jedi Council.” Palpatine continued.
“Me? A Master? I am overwhelmed, sir, but the Council elects its own members. They will never accept this.” Anakin said now completely suspicious of Palpatine and his motives.
“I think they will . . . they need you more than you know” The Chancellor said eerily.
“I think I should head back to the temple now.” Anakin replied standing up.
“Of course my boy, just remember my offer.” Palpatine added smiling.
“May the force be with you Chancellor.” Anakin said before leaving.
“And with you Anakin.” Palpatine said before turning to look out the large window over looking the city.
Anakin left the Senate, his head full of problems and concerns. He entered the Jedi temple with his head down unaware of were he was walking, so unaware that he bumped into someone.
“I’m sorry I wasn’t watching were I was going.” Anakin apologized looking up to see Master Shaak Ti
“Apprentice Anakin, it’s nice to see you again.” Shaak Ti said smiling.
“My Padawan and I were about to tour the city a little more extensively.” She continued putting a hand on the young Togruta’s back.
“Would you care to join us?” Shaak Ti asked. Anakin looked at Shaak Ti then down to the Padawan, both of them were very attractive Togruta’s, the Padawan was wearing a short red mini skirt with a tube top to match plus cotton white leggings, Shaak Ti was wearing common Jedi robes which she had hemmed so it was tighter around her chest and hips. The offer was tempting he admitted to himself.
“No thank you I have a lot on my mind.” Anakin replied smiling politely at the two.
“I see. Run along young one.” Shaak Ti waved at her Padawan to leave.
The Padawan nodded and bowed politely to Anakin then to her Master. Anakin watched the young Padawan leave, the sway in her hips were hypnotic.
“So what’s on your mind?” Shaak Ti asked walking down the corridor.
“Palpatine has put me in a… difficult situation.” Anakin hesitated slightly.
“I see.” She said thinking carefully.
There was a long pause as Shaak Ti entered a dark meditation chamber with Anakin hot on her heels.
“What are we doing in here?” Anakin asked looking around, he rarely used meditation chambers and had never even been in this one. It was dark and only lit by the sun coming trough the shudders of the large windows surrounding the room.
“When I find myself confused and unsure of the future I like to meditate.” Shaak Ti explained taking a seat in a large padded chair. Anakin nodded and took a seat beside her. He closed his eyes tightly and took a deep breath letting his worries disappear just as he had been trained years earlier.
His mind wandered catching glimpses of possible futures and seeing the past. But he was soon snapped out of his meditative state when he felt his limp cock spring free from his pants. His eyes snapped opened and looked down to see Shaak Ti on her knees, her head was slightly tilted inspecting his soft cock. Her face was so close he could feel her warm breath on the head of it.
“What are you doing?” Anakin asked very uncomfortable and very confused.
“Just looking.” She replied innocently cocking her head in the other direction.
“Why?” Anakin questioned.
“I forgot how small humans are.” Shaak Ti noted ignoring Anakin’s question.
“It’s not small! It just hasn’t been stimulated yet.” Anakin responded defensively.
“Even limp it’s small.” Shaak Ti protested.
“What do you fuck? Wampas?” Anakin Shouted still in a defensive mode.
“No!... well once. But that’s not the point!” Shaak Ti exclaimed now equally defensive.
“Fine you want to see it big then make it big!” Anakin sneered.
“Fine, I will!” Shaak Ti replied grabbing Anakins limp cock with her orange hand.
Shaak Ti started to jack Anakin cock fast curious to see how big his cock would get. She felt the dick slowly harden in her hand, she made her strokes longer and more purposeful waiting for his cock to extend to its full height. She let her hand slip off to see his cock completely hard, a full eight inches she thought, maybe more. She was certainly impressed but after the fuss she put up she couldn’t let Anakin know.
“Is that all?” Shaak Ti feigned unimpression.
“What do you mean all?” Anakin replied clearly agitated.
“I suppose it will do.” Shaak Ti sighed sadly.
Anakin’s mouth gaped open, he had never had a women call him small before. Anakins rage got the better of him, he reached out grabbing Shaak Ti’s hollow horns and used them as leverage forcing her to deepthroat his whole cock. Her hands instinctively clasped around Anakin’s calves trying to her head while Anakin roughly forced it back and forth. Spit began to dribble down the front of her chin, Shaak Ti had all but surrendered to Anakin’s will, her head continued to travel forward allowing for Anakin’s thick meat to snake all the way down her throat, each time this happened her face was millimetres from Anakin’s stomach, but within moments her head was violently pulled back. The dribble of spit had progressed to a trickle which, in turn, had evolved into a stream of saliva leaking from whatever space was available from her mouth. Anakins thrusts continued relentlessly until finally he let Shaak Ti free sending her spiting and spiralling gagging for air, she felt a hot splash spray across her cheek and head tails. She wiped her cheek with her fingers and examined the sticky substance.
Anakin however wasn’t done, he stood up and towered over Shaak Ti who was casually laid out on the ground. He reached down with a single hand and ripped Shaak Ti’s clothes with one pull tearing them apart.
“You could have just asked.” Shaak Ti teased standing up and slipping out of her Jedi robe, which was the only thing Anakin hadn’t ripped off.
“Sorry Master.” Anakin poked back.
Anakin’s hand cupped her large orange breast gently feeling it, then gave her a forceful push on her shoulder forcing her to turn around, his hands gently massaged her shoulders slowly working his way down her back finally reaching her as which he gave a tight squeeze. Then he grabbed her hips and giving her a hint to bend over, Shaak Ti bent over putting her palms on the nearby wall bracing herself. Anakin took his now hardened cock and slapped Shaak Ti’s tight ass with it a couple times. Then gently prodded her pussy with his cock, he began teasing her putting his cock barely in and then quickly pulling out, but each time he would go a little farther in, this brought Shaak Ti’s moans louder each time. Then Anakin slammed all the way in with one big push. His hands clasped firmly to Shaak Ti’s firm rump, Anakin fell into a full rhythm of hammering her pussy with his cock. Shaak Ti’s arms slowly caved from the pleasure until her cheek was pressed against the cold durasteel. Anakin kept up his attacks making a loud slapping sound when their bodies made contact.
Shaak Ti slowly surrendered and her body slid down the durasteel with a squeak until she was a heap on the floor, her ass stuck up in the air allowing Anakin too continuously pound her pussy. Shaak Ti shivered as her pussy exploded in an orgasm letting her juices flow free, she felt Anakin give Shaak Ti’s ass two good slaps before he pulled out of her pussy and launched his cum all over her ass
They stayed like that for what felt like ages, both breathing heavily.
“Not quite as good as a wampa.” Shaak Ti teased through heavy breath.
“I’m sure.” Anakin mused back.
Anakin redressed quickly and looked over to see Shaak Ti in only her Jedi robe.
“Shouldn’t you wear more then your robe.” Anakin asked looking her over.
“A wampa ripped my other clothes, remember?” Shaak Ti replied gathering up her ripped clothes.
“Right, sorry about that.” Anakin apologized opening the door and letting Shaak Ti step through.
“I hope this mediation session has let you concentrate Padawan Skywalker.” Shaak Ti said turning to Anakin who had just stepped into the hall.
“It certainly did.” Anakin said bowing slightly.
Shaak Ti smiled slightly and began to walk down the corridor. Anakin watched her for a while and then turned in the opposite direction to leave. His problems began to roll into his head, he had a bad feeling that the choices he made now would drastically alter his future, and the future of his child…
I hope you all enjoyed the newest chapter plus the little easter egg i put in their, feel free to comment ask questions or give ideas
jdawgg
10-10-2011, 08:22 PM
really good chapter. keep up the good work.
loobinator69
10-14-2011, 08:08 PM
very good chapter. maybe you could post the wampa sex sometime?
and as for the easter egg, the apprentice is ahsoka, i assume?
UrbanChaos
10-15-2011, 04:53 PM
Perhaps... :Whatever_anim:
dexterjester0
10-16-2011, 05:58 PM
Keep up the good work.
pntblankspacout
10-17-2011, 04:20 PM
morreeee please
UrbanChaos
10-26-2011, 01:40 PM
So where the hell is Urban? Shouldn't he have posted by now?
Well mysterious voice, I sure should have! In fact the next chapter is done and edited! However I'm with holding this chapter.
But wwwwwwhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy??????!!!!!!??????
Well mysterious voice if you're going to get bitchy, then I'm not going to tell you until monday when I release it! Plus I have an important announcement for that day as well!
loobinator69
10-26-2011, 07:21 PM
the suspense is killing me! why do you torture us so?
cowboy33514
10-26-2011, 08:37 PM
hear hear good job
cowboy33514
10-26-2011, 08:43 PM
another 5star chapter
jdawgg
10-26-2011, 11:34 PM
So where the hell is Urban? Shouldn't he have posted by now?
Well mysterious voice, I sure should have! In fact the next chapter is done and edited! However I'm with holding this chapter.
But wwwwwwhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy??????!!!!!!??????
Well mysterious voice if you're going to get bitchy, then I'm not going to tell you until monday when I release it! Plus I have an important announcement for that day as well!
i've learned not to rush art, and you are the artist.
UrbanChaos
10-27-2011, 01:14 PM
i've learned not to rush art, and you are the artist.
Wise words... I appreciate everyones patience
jdawgg
10-29-2011, 08:35 AM
Wise words... I appreciate everyones patience
also i been really busy with work, so dont get much posting time
UrbanChaos
10-31-2011, 06:06 PM
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 22: The Office
By UrbanChaos
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
*Editor Note: The term “Schutta” used in this chapter is a twi’lek term meaning “slut” in the star wars universe*
Padme slid behind one of the massive pillars in the Jedi Temple, she had heard that Anakin would be receiving the title of master today and that he would be elected into the Jedi council. She had come down to congratulate him about his achievement. She looked down at her clothes that she had put on, she was wearing a long sleeved red shirt with a v-neck that should off her tits, for pants she wore tight black pants that hugged her ass perfectly.
She heard the whoosh of the council door whoosh open, she poked her head around the pillar carefully to see Anakin leaving furiously.
“Anakin!” She heard Obi Wan call stepping out of the room after him.
“This is an embarrassment!” Anakin yelled back turning around viciously.
“Anakin it’s an honour to be put on the council at such a young age.” Obi Wan attempted to explain.
“An honour!?! It’s a disgrace! They won’t even make me a master! We both know they are appeasing the chancellor!” Anakin spit back with venom.
“Control your emotions Anakin. What did you want them to do, what choice was given to them? They have to obey the Chancellor, you know that, and you know you’re not ready for a master position.” Obi Wan rebuked him quietly. Anakin stared at his master for what seemed like an eternity, his eyes showing nothing but hurt and betrayal. Then he turned taking long strides down the hall, she watched Obi wan fold his arms as he watched Anakin leave, then he sighed loudly and re-entered the Council room.
Padme stood behind the pillar a moment longer then chased after Anakin. She was no match for his long strides and ended up in a half jog half walk, she almost caught him when he went down a lift leaving her smashing the down button on the lift elevator pad.
“Excuse me.” Padme turned around to see a young Tortuga about a bit smaller in height.
“You’re Senator Amidala right?” The Tortuga asked with bright eyes.
“Uh, yes actually I am.” Padme said changing her concentration to the young girl.
“I thought it was you, I just wanted to say hi and let you know I really admire you.” The Tortuga replied with a large grin.
“Thank you.” Padme smiled back, then turned her head to look at the opening lift door.
“See ya around!” The young Tortuga said cheerfully, Padme looked back to see the young Tortuga already half way down the hall.
“Yeah… oh wait I didn’t catch your name!” Padme called back but the Tortuga was already out of ear shot, Padme quietly cursed under her breath, she always enjoyed talking to the younger generation. Padme could still see the young Padawan walking down the hall, her outfit was a little skimpy she thought, though Padme had to admit her outfits weren’t always so wholesome, even now she was wearing something to attract male attention, Padme banished the thought and stepped into the lift.
She stepped out of the lift and rushed out the Temple’s doors, she looked around trying to find Anakin and spotted him heading to the Senate building, he was probably going to talk to Palpatine. She stood there with folded arms, until she realized she was getting some fairly sexual stares by passing men, she decided she might as well get some work done while she was by the Senate building. She entered the building and took another lift to her personal office suite, she couldn’t help but think that she had received an office suite for all the personal favors she had done for all the Senators. Padme opened her door and stepped in, she paused hearing an odd sound in the living room area, she could hear some yelling or screaming and a loud smacking sound that sounded like someone was being slapped. She pressed her back up against the wall and silently slid across it to the corner, she gently poked her out around the corner to see a naked Sabe being plowed by Jar Jar on the white leather couch.
“Fuck that tight pussy harder Jar Jar!” Sabe screeched through clenched.
Padme covered her mouth with her hand stifling a giggle, then calmed herself taking a step out into the living room with her arms folded and a stern look on her face.
“Mistress Padme!” Sabe exclaimed grabbing at some couch pillows in an attempt to cover herself, this however through Jar Jar off balance, Jar Jar attempted to thrust again but Sabe had pulled his large dick from her snatch so when he thrusted he was thrusting into air, his thrust made him lurch forward making him tumble forward and into a coffee table.
“What is going on her?” Padme demanded in a stern voice.
“You said you were going home, so we decided to… fuck.” Sabe said clearly embarrassed.
“Weesa ment no disrespects to yousa Senator, weesa doin dis often.” Jar Jar added finally getting up woozily and rubbing his head.
“Often?” Padme asked still in a stern tone and raising an eye brow.
“Not to often, more like… occasionally.” Sabe cut in glaring at Jar Jar.
“Occasional? More likein everytime yousa nocombackie and weesa are left alones.” Jar Jar said not realizing why Sabe was lying.
“In my office?” Padme asked unfolding her arms and putting her hands on her hips.
“Yes Senator.” Sabe answered putting her head down in shame.
Padme looked at Jar Jar’s hanging twelve inch prick and back to Sabe who sat uncomfortable naked on the couch.
“And just why wasn’t I invited?” Padme asked sternly. Sabe cracked a smile and dropped the cushions she had been using to block her nudity, then hopped up and rushed to Padme giving her a passionate kiss. Padme hugged Sabe tightly, Sabe’s hands tugged at the bottom of Padme’s shirt, they broke their kiss for a second so Padme could remove her shirt and expose her bare tits, while Padme did this Sabe knelt down to her knees taking Padme’s pants with her on her way back up she gave Padme’s snatch a quick lick. Padme and Sabe returned to their kiss, tangling up their tongues. Sabe slowly lead Padme to couch, she flopped back and pulled Padme with her so they were laying down hugging each other tightly, Padme was on top pressing on with the kiss. Padme could feel Sabe grinding her pussy against hers, she let her finger pierce Sabe’s wet snatch and slowly twirled her finger inside.
Padme looked over to see a lonely looking Jar Jar pleasuring himself to the sight of the women pleasuring themselves.
“Aw why don’t you come over here?” Sabe asked noticing the Gungan herself. Jar Jar slowly made his way to Padme and Sabe who had gotten of the couch and knelt down to the floor like Tusk cats waiting for a meal. When Jar Jar got close enough Padme and Sabe pounced, licking and sucking Jar Jar’s meat like crazed animals. Padme was content with sucking on Jar Jar’s balls while Sabe attempted to deep throat his cock, she watched as Sabe would snake about six too eight inches of the thick cock down her throat making a large bulge in her throat but ultimately leaving four inches of the cock dry. Padme let the balls in her mouth slip out and kissed Sabe on the cheek.
“Let me show you how it’s done.” She said kissing Sabe on the cheek again. Sabe spit out the cock and gave Padme a kiss on the lips before moving out of the way and letting Padme get into position.
Padme started off slow, starting with four inches then moving up to eight then ten and finally taking in all twelve inches. Padme began to easily deepthroat all twelve inches bobbing her head back and forth, Sabe watched in amazement, Padme made it look so easy and the look on Jar Jar’s face showed he was truly enjoying it, much more then he had enjoyed Sabe. Padme saw the envy in Sabe’s eyes, she let the meat drop from her mouth and rubbed it with one hand.
“This time I’ll teach you to deepthroat it all.” Padme offered kindly. Sabe grew excited as she took the dick in her mouth.
“Take a deep breath.” Padme started to instruct. Sabe did this and started to take the dick in up until about six inches.
“Now exhale through your nose.” Padme continued, as Sabe did this Padme put a hand on the back of Sabe’s head and pushed, she quickly gobbled up eleven inches of the cock then, Padme pushed with a little bit more force and Sabe took in the whole twelve inches. Padme helped to gently guide Sabe’s head as she slowly deep throated Jar Jar’s massive cock over and over.
Sabe finally let Jar Jar’s dick swing free of her mouth and kissed Padme again. Padme delightedly kissed back passionately, Padme became engrossed with the kiss and pushed Sabe back onto the couch so she was back on top, they hugged tightly pressing their tits together as they continued their kiss, their tongues intertwining. Padme wrapped her legs around Sabe so they were entangled and pressed tighter together, their bodies rocked slightly as they tried to grind their pussies together.
Padme felt Jar Jar’s large webbed hands grab on to her hips, then she felt the head of his cock poke into her snatch, Padme moaned and his large cock slid farther into her wet pussy. Jar Jar began to pound Padmes tender pussy, his Gungan meat squeezed into Padme’s tight human snatch continuously rocking her body. The Jar Jar pulled out and reinserted his huge dick that was still dripping with Padme’s juices into Sabe’s pussy. Jar Jar began to bang Sabe’s pussy as hard as he could, the cries from Sabe echoed in the room, Padme went back to kissing Sabe even though the task had been complicated from her continuous moans and groans. Jar Jar then changed tactics pulling out of Sabe he would thrust into Padme all the way until his balls slapped her skin, then he would yank his dripping cock and insert it into Sabe’s pussy repeating his performance, he stayed with this action enjoying the feel of both tight human pussies, one right after the other.
“Mesa close to cumin!” Jar Jar cried in anticipation.
“Cum in me Jar Jar!” Sabe yelled out before Padme could even open her mouth, that schutta Padme thought harshly.
“Oh no you don’t! You’d better cum in me!” Padme demanded ferociously. Jar Jar gulped loudly as both women continued to yell at him to cum in them and them only.
Jar Jar knew he couldn’t hold out forever and it was only a matter of time until he came. Jar Jar pulled out of Padme, whom he was currently in, and slid his dick in between their closely pushed bodies, his throbbing cock scrapped against their pussies as he fucked their warm stomachs. Then finally he unleashed his hot cum spraying from their pelvises up to their tits with a huge amount of cum. Jar Jar fell back into a nearby chair exhausted by the amount of cum he had just spewed. He watched as Padme and Sabe gingerly licked his cum off of each other satisfied with his work.
Padme finally got up and redressed.
“Now then, I still have paperwork that needs to be done. I assume you two can clean up here?” Padme said surveying the mess they had made in the room.
“Yes senator.” Sabe nodded obediently.
Padme went into her spacious office and sat down, she began to sift through papers but barely managed to concentrate. Her mind was too distracted about worrying about Anakin, and finally about their baby…
PLEASE READ: So First off thanks for reading this new chapter of “the what ifs” hope you enjoyed it. Second thing is I’m not going to be around for the next twelve days, and in those twelve days I will NOT be writing anything, so the next chapter will not be out for a very, very, long time (just so you guys know I haven’t abandoned this thread) and that is also why I withheld this chapter. Third when I return I hope to have figured out a way of posting these chapters faster or at least come up with some kind of way to handle this thread more efficiently so it doesn’t dominate my life and I can finish my other stories I have in the works. Fourth I will try to check this thread while I’m away so I will try to answer any questions or comments that are left. Yup that about settles it soooooooooooo LOOK A DISTRACTION!!!!!!
loobinator69
10-31-2011, 07:02 PM
great new chapter. i'll try to be patient for the next one.
jdawgg
10-31-2011, 07:55 PM
what is the new chapter going to be about?
jdawgg
10-31-2011, 07:56 PM
great new chapter. i'll try to be patient for the next one.
me and u can be patient. we didnt even bother him about this chapter. also great new chapter
UrbanChaos
11-03-2011, 03:54 PM
what is the new chapter going to be about?
I'm feelin like it will have a Padme and Obi Wan pairing with a conversation about Anakins drift towards the dark side
loobinator69
11-03-2011, 07:28 PM
how many chapters until episode 3 is done?
UrbanChaos
11-05-2011, 11:20 AM
how many chapters until episode 3 is done?
I take the script and just pull out places where I think I can put in a sexual encounter, chapter 23 will take place about half way in, so I hope to finish it up in the next eight chapters... i find episode three a lot harder to write about and honestly it is probably my least favorite so far, thats why my parings are so out of the box, I'm just trying to make it intresting and fun to read, what you guys think?
loobinator69
11-05-2011, 08:22 PM
It's interesting, sure. the pairings aren't too out of the box, shaak ti was always a relatively minor character. all the chapters are good, you really don't go wrong ever. episode 3 was all action really. great for kids and stuff, but... just sort of too actiony too have emphasis on plot. It really advanced the story and tied up the loose ends.
UrbanChaos
11-06-2011, 08:02 PM
^ Its true, Lucas used episode 3 simply as a wrap up rather then giving it its own true story.
Recap! So I was thinking today that I should have released a new chapter today, but since I havent been home in six days I havent written anything. So I figure since this is a "What If" scenerio I might as well do a brief recap on all the changes I've made through out the chapters. So here we go... change one is the fact that Qui Gon Jinn is still alive he managed to survive the attack by Darth Maul, BUT Darth Maul also managed to survive and continues to wreak havoc for the republic. Dooku is however dead. Anakin is not a Jedi Knight he remains an apprentice to Obi Wan, since he did not become a Jedi Knight he did not become Ahsoka's master, so Ahsoka became Shaak Ti's Padawan. Jango Fett was spared his fate and continues to teach Boba his trade... and that's all I can think of right now, feel free to shout out anyother changes I've made!
loobinator69
11-06-2011, 09:53 PM
when did you state in the story qui-gon and darth maul were still alive in the story? i assumed they died just like in the movie. I remember all others though.
would it affect plot much though? you havent used the 2 of them for many, many chapters now. plus, they never appear or be refrenced in later movies.
jdawgg
11-07-2011, 01:50 AM
when did you state in the story qui-gon and darth maul were still alive in the story? i assumed they died just like in the movie. I remember all others though.
would it affect plot much though? you havent used the 2 of them for many, many chapters now. plus, they never appear or be refrenced in later movies.
near the end of episode one, where the gungans were throwing a party in the city of naboo, it states that qui-gon, obi-wan, and anakin, go to the celebrations.
iambogus007
11-07-2011, 12:47 PM
great stories.. plz continue...
loobinator69
11-07-2011, 07:38 PM
oh, o.k. its been a while now since i read those chapters. but, will they show up later, or have they magically disappeared anyway?
UrbanChaos
11-07-2011, 08:22 PM
great stories.. plz continue...
They will continue just as soon as I get home
@lobbinator69, they will reappear in a fairly drasticly near the end of this movie. As we progress through the movie you guys should be able to see a more noticeable effect
jdawgg
11-07-2011, 08:48 PM
They will continue just as soon as I get home
@lobbinator69, they will reappear in a fairly drasticly near the end of this movie. As we progress through the movie you guys should be able to see a more noticeable effect
when ur doing the last 3 movies, i'll know more. i studied those movies for years. got copies of the scripts and everything
loobinator69
11-08-2011, 08:19 PM
oh good, there will be an effect. games where choices have no effect on anything always annoy me, so at least theres a reason for this change. it would be sort of wierd if you let them live for no point.
^ always good to know the source. I have the original trilogy on dvd, and ill probably watch them again soon.
UrbanChaos
11-08-2011, 09:38 PM
I'm super stoked for the next three I've got so many ideas bouncing around in my head for it... I'm not sure if I want Leia to go with Bail or to stay with Luke yet though, I have both in my head with intresting spins
@Jdwagg yeah the orignal were always my favorite too
jdawgg
11-09-2011, 02:02 AM
I'm super stoked for the next three I've got so many ideas bouncing around in my head for it... I'm not sure if I want Leia to go with Bail or to stay with Luke yet though, I have both in my head with intresting spins
@Jdwagg yeah the orignal were always my favorite too
hehe i cant resist the temptation. wheres the new chapter at?
loobinator69
11-09-2011, 08:11 PM
both sound pretty interesting. Maybe you vould make a split where you have 2 stories, but... that would get complicated.
but why are we discussing 4,5,6, when we still have a couple chapters left of 3?
jdawgg
11-09-2011, 09:09 PM
both sound pretty interesting. Maybe you vould make a split where you have 2 stories, but... that would get complicated.
but why are we discussing 4,5,6, when we still have a couple chapters left of 3?
cuz 4, 5, and 6 are better then #3
UrbanChaos
11-10-2011, 10:49 AM
splitting the story would get complicated to say the least... though it intrigues me greatly.
And I'll give you the first couple sentences for chpt 23 " " that is all. Yup havent written a damn thing yet lol, I get home in two days and that's when the writting will resume.
and the probably reason that we're talking about 4,5,6 is that I have those worked out for the most part but I'm blindly struggling to come up with ideas for the third
jdawgg
11-10-2011, 01:51 PM
splitting the story would get complicated to say the least... though it intrigues me greatly.
And I'll give you the first couple sentences for chpt 23 " " that is all. Yup havent written a damn thing yet lol, I get home in two days and that's when the writting will resume.
and the probably reason that we're talking about 4,5,6 is that I have those worked out for the most part but I'm blindly struggling to come up with ideas for the third
hope u come up wit some good chewie scenes. gotta include the wookies
UrbanChaos
11-10-2011, 08:09 PM
hope u come up wit some good chewie scenes. gotta include the wookies
How could I not include some Wookie Nookie?
also I was thinking of the opening scene for chpt 23 and I've decieded it will go something, but only something like this...
"Padme woke up in a fright clutching for Anakin in his now empty bed spot. Padme finally managed to calm herself, she had had the worst nightmare of a man in midnight black armor attacking Anakin, she had no idea where the very thought had come from. Though she had been worrying about him for a very long time, Padme slowly arose from the bed and opened the curtain letting light stream across her body. She looked down at her lime green nighty that just barely covered half her ass thus her light pink panties she wore, though she found no reason to wear a bra with her ensemble. Padme jumped at the sound of knocking coming from the door, without thinking to grab a house coat she went to open the door..." and I figure that's more or less how it will go
loobinator69
11-10-2011, 08:29 PM
^more or less how it goes? its a pretty good start, just needs a little polish, but... a little info is better than none.
yes, you can never for get the wookies. the best part of episode 3, the wookies. somehow though, ill think of something else that was the best part. i haven't seen it in a while.
UrbanChaos
11-11-2011, 08:48 AM
^more polish indeed, this is a fairly rough version, I intentionally left some things out and changed a few things to keep it brief.
While we're on the subject of asking questions, I somehow managed to take the avatar story I'm writting and turn it into a mini series their is going to be about three or four chapters to it, now I can release the first one now or save it when I complete the others, or complete them all and then periodicly release them. of course their is now telling when the others would be finished.
loobinator69
11-11-2011, 09:41 PM
i don't really care when you release them, i'll take whatever of your works i can get. if anyway, i would want them released partway between what-if chapters, so the wait would be sraggered.
UrbanChaos
11-12-2011, 09:47 PM
^ alright good to know
also I am now home so writting resumes.... Now!!!
jdawgg
11-12-2011, 09:55 PM
^ alright good to know
also I am now home so writting resumes.... Now!!!
its about bloody time u got home. lol j/k
UrbanChaos
11-12-2011, 10:00 PM
its about bloody time u got home. lol j/k
Hey if you wanna blame anyone blame my girlfriend she insisted I take a holiday from work lol
jdawgg
11-12-2011, 10:06 PM
Women! can't live with them, can't live without them. dont blame you bro
loobinator69
11-13-2011, 08:40 PM
^lol
sooo.... are you ging to tell us how long until the next chapter? since you already wrote the introduction...
jdawgg
11-14-2011, 08:53 AM
he better. lol
UrbanChaos
11-14-2011, 03:35 PM
idealy I would like to have it out by the end of the week, but I'm not sure I'll be able to accomplish that. So within the next two weeks maybe?
loobinator69
11-14-2011, 08:38 PM
by the end of the week sounds good... but i'm guessing it'll probably end up being wednesday next week. its never on time lol
irishcdn
11-19-2011, 07:57 PM
its the end of the week lol
UrbanChaos
11-19-2011, 08:15 PM
I'm bustin ass right now tryin to get it done fore sunday lol
jdawgg
11-19-2011, 09:33 PM
I'm bustin ass right now tryin to get it done fore sunday lol
take ur time, so u dont mess up. we can wait a day or two more.
loobinator69
11-20-2011, 08:15 PM
its sunday lol. im sure itll be great, even if we have to wait a day or two.
UrbanChaos
11-20-2011, 09:15 PM
under jdawgg's advice I have decided not to release this weeks chapter. While I did finish the chapter this weekend I usually take 2 to 3 days polishing it (taking stuff out, adding stuff editing and what not) time I just havent had... I would rather make you guys wait an extra week then release a chapter that is garbage and a waste of time to read
jdawgg
11-20-2011, 11:54 PM
under jdawgg's advice I have decided not to release this weeks chapter. While I did finish the chapter this weekend I usually take 2 to 3 days polishing it (taking stuff out, adding stuff editing and what not) time I just havent had... I would rather make you guys wait an extra week then release a chapter that is garbage and a waste of time to read
glad i could help with a small suggestion
UrbanChaos
11-25-2011, 09:53 PM
Chapter 23 will be posted tomorrow (saturday) at ten pm Alberta time... This chapter is probably the shortest I've ever written