Star Wars The What Ifs

[James05griff]

Yes post it I think everyone will love it

[Malcho1234]

I'd also love to read it.

[khurana1492]

Would love a Korra series; your stories are pretty incredible.

[irishcdn]

yes do post it

[lightning022]

great story

[loobinator69]

YES post the korra story!

[UrbanChaos]

I did it's right here http://www.sexstoriespost.com/forums/showthread.php/32454-Avatar-The-Legend-Of-Korra (http://www.sexstoriespost.com/forums/showthread.php/32454-Avatar-The-Legend-Of-Korra) :smile:

[UrbanChaos]

Going to be gone to a work camp for the next week and a bit so I won't be around probably since they generaly don't have any wifi or service in gerneral... so excpect the next chapter for when I get back... If you cant wait I just released a new story as stated above ^ so look up there if you need something to read!

[hahaha09]

good story

[UrbanChaos]

Next chapter will be posted this sunday (July 15)

A significant change in the story will happen, anybody care to guess what?

[jdawgg]

Next chapter will be posted this sunday (July 15)

A significant change in the story will happen, anybody care to guess what?

anakin goes darkside on us?

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 31: Company


By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.





Leia flinched as another light winked out on the display, the battle to destroy the death star had started only ten minutes ago and they had already lost half their fleet. The Empire knew they were coming, Leia had no idea how they could've predicted this attack but the loss of ships proved otherwise.


"Call for the retreat." Leia said hoarsely to the generals.
"Princess we will never have another opportunity like this again!"
"This isn't an opportunity it's a massacre, now call the retreat!" Leia demanded.


The General nodded and gave the command, Leia watched as all the blue dots on the screen did a complete turn around and headed towards the exit routes. Her eyes locked on to red squadron, the screen didn't designate which fighter was which but Leia was still hoping something would tell her which one was Luke. A large group of tie fighters were bearing down on them several of red squadron's lights disappeared but Leia was sure Luke was still alive, then the power shut off. The whole temple was dark.


"What happened?" A voice shouted.
"Someone blew the generator!"
"Back up power's not responding!" Voices shouted at each other trying to troubleshoot the problem though the feeling of an impending assault was growing quickly.
"Princess I think you should leave." Someone said tugging at her elbow.
"No, I want to know what's going on." Leia snapped back shaking her elbow free observing the chaos around her.


An explosion rattled the temple leaving the room eerily quiet.
"Major what in blue blaster bolts is going on!" The security chief barked into his radio cutting the silence.
"An elite team of storm troopers has entered the base sir, we're severely out gunned and underprepared!" The man shouted back through the static filled radio.
"Pull back to corridor eight, you need to hold it while I evacuate the senators and generals." He growled back.


A long silence grew as the impending feeling that the Major was no longer around to reply.
"Major respond!" He yelled into the radio.
"I think it's best we leave." A nearby senator advised.
"I agree, everybody move to the nearest hanger." The chief said waving people through the door.


The Chief drew his blaster and lead the group through the now silent hallway.
"Something's not right, there should be blaster fire or explosions." The Chief said in a worried tone. He keyed in the code to the hanger door and they opened with a whoosh.


The group hurried into the hanger eager to escape the danger behind them, the doors closed suddenly making a loud bang, they looked forward and saw rather than leave the danger behind they had stumbled right into it.
"So glad you could join us." A red man with hideous black tattoo's snarled through yellow teeth.


A dozen black armored stormtroopers had their weapons trained on them and right in the center was the tattooed man Leia now recognized as the man on the Star destroyer who had tried to force her into giving up their plans.
"Surprised to see me princess?" He grinned evilly.
"Darth Maul, you're looking as awful as always." Leia sneered.
"I would advise your security chief to lower his weapon, I would hate to make a mess."
"Do what he says we're clearly out matched." She nodded, the security chief slowly lowered his weapon as instructed.
"You rebels always surprise me, just when I think we've beaten you into submission you mount a rag tag assault and assume you can win."
"We will never sit by and allow you to dominate the universe, we will fight you until our very last breath and even then we will pass on our cause." She spat angrily.
"Yes I am aware, you suffer from that nonsense known as hope, but I have a solution for your silly notion. I plan on breaking every single person in your little rebellion and anyone affiliated with you."
"And just how do you expect to do that?"
"Very simply, we will gather up every rebel in the galaxy and force them into the service for the Empire. Some will become our sex slaves breeding a new generation of warriors the other will be forced into hard labor, our dream is to remake the galaxy in the Sith image. All will bow to our power by the time we are done, and your little group will make a nice first addition." The Sith explained his intentions calmly.
"Your plan is sick and twisted!" Leia yelled in disgust.
"You have no need to worry, you will be allowed to escape."
"And just why is that?" Leia asked confused by the sudden turn of events.
"Because freedom has a price, I know your bold attitude is the true heart of the rebellion. Without you the rebels would fall apart thus making it impossible to weed out the traitors and gain new slaves, so I am going to give you two choices, stay and allow the rebellion to break apart, or escape and deliver us thousands of slave as a byproduct." He smirked.
"I will never let you win you maniac the rebellion will grow stronger and the next time we meet will be when I spit on your dead corpse." She growled.
"So you choose freedom then, silly girl you will only feed our never ending machine. You wont get of that easy though, I'm going to give you taste of what the women of your rebellion are in for. To leave you will have to fuck me." He laughed bitterly.


Leia was shocked she couldn't believe this man he was completely insane. But was he right? If she continued the rebellion would she only be progressing the Empires quest for domination? For now it didn't matter, she had to escape and then make a decision when her mind was clear.
"Very well." She muttered.


With a grin Maul removed his robes and dropped them to the ground with a thud, letting his raging hard on free. Leia moved forward knowing what her job was she knelt down in front of his cock embarrassed to be doing this in front of her fellow senators. She put one hand on to the shaft and slowly began to stroke bowing her head in shame.
"I'm sure you can do better than that princess." Maul prodded.


Leia's anger flared momentarily, she couldn't believe how twisted this man really was, but she knew he was right if she ever wanted to escape this torture she would have to do better. She quickened her hand furiously fapping his cock making Maul moan softly. Leia decided that if she wanted to leave she would just have to get over her pride, besides her captured friends were in for a far worse treatment she was sure. She put her soft lips to the head of Maul's dick and licked the first bit of salty pre-cum. It tasted funny she thought, different than any other cum she had had, it almost called to her and invited her to have more.


Her lips locked around the tip of his cock as her tongue swirled around the head. Her hand still worked steadily making sure to keep a constant rhythm but her other hand had drifted underneath her dress and was now rubbing her pussy. She wanted to stop and insist she was disgusted but truthfully she was more turned on then ever.


Leia started to take the cock further and further into her mouth until she was finally deepthroating the large piece of meat, her hand rubbed her snatch harder and her now free hand had moved on to her tits squeezing and pulling them.
"How about we let those free." Maul smiled devilishly, then ripped the front of Leia's dress exposing her breasts. The tight white dress Leia always wore would show underwear if she wore any so she had made a habit of never wearing it with her signature dress though at this moment she regretted that decision.


Maul pushed her onto her back and lifted the bottom of her dress, he quickly slammed his prick straight into her pussy. Leia winced in pain from not being fully prepared, his thrusts were brutal and violent, he clearly was making sure he obtained as much pleasure as he could and didn't care what Leia was feeling. What she really was feeling was pain, it felt like his dick was plowing straight into her stomach, his hands pulled and groped her tits as hard as he could.


Leia panted desperately trying to regain some breath, Maul seemed to have put it into overdrive speeding up each pump. She couldn't believe the speed Maul had managed to achieve, from the sound of skin smacking together Leia was sure she would sore for the next several days. Though Maul was brutal with each thrust she could feel the sense of pleasure creeping in, in fact she was beginning to enjoy his malicious assault. She tried to deny the fact that a beast such as Maul could give her any sort of pleasure and yet with each vicious thrust her pussy shuddered with pleasure.


"Sir, I don't mean to interrupt but the others will be here shortly." A stormtrooper hesitated. Maul looked at the trooper and gave a primal growl.
"You're right." Maul hissed angrily realizing the trooper's point.
"Sorry princess but it looks like I'll have to cut this date short, I'm having company over." He laughed mockingly.


Maul gave two more quick thrusts and let his seed explode deep inside her, stream after stream of hot cum sprayed into her until it was leaking out.


Maul got off of her and redressed.
"I would leave soon before my associates arrive, they are not as merciful as I." Maul said before walking out.


Leia laid on the floor for what seemed like forever trying to gather her breath and thoughts, slowly she stood up and looked over her torn dress. She rubbed her sore pussy and entered the nearest ship. She set the coordinates to a random planet and soared off into the galaxy. Leia stared off into the ever expanding galaxy. The death star remained in space dominating everyone and everything, the Rebellion was scattered and dismantled, She had no idea what to do or if Han and Luke were even still alive, and it seemed the Empire had even worse plans for the galaxy.


The Rebels had lost...




End A New Hope



Well there you have it the end of episode 4, hope you all enjoyed it and are ready for episode 5!!!!!

[RAT25]

A nice major change. Now you are completely changing star wars... In a good way.

[reznum1993]

Nice story

[James05griff]

Nice story loved it

[Spycam]

Hey, I've been reading your story for a while now and finally decided to make an account specifically because of it. The amount of skill, and more importantly effort you put into you writing is impressive- and rare. So, now that I've thrown some compliments your way (they were sincere, I assure you), I do have a request concerning episode five. I have previously read at least two variations of an event in which Leia is taken by a wampa, one I believe by an artist/writer by the name of shabby blue, and an incomplete one on a choose-your-own-adventure site. In the latter, the beast was attracted by the smell of her pleasuring herself on a frozen stalagmite. I'll try to find the links, but either way it would be awesome to read your version of a similar event at some point in the future- and I figured that there is a precedent for beasts in the shaak chapter, as well as a reference to being screwed by a wampa in one of the Jedi temple chapters. If not, I'm sure whatever else you come up with will be just as cool (pun intended). Also, everyone reading this has my sincere apologies for the length of this comment.

[Spycam]

Here's the link to the one by shabby blue and chirpa:

A bit too much pain, and not enough pleasure perhaps, but still a decent story.
He also made a picture (note warning for obviously explicit sex)

[UrbanChaos]

^I'm going to break this down into the four major parts in hopes I cover all your questions/comments

1) First of I am very humbled by your comment and appreciate the fact you would make an acount just because of me, I often wonder if what I write is at all any good or what people actually think! So thank you!

2)I am very familiar with Shabby blue's work and have had the privilege to have access to his personal website/speak with him (little known fact he was one of the reasons for starting this tale

3)Believe it or not I know the exact choose-your-own-adventure you're talking about because I was one of the authors that worked on it! though the project has stalled recently and hasn't had much work as of late I had planned on mentioning/linking to it when it was complete but who knows if that day will ever come.

4) So I guess the point is I will definitely write a wampa/Leia scene for you! I love getting input from my audience as I often feel like I don't know what you guys want to read, the shaak story was actually requested by Natsu if I remember correctly.

My only question for you (spycam) is, is their a varation of the wampa you specificly want or wish to see?

If i missed anything or if you have anymore questions/comments ask away, that goes for everyone

[Spycam]

Everyone who's ever heard of Shabby Blue is no doubt extremely jealous of you right now haha. I suppose I'll start with the most important part: the Leia/wampa scene itself. First, however, I'd like to request additional input from the other fans of this series- more ideas are always better, right? Let's make something epic here. Anyway, my suggestions for a personal ideal would probably include the whole icicle/stalagmite sextion (that was a typo, but I think I'll leave it ;)), perhaps even including a fingering segment as a prelude with Leia looking around for something bigger (I believe that was included in the cyoa, come to think of it), both because it's a great idea on it's own, and because the warmup makes the main event far more believable- and no doubt more pleasurable for our heroine. Speaking of warmups, I believe Shabby also made a tauntaun pic... sorry, I'll try to stay on topic. Obviously there will still be some discomfort (okay, a great deal of discomfort) at the beginning, and I'm all for 'physically impossible sex' (doesn't exist for Noobians, of course), but it should probably be kept short of blood, broken bones, etc. (not that I think you would write that, but I'm trying to cover as many bases as possible). I'm sure some people enjoy that stuff, but they're probably a minority. A small number of position changes seem appropriate as well. Some of the options in the cyoa, such as whether or not to provoke the wampa were intriguing, and I've been checking back irregularly to see if anyone has added to it. For the finale, I always wondered what would have happened if the rebel troops hadn't interrupted. So I guess, if any interruptions could be either removed or postponed, that would be great. Unless of course the interruption was in the form of another wampa... That may be going a bit too far, but hey, this is brainstorming- and besides, the whole situation is pretty ridiculous to begin with. The only other thing I can think of on the spot is something that I can't really make a suggestion on, because it will have to match what you've written up to that point, besides being your place to develop- Leia's reactions. Is she a repulsed or terrified victim? Is she secretly intrigued? Does she want it while being afraid of injury? Or is she thinking that somehow she has got to force this monster in? I'm sure there are other options as well, but based on your character development to date, I'd say that both extremes are unlikely at this point. Again, your call.

It's great to see an author who is willing to take fan input seriously. Thanks for reading, and once more I'd like to request more input and feedback from others, as mine was more or less pros and cons of other works.

Finally, you're quite welcome- you deserve all the praise people throw- and internet users throw precious little. I've always been a huge fan of star wars, and more recently of erotic fan works, and yours is some of the best I've found.

P.S. I promise my next comment will use bullet points or numbers heh heh...

[jdawgg]

mebbe a post not quite as long as well.

[Spycam]

I'll do my best. Note form rather than sentence-paragraph form, perhaps.

[loobinator69]

great chapter.

and @spycam I personally like the paragraphs, but maybe a bulleted list at the bottom highlighting the major points? I like how you ramble on and sometimes slip off topic, but bullets at the end would help by having an easy to see list of what the main points are.

[GODOFSEXY]

AS one of the last star wars sex writers I hope that you wont end episodes 5 and 6 that quickly you Know? this was intresting but their was still stuff we could have done where is the obi wan "instructing" Leia in the ways of the force?
um so Ideas that might be intresting
Luke fucking Mara obiviously
Leia being Raped and I mean RAPED by slave girls, jabba, and some sleazy bouty hunters and perhaps Solo wont be the reason to even use the jabba plot device a capture sex scene with any of the rebels
lets see Leia and her mother action and leia and anakin acion with/or without their mother along with the reveal of that?
Wampa action, SLeazy deals in besbin
an evil sith chick on Dagobath?
Obi wan instructing Leia with the force?
a scene with all the rebel slave this battle will bring?
Han meeting future Mother in law?
Winter raped on Hoth?
Shak ti and Alyua Secula coming back into the picture?
Asshoka?
freeing some rebel slaves while their being trained forceing people to go under cover with the fun sexy training?
revealing the history of the old republic to the new generation in when lots of sex is going on?
(galactic empire the rebels diddnt know a whole hell of alot about what the republic was like but some of the old generation survived better here)
sorry about throwing so many ideas at you but I wanted to give you so ideas to take that you could mess with untill you came up with something you would want to do so have fun!

[GODOFSEXY]

Oh yeah thank you for writeing this and
if the Gang here wants to consider if its right to even do the rebellion while they go to new and intresting place to fuck and be ficked that would be cool
and hey! you could use some gallen Mark/Starkiller stuff with juno Shak ti maris brood and more!

so yeah thanks and Id probably continue but the gang adventuring and falling into sexscapades while rebuilding the rebellion is probably the most logical choice

[jdawgg]

i figure i've waited long enough before asking when the next chapter is coming out. damn but im too busy to help edit though, urban

[UrbanChaos]

I'm leaving for a another work camp this thursday so I hope to have it up this wednesday

[UrbanChaos]

Well bad news, I worked as hard and fast on the next chapter as I could and couldn't finish it up to my standards... I worked pretty much as late as I could tonight but I have to catch a plane to go up north at 2am which is in an hour, I've come to the realization that i just simply cant finish it in that hour so I'm going to nap for an hour and be gone for the next week or so depending on how fast the site goes up... See you then i guess go ahead and post anything you'd like to see in future chapters, I enjoy looking em over and it helps me pump out the chapters faster

[jdawgg]

Well bad news, I worked as hard and fast on the next chapter as I could and couldn't finish it up to my standards... I worked pretty much as late as I could tonight but I have to catch a plane to go up north at 2am which is in an hour, I've come to the realization that i just simply cant finish it in that hour so I'm going to nap for an hour and be gone for the next week or so depending on how fast the site goes up... See you then i guess go ahead and post anything you'd like to see in future chapters, I enjoy looking em over and it helps me pump out the chapters faster

damn bro, wit u gone and me working, its gone quiet.

[Coach8]

tl; dr

[UrbanChaos]

I hope to have the next chapter out this sunday, I've gotten a little lazy lately sorry about the wait

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 32: Frozen Wasteland

By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.





Chewie fished through his tool pouch looking for the right size wrench to break one of the many large bolts in the hyperdrive. His hand bumped the bag and the tools flooded out of the bag banging loudly against the hard metal floor. He roared in frustration and grabbed the bolt with his bare hands and started to twist! His huge biceps flexed but the bolt didn't budge, he roared in anger directing all his energy into his arms focusing on twisting. The bolt squeaked and started to give slowly, Chewie gave a final pull breaking the bolt from its rusted position than unscrewed it with his fingers and set it to the side.


He flexed his hand impressed with the fact he had been able to twist off the bolt with his hands and nothing else, though he was paying the price with sore arms now.


"Easy big guy don't hurt yourself." Cody said casually lying face up on a work bench trying to nap. Chewie barked that he was tougher than that forcing a smile from Chez.
"Well look at that you got a smile from old stone face himself." Cody said poking fun at Chez. Chewie gave a slight chuckle at the joke.


Cody's communicator beeped, making Chewie growl inquisitively.
"Echo three's not responding. Catch ya later C, we gotta sort this mess out." Cody groaned hopping off of the table and heading out of the room, Chez nodded to Chewie and followed his friend out ducking under the door way.


Chewbacca figured it was about time for a break anyway, he walked to the cockpit gently massaging his tense muscles, he flopped down into the copilots chair and looked out the window at the ice and snow. They had been on Hoth for a couple months now and he hated every second of it, though his long fur helped to protect him against the bitter cold he preferred a hot sun and vibrant plant life. All that was here was snow and ice, he understood why they were here of course, with the Empire hot on their tracks they had been forced to go from hiding spot to hiding spot trying to grow stronger in number until they could one day challenge the Empire again.


Chewie made his way back to the hyperdrive and plopped himself down on the floor and continued with his work, since he had gotten to Hoth all he did was work on the Millennium Falcon it seemed to make time go faster when his mind was focused working on a menial task. Anytime his mind wandered it often lead to thoughts about the Empire and the disgraceful position they had been forced into. He was a hunter a warrior! Not some weak prey that scurried around in the shadows, back home on Kashyyyk he had braved the forest floor countless times and fought horrible beasts yet here he was cowering in a cave. He knew he could tear a legion of stormtroopers apart with his two hands, regularly he could've counted on his best friend Han to back him up but lately his buddy seemed more interested in the, babes, as he put it, around the base rather than their friendship and the very real threat of the Empire.


Chewie's ears perked up hearing a noise somewhere in the ship, slowly and quietly he stood up and silently made his way to the door of the engine room. He peered out just in time to catch the sight of a shadow disappear down the hall, he sniffed deeply trying to recognize the scent but it wasn't one he was familiar with. He slowly crept down the hallway stalking the mysterious figure, he noticed a pair of pants carelessly discarded on the floor and picked them up. They were black and made from a tight elastic fabric meant to hug the ass, he had seen pants like these countless times in the local bars he had visited. He moved up a few more steps where a shirt made from similar material was laying, the trail seemed to be leading to Han's quarters but he wasn't here and wasn't supposed to be back for some time. Chewie cautiously entered the bedroom and saw a light on in the refresher.


"Just wait there, I hadn't expected you back this early!" A female voice yelled from the refresher. Chewie did as he was instructed and waited, though he honestly couldn't figure out who could've been expecting him.
"Tada!" A young female Chiss exclaimed bouncing out of the refresher boasting nothing but frilly pink lingerie


"Oh, you're not Han." She said noticing the wookie. Chewie growled an apology trying not to look at the extremely attractive young lady whom he now recognized as Taylyn, one of the many females that fawned over Han.
"No need to apologize, I was just hoping to win Han over with this stunt." She sighed sitting down on the edge of the bed.
"Come on over and sit with me you big lug." She added patting the covers beside her. Chewie sat down awkwardly beside her still trying to avoid as much eye contact as possible but stealing the occasional glance of her near nude blue body.


The pair sat in awkward silence while Chewbacca fidgeted with his hands not sure what to do.
"Do you think Han... likes me?" She said finally breaking the silence. Chewie responded quickly telling her that Han wasn't much of a touchy feely kind of guy and that he preferred to a good fuck rather than a relationship.
"I kind of figured as much." She replied with a hint of sadness in her tone. Chewie quickly back paddled assuring her that any man would be lucky to have her and how beautiful she was.
"Yeah I've heard that line before. You know I even borrowed this pair of underwear from Princess Leia." She chuckled at her own sadness, Chewie growled comfort to her a little taken back that Leia would have something so unpractical.
"What do you think? Is the pink flattering on me." She asked pushing her breasts together. Chewie ran his eyes over her inspecting her long smooth legs to her fantastic hips up to her large perky tits and finally to her luscious lips and only found her to be more sexy than he had previously thought.
"I take it from your large friend that's a yes." She teased seeing Chewie's hard dick.


Without warning she slipped herself between Chewie's legs on her knees, she put one hand on the large meaty shaft and slowly stroked, than added the second realizing her one hand wasn't going to be enough. Her small hands worked hard trying to please the large wookie, she had had a few wookie partners in her day but not even they had been this well hung. Her hands gripped tighter trying to fit the monster into her hands but she just couldn't do it. She worked her hands as hard as she could going from the tip down to the balls as fast as she could trying to please Chewie as best as she could. Chewie gave an appreciative moan watching the little blue Chiss struggle with his manhood, she tipped the cock down and began to lick the head of his huge dick slurping up any pre-cum trying to escape. She worked up the courage to stick the head into her mouth gently sucking it while her hands kept stroking the base of the cock.


Chewie bucked his hips slightly, slowly shoving his cock further down her throat. She did her best to swallow as much as she could, she coughed and spurted as she reached her maximum, she couldn't believe she was still a good five inches from deep throating the whole cock.


Chewie stood up and took Taylyn's head in his big hands, he held her steady while he began to buck his hips forcing his meat as far in as he could before pulling it out and slamming it back in. Spit flowed freely from Taylyn's mouth coating Chewie's pole making it slide easier. He pulled out his stiff cock and playfully smacked her cheeks with his rod making her giggle. Remembering how Leia hadn't let him fuck her snatch because his cock would've torn her pussy apart Chewie began to furiously jack his cock building up his need to cum so he could spray it all over her face.
"Aren't you going to fuck me before you blow your load?" Taylyn asked inquisitively.
Chewie quickly explained to her what had happened with Leia and had figured she would want the same.
"Leia sucked you off!?! Wow, I didn't think the princess ever got horny she's always seemed to up tight." She giggled slightly.
Chewie chuckled agreeing that it had surprised him too.


She laid down on her back and pushed her panties to the side so she could slowly finger her pussy.
"Go ahead big guy." She invited.


Chewie smiled and bent down, he grabbed her thighs and pulled her closer. The tip of his cock prodded the tight lips of her pussy and gradually pushed farther in making Taylyn wince in pain. He managed to fit half of his cock in and paused to ask if she was alright.
"I.. I'm fine, just never had anything this big in me." She stuttered slightly breathing heavily. Pain was showing very visibly on her face now. Chewie continued on pushing as gentle as possible, sweat beaded down her face as Chewie finally slid his massive dick all the way in. Chewie roared that he had managed to fit his meat completely in.
"See not so bad, though I do feel... full." She joked.


Chewie couldn't believe that this small Chiss had managed to fit his entire rod into her, he had never been with a humanoid female that had been able to accomplish such a feat, he swore he could even see a slight bulge , it had been a long time since had even had his whole cock sucked in. He honestly couldn't believe how tight her snatch really was, he began to move his cock slowly inside making sure not to slide out any in fear of not being able to get back in. Taylyn yelped a little feeling Chewie grinding inside her. But the more he moved the more she began to enjoy it and the more she wanted from him.
"Oh Chewie I need you to fuck me now!." She begged desperately, Chewie wanted to argue that they should take it slow but his instincts took over and before he knew it he was sliding his cock in and out. Making his way to a steady easy pace, she screamed in pleasure having never felt so much ecstasy in her life.


Chewie focused on keeping the speed of his thrusts at decent speed and rhythm, the tightness of her sweet pussy pulled him deeper in each time, the squeeze on his skin was almost unbearably pleasurable. It sucked and pulled in new ways with each thrust it was almost painful to pull it back. His balls begged for sweet release which he had managed to deny them so far, it was clear by Taylyn's screams and face that she was enjoying this just as much as he was his mind was foggy with the intense pleasure he was feeling but he could still hear begging for more.


Her hands massaged her breasts hard over the fabric of her bra pushing and pulling them every which way. Finally she pulled the bra underneath her tits exposing her lovely mounds her hands cupped her breasts as she let out a high pitched moan, She instantly found out why as her cum quickly coated his cock and slipped out of little space there was between his dick and her pussy.


Chewie took one look at her sexy body in mid orgasm and couldn't help but cum himself, his thick seed sprayed deep inside her womb he let out a long satisfying roar as he hot sticky cum continued covering inside her. He pulled his cock out with a loud pop and watched his cum flow out freely.


"That was amazing." She panted after several seconds.
"I'd better get out of her before Han gets back." She smiled picking herself up gingerly, she pulled her wet panties off and tossed them onto Han's pillow.
"That should let him know I was here, I'll just have to tell Leia I ruined them." She said before blowing Chewie a kiss and leaving.


Chewie rested for a minute then made his way to his room where he flopped down on his bed exhausted, maybe Hoth wasn't so bad he thought. His mind slowly faded off into the darkness but right before he fell asleep he swore he heard a Wampa roar, he would have to look into it tomorrow he noted...



-Episode 5 has begun and we have many adventures ahead of us, feel free to leave a comment or ask a question!-

[Spycam]

Thanks for another awesome chapter! Definitely worth the wait. There don't seem to be enough Chewie stories around, and it was good to see the poor guy find someone compatible. I'm still reading that last line over and over though... Seems reminiscent of something... Could it be? Dare I hope? Hahaha, can't wait to see what you come up with next.

[loobinator69]

great new chapter.

[user1988]

Excelent work

[WhyAlex]

great story so far. any wampa action coming up?

[gofer]

Great addition. Hopefully the next will be out soon

[UrbanChaos]

^ I'm not to sure when the next chapter will be out hopefully not as long of a wait as last time...
And yes the next chapter will be the wampa chapter

[Spycam]

Dude, as far as I'm concerned you can take your time on this one haha. Hmm, assuming a wampa's cock is proportional to it's body, this is going to be very interesting (in a good way). Thoughts anyone?

[eagen]

I love your story and was hoping for an update on how the next chapter is coming.

[UrbanChaos]

I have one and a half pages down right now, the last few chapters have been around five to six pages but this one will probably end up at four, Leia is close to discovering the wampa. the next chapter MIGHT be out this sunday but I wouldn't get my hopes up

[user1988]

I still have my hopes up that it will be soon.

[UrbanChaos]

so suprisingly enough I may have the next chapter done for tomorrow (sunday 9) while it's not done yet it's very very close, I'll update tomorrow with either the new chapter or some lame excuse why it's not out :tong:

[jdawgg]

then i'll hound you for a week only cuz its been a while since i hounded u last

[UrbanChaos]

So here it is my lame excuse, it's no secret what this chapter is about so i decided to go back and read the orignal this is going to be based off which lead me to rethink the direction of the chapter i wrote another three pages but didn't have time to finish, I thought I was going to home all week but I got busy with other stuff. I can almost guarantee it'll be out next sunday

[Spycam]

Hey, doubling the length of the chapter seems like a pretty good reason not to have finished yet to me. Hooray for more wampa action!

[WhyAlex]

bro! it's monday lol!

[UrbanChaos]

Damn! someone noticed, yeah this chapter is getting away from me it's definitely taking an intresting turn and I'm sure the wait will be worth it

[WhyAlex]

Always is!

[jdawgg]

Damn! someone noticed, yeah this chapter is getting away from me it's definitely taking an intresting turn and I'm sure the wait will be worth it

damn someone beat me to it

[James05griff]

When's the next one

[WhyAlex]

Hopefully soon. come on Urban, you can do it!

[UrbanChaos]

I got moved to a shift job so i work 11 and get three days off plus i no longer have an editor so that adds to the work, starting saturdy will be the first of the three so maybe i will able to finish it up then

[celebfollower]

I love your work this is some of the best stuff on the site. Now I only recently joined so this suggestion may be coming a little late but since you recently mentioned Cody and Chez I was wondering what happened to Aayla Secura and if you were thinking about bringing her back. Aslo I would like to see Qui Gon Gin return because it seems such a shame to rewrite it where he and Aayla Secura live but don't ever come back. As to how they would come back I leave that up to you. Just my 2 cents keep up the great work and keep them cumming!

[bigchief58]

great job keep the chapters coming please

[mesalovessp]

Thank you. this is one of the best stories on the site. you obviously know the star wars storyline very well. is there a website to learn sabaac? i was sort of confuused in the last story.

A great book to read is Darth Bane Path of destruction and theres a whole chapter that is about sabaac. also the main charecter (darth bane) is named des or dessel just like in this story

[UrbanChaos]

A great book to read is Darth Bane Path of destruction and theres a whole chapter that is about sabaac. also the main charecter (darth bane) is named des or dessel just like in this story

*SPOILER!!!!!*

That's because This Des (or dessel) is Bane, in this universe Zannah failed to combat Bane's essence and he took control of her body then at a later date had his body recloned and transfered back into it and has been doing that for a very long time. In that chapter he used his real name because he was undercover, undercover for whom? Well Bane is schedualed to make an apperance within the next three or four chapter to tell us.

END OF SPOILER

As for the next chapter life has just gotten really busy lately and I'm having a hard time finding time to work on it

[eagen]

Okay i know your work has been hectic and all but its been a month. I'm not asking for much but please try to get it out sometime in the next week.

[UrbanChaos]

It will be out tonight, probably more like within the next few hours

[kaidman]

good work

[Spycam]

Can't wait man, the anticipation is killing me.

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 33: WHEN WAMPA'S ATTACK!!!

By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.



*NOTE* This Chapter is based off of some one elses idea and was requested to be remade by me in my own unique way, no harm is intended and I would like to pay tribute to who ever orignally came up with the idea but after trying to find the orignal author all I've found is several different variations by several different people, so here's a subtle hat tilt to you mysterious author.

Also I know the chapters have been coming out slowly and I thank those who have had patience, and I suppose I owe an explanation... I could bitch and moan about my life getting busy or work becoming more difficult and stressfull and more time consuming or I could even whine about losing my editor but I'm not going to. In truth I've begun to lose intrest in this project, so making time for something you don't find as much joy in as you use to doesen't become as pressing. this is the thirty third chapter and has almost spanned two years, this isn't a letter of resegnation as I'm sure many of you are suprised hasn't come yet (Jdawg). But more of me laying my cards on the table I don't want to just disapear into the night as many authore's befor me have but the bottom line is I don't get paid to do this I make time out of my busy schedual to write this for your enjoyment, I know as long as i do this i will have a responseablity to my readers so let me aplogize for all the delays, i'll do my best o speed up my chapters... so where does that leave us? I guess I just hope you understand my postion and please conttinue enjoying



"Another transport was lost this morning." General Rieekan said handing a folder of notes to everyone seated around the table.


Leia quickly thumbed through the folder skimming through the short report.
"That's the eighth one to go dark."
"What's worse is we can't even find any wreckage, there taking everyone alive."


The men at the table continued to argue about various theories but Leia did her best to ignore their jabbering, she already knew the reason, Darth Maul had told her it was to create slaves. Of course she had told all the people at the table this but they simply dismissed her theory.


"Don't you think princess?" Garm Bel Iblis said making everyone else fall silent.
"I'm sorry I wasn't paying attention." Leia admitted.
"I had just recommended we take a break, we've been here for three hours and it seems as though we haven't really gotten anywhere."
"Yes, I think a break would be an excellent." She agreed itching to be anywhere but here.
"Then if there's no objection why don't we reconvene tomorrow?" he suggested.


Everyone at the table murmured in agreement and began to stand up stretching various limbs. Leia quickly excused herself rushing out to the hall where she took a deep breath then slowly began wander down the hall letting the hustle and bustle of people moving past her relax her. Usually she enjoyed debating and arguing about the correct course of action but lately she had grown tired of all the bickering and the little resolutions that had been made. Stress had really started to build up in her and on a barren planet like Hoth there was no way to blow off any steam. She was forced to take care of her image twenty-four seven, she had to set an example for everyone and be the leader they needed. Of course this meant there was a ridiculous amount of scrutiny since she also just happened to be a princess, now she had to be a fearless leader and the perfect princess. Of course this wasn't new to her, she had been dealing with it since she was a little girl, she had learned how to thrive on stress and pressure and now enjoyed it. But lately she just felt tired and overwhelmed by everything that was happening, all she wanted to do right now was relax.


"Princess!" Someone yelled making Leia turn around. She saw her friend Taylyn dressed in a tight pair of black pants and wearing a warm grey thermal coat.
"Taylyn, how are you?" Leia said smiling happy to see one of her few friends.
"Good, busy but good. I just wanted to tell you I returned your items to your quarters." She winked referencing the lingerie she had borrowed to impress Han.
"How did it go over." Leia asked quietly so no one around them could hear.
"Not exactly how I had planned, he never actually showed up." Taylyn admitted a little ashamed.
"Oh, well rarely do things ever go to plan." Leia joked, though truthfully she was slightly happy Han had never shown up, as obnoxious as Han was she couldn't stand thinking about another female fucking him.
"Yeah I guess that's why we're hiding on Hoth, I did leave him your panties I was wearing as souvenir, I hope that's okay." She blushed hoping Leia wouldn't be angry.
"Of course not, I told you you could keep them if you wanted, I never wear them anyways, they were a gift from an old sleazy senator." She laughed a little.
"I know but I still didn't feel good about taking them, I should keep going though, I need to speak with Colonel Uthar."


The two exchanged goodbyes then continued on their separate ways, Leia continued to simply wander down the halls recalling her life before the Rebellion had been so brutally beaten back, about her younger days on Alderaan when she had just joined the senate and the brand new world that had brought. The more she wandered the more she thought, and the more her mind drifted to thoughts about Han. She had never met anyone so infuriating and annoying, yet so intriguing. She didn't know if it was his callous attitude or his bad boy demeanor that kept her thinking about him, she knew as tough as he was there had to be gentlemen somewhere hidden in him and the thought of finding that gentleman excited Leia more than she could describe.


Her pussy ached at the thought of Han ramming his big cock into tight her pussy, a slight moan escaped her lips drawing a few odd glances from people walking by. A bead of sweat rolled down the side of her face as she tried to refocus her mind, but images of cocks swam through her mind. She hadn't been fucked since Maul violated her and time was slowly witling her willpower away her fingers just wouldn't be sufficient for much longer, she didn't even have a dildo to give her relief, normally R2-D2 would take care of her needs but he had been kept very busy lately.


Leia looked down and saw a dark wet stain on her crotch, panicking she looked around and briskly walked over to the only door she could see. Do Not Enter Closed For Construction she read, feeling no other choice she quickly entered and close the large durasteel door. She surveyed the area and saw some pipes and panels mixed with some wires and a few barrels. Not seeing anyone around she swiftly pulled her white pants off and tried to hang them as best as she could, her hope was that the wet mark would dry quickly, she didn't like standing half naked in a construction tunnel where anyone could waltz in whenever they felt but she couldn't risk walking around with the stain on her crotch for everyone to see.


She moved over to the barrels and unzipped her vest placing it on top of them, then plopped herself down on the vest for a little bit of comfort. She now sat in just her white cotton panties and white long sleeved shirt. She kept looking around and noticed they had already put heating vents in this area, other than the occasional draft from down the tunnel she was moderately warm, warm enough to keep her from freezing anyway. She glanced back at her pants and saw the stain was beginning to lift slightly but it was still going to be a long time until she could leave.


Leia hopped of the barrels and figured she might as well explore the cave a little bit further. She rounded a few corners and found a make shift table with some plans for the tunnel on them, she read them finding out that this tunnel had yet to be closed off and was still accessible by the outside which would explain the occasional drafts she had been feeling.


She kept reading but noticed in the corner of her eye a hammer with a rubber handle, she picked it up and inspected it was about the size and shape of a regular humans penis she thought, she shook her head slightly thinking she must be crazy, but hadn't she just been complaining about not being able to satisfy herself. And if the stain on her pants wasn't a serious enough indication that she needed some kind of release, plus she was going to be here with nothing to do for a while with no one around.


She grinded the shaft of the hammer across her cotton panties sending a shiver of anticipation up her body, she could feel her pussy start to leak juices already. She moved her panties to the side a little and barely stuck the tip of the handle in her pussy. She had to admit it felt incredible to have something in her snatch after this long. She pushed it in farther enjoying every tingle she got from her new partner.


Just as she was starting to enjoy herself she heard a roar come from deep within the tunnel. Her blood immediately ran cold, she pulled the handle out of her pussy and slowly started to back away dropping the hammer. A large shadow appeared on the side of the cave wall and was clearly coming towards her. She froze in fear as a Wampa rounded the corner and locked eyes with hers growling.


Her mind raced trying to remember the what she had been taught if she was ever to encounter a Wampa. She lowered her eyes to the ground trying to seem less aggressive then kneeled down onto her knees folding her hands on her thighs. Running would only make things worse she remembered she had to be as least threatening as possible and show she meant no harm or disrespect.


The beast walked up to her menacingly, it leaned in until his face was inches from hers but Leia refused to look up. She could feel it's hot breath against her as it sniffed her. The beast circled Leia a few times obviously unsure of what to do with her it stopped in front of her and let out a horrible howl making Leia flinch slightly. The beast waited for more of a reaction but seeing that he wasn't going to get one he carefully placed his hand on Leia's cheek curiously turning her face back and forth as if he was trying to get a better view of her. The Wampa grabbed the hammer and dropped it almost a foot away from Leia then sat cross legged in front of her.


Leia continued to sit in a kneeling position with her eyes firmly locked to the ground prompting the Wampa to poke the hammer closer to her. For the first time her eyes flickered up trying to gauge the Wampa, the beast caught Leia's quick look and gave a low grumpy growl. Leia held her breath hoping she hadn't just pissed the beast off even more, the Wampa grabbed her chin and roughly forced it up but as soon as he let go Leia would immediately look back down to the ground. The two battled this way for several minutes until Leia finally kept her head up but made sure her eyes were still focused down. the Wampa tilted his head down trying to look into her eyes which she kept quickly averting. The Wampa grew tired of the game relatively quickly and sat back for a second, then picked up the hammer and fidgeted with it in his hands, thinking for a moment he poked the handle into Leia's thigh.
"Quit it!" Leia snapped. After several more pokes Leia finally smacked the hammer away. The Wampa growled again and poked higher up on her thigh.
"I'm serious knock it off!" Leia barked. The beast poked one more time but this time he made sure he aimed at her panties.
"Stop doing that!" She said wrenching the hammer away from the Wampa. He howled pointing at the hammer then back down to her underwear.


Leia's forehead crinkled trying to put the pieces together.
"You're not seriously suggesting what I think you are." Leia questioned, but all she received back was a confused expression from him. She slid the handle of the hammer through her hand seriously considering the idea the Wampa had given her. If she continued on simply trying not to make him angry there was chance it would actually piss him off, she had been told that Wampa's assessed their prey within the first few minutes the decision to kill was made relatively quick. The fact that a curious Wampa had found her may have been a stroke of luck and there was no telling how long that luck would hold out.


She sat back a little and spread her legs open so the Wampa could get a better view. She took a deep breath then moved her panties to the side like she had done previously, then slowly inserted the handle back into her pussy. She slowly moved it back and forth trying to keep her wits about her and not get to absorbed by the pleasure. The Wampa watched intently, he still seemed somewhat confused but was definitely enjoying the show in front of him. Leia let out a quiet moan as she pushed the handle deeper, she couldn't help herself anymore she didn't care how much danger she was in she just wanted to feel good for once. She started to pump the handle faster forcing it in and out at a rapid rate, her breathing had become erratic as pleasure pulsed through her body but she just couldn't get the handle deep enough or fast enough. She fell onto her back with her hips arched up desperately trying to ram the handle in as hard as she could. Her moans grew louder with each thrust of the handle, it tickled her walls in way she hadn't felt in a long time. Her whole body began to tingle as her body neared orgasm, Leia gave one final shove pushing the handle as deep as it would go sending her into a body shaking orgasm, her juices flooded out of her pussy spilling onto the ground around her.


Leia laid there for several seconds panting from lack of breath, then sat back up to see the Wampa slowly stroking his rather large cock still watching her intently. She was slightly shocked to see him masturbating to her, he may not have complete knowledge of what she had been doing but it obviously excited him. She carefully scooted towards him drawing an angry glare but she continued to proceed anyway, when she got close enough she slowly reached her arm out making the Wampa growl in a low threatening manner but she simply continued to ignore him. Her hand gently clasped around his manhood forcing a delightful murmur from him.
"See not so bad big fella." She said gently stroking his cock. The Wampa relaxed a little but remained wary of her touch.


Leia continued a slow stroke traveling from the base of the cock up to the head were she'd rub her palm on the tip a couple of times then repeated. She looked the Wampa over for the first real time without being frightened, he was probably two feet taller than Chewie and more muscular but she was now sure it hadn't reached full adulthood it was most likely in the middle of his teen years. His white coat covered his whole body minus his face, feet, hands and now cock that just seemed to grow straight out of his fur. His cock was about the same length as Chewie's but not the same thickness, while her hand didn't fit all the way around it she could still jack it off with one hand with relative ease. She continued slowly jacking of while the beast got a little more comfortable with her touch, the Wampa did seemed to becoming more and more relaxed with each stroke so Leia finally decided to speed her hand up a little bit making slight speed increments every few seconds until her hand was furiously pumping away.


The Wampa had clearly become very comfortable with what Leia was doing, he had leaned back a fair way and opened his legs much wider allowing Leia better access, but still watched her very carefully. Leia had crawled between his legs and put the tip of the cock into her lips gently sucking on it while her hand continued to pump. She worked the dick further into her mouth and deeper into her throat until she had about half of it comfortably in her mouth. She started to bob her head up and down sucking off the top half of his cock while her hand continued working the bottom half, spit and saliva trickled down the cock from her mouth which got picked up by her hand and helped lube up his large poll. The room had become completely silent other than the sound of Leia's greedy slurps and the occasional gurgle in her throat. They continued on this way for some time, Leia had no idea how long Wampa's were suppose to last and didn't even know how close he was to cumming. Out of nowhere the Wampa suddenly jumped up and held onto her head to make sure his meat stayed in her mouth. he moved over top of Leia who was still kneeling on the ground but now had her back and neck leaned much farther back, so far back that she had to hang onto his legs for support, then the Wampa began to thrust his hips forcing his cock deep down her throat and then back to the surface and a rapid rate, and at such an awkward position Leia quickly found it hard to swallow soon her spit began to overflow from her mouth making the cock and her cheeks extra messy. The Wampa seemed to grow tired of the face fucking fairly quickly whether it was because he wasn't getting enough pleasure from it or he had grown restless she really couldn't say. He had pulled his dick out of her mouth and allowed the spit that was leftover on his cock drip onto her face as he looked around.


Seeming to spot whatever it was he was looking for he carefully picked Leia up and carried her over to a makeshift table where he bent her over, Leia quickly gripped the edges of the table preparing herself for the inevitable next step. She could already feel his thick cock prodding at her tight snatch, and then with one mighty thrust he rammed his entire cock as far as he could into Leia's pussy. She shrieked in surprise and pain not at all prepared for him to enter her all at once and he had already begun to thrust in and out as hard as he could without mercy. Leia's body shook uncontrollably from each thrust , the Wampa had planted his hands on the table allowing himself to thrust much harder and much faster a very loud smacking sound had formed from his balls slamming into her skin. Leia's body was quickly going numb from all the pleasure and pain she was receiving at once she had never been fucked so cruelly and without any care. Her pussy was feeling the most raw form of pleasure she had ever experienced. He had slowed his thrusts by a tremendous amount and now seemed to be enjoying each time he slammed his hips in and forcing his cock deep inside Leia.


Leia panted waiting for what seemed like an excruciating amount of time for each thrust but was rewarded each time with pleasure that radiated throughout her body. Then without warning he pulled his cock free and began jerking it until cum spilled out and covered her clothed backside. Leia's mind began to clear slightly and she remembered reading about the mating habit of the Graiveh on Alderaan, they were often thought to be the next evolutionary step for the Wampa since they shared hundreds of common habits and traits the Graiveh was almost classified as a sentient being falling short of only a few classifications, she remembered that if a Graiveh came inside a female it meant they were mates but if he came on her it meant she now belonged to him as nothing more than a sex slave and if he came on the ground it meant he chose neither and the female was free to find a new mate. Leia hoped for her sake they didn't share this trait.


However the Wampa seemed determined to prove her wrong, he picked her underneath one arm and carried her deeper into the cave. Letting Leia wondering just where he was taking her to...

[jdawgg]

Okay i know your work has been hectic and all but its been a month. I'm not asking for much but please try to get it out sometime in the next week.

dude, most ppl have lives to live, other than being on here 24/7

[eagen]

My last comment was rude and out of line. If you wish to stop then by all means do, i have no wish to impede you in any way. I would just hate to see another artist of such skill disappear.

[UrbanChaos]

^ I wouldn't be so sorry about it, you're the reason it came out that night.

[RAT25]

So... I guess I'm going to be the one to break the ice, so... What direction are you going to take this now, UrbanChaos? Any hints at what the next chapter might or might not be about?

[kaidman]

hey I just want to pop in and say great work on this thread I love to see a story teller make a whole series of master pieces you ever think of doing one on what if Jango survived against Mace

[UrbanChaos]

^Jango did survive in this series, though I'm not sure that was ever adressed (bonus points to who ever can tell me), it will be brought up later on though. As for a Jango series I'm not sure if that will ever happen if it did it would more likely be a lead up to his death. lf i ever do a long series again it would probably be a last airbender series

@Rat25 the next chapter will be somewhat of a set up for the rest if the movie, it will be the last chapter on hoth and will touch on the surviving jedi as celebfollower had mentioned earlier (post #554) it will be somewhat of a setup chapter

[kaidman]

well good luck I look forward to reading it and seeing your last airbender series you thinking about doing one on Korra I like her better than Aang and if you need help with this I can help I am a moderator and a friend

[UrbanChaos]

I did actually write a short story on her already it can be found here http://www.sexstoriespost.com/forums/showthread.php/32454-Avatar-The-Legend-Of-Korra and the thought of doing a series on her has crossed my mind, it's more of a lack of time rather then a lack of ideas. perhaps we could team up on it.

[kaidman]

I did actually write a short story on her already it can be found here http://www.sexstoriespost.com/forums/showthread.php/32454-Avatar-The-Legend-Of-Korra and the thought of doing a series on her has crossed my mind, it's more of a lack of time rather then a lack of ideas. perhaps we could team up on it.

yeah i read it you got quite a gift and coming from me that means alot

[Lazerous]

Hope another chapter is coming soon!

[UrbanChaos]

Good news everyone! The next chapter will be out by either late tomorrow night (saturday nov 2) or some time sunday (nov 3)!

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 34: Saved By The Wookie

By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.







"You all have been called here because General Kenobi believes he has come up with a suitable solutions for the problems we've recently encountered. So without further adieu, General please take it away." General Rieekan Said to the group of people sitting at the table, as he sat down Obi wan stood up looking at the people he had asked to attend. Cody and Chez sat ridged focused completely on him as soldiers of the old Republic had been taught to, Luke was sitting quietly fiddling with a nearby pen, Chewbacca sat next to Luke seemingly happy to be there however his partner Han had put his feet comfortably up on the table looking bored.
"I've asked for you all to attend because I believe it is this group that will play a dramatic role in balancing the force. I'm sure you all know by now that the Empire has been seen in this sector of space and it appears as though they are looking for something." Obi Wan explained.
"Couldn't they simply be trying to negotiate a takeover of Bespin, it would make the most sense. Lots of raw resources and people are there." Luke responded.
"Impossible, a buddy of mine runs Cloud City he'd die before handing Bespin over to them." Han cut in.
"Both of you make good points but the level of activity suggests they know we're inhabiting this sector. So we've decided to evacuate, that's where you come in Cody, you'll be in charge of the evacuation." Obi Wan continued.
"I'm flattered but as a commander I'm not sure I'm qualified." Cody disputed.
"That's correct, that's why General Kenobi here put you up for immediate promotion to Colonel. Congratulations Colonel Cody." Rieekan interjected.
"I guess I accept then." Cody beamed with pride.
"We're going to evacuate while the Princess is still missing!" Luke practically bursted from the seams.
"No Luke we're still looking for her but we need to be prepared. Plus Chewbacca has volunteered himself and Han to stay behind and find her." Obi Wan continued to explain.
"Oh he did did he, I'll have to thank my good buddy for volunteering us." Han grinned sarcastically giving Chewie a hard punch to his arm.
"I'll be leaving immediately to find some old friends, I know now that if we want to win this war we're going to need some Jedi help."
"Will I be going with you?" Luke asked.
"No you'll be going to Dagobah to finish your training, I've already arranged it." Obi Wan answered.
"Dagobah? But your my master, I want to go with you." Luke whined.
"I won't have time to train you Luke, the path I am embarking is fraught with danger it is my destiny not yours, I will explain more after the meeting. You all have your tasks it's best to get to them as soon as possible. Dismissed." Obi wan said waving Luke to the side of the room.


Chewie quickly got out of his chair and moved into the hallway hoping to avoid Han's wrath.
"Hold it right there bolt brain." Chewie heard from behind him, Chewie turned very slowly and innocently to look at his partner.
"Don't try to act innocent with me! What's the big idea volunteering us to search for that high maintenance princess!" Han screamed at Chewie, Chewie quickly told him that it was their duty to help, Leia was there friend after all they had to help.
"Don't pull that heroic nonsense with me, we're in it for the money remember. Grab your gear, I'm blasting off in ten minutes with or without your big furry behind." Han snarled.
"Even you can't be that heartless Han." Cody said from behind Han.


Han instantly whirled around ready for a verbal battle.
"Don't play high and mighty with me Cody, your old battle field heroics are outdated and impractical." Han practically spat.
"Maybe, but that's not my point. You're scared Han, scared that your becoming attached to people. Your smuggling days are over its time you face that."
"That's complete garbage, back me up on this Chez." Han said looking to Chez who had quietly been leaning up against the wall.


Chez locked eyes with Han with an icy stare as if he was looking at his very soul, a chill crawled up Han's back.
"I can respect that." Han admitted finally breaking away from Chez's icy gaze
"Let's go find the ice princess before I change my mind." He grumbled.


The group went there different ways, and Han begrudgingly fell in behind Chewie who decided the best way to find her would be to track her since everyone else had already tried searching for her. He started in the last place she had been seen, in a hallway where she had spoken to Taylyn.


"I hate to break it to you detective but this hallway has already been scoured for clues." Han grumbled. Chewie ignored Han's complaints as he bent down and looked at the lightly snow covered ground for tracks, he wrinkled his nose seeing so many sets of prints unable to sort the patterns properly, to many people had trampled this area in the time of Leia's disappearance. Chewie closed his eyes shutting out the noise around him, then took a deep breath, scents filled his nostrils and he went about the tedious task of sorting them out as he had been taught when he was first learning how to hunt. Since then he had almost mastered the art, he first disposed of the scents he didn't recognize erasing them from his memory. Then released Han's and his own smell, he then carefully sorted through the various friends he had made on Hoth eliminating them one by one until he finally narrowed it down to two. Both were extremely close and they both had the unusual scent of arousal lingering on them. He was confident one belonged to Taylyn and the other to Leia, knowing Taylyn had gone east down the corridor and Leia had gone west he latched onto the scent heading west and slowly began to follow it, his eyes still closed hoping Han would watch out for him. He traveled several meters down the hallways before hitting his head on a metal door snapping him out of his daze. He looked up at Han was with an angry glare for not warning him to which got him a nonchalant shrug. He looked back down at the ground and found a partial print that was obviously a few days old. It was small enough to be Leia's and fit the timeline of her disappearance.


"You think she went in there? Why would she go into an incomplete hall?" Han asked with curiosity creeping into his voice. Chewie gave a growl of curiosity agreeing with Han.


Han opened the door and stepped through with Chewie close behind, Han wandered farther down but Chewie had already spied what was giving off the scent he had been following. Laid out in some barrels were Leia's white pants, Chewie growled for Han's attention who quickly came over and was obviously stunned by what he found.
"Why are Leia's pants here?"
Chewie mumbled that he was just as confused, but the trail didn't end there. Chewie continued to lead the way down the hall carefully following her scent until they reached the edge of the tunnel where they were abruptly met with the blizzarding outside. Chewie informed Han that the trail went dead here most likely due to the outside winds.
"So she went outside? Why? She's not stupid, are you sure she went out here." Han questioned not as certain in his partners ability anymore. Chewie quickly assured Han that this was defiantly where the trail ended.
"I know I called her the ice queen but this is ridiculous." Han murmured.
"I think I see a cave not too far out there, if we hurry we won't completely freeze." Han said, Chewie agreed and the two began to trudge through the snow making their way as fast as possible to the other side.


The duo were instantly hit with a wall of foul stench as they entered the cave.
"Did someone cut open a Tauntaun in here?" Han gagged covering his nose with his hands, Chewie did the same then slowly continued into the cave unsure of what was next. Chewie could swear he could hear low growls deep within the cave.


Just as the smell seemed unbearable they rounded the corner to see Leia, she was lying in the middle of a sort of chamber on a makeshift blanket. Her clothes had been ripped to shreds but some of them still barely clung to her.
"Leia!" Han exclaimed in a worried voice.
"Han!" Leia said excitedly happy to see her friends had found her.
"You look.. sticky." he said noting her appearance.
"It's these damn Wampa's, they come in here jerk off and blow there load all over me." Leia spat angrily.


Han instantly burst out laughing at her predicament.
"It's not funny! Listen, do you hear that? Ones comes now." Leia huffed. Chewbacca instantly got into a fighting stance prepared to brawl.
"Don't worry Chewie they come in here horny and half dazed." Leia sighed calming Chewie's nerves.


True to form a large Wampa wandered in from the other end of the chamber, his large cock fully erect. He stopped directly in front of Leia and waited. A long silence grew as the Wampa refused to move or make another movement.
"Ok so maybe they don't all jerk off." Leia groaned before placing one hand on the Wampa's cock and stroking it rapidly. She gave the head a quick lick before it bursted shooting cum all over Leia coating her in a fresh batch of cum from head to toe. Then he simply lumbered away.
"When I got here they're was maybe a dozen waiting for me, after I... pleasured... them all they left me alone for a while then one by one they would return, I'd help them out again and they'd leave each time there visits grow shorter and shorter." She explained somewhat unaffected by her situation.


"Well hate to break it to you but the party's over, the base is probably evacuated by now and we're here to take you off this rock." Han said stifling a laugh.
"My hero." Leia rolled her eyes sarcastically.


She picked herself up and but the make shift blanket around her as best as she could and wobbled over to the two obviously weak from the past couple days, Han assumed she probably hadn't eaten or drank anything since she disappeared and the cold probably hadn't helped. When she finally hobbled over to them Chewie picked her up and cradled her in his arm, she instantly nuzzled into him for warmth.


Without a word the trio left the cave and made their way back out into the blizzard and finally into the original service tunnel where they were met by a blaring alarm.
"I think the Empire found us." Han shouted over the noise.


Han continued to lead the way carefully checking hallway corners, every now and again a group of Stormtrooper would hustle by while the three hid. After a painfully carefully trip through the now Empire infested base they had finally made it to the Millenium Falcon. They swiftly boarded and Han punched it for hyperspace, the Empires blockade was no match for the Falcon's speed.


The Falcon entered hyper space with a jaw rattling shake.
"Chewie! What's going on with the ship!" Han yelled as the quakes grew in intensity. Chewie roared back immediately.
"You Didn't fix it! What do you mean you didn't fix it!" He screamed. Han began to panic watching his gauges slow climb into the red zone. Then an idea sprang into his head. He reset the coordinates for Cloud city, one of the closet places nearby. Then diverted as much power as he could to keeping the engines cold while simultaneously shutting off any excess systems hoping it was enough to limp the ship to Bespin. The gauges stopped climbing but sat dangerously close to the red. Han let out a sigh of relief leaning back in his chair.
"Han?" A quiet voice said from the door.
"Yeah." He answered swiveling around in his chair to see half of Leia's body peering in from the doorway, she was hopelessly trying to cover her basically nude body, the scrapes of leftover clothing were less then useless at their current state.
"I know it's a long shot but... you wouldn't happen to have any spare clothes." She said quietly obviously embarrassed.
"I'm not sure, I suppose we can check." Many sarcastic comments popped into his head as he lead her to his quarters but decided to keep them to himself.


They entered his room and he immediately began to root through his drawers for things that might fit her, the awkwardness in the room was more than obvious between the two.
"I left most of my stuff on the base." Han laughed awkwardly.
"Here's what I've got though." He continued passing her a pair of pants, one of his old vests and the pink thing Taylyn had left for him, doing his best not to glance as her disheveled state.


She took the clothes and entered his refresher, Han stood in the room awkwardly not sure if he was supposed to leave or even what he should do. He wasn't a rookie with women, usually he had no problem in situations like this. But every time he was with Leia it was like all of his experience suddenly vanished. He could hear the water in the refresher running and he knew his time for making a decision was running out, should he quietly slip out? Or pretend to busy himself with something. Before he could decide she came out wiping her face with a wash cloth.
"Oh, you're still here?" Leia asked noticing him.
"Yeah... I just wanted to make sure the clothes fit." Han covered. He noticed that the clothes didn't really fit her petite body, she had one hand holding up the black pants while the other tried to keep the vest closed.
"Well they don't really, but thanks anyways." She joked.
"You've never looked better in my opinion." He mocked.
"At least I look better than you." She huffed back.
"Oh real original your highness." Han said his tone rising.
"Like that 'your highness' joke isn't old!" She scoffed taking a step closer.
"Well maybe if you didn't act so uptight all the time!" He snapped closing the gap between him and her.
"Uptight! Would an uptight person do this!" She practically shouted before planting a long kiss on his lips.


Han instantly pulled her in closer robbing her of another several more kisses. His hands squeezed her ass tightly while she kissed up his neck.
"What are we doing?" She asked between kisses.
"I don't care." He said slipping his hand down the front of her pants and rubbing her clit, making her shudder in pleasure.


His fingers entered her pussy and rotated making her fall into his chest with a whine. He slowly thrusted his fingers in and out drawing out the sticky juices from her pussy, Han pushed Leia back towards the bed never taking his fingers out of her snatch. She flopped onto her back squirming from his fingers, Han climbed on top of her keeping his head by her snatch but hovering his fully erect cock just above her mouth.
"Sixty nine position? you're such a gentlemen." Leia rolled her eyes.
"How come you should be the only one to get pleasure?" He snapped back.
"Because I'm the hmmf!" Before Leia could finish her sentence Han had thrusted his cock down into her throat gagging her.
"Looks like your mouth is good for something." He teased feeling her tongue slurping around his dick. Leia narrowed her eyes at the comment and softly bite down on Han's meat.
"OUCH! I'm sorry ok!" Han quickly repented, feeling satisfied with the apology Leia eased of her bite and resumed work with her tongue swirling it around the shaft. One of her hands began to massage his balls while the other traced his stomach. Han however put his hands to work on her pussy, he pushed two fingers in and out of her snatch while his other hand focused on her clit, his tongue licked any spare place it could find. As much as Han annoyed Leia she had to admit he had quite a talent for pleasuring a pussy. However she was determined not to be outdone, she moved one hand to the shaft of his cock stroking it while her lips suctioned around the tip her tongue tickling the edges of the head. Han stepped up his game forcing his tongue into her pussy swirling it around inside. Leia pulled the cock out of her mouth completely and started licking from the base of the cock up the side to the head where she would spin her tongue on the top for a few seconds before traveling back down where she would suck on his balls then repeat the whole action. Han forced three fingers into her tender pussy and increased the speed of his thrust, he began bringing his tongue out of her pussy giving it a few licks then reinserting it. Leia could feel her body tingling with the need to orgasm, she couldn't cum before him he would never let it go. Leia forced the cock back into her mouth and pushed it deep into her throat deepthroating it as fast as she could. Han was completely washed over with pleasure, the feeling of her tight warm mouth was too much to bare.


Han released his load down Leia's throat at the exact same time Leia climaxed spraying her juices with a load moan. Han rolled off her sliding his cock free of her mouth, he laid on his back panting exhausted from the all the events of the day.
"Not so fast." Leia said climbing on top of Han lowering her pussy onto Han's semi erect cock. She guided the cock into her still dripping snatch, she started to bounce up and down enveloping his cock. Han could feel his dick starting to stiffen again, Leia interlocked her fingers with his gaining support so she could bounce much faster, but also because she simply desired to hold Han's hands for reasons she didn't fully understand. Leia continued to pound up and down, her body sweating from exhaustion. Han started to thrust his hips up meeting her body half way starting a loud slapping sound of skin on skin contact, her tits bounced wildly. Han could feels his ball tightening then the sweet release of his cum flooding into Leia's snatch, Leia laid down on top of Han hugging him tightly as his cum sprayed into her.


Neither of them said anything they just stayed hugging, Han knew Bespin was, maybe another twenty minutes but right now the only thing he cared about was the women in his arms...

[jdawgg]

Good news everyone! The next chapter will be out by either late tomorrow night (saturday nov 2) or some time sunday (nov 3)!

sunday isn't (nov 3) its (nov 4)

[loobinator69]

great new chapter, as always. It's been a while since i've been on here, and i'm sad to see you losing interest in this, but i understand.

[eagen]

What happened to this forum? There used to be great conversations that people had while they waited, it was a great place. Now we all just wait for the next chapter and only speak up to give a few half-assed compliments. It's no wonder Urbanchaos is getting disheartened with this story.

[RAT25]

@eagen Actually, it's just that we know that constantly asking him how far he is with the next chapter is sort of pointless. Most of, if not all of the people who used to post frequently know by now that Urbanchaos does not have as much time to dedicate to writing these as he did when he started. If you look back a few pages, you will see how Urbanchaos went as far as to ask for outside help write these as he cannot spend the same amount of time that he used to. It's not that we don't appreciate the portion of his free time he does dedicate to this, it's just that we know that he is finding it harder and harder to find the time to write each new chapter, and we respect him because of it and tend to not bug him about it as much as we used to.

[eagen]

I'm not saying that we are all disrespecting him it's that the atmosphere of this place has deteriorated from a fun social thing to a cold access to an amazing story. I just hope that we can get this back to how it was before.

[UrbanChaos]

^ the reason you're feeling this is because it's true but for a number of reasons, the regulars that drop by that talk and discuss get busy too, I know jdawgg in particular has gotten fairly tied up with other things recently as I'm sure many others are to. Another reason is there are a lot of lurkers who enjoy what I write but have no desire to start a conversation, I used to leave a question at the bottom of each chapter asking what people wanted to see what people liked what people were excited for... I stopped doing this because it always went unanswered. In short there are a few people here who chime in and when they feel they have nothing to add no one picks up the slack

[kaidman]

I am quite sorry things have gotten like this here I like reading your stories because you put great detail into the story and always impress me with your ideas I would like to read more of your work but don't rush yourself I can't respond all the time as being a mod eats up my time but I wouldn't change it for the world as it allows me to help all members also if you have a problem come to me and I will fix it

[loobinator69]

Most of the regulars who used to post have just started to get busy in life. I have, jdawgg has, urban has. It's not that we don't want to have conversations, it's just real life gets in the way.

[jdawgg]

and real life is more important. as was said twice now, i've been busy. i have work to contend with, and helping my wife raise our daughter.

[UrbanChaos]

UPDATE! so i feel like an update is due on the next chapter, to be honest its not even close to being finished i'm about half a page in. This is due to a number of reasons 1) oil field companies are coming to there end of the year budgeting so their trying to spend any extra money keeping contractors like myself super busy so I have zero days off until Christmas rolls around. 2) I've had trouble writting this chapter and don't really have a concrete idea i've gone back and forth on three different ideas and started writting each one before scraping it and starting over, so here's what we're going to do eagen wanted to see more conversation on this thread and dammit I'd like to see some more as well so you all had better fucking vote!

heres your choices
A) We go with Luke to Dagobah where he gets some training and meets a mysterious person who gives back story to Darth Sidious
B) We go to Cloud city where the Empire is waiting for our trio

both will be made but I cant decide where to begin the faster and more of you vote the quicker we all get a new chapter, I want at the very minimum 10 votes and will not even think of releasing anything until that small goal is reached, the thread says a 130 000 views so I really dont think it should be that hard

[kaidman]

cloud city definitely

[celebfollower]

cloud city

[Akota1991]

Cloud city

[eagen]

Cloud city

[RhysMagi]

Cloud City would be fun since I do believe that is where the movies went first. I could be wrong though.

[kaidman]

its where we see Boba Fett in action

[jdawgg]

cloud city definitely
i totally agree

Cloud City would be fun since I do believe that is where the movies went first. I could be wrong though.

it showed Luke going to Dagobah before it showed cloud city.

[hamof]

cloud city, i think we have a majority from all those that care enough to answer here.

[RAT25]

8th vote for Cloud City right here.

[WhyAlex]

9 votes

[loobinator69]

I suppose i'll vote cloud city, although dagobah came first in the movies. I'm already outvoted anyway :/

[Spycam]

Hey people, I'm back. My vote goes to Dagobah, because 1) I'm more curious about what you'll do with a part of the movies that only had Luke and Yoda originally, and
2) We haven't really seen that much of Luke so far.

[loobinator69]

I agree, just that opinion is horribly outvoted and democracy always wins.

[mesalovessp]

cloud city so we can see some lando action(and possibly a lobot cyborg thing or boba fett?)
Also i dont think ive thanked u for the story so here it is:thanks for teh awesome story.
:thumb:
p.s. an idea tht i had was leia misses han and somehow he had a boner when frozen and she fucks him while hes in carbonite. again i dont even know if han will be frozen, so theres a thought for you.

[Trogdor39]

Cloud city

[UrbanChaos]

So I guess an update is due, Cloud city won (my vote was dagobah) I'm very grateful for everyone that voted and thanks for your input. The 2 year anniversary is on he 24th and that's when the next chapter will be up. I realize that's still a long time away especially including how long it's been already, this chapter is going to be quite long I'm on page six now and it's looking like it'll be 2-3 pages longer. Anyways for all the patience I've decided to release a bit of it early please enjoy.

"Hold on, I'll try to find the lights." Han said.
"No need." A voice said. The door behind them slid shut and the lights flashed on blinding them momentarily. Han blinked several times regaining his sight, a black hooded man sat at the head of a long white sleek rectangle table.
"Please, sit down. Join me for a meal." He gestured.
"Actually we're late for a dinner date with a friend of mine, so we'll just be leaving." Han politely declined, he tried to open the door to find it had been locked tight. He turned back to the man and saw six storm troopers scurry out behind him and lastly Boba Fett stepping out of his hiding spot and taking his spot to the right of the man.
"Well, maybe we could stay for a minute." Han said sarcastically.

[The Sandman]

Thanks for the story to this point, it is great. I cannot wait for the next part.

[UrbanChaos]

So I'm just going to quick update here, the next chapter 35 will be out tomorrow (Dec 24) for the second year anniversary at 7:00pm mountain time zone

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 35: Dinner Date

By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.




*So it's been two years since I first started this thread... wow, not sure where the time went, thanks for all those who have enjoyed this series over the time I've enjoyed writting it. As for the future of this thread it's hard to say where it's going to go, the most likley scenerio is it'll run for another year then by dec 24 2013 (yes one year from today can you guess why?) I'll release the last chapter. It's hard to say for sure things can change but at that point I'll probably move on to an ATLA thread like I said its tough to say for sure no use worrying about the future, as for now please enjoy and happy anniversary :icon069:


Chewie covered his ears with his hands letting out a low grown of displeasure, the constant thump thump thump from the bedroom next to his was really starting to get on his nerves. Han and Leia had been constantly fucking since they had landed on Cloud city and he was growing very tired of it. He was happy that Han and Leia had managed to stop bickering constantly but hearing there moans and groans wasn't much better.


He flicked off the tv he was watching and headed out the door to roam around, he had to admit he was quite impressed by the city. He wandered down the halls taking in the breath taking landscape outside the big windows, the clouds outside were shimmering gold reflecting the sunset. He had been here for only two nights yet he knew this time of day would always be his favorite, the city got really quiet, the clouds held the beautiful gold colour, and you could just barely hear the wind whistling outside shaping the clouds in amazing swirls.


A shadow caught Chewie's eyes but before he could focus in on it it had vanished around the corner. Intrigued Chewie rounded the corner but saw no one there, he could hear the clanging of heavy boots further down one of the intersecting hallways. He moved quickly wanted to catch a glimpse of this phantom, he poked his head around the corner just in time to see a boot disappear into a doorway. Chewie scratched his head wondering if he should continuing following this person, it really wasn't any of his business to find out whoever this person was and he really didn't know why he was following them either. Maybe he just loathed the idea of going back to the room, maybe he was enjoying the feeling of hunting someone again, or maybe he was just bored. It didn't make a difference at this point he had nothing better to do. He walked over to the door and read the aurebesh on the plaque outside the door. It was a dining room, his stomach growled only giving him more reason to go in.


The door slid open and he stepped into a pitch black room, odd he thought why would a dining room be dark?
"Don't move." A voice snarled in the darkness, Chewie could feel an EE-3 carbine rifle being pushed into his ribs. The lights flicked on and Chewie looked over to the man that was forcing the rifle into his side and was left stunned, the man was none other than Boba Fett.

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"Hey Chewie me and Leia were thinking about grabbing a bite to eat, you in?" Han yelled pulling his leg into his trouser. He waited several seconds for an answer but was met with silence. Han walked across the apartment buttoning up his white shirt.
"Didn't you hear me?" Han said poking his head into Chewie's room, but found no one there.
"Hey Leia do you know where Chewie is?"
"I don't know if you noticed but I was a little distracted with your cock in my mouth to keep track of the wookie." Han smiled hearing Leia's joking tone.
"I'm sure he's fine." She said stepping out of her room wearing a tight red dress. Han's jaw nearly hit the floor seeing her all dolled up, her perky tits were begging to bust out and her ass curved perfectly.
"Are you going to just stand there or are you going to accompany me to dinner?" Leia asked putting her hands on her hips.
"I uh, yeah. I mean... Let's go." Han said nervously struggling to hold onto any words.


Leia linked arms with Han's like she had been taught so many times in etiquette class, though Han obviously didn't even know the basics in escorting a women, his posture was slightly slouched, his arms were loose and his face expression was almost bored. Leia couldn't help but smile she liked that Han had no knowledge of the finer things, it meant she could be much more relaxed around him.


Leia lead him down the corridors to the dining room, it was fairly close so it didn't take long. The door opened and the room was pitch black.
"Hold on, I'll try to find the lights." Han said unlinking arms.
"No need." A voice said. The door behind them slid shut and the lights flashed on blinding them momentarily. Han blinked several times regaining his sight, a black hooded man sat at the head of a long white sleek rectangle table.
"Please, sit down. Join me for a meal." He gestured.
"Actually we're late for a dinner date with a friend of mine, so we'll just be leaving." Han politely declined the offer, he tried to open the door to find it had been locked. He turned back to the man and saw six storm troopers scurry out behind him and lastly Boba Fett stepping out of his hiding spot and taking his spot to the right of the man.
"Well, maybe we could stay for a minute." Han said sarcastically.

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Chewie roared banging on the steel door with his hands demanding to be let out of his prison cell.
"Would you quit that banging, you're giving me a headache." A familiar voice said from the back of the cell. Chewie growled at the voice telling whoever it was to come out of the corner. The man stepped out and Chewie instantly recognized him, it was their old friend Lando Calrissan, though he didn't look very well, he was badly bruised and had a few cuts that had yet to heal. Chewie picked him up in a big hug and asked him what he was doing here.
"When the Empire showed up they thought it would be in their best interest to lock me up." Lando explained.
"But don't worry I've got a plan." He winked.

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The awkwardness was unbearable, when the man had offered them dinner he wasn't kidding. They were actually eating nerf steaks as if nothing was wrong.
"May I ask a question?" Leia finally said breaking the silence.
"Of course my dear." The man answered cutting another piece of his steak.
"Who are you?"
"How rude of me not to introduce myself, please forgive me." The man said warmly before removing his hood. It took Leia a minute to realize he was a Nagai, an almost humanoid species that had more angular faces, jet black hair and pale skin. They had become well known for their forgetfulness and often psychotic nature.
"I am Darth Rikan." He smiled taking a sip of his wine.
"What happened to Maul?" Leia continued to ask.
"Am I not satisfactory?" The man asked his smile fading.
"That's not what she meant Rikan." Han cut in, having dealt with Nagai before he knew how quick of a trigger they had.
"Darth Rikan." Darth Rikan said his face now grim.
"Right, sorry." Han apologized quickly.
"Say it." Darth Rikan pushed.
"Darth Rikan."
"Good. Now you asked me about my associate Maul." he began, his smile returning.
"Maul and I are on separate missions, Maul is attempting to obtain the princess here while I on the other hand am working on capturing the young Luke Skywalker." He finished.
"I'm not sure I understand, you're not here for us?" Leia asked confused.
"No."
"Why not? We're not good enough for you?" Han cut in jokingly.
"Why would I want you?" Darth Rikan asked with a confused look on his face.
"I thought the Empire was chasing us." Leia said.
"We are."
"And you've captured us." She continued.
"I have." Darth Rikan affirmed.
"But you're going to let us go." Leia finished.
"I'm going to let you go." He started. "Your friend has a rather high debt with some gangsters, that's why Boba Fett his here." He finished whispering loudly to Leia as if Han couldn't hear him.
"I'm still fairly confused." Leia said trying to work out just how crazy Rikan was.
"How about some entertainment?" Rikan said with a clap.
"Would you like some entertainment Han?" Rikan turned to Han.
"I don't think I want to see you're kind of entertainment." Han shot back.
"Leia? What about you?" Rikan returned to her.
"No thank you."
"Well I would hate to be a bad host." He said spinning his chair around so he could see the stormtroopers behind him.
"What about you soldier." He said randomly pointing to one of them.
"I suppose sir." He answered nervously.
"Good, what would you like to see at this party?"
"Well most parties have dancers." His voice trembled slightly obviously fearing his superior."
"Dancers! Excellent!" Rikan cheered.
"But who here could dance?" He continued surveying the room.
"I see where this is going." Leia scowled.
"Very clever princess, I hold ten Sabacc cards in my hand." Rikan said pulling out a deck of Sabacc cards then sifting through them and selecting ten cards.
"Whoever chooses the mistress will be the dancer!" He exclaimed impressed with himself.
"And since the princess here was first to understand the idea she may choose first." He said holding the ten cards out for her to pick, she chose one at random then watched as he let everyone else pick one out.


"Alright then turn over your card." Everyone did as they were instructed, Leia's heart jumped seeing she had the mistress
"Now who has the mistress? Don't be shy." He said taking seat again. Leia shakily raised her hand bowing her head slightly.
"Fantastic, please oblige us." Rikan smiled.


Leia pushed her chair out and stood up, then slowly began to rock back and forth dancing slightly.
"You know princess, I could always alert Darth Maul to your current location."
Leia took the hint and started to dance more proactively, swinging her hips and running her hands up and down her body.
"I can't see!" A trooper yelled out.
"Get up on the table!" A second chimed in. Leia did as she was told and crawled up onto the table moving plates and glasses out of her way before continuing her dance, Leia turned her back to the troopers and bent over letting the red dress tighten around her ass. She began to carefully hike her dress up trying to tease everyone in the room.


"Excuse me sir, but my business with Solo can't wait any longer." Boba Fett leaned in to Darth Riken.
"Oh very well." Riken waved.
"Captain Solo would you please accompany me and Boba here. As for the rest of you soldiers treat the princess as a proper host should." Riken continued standing up.


Riken, Boba and Han walked out of the room and down the hall.
"I want to apologize for this mess Captain Solo." Riken sighed.
"Then why are you doing all this exactly." Han snorted.
"Why does anyone do anything? Anything that is worth doing must have a reason right? I suppose that's what everyone searches for a reason to tell them what to do, but what if you had no reason? What if you did what you wanted because you wanted or would that simply be a reason for doing the avoided reason? For each reason would be yet an opposite reason against the faction of the original reason which would be your reason so my reason must be the opposite of your reason if we can reason your reason then we would have my reason, wouldn't we?"
"So you're insane then?" Han retorted.
"That could be a valid reason." Riken said thoughtfully.
"We're are we going?" Han finally asked.
"To the reason that will bring young Skywalker to me." Riken smiled.

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Leia gulped as the three left leaving her alone with six male soldiers. Even if Rikan might be insane at least insanity could be predictable, hormones however were wild and could make a man do anything, and she could feel the hormones in the room. The men were shifting and moving around regularly now most likely pointing to them being uncomfortable, probably in the crotch region.


Leia brought the back of her dress up over her waist flaunting her bare ass to the troops giving it a good shake before dropping it back down to cover her legs. One of the trooper finally got the courage to sit down at the table and take his helmet off.
"Captain! What are you doing!?!" One of the troopers panicked.
"Darth Riken said to be a good host, that's what I'm doing." He answered slightly annoyed, Leia continued to do her best at dancing and ignoring what was going on around her.
"The last guy to piss Darth Riken off was ejected out of an airlock!" A new trooper argued.
"No, the last guy was thrown in to a pit of Blistmoks." Another one sighed.
"All the more reason to enjoy myself now." The Captain snapped back.


The other soldiers looked at each other unable to refute his logic and joined him around the table. Leia ran her hands through her hair before running her hands back down to her tits where she jiggled them with a seductive smile. She pulled her dress down under her breasts being careful to make sure her tits were still mostly covered with one of her arms. The men hooted with excited as she let the dress fall further and further timing it perfectly so when the dress finally fell past her pussy she covered her crotch with her hand giving an over exasperated naughty gasp. Leia turned her ass to each of the men giving her booty a quick shake for them. She couldn't believe it but she was actually have fun, she was enjoying showing herself off to these men she knelt down to her knees in such a way that her pussy was covered by her legs freeing up her hand but kept her arms placed across her tits. She picked up a nerf dog from nearby and swatted her cheeks with it, closing her eyes and moaning with each smack. then stuck the nerf dog down her throat deep throating it.
"Frack this!" One of the trooper yelped, then hopped onto the table tossing his groin plate aside and showing off his erect cock. He mimicked what Leia had originally done smacking his cock against her face before tapping it on her forehead. Leia tossed the nerf dog aside and started to suck on his balls still hiding her precious body parts from them. Leia began to lick from the base of the shaft up to the tip, her tongue slid easily up and down tickling and teasing his cock. She did this several times before the man grunted and sprayed warm cum into her hair.
"Hahaha quick draw Drelen strikes again." One of the troopers laughed causing and up roar in laughter from the rest. The man, Drelen as she knew now, looked rather embarrassed as he climbed off the table and took his seat hanging his head in shame. Leia pulled some cum out of her hair and sucked it off her finger tips waiting for the men to calm down.
"I call next!" One of the men called bursting out if his chair and jumping onto the table his dick already rock hard. The man didn't bother waiting and practically rammed his cock down Leia's throat, he did all the work thrusting his hips and making sure his cock pounded her face as hard as he could. His balls slapped into her chin and she focused on moving her tongue in the most pleasing way as possible. The man's attention span obviously wasn't very long because after just a few minutes he had pushed her onto her back so she was laid straight out onto the table, he tucked his dick between her cleavage and started to pump obviously beginning to enjoy the titty fuck.


An electric volt shot up her spine as she felt a tongue lick her pussy, she couldn't see who it was from the distracting cock that was humping her tits but whoever it was was very skilled, his tongue slid across her pussy with grace electrifying every joint. She squeezed her tits tighter around the cock pounding her breasts loving the feel of thick meat rubbing against the inside of her breasts. She whimpered slightly feeling the magic tongue disappear from her pussy lips, then gasped as a dick smashed into her pussy wildly pounding her without mercy. The two cocks continued their onslaught sending shivers an chills of enjoyment throughout her body feeding her slutty side.
"I can't believe how tight royal pussy is!" One of the men groaned, the other gave an affirmative grunt. She could feel their energy starting to fade, their pumps were less rapid, their breathing was less consistent yet Leia hungered for more, she could feel a deep craving inside her a feeling that she had begun to feel more and more often.
"I've still got free hands!" She proclaimed, letting go of her tits and waving them daintily. Within seconds she felt two cocks plopped into her hands and she eagerly started to jack them.
"Come on you two you've had her long enough hurry up!" One of the men being jacked off shouted.
"Alright hold you're bantha's." The trooper fucking her tit's grumbled.


After a few more pumps into her tit's he pulled out and stuck the tip of his cock into her mouth where Leia immediately started sucking and twirling her head over every inch of the tip, and after a few minutes of her crafty maneuvering she felt his hot sticky seed pour into her mouth. He waited a couple seconds longer making sure he was completely drained then reluctantly climbed off her and sat down. She swished the semen around in her mouth a few times savoring the taste before swallowing it with a loud gulp.
"Vollin you move up I get to try her pussy." One of the trooper's instructed, with a sigh Vollin did as he was told and popped his cock out of her pussy and climbed up onto the table and inserted his dick into her mouth were Leia was more than eagerly waiting for his thick rod, she lustfully slurped up the cock licking in dry piece of skin she found.
"How could this slut be a princess." He moaned enjoying the expert blowjob.


She felt a new cock slide its way into her pussy, it was smaller than the previous one but much thicker squeezing its way inside. The cock in her mouth twitched slightly then released the sweet nectar Leia was so desperately yearning for, the sweet salty taste warmed her whole body. The man, looking completely satisfied with himself, climbed off Leia and took his seat. The man Leia had been furiously jacking scurried on top excited for his turn and immediately got to work fucking her tits. The cock grinding inside her pussy started to swell just slightly telling her it was about to burst any minuet. She bucked her hips trying to entice the soldier to dump his load inside. She heard the man grunt and then felt his thick seed spray inside her womb coating it completely, when the man finally pulled out she could feel the sweet goo seep out of her pussy. He practically fell down with a huff not even trying to make himself look decent.
"You better hurry up Kolloc, Darth Riken will be back any minuet." The trooper whim Leia assumed was the captain said still out of breath.
"No fair you guys got her way longer!" He whined.
"Your the rookie get used to it, plus you out lasted Drelen." The Captain replied laughing.
"Fine." He conceded, he gave a few more good pumps trying to get as much enjoyment out of it as possible then stood over Leia and jacked his cock until it finally erupted hosing Leia's tits with his sticky substance, then he too fell into his chair.


After a long pause of everyone trying to catch their breath the rookie finally spoke up.
"So what do we do with her now?"
"We could keep her, you know for entertainment purposes." One of thw troopers whom Leia thought was Drelen said.
"Darth Riken Didn't tell us what to do with her so we might as well." The captain said rubbing his chin.


Leia loved being a slut but she didn't want to be a slave! The thought of being helpless frightened her, she need a way out but how?


"She belongs to me." A voice growled from the door, everyone twisted around and saw Boba Fett standing in the doorway.
"Who says!" Kolloc yelped.
"Yeah you want her, come and get her!" Drellen added.
"Don't tempt me." Boba said in an even tone.
"I don't want any part of this." The captain said gathering up his gear.
"He's bluffing he wouldn't kill imperial soldiers with a Darth around." Vollin piped in.


Faster than the eye could see Boba leveled his EE-3 blaster and pumped two rounds into Vollin's chest sending the man flailing backwards with two black smoking holes in his chest.
"You pathetic puppets had better remember I have no master." Boba Fett growled.
"Take her!" Drellen shrieked jumping to his companions aid.
"You, help her clean up." Boba instructed pointing the barrel of his blaster at Kolloc. He quickly jumped up and began wiping Leia with a towel, fear had completely taken control of his eyes. He wrapped Leia's dress around her then pushed her toward Boba who grabbed her arm and pulled her out into the hallway then shot the door controls forcing it to close and lock. Boba half pulled half dragged Leia down the hall.


They walked for a long time until they came to a door, Boba quickly punched in a code and the door slid open the pushed Leia inside then entered himself and locked the door behind him. Boba flicked on the lights and Leia found herself in a maintenance closet, there was desk with several tools and parts scattered.
"Where are we?" Leia asked meekly.
"My back up room." Boba answered pulling a hideaway blaster out from under the desks drawer.
"Back up room?" Leia said confused.
"You don't get to where I am without making alternate plans for when things go wrong." Boba said handing the blaster to Leia.
"What am I supposed to do with this?" Leia asked her confusion growing.
"Shoot any stormtroopers that try to come in here, I'm going to get your wookie friend." He answered calmly.
"What about Han?"
"Sorry can't help you, I have a contract to deliver him."
"So break the contract." Leia pleaded, this made Boba stop and look at Leia for a few seconds.
"I am a bounty hunter, the greatest bounty hunter. Once I have been contracted to do a job I do it to exact specifications no exceptions, that is the bounty hunter code."
"Then why are you helping me at all!" Leia said flustered.
"Because my contract said nothing about you, so I am allowed to decide at my own discretion, besides I owe your mother."
"What does my mom have to do with anything, she died when I was just a little girl." Leia huffed frustrated with the man.
"Interesting, then you don't know." Boba said opening the door.
"Know what!" Leia practically screamed.
"It's not my place to say." Boba answered before walking out the door closing it behind him.


Leia's mind was swirling with questions what could Boba Fett possible mean? Why was he being so nice? And how could he possible know her mother?





So I hoped you enjoyed this latest chapter, if it felt rushed in a few places that's because it was sorry about that but I really just needed to release it. Also sorry about the two hour delay a few things road blocked me from editing it today and I only managed to edit half of it the rest got a quick skim so sorry for any mistakes, if their is someone out there who is intresting in trying to edit let me know it would be a great weight lifted from me, Jdawgg has done it in the past for me but he's just as busy as i am.

[Catccp]

Great chapter!

[Akota1991]

Great chapter! I liked it a lot. I'm curious where it will go next

[RAT25]

Amazing job! I can't wait to see how this will turn out. Well, maybe I will because of how good i know it will be.

[The Sandman]

great new chapter

[UrbanChaos]

Good news everyone! I should have the next chapter up sometime tomorrow!

[mj5748]

I've been with you since you started this story. I would like to congratulate you, and I hope for many more chapters to come! I'll help you edit it if you need a new editor. I might not be the best, but I'm good.

[UrbanChaos]

I got the flu pretty bad so I didn't get time to finish it the chapter, it's so close to being done it's ridiculous I'm going to see if I cant get it done for the weekend.

@mj5748 if you're intrested in editing leave me your email on my profile page and I can show you what I'd need from you

[eagen]

If you have the flu worry less about the story and more about getting some rest.

[Archfiend]

And another step on to the great Skywalker family orgy reunion ;)
Padmé will be very pleased and proud to see what Leia has become and I doubt Anakin will be able to resist for long...
And therein lies one of the biggest...failings is too much, rather problems...
You have a plethora of excellent charactres to play with. Take Garm Bel Iblis for example. He was such a great tactician and strategist, even Grandadmiral Thrawn acklowged him. Such was his reputation for skill and fiercesomeness, that Wedge Antilles compared Czulkang Lah the former Yuuzhan Vong Warmaster to him. One of his failings was his pride and he drifted away and eventually seceded from the rebellion (it took the Thrawn Crisis to bring him back) when Alderaan and Bail Organa died as he had been the mediator.
Also since the evacuation of Yavin IV went so quick, Dodonna'S sacrifice was not needed, so he's there as well.
Garm Bel Iblis, Jan Dodonna, Carlist Rieekan and later on Ackbar were great leaders and with the exception of Ackbar veterans of the Clone Wars.
Then there are Padmé and Anakin.
Padmé is a natural politician wand while Leia is highly talented and respectedshe does not (yet) have the influence her foster father had. He, Mon Mothma and Garm Bel Iblis FOUNDED the Rebellion when Bail Organa and Mon Mothma were already Senators in the Senate during the Clone Wars! Leia has no such experience, as she was not there, when the Empire collapsed (see ROTS).
Also, has Chewie got a girlfriend here in your story? I wonder what Mallabutock (his wife) will say to that.
Also, while Vader was feared, he was a brilliant stragetist.
Now with Organa dead, the schism could happen. They need the Skywalkers back (where did they go anyway? You never mentioned it) and Anakin back as a fighting, leading Jedi. I suppose Aayla and Shaak Ti aslso made it through ( clearly since there was no Vader, Shaak Ti was never hunted down an slain), which is where Obi Wan has gone to I hope. Anakin is back in action, since he killed those Stormies on Tatooine. Hopefully he'll return soon.
We need more Jedi action! Chez will be happy too, as he had a thing for Aayla.
Maybe a nice big, Jedi welcome back Jedi orgy?
It is also quite clear that Boba Fett will tell her of her mother and thus her father, so Leia will realize she is a Skywalker and thus Luke's sister, meaning lots of sisterly love for Luke (if he survives the duel of course), when Han gets frozen in carbonite as she'll need LOTS of comforting from Luke for losing Han.
One thing is, with there being a One Sith and no Darth Vader, why would the Sith want to get their hands on him. Ok to turn him might be a good idea, but even in the One Sith, he'd need a master to tutor him, and as was custom, for ascension for to truly become Sith, the apprentice had to kill the master, as Darth Rayn was killed by Darth Talon, his apprentice (and boy was she a hot one. I was actually a bit sorry that Cade didn't try to turn her as they made an awesomely hot couple).
Better would it be to turn the fully fledged Jedi and then turn him into a Sith. Also Riken won't show the restraint Vader did, not to metion there won't be an awesome revelation by him at the end.
Ah well, hope you recover soon and give us another fantastic chapter!

[UrbanChaos]

Holy fuck you and me need to be best friend... I must say I agree with pretty much everything you've said, I see a few questions/speculations that I'm going to try and answer without giving away to much. Yes, my problem is how many charcters I have and it has been rather hard to juggle especially having added my own and keeping many others but it wouldn't be a "what if" if these things didn't happen so my problem becomes do I focus on the main characters or spread to the charcaters that the less hardcore fans don't know or know very little about plus having to balance the new/kept characters like Shaak Ti she survived and will reappear with Obi Wan along with a few other Jedi. You're very right about Leia while she does have a lot of contacts due to her father she doesn't have much influence with them so there will be some excitment with her "earning" that influence with them (Padme will probably help her with this problem since she is still alive here) I'm not sure if it was mentioned but Bail is still dead at this point something I didn't feel needed to be changed and I hink with Leia's step father dead she had more reason to really step up and take charge to make her step father proud while I did consider keeping him alive just for fun I felt his death was an intrical part of the story with really driving Leia in future decisions. Yuuzhan Vong I'm no sure when or if they'll appear I'll have to go back and reread that series. Chewie at this point doesn't really have a girlfriend right now but he does have the occasional fling as you've read and it can be assumed that he has had more then I've written about, Mallabutock I'm sure would be dissapointed but is unaware though I'm sure she would be suspicious I would like to add Lumpawarrump somewhere but I havent found a place for him yet all these feelings will be dealt with eventually as I'm sure Chewie would feel guilty Chewie will probably find a more steady girlfriend at some point I just haven't worked it out yet. The Schism very intersting that you mention it that is more or less where this is heading Sidious's plan is not to just simply eradicate the Jedi but turn as many to the darkside so he can and restart the Sith order like it was in the old republic more will be expanded later but that's his intention. The Skywalkers which skywalkers do you want to know about? Luke has bee on dagobah which is the next chapter Anakin and Padme left Tatooine after Padme "persuaded" some help from a pilot to take them to Coruscant so she could find out what kind of shape the senate is in in hopes to find some help where they found a friend they to will reappear within the next few chapters. There is a big reunion planned and Chez is going to be very happy. As of right now I'm not sure if Han will be frozen or not or if Boba will tell Leia or not I left that fairly open ended on purpose. Now why does Sidious want the Skywalkers? perhaps the most important question of them all, and why does Maul keep letting Leia go if he needs her so bad? The next chapter explains exactly what the big deal is and it centres around the young Luke Skywalker. Iwould like to find some kind of revelation to hit Luke in the gut but I havent got one yet hopefully this explains a little more. Ask more if it doesn't clear it all up or if you want to know more or if I din't touch on something you had asked.

** I am feeling much better (thank you all) and the next chapter will be out TOMORROW**

[Archfiend]

Oh no, you misunderstand me, during the battle of Borleias in the Vong War, the Commander the New Republic faced was eventually Czulkang Lah and Wedge said: He is the Garm Bel Iblis of the Yuuzhan Vong. An old, ferocious, highly respected warrior. If we can beat him, truly beat him, then it will be a massive loss of morale for them.
No, you didn't mention Bail's death, but since you wiped Alderaan from the face of the galactic map, it is pretty much is assured, just as in ANH.
Lumpawarrump, well although this IS an AU, the charactres are still the same age and Lumpy was born in 1BBY, so he'd be 4 years old at the time. not exactly the proper age of someone sent to scold his daddy.
The schism I meant was that in the Rebellion where Bel Iblis leaves to continue his war alone. This obviously hasn't happened here and when Ackbar brings with him the Mon Calamari (I had Calamari yesterday for lunch, very good...I know awful pun and joke...), the Rebellion should be going strong.
You didn't write about how Padmè persuaded the pilot or that the Skywalkers left for Coruscant (though I can imagine how (lucky bastard)) and as for why Luke...
Well... Anakin is alive, Luke is his son and both are INSANELY strong in the force. So strong in fact, that Luke was capable of standing up to Vader only half-trained and the only reason Vader didn't kill Sidious earlier was that (I speculate here but it has been hinted strongly) the loss of so much of his body diminished Vader's powers in the force, which is quite hard to believe if think about it.
Probably the same as in the movies, where they lured Luke to Cloud City by capturing Han.
They do the same here, capture Luke and then lure Anakin there, Anakin who has already once fallen to the dark side...
And Maul and Leia. I think Maul has a thing for her or maybe Padmé who she reminds him of, and capturing, raping her and then letting her go again is a fun pastime for him (who knows, maybe he has sensed her force sensivity and hopes to drive her to the dark side through frustration ;) ).
Anyway on to the next chapter!

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 36: Trouble In The Jungle


By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if".




Luke could feel his muscles tremble, his body ached from the constant exercise. Luke's body tumbled to the ground unable to hold his handstand any longer.
"Weak you are, much work we have." Yoda said disapproving.
"We've been doing this for four days straight now, what does this have to do with the force." Luke wheezed lying on the ground.
"If the body is weak, then the mind will crumble." Yoda said.
"What about you! You're the most powerful Jedi Master and you're not exactly the biggest person!" Luke argued.
"Size matters not. Look at me. Judge me by my size, do you? Hmm? Hmm? And well you should not. For my ally is the Force, and a powerful ally it is, small my body may be but not weak." Yoda said harshly.
"I'm sorry but it's hard to see the practical side to all this." Luke apologized finally sitting up.
"Practical you want?" Yoda said turning to the swamp Luke had crashed his x-wing into when he had arrived on Dagobah.


Yoda closed his eyes and lifted his arm out, the x-wing began to rumble and shake, Yoda grunted and the ship slowly started to rise, Yoda dropped the cane in his left hand and raised that arm as well and gently guided the X-wing to safety on a nearby shore. Yoda place the x-wing down with a thud then began to wheeze as he brought himself out of his force trance.


"That was amazing!" Luke cried handing Yoda's cane to him.
"Careful you must be Luke, craving power leads to the darkside."
"I understand but that was incredible! Teach me how to do that." Luke practically yelled staring at his fighter in disbelief.
"No!" Yoda yelled at him stomping his cane and grabbing Luke's arm and turning him around.
"You do not understand, both the lightside and the darkside of the force swirl inside you as two reckless storms! The same battle your father fought, look now where he is!" Yoda scolded Luke with fire in his eyes.
"Your saying my father chose the darkside?" Luke asked horrified.
"Yes, ruined himself he did! If not for Padme who knows where he would be now, or WHO he would be now!" Yoda emphasized.
"Getting through to you I am not." Yoda sighed sitting down on a nearby log.
"Only one choice we have." He continued starting to draw in the sand with his cane.
"What choice?" Luke asked intrigued.
"Your first taste for the lightside you have had through me, now a taste of the darkside you must have. Then choose you must." Yoda explained.
"But how?" Luke asked uneasy.


Yoda took a second before answering, obviously thinking deeply.
"Do you feel the presence of the darkside on this planet?" Yoda asked Luke.
"Yes, it feels... cold..." Luke said feeling the dark energy for the first time.
"Long before I arrived her a Sith lord settled here. Made it his home he did, bent and twisted the flow of energy to his own means and his will."
"A Sith lord! Here!" Luke gasped astonished.
"Yes, He has no problem with me and I none with him, we share a common trait and more importantly a common enemy. But that is not for me to say, go to him you must."
"But won't he kill me?"
"If wanted you dead he did, dead you would have already been." Yoda explained.
"Somehow I don't find that very comforting." Luke sighed.
"Go through those trees and follow your instincts, lead to him you will be." Yoda said pointing to some trees.
"I'll be back soon master." Luke said standing up and heading through the trees.
"I hope so Luke, I hope so." Yoda muttered to himself watching Luke leave.

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Luke had been walking for what seemed like hours, he wasn't lost though he could feel the darkside growing the further he went. It was like a rancid stench in his nose the closer he got the fouler the smell, on top of that he could feel it in his bones, it was like adrenaline was constantly filling his veins demanding he carry on. Luke stepped through another bush and found an old crumbling road with pillars on each side in equally rough shape. The pillars continued to follow the road around the bend, Luke knew he was close now he could literally taste it.


He followed the road for what must have been another hour until he saw it, It was a very large and very old stone building that looked a lot like a temple. Luke entered the building and saw the whole building was one large open room, pillars continued from the road into this building making a sort of hallway towards a stair case that went up about eight feet to a throne, old wood benches that were now broken and decaying were on both sides of the pillars pointed towards the throne. Luke saw a man sitting on the throne looking rather bored, he sat in a rather comfortably looking pose, his left elbow was propped up on the arm rest and his hand held up his head, the right arm was stretched out against the full armrest his hand tapping against the end impatiently Luke moved closer to him, the closer he got the more he could make out, he wore a black cloak with a hood that covered his face, he had on a chest plate that was a dark bronze color with some kind of archaic design etched into it, he had forearm and leg guards with the same design, his right hand had some kind of metal glove but it's fingers were extended into claws, a light brown naked cathar laid at his feet sleeping contently. Luke came to the bottom of the staircase and stopped.


"Ah young Skywalker, I've been expecting you." The man's deep voice boomed through the building.
"You know me?" Luke asked meekly.
"I know all." He answered, the sound of his voice made Luke believe that he actually did.
"My master sent me here." Luke said not sure what else to say.
"Master Yoda, I know. But do you know why he sent you to me?"
"No..." Luke admitted, he could feel the man's power radiating from him, he swore he could see a red haze emanating from him.
"Your master wants you to feel the true power of the force so you may choose between ultimate power or weakness that you call the lightside."
"How did someone of your power end up here, and why haven't you killed my master." Luke asked the question burning in his mind.
"Yoda has never interfered with me, he'd be more trouble then he's worth. And besides after being here for as long as I have you enjoying talking to a wise person who has the exact opposite views of you." He started explaining.
"As for how I got here, that is an interesting story. Darth Sidious, the one you call the Emperor trapped me here. You see a very long time ago what must be thousands of years now, I studied under a great Sith named Darth Bane. I was so young and so foolish, I believed I was much more powerful then I actually was. I had studied so many dark rituals and had finally found the ritual to eternal life, like a fool I taught it to my master along with many other rituals. When I finally decided I was the stronger Sith I engaged Darth Bane in combat, Bane used what I had taught him against me and solidified me in stone. Darth Bane believed he had killed me but the stone had but me in a stasis, preserving me. Sidious found me and had been practicing in Sith sorcery as I had been, he managed to revive me and brought me to his master Darth Plagueis. Plagueis explained their plan to take control of the galaxy with me, and offered me a place in his scheme, it made me sick hearing how they planned on remaking the Sith order, the Sith must always follow the rule of two no more no less. However I accepted already plotted against the two. I was patient I needed to find the right time to strike, in that time Sidious found he had more in common with me, we were both sorcerers and had a desire for ultimate power. Plagueis did not share our interest in dark rituals, he was to cautious and careful. Sidious came to me with a plot to kill his master, once his master was dead he would take his place as my apprentice, he had devised a way for me to consume Plagueis's entity and grow my power. In theory it would work but we needed a secret Sith artifact that was hidden here on Dagobah. We lead Plagues here and ambushed him as I casted my consume spell Sidious used the Sith artifact to divided my entity, I had left myself open as I consumed Plagueis, I had been careless. Sidious now has a glowing red amulet, that is my freedom, I am chained to this planet, my whole being runs through this planets veins, that is why you can feel the darkness across this planet's surface. Because my body is incomplete so it flows freely, if I were to leave this planet my physical body would turn to dust I need that amulet to restore myself. I once had a great following here, lost souls I had called, you can see the remnants of them here. I sent them to reclaim my amulet but they were defeated." The man finished explaining.
"What about the Cathar?" Luke asked taking everything in.
"She felt my power emanating from here and crashed on this planet much like you did. She begged to be my pet, at first I refused but she would not leave. Now she is just company that I am grateful for."
"What does this have to do with me?" Luke asked not fully understanding.
"You are meant to restore me." He answered calmly.
"What! Why would I do that!?! I'm a Jedi not a Sith!" Luke exclaimed.
"You are neither yet, but either way I am the only one that can defeat Sidious. We may be enemies but what he is doing is a mockery to the Sith and he must be stopped, the rule of two must be reenacted. And that is Sith business."
"No I'm not helping you!" Luke insisted.
"You are not powerful enough to stop him, it was your fathers destiny to stop him but he abandoned his journey. I am the only one powerful enough to stop him now, you will come to realize this in time. Sidious is already aware of your destiny, your family and friends are at risk until either you join him or you're dead, that is why he is so desperate to catch you." The man said confidently.
"You keep saying how powerful you are but look around, your trapped here in your ruins with your only way out resting in my hands." Luke scoffed waving at all the decaying things in the temple.
"You want to see power?" The man said, his voice growing angry. The Cathar opened one of her eyes and looked at Luke.
"I'll show you power!" The man yelled sending shivers through Luke's bones. The Cathar crawled around the stone throne obviously trying to hide.


The man gripped the thrones arm rests and the temple began to rumble and shake, Luke struggled to keep his balance and started to stumble about. Luke watched as the man stood up and stones began to fall from the roof, an invisible blast shot out from the man throwing Luke and lots of debris flying backwards. Luke tumbled back at least twenty feet before skidding to a stop. The man took his first step down and a crack shot out from his foot as it landed, the crack shot across the temple and straight outside. Every step he took another crack when shoot out, the rumbling worsened forcing Luke to stay lying on the floor looking up at the man in utter fear. Lighting swirled around him blowing his cloak in all directions, he reached out his arm and opened his palm then snapped it shut into a fist, instantly one of the pillars was vaporized to dust. He bent down to Luke and flipped back the hood of his cloak making the earthquake even worse if that was possible. The man wore a blood red helmet the eye slots were more liked slits pointed diagonally making it look as if it had a permanent scowl the rest of his helmet reminded him of a very sleek mandalorian helmet.
"I am Darth Revile! The last true Sith!" He declared standing up and raising his arms to the roof, a section of the roof was sucked straight up into the air into a black void filled with dark clouds and lightning bolts. Darth Revile lowered his arms and everything stopped the horrible winds stopped screaming the ground was silent and the void faded.


He walked back to his throne and sat back into his comfortable position.
"Once you gain power like mine then you will, be able to defeat Sidious, but we cannot wait that long, get the amulet, bring it to me, that is your destiny."
"We'll see." Luke muttered finally picking himself up and brushing himself off.
"Lahani, take young Skywalker back to his master." Darth Revile instructed the Cathar.


The Cathar emerged from her hiding spot and quickly walked over to Luke grabbing his hand and leading him outside.


After walking for some time in silence Luke finally worked up the nerve to say something.
"You been here long?" Luke asked nervously.
"Yessss." She hissed not sounding very impressed with him.
"Did I upset you?" Luke asked stopping.
"You made the master angry, I do not like it when people make him angry." She glared at Luke.
"Why are you... naked." Luke asked trying to change the subject, he had been having trouble not staring at her bouncing tits and plump ass.
"Because I have no shame. I am comfortable this way, many tribes on my planet live naked we embrace our nature." She hissed still angry at him.
"Listen I'm sorry for whatever I did to you." Luke said trying to ease his guilt.
"Your apologizes are worthless." She spat beginning to walk again allowing Luke to watch her light brown coloured ass.
"So tell me what isn't worthless then." Luke begged not really sure why he want to please her.
"You believe you know much, but you know little." She snarled.
"Then teach me." Luke offered, this seemed to catch her attention.
"You would want to learn from me?" She asked intrigued.
"Yes." He affirmed.
"I thought you were not interested in the darkside."
"I'm not, but knowledge comes from many sources, right?"
"You are correct." She said seeming to be considering his offer.
"Your clothes, off with them." She waved at him.
"What?"
"You want to learn?"
"Yeah but I don't get..."
"Then off with your clothes." She cut him off. Luke sighed but did as he was told stripping off his clothes and packing them away into his backpack. Luke heard her stifle a laugh.
"What?" He asked slinging his bag back onto his shoulder.
"I forgot how small humans were." She smirked.
"Very funny, now teach me." Luke joked back.


She sprinted forward and nimbly climbed a tree with little effort and plenty of ease. She continued up until she was sitting gracefully on a tree branch high above him.
"The force is a tool, you must harness it and force it to obey." She called down to him. Luke jumped at the tree starting to climb.
"The force is a guide, listen and it will reveal the way to you." Luke yelled up to her quoting Yoda. Luke made it to the branch and noticed she wasn't there.
"You are much too slow." She yelled at him from the ground.


Luke climbed down to where she was impatiently waiting.
"Come, we must make a fire for the night." She said pulling him to the trunk of the tree. Night was coming quickly, they worked together gathering fire wood until they had a roaring fire. They sat quietly for a long time just enjoying the dancing flames.
"You look cold." She said cuddling up to him.
"I'm not used to being naked." He smiled.
"I love it, it makes me feel free. I remember being on my home planet, roaming the forest and hunting with my tribe this way, it made me feel so alive." She reminisced.
"My home planet was nothing but sand, no trees no grass, just the heat and the sand."
"Doesn't sound bad, I love sunbathing in the heat." They fell silent again, Luke put his arm around her and pulled her in closer still cold.
"How did you end up here exactly? Darth Revile told me a little but not the whole story." Luke said again breaking the silence.
"I was a slave once, my species is looked at as gold by the Mandalorians, anyone who manages to catch and keep one of us by hunting us down on our home planet is thought to be very strong and powerful. It's really like a hunting game to them. I was captured and forced into slavery until I managed to steal one of their ships they chased me and forced me to crash land here, I was drawn to Darth Revile's power. The Mandalorians hunted me seeing it as another sick game, I found Darth Revile and begged for his help. With one gesture he had them bowing to him it was incredible. Then he told me to punish them anyway I saw fit, I made them beg for mercy but gave them none. Darth Revile offered to teach me the ways of the force after seeing my fierceness, I saw no other choice but to accept and I have lived here happily ever since." She explained without a hint of sadness.
"But don't you miss your family and friends, why not go back?" Luke asked curiously.
"It is true I miss my home, but what I am learning here is much more important. I will grow strong and learn how to crush the Mandalorians like my master did, then I will return home and protect my people." She said with a little bit of anger.
"But do you know what I miss the most?" She continued.
"The heat?" Luke Joked.
"No, you silly boy," Lahani laughed
"Every year our tribe would travel to our sacred grove called heathuck, we would stay for one week and breed day and night in order to make the clan bigger and stronger." She said absent mindedly playing with his soft cock.
"I miss the feeling of being with someone and having them love you in such a special way, the feeling of fresh cum in my belly and the way it would seep from my pussy and ass. It has been such a long time since I felt that." She said now stroking his very hard cock without realizing.
"Lahani your..." Luke said pointing to what she was doing.
"Sorry! I'm not sure what came over me!" She apologized obviously embarrassed.
"No, it's no big deal, it doesn't bother me any." Luke immediately said comforting her.
"Really? You don't mind." She looked a little shock.
"Of course not." Luke assured her.
"Well in that case..."


Lahani laid across Luke's legs and began to suck on his erect dick, greedily sucking down his meat. Luke moaned feeling his dick snake down her throat it had been far too long since he had last gotten off. Her tongue felt far rougher than any other that had licked his cock before, and it seemed as though licking was her favorite thing to do. She would let the cock slip out of her mouth and caress it with her tongue as if she was cleaning it up, she seemed completely satisfied with just licking his cock as if nothing else in the world mattered. Though the pool of juices in her crotch said otherwise, Luke let his fingers slide across her slit making her body shiver in excitement. She began to pay close attention to the underside of the head while Luke pushed his fingers inside her cunt. He started teasing her the way she was doing to him, her hot breath on his skin was driving him crazy. He did his best to tease he best tickling her insides trying to force her to want more but it didn't seem to work, the more he tried the better she got until Luke was thrusting his hips up forcing his cock into her mouth which she happily obliged sucking even harder. He did his best to keep working her snatch with his finger but it was difficult to focus with how amazing her mouth was. She knew exactly when to focus on the head and when to shift her attention to his balls, she had a talent for bringing him to the brink of cumming then stopping at letting him calm down. Lahani crawled on top of him done playing games and guided Luke's cock into her pussy purring softly as it slid in. She started out by just rolling her hips back and forth still teasing him, Luke grabbed a firm hold of her toned ass and squeezed making her purr even louder. She started to bounce up and down taking in Luke's shaft, he reached up with one hand and squeezed her firm tits sucking on her nipples as he did so trying to prove he was just as good of a lover as she was. Lahani bounced harder clearly putting in as much effort as she could, her pussy was one of the tightest Luke had ever felt it was as if it was squeezing his dick harder with each thrust, it was clear it had been a long time since she had had sex. Her face was filled with pleasure and Luke was sure he could make her feel more.


But out of nowhere Lahani stopped and stood up.
"Up with you." She demanded with her hands on her hips. Luke got up a little confused, Lahani leaped at him wrapping her legs around his waist and grabbing hold of his shoulders.
"The force can be used to increase your strength and stamina in many ways." She said smiling, Luke couldn't' help but smile back before guiding his rod back into her sweet cunt not moving it while they started to kiss, she greedily stuck her tongue in his longing for his sweet embrace, Luke's hands tightened around her ass again and lifted her up before slamming her back down, her body straightened up and she leaned her head back letting out a loud meow, Luke took his chance and kissed up her neck as he kept pumping her up and down on his thick meat. With each thrust her meows grew louder and Luke was sure she was close to orgasm he nibbled on her nipples trying to tease her more. Luke tried to do as she said and use the force to increase his skills, he felt as if his speed increased though it was marginal it was working he could actually feel the force flowing through him helping him. She let out a cry and her pussy released it's sweet juices flowing all over his dick, Luke leaned her up against a nearby tree allowing himself more leverage and started to pound her pussy, her moans grew even louder if that was possible Luke could feel his cum quickly rush up he tried to fight the urge at first but finally conceded and gave in his cum sprayed up into Lahani's womb, he was so backed up from the past few weeks the cum started to flood out of her pussy.


Luke pulled his cock out exhausted, he laid down near the fire trying to catch his breath, he watched as Lahani sat down at the bottom of the tree trunk and fingered her pussy until she had a small batch of cum coating her fingers which she wasted no time in licking up.
"I forgot how sweet cum tasted." She said grinning ear to ear. She walked on her hands and knees towards Luke and curled up next to him pressing her breasts into his chest and gently playing with his soft cock.
"It is too bad you are Jedi." She sighed.


It was too bad Luke thought it seemed like the Sith were far superior to him, maybe he could learn a thing or two from them.





*Hope you all enjoyed the newest chapter and I hope thic lears up a few questions, Archfiend asked some intresting questions and made plenty of good points above this post if you've been wondering a few things I'd suggested giving it a look, if anyone else has questions or comments please feel free to leave them.*

[Archfiend]

Wow...
you managed to bring in sex in the training at Dagobah!
That is rather ingenious.
A few things though. A few grammatical and spelling errors are present.
Ohhh "watch out Luke, paved with good intentions the path to the dark side is!" as Yoda would say to Luke's last thoughts.
Didn't he actually do something as stupid as joining them to destroy them from the inside at around 10ABY, joining the resurrected Palpatine.
A thousand year old Sith Lord. Interesting twist, especially in the light of the revelation about Anakin.
Anakin...
To be honest, here is a golden opportunity in my eyes for you. The small skirmish on Tatooine showed he still has the capabilities of a Jedi.
In my opinion, should he get another "opportunity" at fighting as a jedi, then he might return to his former confident self, especially since the jedi have this irritating notion, that no matter what, the destiny of one can take in many forms and paths.
Even the destruction of the jedi order and the death of untold jedi was later seen as being within Anankin's destiny of bringing balance to the force, by destroying both jedi and sith.
Revile might be in error then, for should Anakin regain his confidence, prowess and shake off the shadow, then he might destroy Sidious even without Revile's interference.
Looks like the events on Coruscant will be interesting concering that side of the plot.
Another thing is the survival of Jedi Masters such as Aayla Secura or Shaak Ti, not to mention Obi-Wan (maybe even Ahsoka and that'd be really interesting concerning Anakin, his trauma and possible resurrection as a leading jedi). Their coming out of exile might even draw out Yoda, but that is not the main point. The main point is Revile and the information he gave Luke concerning him, Sidious and Anakin's destiny not to mention the ways and teachings of him passed down to Luke by Lahani. All of this information could be intrumental in Sidious's downfall.
Btw, Lahani's comments about the increased stamina (sexual-wise), I bet Aayla knows those tricks already (being a Twi'lek she is naturally promiscious) or will be VERY interested to learn them, not to mention how much Leia will want to learn them.
Very nice chapter indeed.
Can't wait for the next one.

[The Sandman]

Great new chapter.

[RAT25]

Very good chapter, I don't see how you will be able to top this, but I bet you will!

[The Sandman]

any idea when the next chapter will be out

[UrbanChaos]

It's written and edited already I havent been able to get on this site for several weeks now, kept getting an error message. I'm going to wait until this sunday (Feb 10) to release it just so everyone is aware.

[JohnR321]

UrbanChaos- I have read your story from the beginning. While Avatrek's The Restricted Files, I just read as a guest. Your stories, while equal and surpassing in quality, finally got me to make an account. I noticed that you mentioned several times dropping the story. Please, from me and I'm sure everyone else, Don't!

P.S. Does anyone out there know why Avatrek disappeared?

Yeah, anyway, amazing job, Urban. Keep going.

And everyone can mange to wait for however long it takes you to write each story, I'm sure. They/we only pester you because we love you... Yeah... That was really long... Shit...

BTW, the ninth is my birthday, so I hope I get to read the story really close to then;)

[JohnR321]

You know, I will probably only read this and suggestions from people who post on this. Any suggestion, peoplez of the world of UrbanChaos?

This was kinda added as an afterthought. Jeez, I have no clue why I added these last two sentences...

[Catccp]

Can't wait

[The Sandman]

OK thanks Urban. I know what you mean about the error, for a while I was not able to log onto the site at all.

[eagen]

I didn't even get an error message just a blank page.

BTW nice new avatar image

[UrbanChaos]

^Thanks man!

And in honor of JohnR321's b-day the story will be up later today

[JohnR321]

Can't wait!

[FrankNbeans]

Wow, just read your story and I have to say it was fantastic. I love the Star Wars theme. I once read another story by a woman based on Lost in Space. Stories like this just get me to grind my gears, if you know what I mean.

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 37: Getting Back In Shape


By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.







Obi Wan walked into the quaint little dinner and slid into a booth next to a window, Chez took a seat on the other side of him and peered out the window.
"Corellia has always been one of my favorite planets, the people here are so proud of the culture." Obi Wan said trying to make small talk.
"Listen Chez, I want to thank you for coming with me, I know you'd prefer to be with Cody but I thought it would be best if our friend saw a couple of familiar faces rather than my grizzly old mug." Obi Wan joked scratching his beard, Chez looked at him and nodded understandingly.


"Can I get you anything?" The waitress interrupted them.
"We are looking for a women named Deja." Obi Wan smiled.
"And who would you be?"
"Guardians of light." Obi Wan answered confidently.
"I'll be right back." The waitress winked understanding the code then turned around and entered the nearby kitchen.


The two sat at their table for a few minutes not saying much, Obi Wan thumbed through the menu but couldn't find anything appetizing.
"You got a lot of guts dragging your wrinkly carcass into this establishment." A voice behind Obi Wan sneered.
"At my age dragging is about the only thing I can do." Obi Wan smiled standing up and turning to face the light blue Twi'lek. The two hugged before Obi Wan slid back into his seat and she slid in next to Chez.
"Chez, long time no see, did you bulk up some since we last saw each other?" She asked squeezing his bicep, Chez shrugged obviously a little embarrassed. Chez had always been a giant of a man, for whatever reason he had grown much bigger than his clone brothers, he was nearly to meters tall and full of muscle, his belief was he was part of a small focus group in the cloning facility that the Kamino's had tried to genetically enhance and improve upon the current stock of clones, but had failed for the most part, there was only a few as big as he was.
"So you go by Deja now?" Obi Wan asked with an intrigued look.
"Well most people recognized the great Jedi Master Aayla Secura." She laughed.
"That's too bad because we're in need of a few good Jedi."
"Really? And Just why would you need Jedi?" Aayla asked with a surprised look.
"The Empires reign over the galaxy is coming to an end, and we're the ones that are going to end it." Obi Wan said smiling.
"Tell me you're joking, you and your rag tag group that you call a rebellion are going to defeat the Empire? You couldn't even destroy the death star." She scoffed.
"Well you could stay here and keep working at this diner."
"Tough choice, either stay here or march to my death. I'll take my chances here" Aayla said sarcastically.
"To bad, we have a real all-star line up." Obi Wan sighed.
"Oh, and who's all going on your suicide mission?"
"Sorry that's on a need to no basis." Obi Wan said standing up
"Well it was nice to see you again Aayla... I mean Deja, enjoy your life." Obi Wan bowed, Aayla stood up letting Chez out of the booth and the two left the diner and headed towards the taxi station.


Chez looked at Obi Wan with a surprised look on his face.
"Don't worry, she'll change her mind." Obi Wan smiled, the two were about to enter their taxi when they heard a shout behind them.
"Hey! Wait up!" Aayla yelled running towards them.
"Told you." Obi Wan said smugly to Chez. Chez returned his smirk with an elbow to his rib.
"Just had to pack some things." She smiled patting a bag slung over her shoulder.


The three crammed into the back of the taxi and went immediately to the space port, catching up with each other during the ride. After the somewhat short ride they entered the old G9 Rigger freighter that Obi Wan had saved and stored from when the Empire had taken over. The craft was old and outdated but comfortable.
"We have a few more stops before we can rendezvous with the rest of the Rebellion, I'm sure Chez will show you to the bunks while I get this bucket of bolts off the ground." Obi Wan said before heading towards the cockpit. Chez waved for Aayla to follow him and lead her towards the back of the ship and into the crews quarters where a total of twelve bunks had been stashed in the walls.
"I'm surprised Cody's not here, the way I remember it, you two were inseparable." Aayla commented throwing her bag onto a top bunk, Chez shrugged as he took a seat on his own bottom bunk.
"What exactly does it take to get you to talk?" She asked peeling off her beige coloured jacket revealing her light brown training bra. Again Chez gave a nonchalant shrug.
"I mean last time I saw you, you were in a wrestling match with death itself and you didn't even utter a word." Aayla continued starting to do what Chez assumed were Jedi stretches.
"Are you shy? Is that it?" She Joked, Chez shook his head no, the truth was Chez knew he had been bred to fight, he had literally been grown in a test tube and genetically altered to be a fighting machine, and that was precisely what he did, he was happier when he was silent. It was easier to keep your head up and do what you were told, words only ever complicated things. Words had killed many of his brothers, talking at a problem never solved anything.
"One day I'm going to get you to talk to me." Aayla teased snapping him back to attention, Chez couldn't help but smile, somehow he knew if anyone would force him to speak it would be her.


The ship buckled as it entered hyperspace and Chez laid back in his bed with his hands behind his head watching Aayla's acrobatical Jedi exercises.
"It's been a long time since I've trained." She puffed, she stopped for a second and undid her belt letting her pants fall to the floor before kicking them up onto her bunk and tossing her belt up as well leaving her standing in her matching light brown thong.
"If you're uncomfortable with my training attire just say something." Aayla said with a wink. Chez blushed a little embarrassed as he watched her stretch by bending over and touching her toes. She did a few hops in place then ran at a wall, a step before the wall she brought her leg up and took three full steps up the wall before doing a back flip landing safely with her arms outstretched. She quickly dropped to the floor and started doing pushups. Chez couldn't help but stare at her firm ass as it raised and lowered. After what Chez thought was fifty pushups she quickly rolled over and started doing sit-ups.
"Do you always stare at women when they work out?" Aayla teased noticing his stare. Chez quickly averted his gaze looking up at the metal top bunk.
"Do you know what the best work out is?" Aayla huffed still doing sit-ups. Chez shrugged still looking up.
"A good fuck." She said putting a hand on his crotch.


Before Chez could even react Aayla had already yanked his trousers down and was jacking his semi erect cock. It didn't take long for his cock to get to his full hard state with her skillful hand, she tightened her grip around his thick rod giving him firm full jacks. Chez sat up Aayla was in between his legs still jerking, he grabbed her lekku and gently began to massage them sending shocks of pleasure into her brain, Chez once read about how you could make a Twi'lek by lekku stimulation alone but he wasn't sure if that was true. Aayla put her lips around the head of his cock sucking on it tenderly, letting her tongue slip and slide around it. Chez, unable to wait any longer, forced her head down making her deep throat his cock, Aayla coughed and sputtered from the sudden force but didn't complain instead she greedily sucked on every inch she could. Her head bobbed swiftly, moving up and down at a tremendous rate. Chez reached back to her lekku massaging them again satisfied with the rate her head was moving.


She let the cock slip free from her mouth and grabbed Chez's hand.
"Come over her." She said seductively pulling his hand towards the door. She reached up and grabbed the top of the door frame then did a pull up. As she let herself come down she slide her pussy onto his waiting cock, with each pull up she was rewarded with his stiff meat shoved up her tight snatch.
"I told you fucking was the best way to exercise." She winked lowering herself back onto his prick. Chez couldn't believe her stamina, he knew Jedi were fit but Aayla was raising and lowering herself onto his dick with what seemed like no effort and the look on her face proved she was more than enjoying herself. As satisfying as it was Chez craved more, he wrapped his arms around her waist and she latched her legs around his waist, Chez began thrusting up into her tight wet cunt making Aayla moan in pleasure. His hips bucked wildly determined to squeeze every inch of his cock in. Aayla hugged him tightly, her fingers digging into his back as his prick ravaged her snatch.


Chez laid Aayla onto her back on the bed, then forced his cock deep inside making her scream in pleasure. Aayla groped her tits begging for Chez to thrust faster. He did his best to make Aayla happy but he was sure he was thrusting hard enough, he grabbed onto her legs trying to hump as fast and as hard as he could. And even though Aayla's cries got louder he was sure he could do better. He used one hand to rub her clit while the other clamped onto the bed frame above him providing support. Juices seeped out of her pussy and her pleasure sounds got louder. Chez worked furiously to pleasure and his work paid off, Aayla howled and her snatch exploded spraying juices from her orgasm everywhere.


He could tell Aayla's body was extremely sensitive, after each thrust her body looked like it had been crippled from the pleasure. Chez rolled her around so she could lay on her front and relax while he continued fucking her doggy style. Aayla's moans were intensified with each thrust, Chez grabbed her lekkus and gave them playful tugs rolling his thumb around them. From the sounds Aayla was making he was sure she hadn't been fucked this way in a long time.



Without warning Chez's balls tightened and before long he exploded pouring his thick hot semen deep into her pussy. He pulled his dick out and let his cock drip onto her firm ass, Aayla reached around and started jerking his cock determined to milk every drop out of him. She was soon rewarded as two more thick spurts shot out landing across her ass.


Chez flopped over onto his bed exhausted. He watched as Aayla wiped the cum off her ass with her hand and licked it up greedily. Then snuggled up close to him.


"I hope you're willing to be my workout partner from now on." She smiled hugging him tightly.


Chez was more than happy to be her workout partner. He was glad Aayla was back, he had missed her more than he had realized...





*I know this one was a lot shorter than the last few but I wanted to add a part about Obi Wan rebuilding the order, also happy b-day to JohnR321!!!*

[JohnR321]

Great addition and thank you, Urban!

[The Sandman]

great new chapter

[Catccp]

Great chapter

[jdawgg]

Keep goin brother. Done an awesome job so far

[UrbanChaos]

The next chapter is going to take a while, I can't even come up with an idea lol

[qwsaqw]

In this What if are you planning on making Luke turn to the dark side? Because it seemed like you were heading in the direction. After all if Darth Revile defeated Darth Sidious and his sith to keep the rule of two he would need an apprentice. Just a thought. Keep up the good work!!

[JohnR321]

Here's an idea... Remember in the movies, Darth Vader tries to get Luke to join him and rule the galaxy? Well, have 'em both go dark side and take over the Sith, rule of two and all. Another thing: bring up the Darth Bane essence transfer. He needs to show up sometime, obviously in someone else's body... Just a couple ideas from a Star Wars nerd.

[mesalovessp]

Urban, im not going to lie, havent been with u since the beginning, in fact u had about 19 pages up of this thread, but its been the best story ive found on this site, and i hope to keep seeing it in the future.

PS:when u get to jabba's palace, i ask tht u please dont do anything to gross(or jabba related) it kinda turns me off whenever a hutt is sexually involved. ty

[mesalovessp]

also i would love to see more about Darth Bane(or Dessel) because he's my fav sw charecter. but uh.....no rush, thx

[UrbanChaos]

^Darth Bane is my favorite too he already made an apperance a long time ago, and he'll be back (I had him planned in from a very long time ago)


I've started the next chapter and it is going to be a long one, I think I'm on page eight and not even close to being done (most chapters being in the 6-9 page range) this one will probably end up in the 12-15 page range, and I can guarantee no one will even be able to guess how this one goes. It's a gamble but I hope you guys will like it, I'll also be testing something out with this chapter.

[JohnR321]

Sounds good to me.

[JohnR321]

Is everyone's favorite Bane? Cuz he's mine, too.

[UrbanChaos]

I hope to have the next chapter out next sunday (march 10th) so check back then!

[JohnR321]

Alright! Can't wait.

[jdawgg]

^Darth Bane is my favorite too he already made an apperance a long time ago, and he'll be back (I had him planned in from a very long time ago)


I've started the next chapter and it is going to be a long one, I think I'm on page eight and not even close to being done (most chapters being in the 6-9 page range) this one will probably end up in the 12-15 page range, and I can guarantee no one will even be able to guess how this one goes. It's a gamble but I hope you guys will like it, I'll also be testing something out with this chapter.

I could prolly guess

[The Sandman]

any word on the new chapter

[JohnR321]

Hey Urban, got a new estimate on the chapter yet?

[eagen]

First thing you learn here is to not rush an artist. He will give it when it is done and that is just when it should be expected. Don't try to rush great work. Though an estimate would be nice.

[jdawgg]

Only im allowed to rush my bro.

[JohnR321]

Only im allowed to rush my bro.

Lol XD

[UrbanChaos]

I've just been to tired to work on the new chapter and I'm not looking forward to the editing, I think this friday is a holiday I just need a day where I can really just sit down and work on it I havent had one of those days yet. Check back sunday and i will either be up or I'll have some lame excuse

[jdawgg]

I've just been to tired to work on the new chapter and I'm not looking forward to the editing, I think this friday is a holiday I just need a day where I can really just sit down and work on it I havent had one of those days yet. Check back sunday and i will either be up or I'll have some lame excuse

Lol but thats why we love ya bro.

[JohnR321]

Yup. We can wait... Even if it will be impatient waiting.:)

[UrbanChaos]

So the lame excuse is coming early, I got my dates mixed up its not this friday I have off it's next weeks friday. I'm still going to try and have it done for Sunday though because I had promised I would

[JohnR321]

Both lol and yay!

[UrbanChaos]

Sorry guys I just couldn't get it completly get it done this week, it just keeps getting longer and longer on me. But I guarantee it will be out for next sunday... unless something horrible happens like someone invents time travel and brings a t-rex back with them by accident and it starts destroying downtown in which case I want to see that shit...

[RAT25]

Don't jinks it! Even if it's very unlikely, you never know what'll happen these days.

[Archfiend]

Sorry guys I just couldn't get it completly get it done this week, it just keeps getting longer and longer on me. But I guarantee it will be out for next sunday... unless something horrible happens like someone invents time travel and brings a t-rex back with them by accident and it starts destroying downtown in which case I want to see that shit...

That's already happened!
Remember C&C RA2: Yuri's Revenge? The Soviets travel back in time to alter the end of the war. The first time they oveshoot and for the next two minutes T-Rex after T-Rex attack you and try to eat you.
So... I suppose you should be safe from THAT particular threat.
Others though....
:yelcutelaughA:

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 38: Cantina Chaos


By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if".


As I had said earlier I would be trying something new with this chapter, it's fairly minor but I've had questions about things mentioned in various chapters or what i was reffering to. So I've decided to make a referance area in this example it helps if you know a little bit about Cloud city and what a Kybuck is so...

Kybuk: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kybuck
Cloud City, Port town: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Port_Town

If it's received well I'll keep, if not I'll just not do it, also I didn't have a lot of time to edit so you've been warned!





"But will it work?" Darth Rikan asked thoughtfully to the young ensign.
"Yes sir, the carbonite will freeze him solid." The man said snapping to attention.
"And it won't kill him." Rikan questioned testing a few levers in front of the freezing chamber.
"No sir."
"How confident are you in that?" He asked standing beside the ensign.
"One hundred percent." The ensign said shaking visibly from fear. Rikan grabbed the young man's arm and with one swift movement threw him into the freezing chamber then flicked the switch engaging the machines system. The ensign shrieked as a cloud of frost floated up from the chamber. A large grey block rose up from the smoke, the ensign had been completely encased in carbonite, his arms were attempting to cover his face but had done him no good.
"Is he alive?" Darth Rikan asked curiously. A stormtrooper stepped forward and tapped a few buttons on the display.
"Life signs normal." He confirmed.
"You see Boba, no harm done."
"I don't see why we have to encase Solo in carbonite at all." Boba Fett said grimly.
"We must coax the young Luke Skywalker out of hiding, hopefully we won't have to freeze Solo but if we can put him in emanate danger Luke should be able to feel it and hopefully come to his rescue."
"What about the girl?" Boba asked inspecting the carbonite frozen ensign.
"The princess? I'm unsure of where she went, it really does not concern me anyway." Rikan shrugged indifferent. Boba nodded pleased that she would stay safe.
"Although one of my commanders ordered a massive search of the city when he found out she was missing." Rikan said turning and walking towards the exit.
"Bring me Han Solo." Rikan ordered a group of soldiers, the men scattered quickly. Boba knew his hiding spot for Leia would no longer be sufficient with a city wide search, he would have to continuously move her until he could get her off the city.

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"Luke, not ready are you."
"I'm sorry master but my friend are in trouble, I have to save them." Luke tried to explain putting his flight suit on.
"Great danger I sense, your training is incomplete, not ready are you." Yoda said stomping his cane.
"I'll finish it when I come back." Luke promised strapping himself into his x-wing.
"A trap this is, present is the dark side. Be careful you must."
"May the force be with you master."
"And with you." Yoda nodded obviously still worried. Luke engaged his hatch and it slid forward sealing himself in, his engines roared to life as he grabbed the stick making the ship slowly rise into the air. The ship blasted into space then into hyperspace leaving Dagobah as a mere speck behind him. He knew what he was doing was wrong, he knew he should stay and finish his training. But he couldn't, not while his friends were in trouble. He could either finish his training or let his friends be killed. He did his best to push these thoughts from his mind, they would only distract him he, had to stay in the here and now. He dropped out of hyperspace and Bespin came into view. He dropped low into the clouds locking his targets onto cloud city, radar dishes came onto his sensors, he flicked his stick spinning him to the left just out of reach of the first scanner. He nosedived making the engines squeal passing safely out of range of the next radar. He stayed low swerving in and out of clouds he knew he had more than radar scanners to avoid he also had the city's military to worry about. The Storm IV twin pod cloud car was designed specifically for this planet and had much better manoeuvrability and speed in the clouds. Luke cranked his stick up and the ship arched straight up, the engines whined and rattled warning lights flashed telling him he was close to stalling his engines. He pushed the throttle harder knowing this was the only way to get onto the city, the engines sputtered but he could see the city he just needed a few more feet to reach the landing ramp. The engines gave a final burst then died, Luke ejected the hatch and unbuckled his straps as the ship flew upwards slowing more quickly than he had anticipated. He climbed out of the cockpit and edged his way to the nose of the ship the winds threatened to blow him off but he managed to prop himself up onto the nose in a crouch position. The ship stopped in mid air reaching its peak, Luke leapt using the force to propel him forward, his body slammed onto the landing ramp as he rolled forward, his x-wing tumbled down to planet below.
"Guess I'm not leaving with that ship." He muttered standing up and brushing himself off.


He pulled his blaster out of his holster and jogged forward, he had made it to some service pad underneath the city he realized seeing boxes and parts scatter about. He pushed the lift button and waited a few seconds for the door to open, he stepped in and pause unsure of which level to go to. He closed his eyes and let the force guide him, his hand lifted and pushed one of the buttons. The lifted blasted up rattling as it went.


The door opened and he exited quickly, he jogged down the hallway not entirely sure what he was looking for. He could hear footsteps further down the hall and he grinded to a halt, stormtroopers were crossing the hall ahead, Luke panicked it would be a few moments before they noticed him. The door next to him slid open and a hand grabbed him pulling him in to the darkness, the door slid shut locking them in. The lights flicked on and Luke couldn't believe who he saw.


"Dad!"
"Hush up! do you want those stormtroopers to hear us." Anakin said shushing his son.
"What are you doing here?" Luke said quieting down.
"I could ask you the same thing." He said crossing his arms.
"I'm here to save my friends." Luke said still unable to believe his dad was here.
"Why are you here?" He added quickly.
"Never mind why I'm here, they've set up a trap for you, you have to leave." Anakin said firmly.
"I can't! Leia and Han are in danger." Luke insisted.
"But specifically Leia, right?" Anakin said.
"Well I... I think that I... love her." Luke stammered looking at the ground. Anakin looked at his son for a few moments thinking deeply. Then smacked his son's head.
"OUCH! What was that for!" Luke yelled rubbing his head.
"She's your sister laser brains!" Anakin said giving him another smack.
"My sister! Why didn't you tell me I had a sister." Anakin questioned trying to dodge his dad's smacks.
"Because you're mom only told me a yesterday." He said harshly landing another smack.
"Cut it out!" Luke said harshly, rubbing at his welts.
"That's why I'm here, to save your sister!" Anakin admitted.

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Boba Fett typed in the code to the pass lock and the door slid open.
"Come with me." He said, Leia came out from where she was hiding and nodded.
"Where are we going?" She asked following close behind him.
"You've been hiding in this place to long we need to find you a new hiding spot." He explained walking briskly down the hall and turning a corner.
"But where?"
"There's an old service hatch on floor three hundred and seventy-four, it leads to the outside for repairing communication antennas, It used to double as a work station as well and was supposed to be retrofitted for repairing smaller items such as communication devices. But for some reason the plans fell through, now it's only used once a month for checking the antennas and making sure they're in decent condition. The log indicates they've already checked them this month so you should be safe there for a while." Boba said entering a lift followed by Leia, he typed in the floor number and the lifted rocketed up.
"How do you plan to get me out of here? We can't hide forever."
"We don't need to hide forever just until the Empire leaves, which will be very soon. Luke Skywalker is already in the city, Darth Rikan will have what he wants and then be on his way." Boba said matter-of-factly.
"Luke is here! Where?" Leia asked in disbelief.
"I'm not sure, he entered through one of the service pads then disappeared." Boba shrugged unconcerned. Leia opened her mouth o say something but was stopped by the sudden halt of the lift. Boba tried retyping the floor number but got no response.
"Floor one twenty-seven." Leia read the floor indicator.
"Port Town, just what we needed." Boba grumbled.
"What's port town?"
"Port Town covers levels one twenty-one to one sixty. It's a privately owned industrial area with an infamous reputation. It's covered with gambling dens, seedy cantinas and a lot of illegal trafficking. Someone is bound to recognize you here and that will only further complicate things." Boba said pulling the lift controls out from the wall revealing it's wiring.
"Can you fix it?" Leia asked glancing at the innards of the controls.
"No, one of the fuses has blown and I can't override the safety protocol." Boba said shaking his head.
"So what do we do?"
"Since the level we need to reach isn't a public one, not every lift can take us to it, we'll need another service lift. The nearest one is on the other side of this level. We'll have to get you a disguise and try and make it to the other end." Boba said opening the lift door. A pungent smell overwhelmed Leia, it was like a heavy musk of sweat and alcohol. The place wasn't lit very well it was like they purposely wanted it to look like it was night.


The whole place had been fashioned to look like a boulevard, Boba stepped into the street pushing his way through the crowd, Leia put her head down trying not to draw attention to herself, she did her best to keep up with Boba's long stride. The place reminded Leia of Courasants seedy underbelly, she wouldn't be surprised if this place was attempting to copy it. Neon signs plastered buildings telling people the kind of adult entertainment they had, scantily clad women were standing on the street corner trying to entice men to spend the night with them, drunks were wandering around and loud music blasted from every cantina. Boba grabbed her arm and pulled her into a clothing store.
"Pick something out, and be quick about it." Boba said leaning against a wall. Leia began to thumb through the racks of clothing and found something odd, she looked up at the stores name and her question was immediately answered. Temptation Threads, a chain of stores that specialized in sexy outfits and other adult items. She would never find anything modest in a place like this, but maybe if she could piece together outfits she could find something wearable. She grabbed a black fishnet shirt that came with small black dots to cover the nipples, she ditched the dots and continued down the rack grabbing a deep red V bikini that was about an inch thick. Next she grabbed a pair of black short shorts and a matching red belt and finally she grabbed a black face veil with an ornate design stitched in it with red thread. She stepped into small changing room and started to strip off the red dress she was wearing, when she got down to her undergarments she stopped. Something had caught her eye in the mirror, no not in the mirror but the mirror itself. After being in the public eye for so long she had developed a very keen eye, she pulled at the glass and it swung open reveling a small hidden room that was just big enough for the camera it held and possibly an extra person. A two way mirror was nothing new to her, people had been trying to get a picture of her naked since she was a teenager, it wasn't the first time she had run into something like this and she was sure it wouldn't be the last. She grabbed the data card out of it and stashed it in her short shorts pocket, partly so it wouldn't be able to record anymore but mostly out of perverted intrigue.


She shut the mirror door and dressed quickly putting her hair up into a ponytail. She gathered up her old clothes and stepped out, She walked up to the counter where Boba was already paying for her clothes.
"You're almost more expensive than your worth." Boba remarked handing the girl three one hundred credit chips. Boba lead Leia back outside where they now blended in perfectly. She looked like an ordinary slave girl following her master. They walked in silence for a while, which Leia was content with looking at all the different shops and venues, being a princess had meant she had to avoid places like this. She now fully understood why it truly was no place for a princess but she still found it interesting how happy these people seemed with their rather shady lives. Boba stopped suddenly making Leia bump into him.
"What's wrong?"
"The Stormtroopers have put a check stop up ahead." Boba said flatly.
"Is there a way around it?"
"No, it couldn't be in a more perfect of a spot for them."
"So what now?" Leia asked, concern creeping into her voice.
"We need to go into a cantina, we'll look suspicious standing here." Boba said before grabbing her arm and roughly pulling her into the nearest cantina. The place was dimly lit with a purple decor. Leia took a brief look around and was dumbfounded, it was more than just a strip joint and casino. It was like one big orgy, naked women and barely clothed women wandered about looking for a man to please. Men and women sitting on the bar stools were receiving oral sex alike, loungers were scattered about most were being used for some sexual act, in the centre of the room was a large round stage so it could be viewed from every angle and was currently being used for dancing girls.


"Welcome to the Kybuck Cantina, the raunchiest pleasure cantina on Cloud City, how may I satisfy you?" A smiling Lethan Twi'lek said, Leia couldn't help but notice her purple brassier and matching bottom veil, a small pin of a Kybuck was clipped to it probably meaning she was staff.
"I need a place to leave my slave for a while, is it possible for me to leave her in your care?" Boba asked glancing around the room, a sudden burst of anger shot through Leia, how dare he even entertain the idea of leaving her here, let alone call her his slave!
"Please wait here while I find the man in charge of that." She said bowing before walking into a backroom.
"What are you thinking! And how dare you call me of all people a slave!" Leia spat suppressing the urge to slap him.
"I can't haul you around the city with so many stormtroopers looking for you, they've probably set up checkpoints all around the city just like the one that's impeding us now. The stormtroopers are looking for a princess not a slave, so them coming in here and checking all the slaves is highly unlikely so as long as you play nice you should be fine. I've already spent too much time trying to hide you Darth Rikan will be expecting me soon. It's not ideal but it's the best I can do." Boba said evenly. Leia opened her mouth to say something but snapped it shut seeing the Twi'lek reappearing with a Bothan, the Bothan wearing a black suit and purple tie with the same pin the Twi'lek was wearing.


"Welcome I am Saiga Biree'rey, I understand you would like to leave your slave in our care." The Bothan smiled offering his hand.
"Correct." Boba said ignoring his gesture.
"We have a few holding cells still available, the cost of rent is two hundred and fifty credits a night, a very reasonable price I assure you."
"Holding cell?" Leia cut in shocked.
"Quiet." Boba said gripping Leia's arm tightly. The Twi'lek whispered into Saiga's ear.
"As my associate here has reminded me we are short staffed this evening, Likia is in charge of the girls here and lucky for you she likes the look of your slave. If you'd like she can work for us until you return." Saiga proposed.
"What kind of wage can I expect?" Boba asked.
"Our general rule is we don't pay any slave we hire from a third party, but they may keep their tips. However for you Master Fett we can work out a better arrangement." Saiga assured.
"That would be acceptable." Boba nodded. Likia produced a collar and leash and handed the collar to Leia, Leia looked at Boba helpless.
"She's not fond of leashes." Boba explained.
"Strictly policy I assure you." Saiga said, Boba nodded and Leia took the purple collar and attached it around her neck. Likia clipped the leash on and pulled Leia to the back and behind a door that said authorized personnel only.


The back was much cleaner than she had expected, it's walls were painted a nice purple hue, girls were resting and chatting with each other. Some were changing or doing there makeup while others were grabbing a bite to eat.
"This is the girls lounge, feel free to rest here for a while if you get tired but most of the money does come in tips so it's best to stay on the floor. Now what is your name." Likia asked showing her around, Leia paused not wanting to use her real name.
"Nally." Leia said after a few moments.
"I am unsure what sexual act your master would allow you to participate in so I will leave that up to your discretion. If a customer asks for your sexual services and you are unable to help him simply tell him, I am unavailable for services right now, then ask him or her if they would like you to find another girl. If they would you can come and tell me or any other manger and we will see to it. Our Kybuck pins are black you see while yours is brown," She explained handing Leia a Kybuck pin.
"The first floor is for major entertainment such as dancers, oral sex and quick fucks. The second floor is for longer sexual acts along with orgy rooms, glory hole rooms and private parties, the third floor is for those that purchase a full night with their partner." Likia continued to explain.
"I am the Madam here so you will do as I say. Understood?" She said hardening her tone
"Yes Madam."
"Good, just remember to have fun and I'm sure you will do well. Heer is your work card when a customer wishes to give you a tip he'll tap his card to yours and select an amount, your account will automatically update and add that amount." She said handing her the purple and black card with a Kybuck embossed on the front then unclipped the leash.
"Now get to it." She smiled softening her tone and giving Leia's ass a playful smack as she turned around to leave.


Leia re-entered the main area, she looked around and saw that Boba Fett had left her, she had no idea how long he would be gone but she knew it would be for at least a few hours. She looked around trying to decide where to begin, she saw a lone Selkath sitting at a table enjoying the dancing human on the stage. She walked over her to him with strange excitement in her stomach.
"May I get you a drink?" She offered the man.
"Sullustan wine please." He asked in his native tongue.
"Right away." Leia nodded before hurrying off to the bar, she grabbed the man's drink and hurried back.


"Is there any other way I can be of service." Leia asked smiling sweetly.
"Oral please." He asked, Leia just now noticed the man had been stroking his cock and wondered how long he had been masturbating on his own. Leia thought about refusing but she knew she had to blend in, and she had never actual sees a Selkath's penis before. She got on her knees and crawled under the table, it was bigger then she had expected it had to be two or three inches bigger than a regular humans, it had a pale blue tinge to it and was cold to the touch. Leia undid her mouth veil and put her luscious lips around his cock and got to work bobbing her head.
"Most women here do not understand Selkath, I am surprised you understand so well." He admitted pulling on her ponytail playfully, Leia had been forced to learn dozens of languages so she could properly negotiate, while she was a little rusty with some she had dealt with many Selkath over the years, for whatever reason they had preferred her over her father. She looked up at him with big doe eyes and gave him a slight smile still deepthroating his cock.
"It's hard to get sex here when no one understands you." He chuckled forcing Leia to take the entirety of his cock down her throat. Leia felt his cock shudder slightly then discharge his cum, a large batch of cum rushed into her mouth, it was unlike any other cum she had ever had the pleasure of tasting. It was way saltier then she had expected and it was like a cold glass of water.
"I've been storing up for a while." The Selkath apologized embarrassed, Leia let the cock spring free from her mouth and gave the softening head a kiss before getting up and giving the Selkath a kiss on the cheek.
"I'm glad I could help." She whispered in his ear, the Selkath took his card out of his pocket and tapped it against Leia's leaving her a hefty tip. Leia redid her mouth veil then walked away from the Selkath giving her ass an extra swing as she did.


Leia didn't make it far before she felt a hand give her a firm smack on the ass.
"See this is a nice ass." She heard from behind her as her butt cheek was pinched.
"Don't see many that nice anymore." She heard a second voice agree with the first, she looked behind her and saw two humans admiring her rear-end.
"Bet her pussy is tight too." The first said licking his lips. Leia undid her shorts and let them drop to the floor before bending over a table and shaking her ass to entice the young fellow. The man just barely shoved the head of his prick in causing Leia to moan loudly.
"Oh frack is she tight." The man moaned pressing his dick further in until his balls were pressed right up against her. He paused enjoying the sensation of having his cock completely enveloped by her hot wet pussy then started to pump his hips like a piston. The second man began to rub her tights through her fishnet, he had a stern look on his face as if he was some sort of a judge in a contest.
"Not a bad rack either." The man said approvingly, the man humping her grunted in agreement, he had yet to slow down with his thrusts while Leia was enjoying her pounding he clearly wasn't worried about how much pleasure she was receiving, he was only concerned with himself. Leia wondered if this was the fate of all sex slaves. The man's hands were rolling Leia's buns like dough as he continued to jackhammer her pussy.
"You know I've been looking for a slave." The man that had been feeling her it's said grabbing and pinching Leia's mouth with one hand, before Leia could answer and inform him she wasn't for sale he had pulled his erect cock out and was dangling it less than an inch from her lips.
"Lick it." The man demanded with a smug look, Leia contemplated telling the man that she wasn't for sale but she was worried he would take his thick cock away from her, there was no harm in a test drive right? Leia did her best to lick the head with her tongue but she had problem being consistent with her body shaking from the pounding her pussy was taking, her tongue lapped up and down the head as best as she could, the man behind her grabbed her ponytail hard and let out a loud grunt hen sprayed a huge load of cum deep into her womb, he pulled his softening cock out of her snatch and was quickly replaced by the man she had been licking.


Her pussy had barely enough time to rest before the second man had slammed his cock in, Leia's pussy filled up once again with a thrusting a cock and pleasure was seeping into each part of her body.
"She's much tighter than most pleasure slaves." The man grunted groping her as with each thrust.
"She's obviously been gently used." The other man laughed placing his soft cock in front of Leia's mouth so she could clean it up. Leia started to slurp up the messy cock savoring the leftover cum on it.
"So how much do you cost?" The man slamming his cock into her asked.
"I'm not for sale." Leia said licking the cock in front of her.
"Are you sure? Perhaps I should speak with your master."
"He actually just needed a place to store me for a while, I'm only on loan." Leia insisted getting a little nervous.
"If you were my slave I wouldn't leave you in such a scummy place, I'd treat you like a princess." The man said trying to tantalize her, Leia thought it was kind of ironic that he would treat her like a princess of all people.


"Is there a problem here?" Likia asked in a very defensive tone appearing next to Leia.
"I was just asking your slave her if she's for sale." The man humping her said quickening his pace.
"She is quite beautiful." Likia said playing with Leia's hair. "But not for sale." She added a few moments later.
"Are you certain? I would pay almost anything for her." The man said trying to barter.
"Unfortunately The Kybuck Cantina does not own this slave, she is on loan for the time being. However if you would like to leave your information with me I can inform her owner in your interest." Likia said becoming very professional.
"Very well, one moment please." The man muttered defeated, he gave a few more thrusts and poured his warm sticky cum into her pussy with a groan. He slipped his wet messy cock out still moaning, Likia pulled a purple hanky out from underneath her bottom veil and cleaned the man's dick with it.
"Nally, I want you to wait here while I take this man up front." Likia instructed putting her handkerchief away.
"Yes Madam." Leia nodded. Likia lead the men away after he left Leia a generous tip. Leia did as she was told and stayed put readjusting her clothes and trying to look sexy for the customers. It didn't take long for Likia to return, she took Leia's hand and lead her towards the stairs.
"Thanks for helping me out with those two guys." Leia said grateful.
"It's my job to know and see everything that is happening in this Cantina, I could tell they were making you uncomfortable. Besides you remind me of someone, I can't quite put my finger on it but I feel obligated to protect you." She admitted.
"I get that a lot." Leia chuckled.
"Since we are so short on staff today one of my girls has had to work the gloryhole room for a triple shift. I was hoping you could take over for a bit so she could take a rest in the back."
"I'll do my best." Leia affirmed. They made their way to the second floor and Likia lead her to a white door marked staff only Likia punched a code into the door and it slid open reveling a small white room with a naked human female on her knees sucking on a dick that was protruding though the wall. She was covered from head to toe in thick white cum, Leia stepped into the room and she could feel the floor had been coated in sticky semen.
"Nally is going to replace you for awhile." Likia told the girl. The girl let the cock pop from her mouth just as it started to spray cum. The girl stood up shakily and grabbed a towel hanging from the wall wiping herself down.
"Thank you." She smiled at Leia before walking out.
"I'll help you for bit until you get the hang of it." Likia said pulling Leia in and closing the door.
"Most girl take off their clothes before starting their shift so they don't get messy." She winked pulling off her brassier and bottom veil hanging them on one of the hooks, Leia's eyes trailed across the twi'lek's sexy nude red body. Leia did the same a little embarrassed at being naked in front of Likia, though she wasn't really sure why. A cock popped through one of the holes in the wall, Likia put her arm around Leia's waist and they both dropped to their knees. Likia didn't even hesitate she immediately started to lick and slurp the cock in front of her. Leia joined in adding her luscious lips to the cock, they took turns sucking the cock while the other licked the shaft. The two had the cock erupting in a shower of cum in no time, three more cocks appeared in different holes. Leia and Likia both chose one to suck on and tag teamed the third. Likia was much more skilled hen Leia and had made hers cum in what seemed like minuets, she moved onto the second and had that one cumming just as fast, Leia was astonished with the women's speed and tenacity, Leia was still working on her first cock and she had already finished off two. Likia kissed Leia's cheek then forced her to deepthroat the cock, the cock shot cum down her throat into her belly moments later. Likia let go of Leia's head and Leia let the cock spill free of her mouth sputtering and coughing from the forced deepthroat.


Two more cocks appeared on opposite sides of the wall, Likia stood up and turned her back to one, then bent over and slid the dick into her pussy with moan, Leia did the same stuffing the other dick into her own pussy. Their faces met in the middle of the room only a few inches from each other and Likia immediately began to kiss Leia, Leia didn't even try to resist instead she ran her hands down Likia's naked body groping her tits. Leia and Likia began to move back and forth humping the dicks in there pussy's never unlocking there kiss. The dicks exploded with a torrent of cum spraying deep into their wombs. Likia finally broke their kiss and opened up a hidden keypad in the wall she punched a few keys and the opaque white walls turned transparent making a large window room, Leia could see about twenty shocked looking men and aliens.
"Gentlemen, today we have a special show for you. Please enjoy." Likia said into a microphone, she closed up the hidden panel and walked back over to Leia seductively swaying her hips. She pulled Leia in close pressing their breasts together before giving her a deep passionate kiss. Leia glanced around with eyes and the men were scrambling to get there pants off and stroke there cocks. Leia ran her hands down Likia's back and squeezed her firm ass. Likia pushed Leia to her back and got to work licking up Leia's wet pussy. Leia couldn't help but moan and put on hand on Likia's had forcing her closer to her snatch. Likia forced two three fingers into Leia's pussy pumping them hard as she continued to lick her pussy.


Leia managed to pull herself free of Likia's grasp. Likia whimpered with confusion, Leia climbed on top of Likia so her pussy was hovering inches from her mouth while Likia's own pussy was only inches from Leia's mouth. Leia had always loved the sixty-nine position with women. Likia got back to work licking and fingering Leia's sweet pussy while Leia start to rub Likia's dripping pussy with her fingers, Leia's body was electrified with pleasure Likia's skill was incomparable to anyone else she had ever been with, her fingers were like magic knowing exactly when to thrust, Leia did her best but between her constant shuddering from pleasure Leia was sure she wasn't doing much but she was still determined to do her best, she shoved three fingers into Likia's wet snatch and began to pump away with as much speed as she could muster. Likia let out a loud moan and her fingers faltered for a brief second from the pleasure, Leia smiled knowing she had found Likia's weak spot she instinctively started to exploit it sending tremors through Likia's body, her body writhed under Leia's. Leia gasped as Likia slipped a pinky into her ass regaining control of Leia. The two finger banged each other as fast and as hard as they could making the room echo in moans and groans. Leia could just no longer contain herself, her pussy exploded letting her juices seep out and into Likia's mouth, Likia wasn't far behind letting her juices pour out of her pussy.


Leia rolled over onto her back exhausted and gasping for breath, she felt warm liquid splashing across her body and looked around, the men were all lining up to shoot there cum across the two nude women's bodies. Likia clmbed over to Leia hugging her and giving her a peck on the cheek.
"It's too bad you aren't for sale, I'd buy you in a heartbeat." Likia smiled giving Leia another kiss. Leia held the women tight, as much as she had just enjoyed herself she couldn't wait until Boba came back to pick her up...

[jdawgg]

Great job bro. Keep it up.

[The Sandman]

Loved the new chapter. It was awesome.

[JohnR321]

Hush up! do you want those stormtroopers to hear us." Anakin said shushing his son.
"What are you doing here?" Luke said quieting down.
"I could ask you the same thing." He said crossing his arms.
"I'm here to save my friends." Luke said still unable to believe his dad was here.
"Why are you here?" He added quickly.
"Never mind why I'm here, they've set up a trap for you, you have to leave." Anakin said firmly.
"I can't! Leia and Han are in danger." Luke insisted.
"But specifically Leia, right?" Anakin said.
"Well I... I think that I... love her." Luke stammered looking at the ground. Anakin looked at his son for a few moments thinking deeply. Then smacked his son's head.
"OUCH! What was that for!" Luke yelled rubbing his head.
"She's your sister laser brains!" Anakin said giving him another smack.
"My sister! Why didn't you tell me I had a sister." Anakin questioned trying to dodge his dad's smacks.
"Because you're mom only told me a yesterday." He said harshly landing another smack.
"Cut it out!" Luke said harshly, rubbing at his welts.
"That's why I'm here, to save your sister!" Anakin admitted.
Love this part:)

[UrbanChaos]

Thanks I was particularly proud of how that part came out!

Also this is short notice but the next chapter will be out this sunday, it will be a short one wrapping up cloud city and probably the movie

[jdawgg]

Thanks I was particularly proud of how that part came out!

Also this is short notice but the next chapter will be out this sunday, it will be a short one wrapping up cloud city and probably the movie

Better be out by sunday

[eagen]

How's the chapter coming?

[UrbanChaos]

Next chapter will be out this sunday, sorry fo the delay

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 39: The Getaway


By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.




*Editors Note I didn;t have time to actually edit... you've been warned*




Han's mind raced as he was escorted down the hall by the pack of stormtroopers around him. They stopped at one of the metal prison doors, he could hear some sort of racket going on inside, the lead trooper typed in a code opening the door, they shoved Han straight in and locked the door behind him. He couldn't believe what he saw inside the prison.


Lando was sitting on Chewie's shoulder trying to grab one of the air vent grates above him, Chewie however couldn't keep his balance and was wobbling around making Lando hold on for dear life with one hand and wildly swing the other in the air.
"To your left fuzz brain! Not that left your other left!" Lando screamed at Chewie, Chewie returned with a roar of displeasure.
"What are you two doing!" Han yelled at the two buffoons, Chewie hadn't realized Han had been thrown into their cell and fell back in surprise toppling Lando to the floor. Chewie roared trying to defend himself to Han.
"That's the stupidest plan I've ever heard!" Han shouted at Chewie after he tried to explain Lando's plan.
"It's the best I could come up with!" Lando said rubbing his sore head. Before Han could respond to anymore of Lando's stupidity the cell door slid up revealing Boba Fett.
"Solo, come with me." He said coldly, Han did as he was told and followed the man to what he was sure was probably his doom.

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"How did you even find me?" Luke asked his dad rubbing his bruises.
"Cody brought me here, he left a few minutes ago to stake the place out."
"I can sense my friends are in trouble dad, I can't explain it but I need to go."
"I understand, you have thirty minutes that's when my ship takes off. I'm going to find your sister." Anakin sighed.
"Got it." Luke turned and opened the door .
"Be safe." Anakin called after his son.


"Luke made his way carefully through the city dodging patrols and letting the force guide him until it brought him to a door. He couldn't sense what was on the other side it felt cloudy, as if something was blocking the force but he was sure Han was in there. He opened the door and took one step in before the door behind him slammed shut locking him in, he was in a round room and in the very centre was Han frozen a grey stone block, a man stepped out for the shadowy corner followed by Boba Fett and three stormtroopers.
"Take Captain Solo to my ship." Boba Fett ordered, the stormtroopers and Boba took his prize and disappeared across a construction catwalk.


"At last, the young Luke Skywalker." The man said smiling.
"Do I know you?" Luke asked hovering his hand over his lightsaber.
"I am Darth Rikan, a member of the Sith council."
"What did you do with Han."
"He has been frozen in carbonite, his final destination however is unknown to me."
"And what do you want with me?" Luke said feeling a bit nervous, there was no way he could defeat a Sith lord not at his current level.
"What I want with you is irrelevant, It's what the Emperor wants with you."
"I'm not going with you." Luke said pulling out his lightsaber and igniting it.
"It's as though you believe you have a choice." He chuckled igniting his red blade.


Luke lunged at Rikan slashing his pale blue blade, Rikan easily side stepped the attack.
"What a pity, .thought this was going to be fun." Rikan sighed swiping his blade at Luke, Luke barely had time to bring his lightsaber up and intercept the attack, the lightsabers crackled in a shower of sparks. Rikan began to press the attack forcing Luke back, Rikan seemed to be playing a game he was poking and prodding at Luke's every weak point inching him farther and farther back towards the stairs. Luke feeling the pressure tried a risky spin in order to get to one of Rikan's open sides, however Rikan was no fool he sliced out catching Luke's arm leaving a black burn. Luke tried to use what little might he had left to slice down and hopefully break through Rikans defense but Rikan easily blocked Lukes downward slice kicking his chest and adding a bit of force push to it sending him spiraling backwards down the stairs until he came to a painful landing on his back.
"Do you now see how foolish it is to challenge me?" Darth Rikan laughed descending the stairs. Luke couldn't help but face facts he was to weak, at this rate all he was going to get was bruises and broken bones until he had no other option but to give into Rikan. Perhaps it would be better to give up and fight another day.


"Come with me and I will teach you the power of the darkside."
"Now hold on." A voice said behind Luke."
"I'm a little hurt I was invited to this party." Cody said stepping in front of Luke who was doing his best to get back on his feet.
"And who are you?" Rikan asked frowning.
"Colonel Cody of the Rebel Alliance at your service."
"Do you truly believe you are worthy to face a Sith lord?" Rikan laughed loudly.
"Not only can I face you, I can defeat you." Cody said with a smirk.
"Tread lightly young one." Darth Rikan said frowning.
"Let Luke go and you and I shall finish the battle."
"I sense truth in you, you're not lying or trying to trick me to save your friend you truly believe you can kill me, don't you."
"I do."
"You have my intrigue, do not disappoint me or I will do far worse things to you than simply killing you."


Cody bent down to his friend and helped him up.
"Don't worry about me Luke, I've got a plan get yourself to safety and I'll be right behind you." Cody whispered giving Luke a slight push towards the exit, Luke nodded and hobbled out the door feeling comforted by his friends words. Cody was smart and cunning, he was sure whatever he had planned would be more than sufficient to kill Darth Rikan.


Cody turned to face his foe after watching Luke make it to safety and out the door, he took a deep breath fearing the worst.
"So, what is your plan Colonel?" Rikan said with a self assured smirk.
"I've been sent on a very important mission, one just for you."
"Oh? Do tell?"
"I've been personally sent to escort you to the gates of hell." Cody smiled pulling out two thermal detonators that had already been engaged, Rikan managed to make one step towards Cody before the room was enveloped in a bright white flash disintegrating everything in the room.

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A rumble blasted through the hall shaking the walls around him almost making Luke lose his balance, then he felt something or rather a lack of something. He could no longer feel Cody in the force it was as if he had been silenced. Luke was sure his friend had just given his life so he could escape, he desperately wanted to go back to see if any remains of his friend had survived but he knew that would just be squandering his Cody's gift. Instead he had to find his friends and get out, though he didn't know how. It had been long passed his dad's thirty minuet deadline and Cody was dead, something his father would undoubtedly feel through the force prompting him to take off. But Leia was still somewhere in the city, he had a trouble believing his father would leave without her.


Without warning a blearing siren rang out through the intercom, a women's synthetic voice came on alerting the residents someone had set the self destruct. Luke had no doubt Darth Rikan had programmed the city to explode just in case of his demise. Luke turned the corner and his jaw dropped, he saw Leia being escorted by Boba Fett wearing practically nothing.
"Leia?" Luke said starting to draw at his lightsaber.
"Easy kid you're in no shape to fight, you wouldn't be the first foolish Jedi I've killed." Boba said, his blaster already trained on Luke.
"Would both you boys stop!" Leia huffed, Luke re clipped his lightsaber to his belt a little ashamed of himself.
"Boba was trying to help get me safely off this city."
"I can take her from here." Luke said trying to straighten himself up, he didn't like the idea of Leia spending any more time with Boba, especially with what she was wearing.
"Makes no difference to me." Boba said giving Leia a slight push towards Luke. Leia took Luke's arm and but it around her shoulder, it was fairly obvious how bad of shape he was in.
"Your friend on in cell eight, down the hall and to the left." Boba said looking at Leia.
"Is Han in there?" Luke snapped.
"No." Boba said coldly before turning and heading down the hall.
"For a Jedi you sure are stupid." Leia sighed giving him an elbow to the ribs.
"What?"
"He was trying to help me laser brains." Leia said leading Luke down the hall.


Leia was about to open the door to the cell but stopped hearing a loud racket inside.
"What is that?" Luke said with a puzzled look.
"Only one way to find out." Leia sighed opening the door. Inside Luke could see a foam from a ripped apart mattress covering the whole floor of the cell, Chewie was using parts of the bed frame to bang on one of the walls while Lando was jumping around with springs on his feet that he had found inside the mattress.
"What are you two doing." Leia shouted, Chewie growled trying to explain their situation.
"That's the stupidest plan I've ever heard!" Luke yelled at the two idiots.
"Now both of you get out here so we can get to the Falcon." Leia demanded, the two hung their heads and did what they were told.


The pack ran down the hall and boarded the Millenium Falcon, Chewie and Lando went to the cockpit while Leia pulled Luke to the medical bay. Luke laid down on the bed while Leia started to clean his cuts and bruises. Luke wondered what had happened to his father, he had said he was going to get Leia but she was with him.
"What's with your... wardrobe." Luke asked his curiosity killing him.
"It's a long story." Leia said trying to hide her smile.
"What about the Kybuck pin?" Luke asked noticing it pined to her, he swore he had seen a pin like it before but he couldn't put his place his finger on where.
"A friend gave it to me." Leia said remembering what Likia had told her when Boba had picked her up, she said it was a great honor for a nonemployee to carry one and that if she ever needed help all she had to do was show it at any Kybuck cantina and she would get instant help. She snapped back to reality and caught Luke staring at her breasts.
"You know I have eyes, right?" Leia said sarcastically.
"But those are far less interesting to look at." Luke laughed, Leia's hand slide down to his crotch and took a firm hold of his cock.
"Looks like you're feeling a lot better." She smiled pulling his pants off and watching his cock harden.
"Well I have such a good nurse." He said kissing her neck. Leia slowly started to jack his dick trading kisses with him as she did. Luke couldn't keep his hands off of her running them up and down her luscious body.


Leia awkwardly striped down while continuing to jack him off, she got on top of him hovering her pussy over top of his erect dick.
"We shouldn't do this here." She whispered looking at the open medical door.
"You're right." Luke agreed guiding her down onto his meat anyway, Leia suppressed a moan as his thick cock pierced its way through her tight snatch. She locked hands with him and started to bob up and down letting out quiet moans and groans. Her body bounced harder and harder never satisfied with the amount of pleasure she was getting, she craved more. Her breathing had become erratic, her heart was racing at the excitement of the possibility of being caught. She laid down pressing her tits against Luke's chest, her ass still bouncing and taking his thick rod as hard and as fast as she could. Luke couldn't contain himself and planted a kiss on her lips. Leia gladly accepted the embrace twirling her tongue in Luke's mouth. Luke managed to sit up and pulled Leia off of him then looked outside the medical bay door checking to see if the coast was clear, then he took her hand and lead her to Dejarik table.
"Ok, we really shouldn't be out here." She whispered harshly, Luke ignored her and bent her over the table and began to fuck her from behind. As much as Leia didn't like being this out in the open but she did have admit it felt incredibly good to be rammed from behind with the naughty possibility of being caught.


Leia's hands clenched onto the table trying to release some of the pleasure, she so badly wanted to scream and shout in pleasure she didn't know how long she would be able to last. But before long Luke had pulled out and was spraying his hot cum across her round ass. Leia took a big scoop of it with her fingers and began to suck it off.
"That was quick." Leia teased enjoying her treat.
"I'm injured." Luke said panting.
"Well go get some rest, I'll clean up here." She said pointing at the cum on the floor. She watched Luke saunter off to the crew quarters, she wondered if she would be able to get Chewie alone to finish her off...

[eagen]

For something that wasn't edited I found few mistakes. It was a great read as always.

[JohnR321]

Pretty good... One question: Now that he knows Leia's his sister, are we saying he's ok with incest?

[UrbanChaos]

Luke already fucked his mom so his sister probably wouldn't be a big deal, or chalk it up to me running out of time and needing to find a sexual pairing either or

[JohnR321]

Oh yeah. Forgot about that. Well then, keep up the good work, UrbanChaos!

[JohnR321]

Also, anyone who wants to talk star wars, feel free to message. I am a huge fan of Star Wars, and have compiled a decent sized amount of knowledge. Just so people know.

[The Sandman]

Great new chapter.

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 40: Resignation

By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.








Consider this my official resignation, I'm afraid that my priorities have shifted and I can no longer dedicate a sufficient amount of time to this project. I apologize especially since we we're so close to the end, but with my views dwindling and less and less people willing to chime in I'm afraid this is where we come to a close, at least for now. Many of the people I had started with have long since gone, and I have seen and come in contact with some amazing people for that I am thankful. I didn't want to just disappear into the night or ride off into the sunset, I owe everyone that made this story what it is better than that. It seems fitting to close down this thread for now, after all, together we spanned two years and forty chapters a pretty impressive feat if I do say so myself.


Does this mean I won't be around anymore? In short no, I will still be around just not as often.

Will I write other stories? Probably, I've had four in the works for some time but haven't been able to give them the time they deserve.

Is this truly the end? I honestly I do not know, for the moment I need a break, I've spent the last two years constantly planning and making time for this that I've burnt myself out. Perhaps one day I'll pick this story up but for now I simply cannot go on this way, if someone else wanted to try their hand at it perhaps this story could be handed down.

For now I want to say thanks for all your views and contributions no matter how small or large.

~UrbanChaos

[RAT25]

Well, it was nice while it lasted, and I hope you may someday start up again, when you feel ready.

[eagen]

We mark not the fall of a legend, but the understanding that all things are subject to change. Good luck with life and other writings. This has been a great project and I am glad to see the acknowledgement of its ending.

[The Sandman]

Thank you for all the time and effort you put into these stories. They are great.

[JohnR321]

Well, damn. I enjoyed this one, too...

[UrbanChaos]

I don't plan on doing this very often and as soon as I can avoid it I will but I put up and new story. I would much rather do a journal entry on my page or something but that's been down for a long time and I'm tired of holding onto this story. So for anyone that still follows me or watches this thread here is the link to my new story. I mentioned I was working on it a long time ago and was waiting for the site to be back to 100% but I don't see that happening anytime soon, anyway enjoy.

http://www.sexstoriespost.com/forums/showthread.php/47867-Katelyn-s-Lessons?p=520268#post520268

[jdawgg]

Thx bro. Checkin it out now

[qwsaqw]

Will check it out

[Spycam]

Hey, I'm among those that have been out of the loop for a while. I'd like to express my appreciation for you dedication to this project. Erotica is common, and good writing is common, but the combination is rare. Farewell.

[UrbanChaos]

So this is most likely my last post on this thread, I know a few people still watch it here and there so my final update is I've started a blog which can be found here http://www.sexstoriespost.com/forums/entry.php/1234-Updates any stories I write or anything like that will be updated through here, also questions and stuff can be asked there so head on over there and check it out for more details

[mmessner38]

Great story. Wish there were more thought.