Star Wars The What Ifs

[irishcdn]

shorest? why is it short youve had awhile lol

[UrbanChaos]

I felt like I was running short on time (and dwelling on this chpt to long) and the concept I went with had a very narrow writting potential (more bones then meat if you catch my drift)

[jdawgg]

I felt like I was running short on time (and dwelling on this chpt to long) and the concept I went with had a very narrow writting potential (more bones then meat if you catch my drift)

hey urban, im gonna post a story in a few daysm, generakl sections. sory i bit drynk

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 23: Honey! I'm Home!


By UrbanChaos


•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.


Padme woke up clutching for Anakin in their king sized bed, but only found air. She could still feel panic rushing through her body, a dream had given her a sense of fright but she couldn’t even remember what the dream had been about. She slipped out from under her covers and went to the large window that covered most of the wall, the sun warmed her skin as she watched the many vehicles fly by. Padme turned to her closet to get dressed but decided against the act, she figured since she wasn’t going anywhere she might as well stay comfortable. She walked out of her room and into the kitchen wearing her lime green nighty, it had spaghetti straps for her shoulders and the bottom of the nighty only covered about three quarters of her ass allowing her to show off her perfect butt she had worked so hard to obtain, but she of course wore a light pink thong underneath. She riffled through the cabinets looking for some food but was abruptly interrupted by the ring of the door bell.


Padme hesitated slightly trying to decide whether or not she should grab her housecoat, but when the door bell rang again she simply went to the door without it. She stood on her tip toes to see through the peek hole and to her surprise saw Obi Wan scratching at his beard on the other side of the door. She quickly opened the door in excitement and hugged him tightly.
“Obi!” Padme cried happily. Obi Wan hugged her back just as tight and gave her ass a tight squeeze before letting go.
“Come in.” Padme said excitedly waving him in. Obi Wan nodded politely and stepped in to the apartment, he followed Padme to the sitting area where she elegantly stretched herself out on the couch, Obi Wan took a comfy looking chair across from her.
“So what brings you to my humble home?” Padme asked batting her eyes.
“Anakin actually.” Obi Wan replied calmly.
“What about him?” Padme asked knowing where this conversation was leading.
“I’m… worried about him.” Obi Wan hesitated.
“You and me both.” Padme admitted.
“I’m afraid he’s drifting towards the dark side, you’re the closest to Anakin, what do you think?” Obi Wan spoke softly.
“I don’t know, I think he’s just in a tough spot. He feels the need to defend Palpatine but he knows that Palpatines actions are questionable at best.” Padme explained.
“I figured as much.” Obi Wan said nodding.


Padme got up and moved so she was standing next to Obi Wan, he then proceeded to stand up and feeling Padme’s despair through the force gave her a hug.
“I’m sure there is nothing to worry about.” Obi Wan consoled her. Padme nuzzled into Obi Wans chest, then felt Obi Wans hand slid down her back and onto her butt. His hands lifted her nighty just enough so he could slid his hand into the waist band, his hands began to slowly massage her snatch with his finger. Padme quietly moaned as his finger pierced her pussy and thrusted in and out, he instantly made her wet and began nudging her slowly to the couch.
“Anakin will be home soon.” Padme whispered worried.
“Then we’d better be quick.” He teased.


Padme laid down on the couch, which had no arms, while Obi Wan disrobed tossing his clothes into a messy pile. Padme herself tugged at her shirt to get it off and then wiggled her panties off, she got them off just as Obi Wan came swooping in and slamming his dick into her raw pussy. Padme screeched from the sudden pleasure that raged through her body.


“So what’s the big deal if Anakin catches us having sex?” Obi Wan asked falling into a steady rhythm.
“He’s been very… possessive of me lately.” She panted trying to find the right words.
“I see, and you don’t know what he’ll do if he sees us.” Obi Wan said slowing the speed of his thrusts and reaching down to grope her tits.
“Right.” Padme moaned. Obi Wan increased his speed and Padme’s hips instinctively began to rock to the rhythm he had set, her pussy began to leak her sweet juices all over his hard prick.


But just as things were getting heavy both Padme and Obi Wan heard the front door slid open, a look of terror was exchanged between the two as Obi Wans dick stopped half way in.
“Padme?” Anakin called from the door.
“Hide!” Padme whispered harshly to Obi Wan. Obi Wan hoped over the back of the couch and grabbed his pile of clothes.
“Padme? Are you home?” She heard Anakin call again.
“In the living room!” Padme called trying to figure out what to do, Anakin’s foot steps became amplified, in desperation she sat herself up and spread her legs then quickly began to rub her snatch with her index finger. She watched as he rounded the corner and stared at her in disbelief.
“Are you masturbating?” He asked more calmly then she had expected.
“Yup.” She answered quickly.


Anakin smiled and shook his head a little, then walked through the kitchen and into their bedroom. Padme eagerly hopped up and followed him but stopped in the kitchen were she leaned on her elbows against the island counter.
“So why are you home?” Padme asked.
“I just needed to grab a few things.” He called from somewhere in the bedroom. Padme noted a bit of concern in his voice, but before she said anything she felt Obi Wan’s hands grab onto her hips and his dick slip into her snatch, Padme covered her mouth in an attempt to stifle a moan as Obi Wan started to gently thrust in and out.
“What’s wrong Anakin?” Padme somehow managed to say evenly.
“Palpatines new reform, sixty something, its going to give him even more power he says.” Anakin explained. Padme fell silent as she enjoyed the feel of Obi Wan plowing her while Anakin was in their bedroom. Padme pulled the dick out with a bit of a glare from Obi Wan and entered their bedroom, she went to the walk in closet where Anakin was throwing clothes about and poked her head around the corner so the majority of her body was covered by the wall.
“What are you doing?” Padme asked sweetly.
“Packing some stuff Palpatine has me going on a mission for the next few days.” Anakin answered without turning around.


At that very moment Obi Wan slammed his cock into her wet snatch making her gasp loudly, this in turn made Anakin twist his head around and look at her curiously.
“I just can’t believe the Jedi Council would allow you to go on a personal mission for Palpatine.” Padme covered quickly
“The Council doesn’t know.” Anakin admitted seemingly to accept her cover up. Padme winced trying not to utter a sound as Obi Wan gently thrusted in and out, until Padme had had enough of his boldness and grabbed him by the dick and pulled him back into the kitchen.
“I’ll be out in a minuet.” Anakin called from in their room, she could hear the zip of his duffle bag already, she threw her hands up in exasperation, she was pretty much out of ideas then a crazy idea hit her. She opened the fridge and shoved Obi Wan inside just as Anakin rounded the corner.
“What are you doing?” Anakin asked stopping in the kitchen with a red duffle bag in hand.


Padme gave him a nerf in the headlights look and then quickly grabbed a glass from a cupboard.
“Just getting a glass of milk.” She said calmly. Padme reached into the fridge and took a hold of Obi Wan’s dick giving it a few quick jerks, Obi Wan gave a quiet grunt as Padme tucked his dick into the cup letting him cum into the cup. For what felt like an eternity to Padme Obi Wan filled the cup until it was about a quarter full. Padme Then turned to Anakin who was still watching her and then drank the semen licking her lips after she was done. Anakin walked over and gave her a kiss on the cheek and then hugged her.
“I’ll be back in a few days.” He said giving her ass a nice squeeze. She watched him sling the bag over his shoulder and then walk out.


After a few seconds Obi Wan emerged from the fridge and hugged her from behind giving her tits special attention.
“Do you know what his mission is about?” Padme asked concerned.
“Not a clue.” He replied kissing her gently on the neck.
“Can I ask you a favor?” Padme began to say.
“Of course I’ll look in on it.” Obi Wan finished
“Thanks.” Padme said crossing her arms worriedly.


She phased out not really paying attention to Obi Wan who was getting dressed, her eyes were glued to the door as if she expected Anakin to come back in and sweep her off her feet taking them both to a better place. Obi Wan broke into her vision, he was heading for the door but stopped suddenly, without turning around he said,
“Truth be told I think he’s already joined the dark side.” And with those ominous words he left, hot on the heels of Anakin and his trail of mystery…

[dumbo]

another great story. worth the long wait

[jdawgg]

keep it up, urban bro

[loobinator69]

short, but good. there really was no way to stretch that out, was there?

[UrbanChaos]

short, but good. there really was no way to stretch that out, was there?

not in my opinon no lol

[johnseward88]

Very nice stories.

[RAT25]

Instead of trying to stretch it out, you could start later, and tell us about what you didn't include so you don't have to if you can not make up a what if about a part of the movie.

[dexterjester0]

I cannot express my excitement for some princess leia action.

Keep up the good work.

[jdawgg]

lol the wait is killing me, urban bro. i went this long without badgering you about when the next chapter is coming out, cant do it forever. also its been forever since u put the last chapter out, when is the new one coming out?

[UrbanChaos]

haha yeah i know, im suprised you held it in this long. trust me the wait will be well worth it, i think this is probably my best written chapter yet.

[jdawgg]

haha yeah i know, im suprised you held it in this long. trust me the wait will be well worth it, i think this is probably my best written chapter yet.

yeah, being on xmas vacation and drinkin rum eggnog is a good way to not ask questions

[UrbanChaos]

lucky I've been working everyday fourteen hour days everyday since i got back from vacation, I should have the next chapter done by saturday or maybe sometime this week if I'm lucky

[loobinator69]

yeah i'm surprised it took this long for us to ask. saturday... ill be looking.

but if this is your best, we'll probably consider it a great christmas present of sorts. unless you can write another chapter by then? lol i dont care, just write what you think it needs.

[UrbanChaos]

I might just hold the story till the 24th cause that's this threads one year birthday :Grin_anim:

[jdawgg]

can't wait that long for the new chapter. we want it by saturday. me and loob cant wait. we need it.

[UrbanChaos]

I've enlisted some help to help me finish up this chapter and help me get another ready for the 24th

[jdawgg]

whose helping you, bud?

[UrbanJungle]

Me actually, me and UrbanChaos are good friends and I've often helped out in rough patches plus given him ideas for several chapters. I didnt have an account before but he thought I should drop in and say hello, I prefere a more behind the scenes job but from the sounds of it I'll be helping out in the future quite a bit, so we both agreed I should probably join up.

[loobinator69]

cool. so we might end up with 2 chapters by the 24th? lucky us then!

[jdawgg]

all we can do is wait, eh loobinator?

[loobinator69]

yew, but its an easy wait this time. the stories are always well worth the wait, and 2 in less than 10 days will be awesome.

[UrbanChaos]

I remember when i used to bang em out every couple of days lol

[jdawgg]

I remember when i used to bang em out every couple of days lol

so do i. what happened to ya? u used to do them so good every other day.

[UrbanChaos]

well fun fact, I hadnt actually planned on this thread surviving, I had planned to branch out more but that never happened, and i slowly ran out of steam (and time) but mosty steam so when i lengthed the time span it felt easier and i felt less frazzled, however the time frame gradually extended to the point where felt over whelmed. plus i started quality control which took up a large chunk of time.

[RAT25]

Well at least it didn't die out like Family Friend in the general section or like Avatrek's threads.

[jdawgg]

the writer of family friend went inactive. im sure he'll finish it up whenever he can

[loobinator69]

yeah, at least avatrek finished spellbook of desireds before he left. I wish he wrote more, he had a pretty good star wars one too.

[UrbanJungle]

I prefer to lurk :icon275:

[RAT25]

Yeah well let's hope family friend will continue. And any other story by Avatrek or by anyone where.

[jdawgg]

Yeah well let's hope family friend will continue. And any other story by Avatrek or by anyone where.

heres what to do if ur wishing for that. wish with one hand and shit in the other, and see which one fills up first

[loobinator69]

^ your quite the optimist i see lol

[UrbanChaos]

I do aplogize for not putting up the story this weekend, the story is done but I ran into some technical difficulties (I wasnt able to access this site kept getting an error code) so I wasnt able to post it, I might be able to posted it sometime tomorrow (monday) but i cant promise that. It will for sure be up by wednesday at the latest. sorry about the wait guys but not much i could do about it.

[RAT25]

As long as you post it eventually, we'll all be fine

[loobinator69]

I do aplogize for not putting up the story this weekend, the story is done but I ran into some technical difficulties (I wasnt able to access this site kept getting an error code) so I wasnt able to post it, I might be able to posted it sometime tomorrow (monday) but i cant promise that. It will for sure be up by wednesday at the latest. sorry about the wait guys but not much i could do about it.

yeah, i know those error codes you mean. annoying as hell. I dint mind much, the end result is always well worth the wait.

so, in your wait... did you start the next chapter? it does seem a little early to ask that though lol

[jdawgg]

yeah, i know those error codes you mean. annoying as hell. I dint mind much, the end result is always well worth the wait.

so, in your wait... did you start the next chapter? it does seem a little early to ask that though lol

i know those error codes as well. and yes they are annoying as hell. i also want to know if you've started the next chapter yet, and i dont think its too early to start. he said it'd be out by the 24th. thats 4 days away, lol

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 24: The Cleanse

By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.


Chez jumped through the huge bush in front of him sending leaves and branches flying in all directions, he dropped to his stomach and rolled firing off two shots through the push he had just jumped through, the laser bolts found their mark burning two holes into a CIS droid. Chez got up and brushed himself off he turned to see Aayla Secura chopping down another droid with her twin lightsabers. He looked to his left and saw four other clone troopers break through the bush barrier. They lowered their weapons surveying the area.


They had been on Felucia for far to long in Chez’s opinion, the jungle looked like it had been built by giants a mere flower was forty times bigger then him. While most troopers commented on the beauty of the place, to him the jungle simply acted as the harbinger of death now, he had seen twelve of his close friends die plus countless others that he had never even met. Machines got bogged down easy, ambushes were a regular occurrence, and he hadn’t slept in three days. His platoon had been ambushed three weeks earlier, out of twenty three men only five of them had survived, Aayla Secura had been sent as part of a rescue mission to find them but their gunship had been shot down and Aayla was the only one to survive. Since then they had been chased by the CIS, every direction they went they always seemed to hit an ambush.


Chez sat down on an nearby log and noticed Aayla had gotten message. He watched her sleek body walk off for a little bit for privacy. He looked over at the other four troopers who also seemed to be receiving a message. Chez cocked his head to the side looking the troopers over, he noticed he had become quite a bit larger then his brethren. In the last year he had spent all his free time in the gym gaining a large muscle mass, he had also gained a good four inches as a side effect. The only reason he looked like a clone anymore was the face he shared with countless others. A ping of sadness hit him, he wished Cody was with him, Cody and he had truly become brothers, he always knew what to do and Chez simply backed him up. A blue light in Chez’s helmet HUD told him he had a message as well. He looked at it and saw Palpatine before him wearing black robes.
“Execute order sixty-six.” He commanded.


Chez’s heart sank, he was supposed to kill Aayla and any other Jedi he met from now on. It was as if another being entered his body, Chez slowly turned to face the back of Aayla, his weapon raised and then leveled itself as if it had a mind of its own. Sweat began to drip down his forehead, his finger tightened around the trigger. Chez fought himself he refused to fire and kill Aayla but his body said otherwise. It was if his mind was wrestling for control of his body. Everything became clear in that instant, Palpatine had used the clones for his own selfish gain, he had forced them into slavery. Chez began to tremble a tear rolled down his cheek searing his flesh as it slid down, his breathing was raspy and labored. His vision blurred and he began sway back and forth, Palpatine had taken control of his body, he was twisting his mind and his very will. Chez felt like he was going to throw up, his blood felt like it had turned into lava and was boiling him from the inside out, his muscles had become so tight he thought they would break the bones they protected. Though his body swayed his gun scope stayed centered on Aayla’s back, in his mind a chant had evolved, Kill, Kill, Kill, Kill. The voice in his head mocked him dared him to pull the trigger. He saw all the other clones raise their blasters and pointing them at Aayla.


In a single heart beat he heard the click of the trigger just as he had heard thousands of times before, he watched the laser bolt fly as if it was in slow motion. He heard the crack and sizzle as it burned the air around it and then watched it explode into its target… he had hit the dead centre of his target. The clone trooper he had hit crumbled from the shot in his chest. Chez screamed as he ran forward firing two more shots into the second clone, he clubbed the third trooper with the butt end of his blaster sending him to the ground before firing three shots into him. The fourth trooper rocketed his fist into Chez’s head cracking his helmet visor, the trooper grabbed Chez’s gun and threw it to the ground. He leveled his blaster and fired sending a blaster bolt into Aayla’s back, the shock rocked her body sending her to the ground. Chez roared in anger and pulled out his combat knife from his boot he tackled the fourth trooper to the ground before he could get another shot off, Chez stabbed at the troopers chest repeatedly, the trooper managed to pull his side arm and shoot once clipping Chez in the side. Chez stabbed one last time hitting the trooper’s heart.


Chez gasped for air, and slowly stood surveying the carnage he had made, he had just killed four of his brothers. He pulled his helmet off and let it slip from his hand, his hand clutched the burnt hole in his side as he limped to the medical bag and grabbed two syringes, the first full of bacta the second full of anesthesia. Chez made his way over to the slumped body of Aayla.


He knelt down beside Aayla and checked her pulse and breathing, she was still alive. He injected the bacta into Aayla and waited until she regained consciousness. He watched fear creep into her eyes, the same fear he had seen in the eyes of every victim he had killed. She thought he was going to kill her, Chez looked at her with a stone face, the need to kill her still raged inside of him, he was still a slave whipped by his master to do his bidding. He took the second syringe of anesthesia and injected a more then lethal amount into his arm. Aayla’s eyes switched to confusion as Chez fell back, his mind became numb the need for blood subsided inside him, the only thought left was worry for his brother Cody. His body bounced against the ground as he hit it hard, his eyes watched the blue sky and the slow moving clouds. His lips curved into a defiant smile, he had broken free of his chains.


His vision blurred and slowly turned to grey, he could feel death grabbing at him. Then a black burry shape appeared in front of his face.
“Why’d you do it?” He heard the question ring through his skull.
I will die no slave. Chez thought defiantly. The words whirled through his head as his eyes rolled into the back of his head. Death was as he thought it would be… warm and welcoming.


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Chez’s eyes opened slowly, his vision was blurred and unfocused. From what he could tell he was in some sort of a cave, a small fire was in the centre giving off a small amount of light. He realized that he was lying on the ground with a wool blanket covering him. He snickered slightly, if this was hell he should have come here sooner. His vision improved and he saw a dark figure sitting in the corner. Chez attempted to sit up making a loud grunt as he did.
“You should rest.” The figure said, Chez ignored the warning and sat up anyway.
“You’ve been out cold for three days.” The figure continued, so I’m not dead, Chez thought sarcastically. The figure moved into the light and only now did he realize that it was Aayla Secura, she must have dragged him to this cave.
“Here drink this.” Aayla handed him a bowl filled with a liquid, he slowly sipped it down, it tasted like dirt and tree bark.
“You know I have never heard you say anything.” Aayla started.
“Even when all the other men started to complain you stayed quiet. Maybe that’s what made you special, it seems Palpatine poisoned your mind somehow. I believe he manipulated your genetics somehow making you his… well for a lack of better words his slaves.” Aayla paused and looked him square in the eyes, even now Chez could feel a deep seeded hate for her, a need to kill her and all other Jedi.


“I think I can cure you, but you’ll have to trust me.” Aayla spoke softly. Chez nodded slowly agreeing to her.
“Good, that soup you just drank is the first part. What we need to do is cleanse your body completely. The soup you drank is going to knock you out for another three or four days, but we need to start the cleanse in another way for the rest to kick start.” Aayla explained, Chez once again nodded prepared to do whatever it took to rid himself of this curse.
“Good, let’s begin then.” Aayla said standing up.


Chez watched as she unzipped her tight black jumpsuit and let drop revealing a naked blue skin body that was worked to perfection. Chez had longed to see this naked body, as well as hundreds of other clones. He watched as she stepped out of her clothes and slowly stepped towards Chez, her hips swaying hypnotically. She kneeled down between his legs and pulled down his black military standard pants letting his large cock spring free. Aayla palmed the cock gently tapping it before gripping it, she slowly started jacking it, watching the pre-cum drip out in anticipation. Then popped it into her mouth and began to suck on it, her head bobbed gaining a quick rhythm. Chez’s hands began to work meticulously massaging her head tails, in response Aayla began to moan enjoying the sensation of someone playing with her head tails. Chez took off his black muscle shirt tossing it to the side.


Chez slid his hands under Aayla’s armpits then scooped her up and then laid her on her back, his head found its way between her legs, his tongue licked and lapped up against her pussy as her legs wrapped tightly around his head. Chez’s balls began to ache, he managed to wiggle his way up so they were face to face, Chez had his hands planted on the cold cave floor, he could feel Aayla’s warm breath crawling across his skin. His cock rubbed up against her cunt just barely scraping it, he balance on one hand while his other explored her tits, cupping them softly. How many troopers would kill to be in his position he wondered as his mouth closed around one of her nipples, he gently pressed his cock into her pussy receiving encouraging moans from Aayla. Chez’s small strokes turned into powerful slams as he rocked Aayla’s body back and forth


Aayla hugged Chez tightly squeezing her body against his tightly, her nails dug into his back pleading him to go faster, he mustered what little might he had left and slammed as hard as he could, his dick made a wet slurping sound as Aayla’s pussy gained wetness. Chez sucked on her nipple giving it a playful nibble. Their shadows danced on the cave wall, loud moans echoed through out the cave. Her hands had begun to massage her own tits, Chez stopped briefly and pulled his cock out, he inserted two fingers and alternated between thrusting and twisting his fingers. Aayla grabbed his dick with one of her hands and slowly jerked it, she smiled slightly seeing Chez’s look of admiration for her body, a body she had worked hard to achieve and maintain.


Chez slid up Aayla’s stomach making the cock slip free of her hand, he planted his dick between her tits and pushed them tightly together and began to pump. His dick slid effortlessly in and out, his pre-cum dripping everywhere, Aayla licked the head of the cock as it slid through. A loud slapping noise erupted from the skin on skin contact as Chez slammed harder, his balls felt like they were about to explode. He gave one final pump before drenching Aayla’s face in his warm sticky cum.


Chez gave a slight smile seeing Aayla lick her sticky lips, he had always imagined her doing that. Then it was if someone had zapped his strength, he slumped over his shoulder slamming into the cave floor. His vision was fading to black.
“See you in a few days.” Aayla said rolling him over onto his back.


Chez’s eye lids closed shut and he became encased in the darkness…

[RAT25]

Awsome chapter!! It had a very good story line!

[loobinator69]

Awesome chapter, definitely one of your best. Great side story, really just amazing urban.

[jdawgg]

Well done, Urbanchaos, bro. This was worth the wait indeed.

[RAT25]

I can't imagine how you'll top this one in a few days unless mot of it's already written.

[UrbanChaos]

I can't imagine how you'll top this one in a few days unless mot of it's already written.

I wont be able to top this one for a while, I've had this chapter planned for a long time now and was really excited about it. I wanted to bring Chez back with thunder and when i got UrbanJungle on board it came together nicely... the next chapter will simply wrap up the third movie.

[RAT25]

Yeah, it'll be tough to try to put the ending of the third movie into one of your 'what if' sinerios, but I can tell that what ever you give us will be fine.

[UrbanJungle]

It still came out more choppy then I would have prefered. You know its funny, I remember when we graduated high school english and you swore you'd never write anything again; I think your exact words were "fuck that shit I aint ever writting a damn thing again." and yet here you are. :smile:

[loobinator69]

^ i know thats how i felt lol.

so, going straight to 4 after 3, or maybe doing a lottle extended universe stuff? i know i asked this before, but know its actually decision time

[jdawgg]

I wont be able to top this one for a while, I've had this chapter planned for a long time now and was really excited about it. I wanted to bring Chez back with thunder and when i got UrbanJungle on board it came together nicely... the next chapter will simply wrap up the third movie.

still gonna have one out today like u promised? cuz i know i won't be looking for one for a few days. gonna spend today with cheyenne driving to montreal to visit her family for xmas

[loobinator69]

its the 24th. no chapter it seems? it did seem like alot to ask for, but oh well. that last chapter though was just amazing, which totally makes up for this

[UrbanChaos]

I had planned on releasing a chapter today (the 24th) because its this threads one year anniversary, but unfortunately I didnt have time, and rather then rush to finish it I've decided rather to say thank you to everyone and anyone who has read all the chapters, a few chapters or, even one chapter. I cant believe this thread has forty thousand views! And i just want to thank everyone who has bothered to look at this thread, I thank everyone for their input and comments, it helps keep me going, I want to personaly add a thank you to UrbanJungle even though we didnt meet our quota of two chapters in ten days you were a big help and I hope you stay on and help me further. I look forward to another year of writting! So once again Thank you and have a very merry Christmas!

~UrbanChaos

[jdawgg]

I had planned on releasing a chapter today (the 24th) because its this threads one year anniversary, but unfortunately I didnt have time, and rather then rush to finish it I've decided rather to say thank you to everyone and anyone who has read all the chapters, a few chapters or, even one chapter. I cant believe this thread has forty thousand views! And i just want to thank everyone who has bothered to look at this thread, I thank everyone for their input and comments, it helps keep me going, I want to personaly add a thank you to UrbanJungle even though we didnt meet our quota of two chapters in ten days you were a big help and I hope you stay on and help me further. I look forward to another year of writting! So once again Thank you and have a very merry Christmas!

~UrbanChaos
wheres my personal thank you? i told you to take a break while writing a few of the chapters. lol just fuckin wit ya bro. i know my thank you is implied.

[Lazerous]

No urban, thank you for all your hard work...

[loobinator69]

no urban its us who should be thanking you. and its okay about the chapter. better a good chapter than a rushed one right?

really, its just been a year? it seems like its been here so long, yet the time this threads been here seems so fast.

[hornyat40]

Great stories, have always been a star wars fan:)

[mj5748]

I am really excited for the next chapter! Hopefully you will do 4,5, & 6! Please HURRY!!

[loobinator69]

^patience young padawan. good things come to those who wait.

but seriously, when is the next chapter coming out?

[UrbanChaos]

I hope by the end of the week, I would've had it done by now but I got welders flash at work so i cant stare at a computer screen for a long time. So right now it just depends on how fast my eyes heal.

[irishcdn]

dont rush. your eyes are more important

[loobinator69]

yeah, you should probably rest in that. don't go putting the story and us above your eyes, after all you only get 2 of them.

[UrbanChaos]

Hey guys just a quick update, I know the story is like three weeks late lol. But my eyes are healed now so it's almost done... I just bought a new computer so I'm in the process of moving things over so hopefully by sunday I'll have it posted!

[loobinator69]

alright were getting a new chapter! that is always the gard part though, moving files from an old computer to the new one.

[jdawgg]

sweet, guess me being inactive for 3 weeks while my laptop was getting fixed, i didn't miss anything

[UrbanJungle]

Hey guys and gals just letting you know I'm editing the next chapter now, so it will be out tonight, probably around eightish!

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 25: End Of Act III

By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.




Obi Wan anxiously played with read out charts of his ships diagnostic system, he was within a few minutes of Mustafar where Anakin had been sent to do the bidding of the Emperor. Just a few moments ago he had held Padme’s twins in his arms, and now he was on his way to possibly kill their father.
“How could you be so stupid?” Obi Wan muttered under his breath.


Obi Wan rubbed his forehead recalling the events of the past few days, he couldn’t believe how quickly things had all gone to hell. All most all the Jedi had been wiped out within a twenty four hour period, Anakin had surrendered himself to the dark side, Palpatine had completely consolidated power in the senate, and Padme had given birth to twins, that was the only good news he could come up with. But even that news had its misery, they had decided to split up the twins, Senator Bail Organa took Leia to Alderaan where she would grow up being a princess, Padme not being able to part with both children had taken Luke to Tatooine where he would grow up as a farmer with his uncle Owen. Obi Wan chuckled thinking what if Luke had gone with Bail, he shoved the kidding out of his mind and focused, if he could bring Anakin back from the dark side he would but if he couldn’t…


Obi Wan banished the thought as he dropped out of hyper space and Mustafar appeared, Obi Wan set the auto pilot to land itself then unbuckled himself. Standing up he rubbed his lightsaber making sure it was with him. He heard the grinding gears of the ramp coming down, slowly Obi Wan descended, his boots clanged loudly with each step he took.


At the bottom Obi Wan found Anakin force choking a Neimoidian, Obi Wan heard a sick gut wrenching snap and the Neimoidian toppled over.
“Anakin.” Obi Wan said sadly inspecting the dead bodies around them.
“Are you here to kill me?” Anakin asked with an evil smirk.
“No Anakin, I’m here to save you.” He replied.
“Stop calling me that, my name is Darth Vader.” Anakin spat angrily.


Obi Wan’s blood chilled hearing the evil name roll of Anakins tongue.
“Then you’re a Sith.” Obi Wan stated flatly.
“I am who I was destined to be.” Darth Vader replied proudly straightening himself.
“You were destined to destroy the Sith not join them!” Obi Wan practicly yelled back.
“Your right about one thing…” Darth Vader started saying pulling out his lightsaber and igniting it.
“I am destined to destroy.” Darth Vader finished broadening his smile.
“And what of Padme?” Obi Wan asked angrily.
“She will rule beside me as my queen.” Darth Vader returned taking a step forward.
“The dark side has blinded you Anakin!” Obi Wan shouted at him.
“STOP CALLING ME THAT!” Darth Vader roared before lunging at Obi Wan.


Obi Wan parried the attack spinning to the side, Darth Vader turned and struck again but was blocked by Obi Wan, sparks sizzled as they stared hatefully into each others eyes. They both pushed off spinning as they did so, Darth Vader again was the aggressor releasing a torrent of attacks high and low but each attack met Obi Wans blade. Out of fury Darth Vader foolishly force flipped over Obi Wan, Obi Wan swept upwards tagging Darth Vaders chest searing the skin. Darth Vader rolled as he hit the ground, for the first time in the fight Obi Wan pressed forward slashing the ground were Darth Vader had just been. Darth Vader used the force to hurl a nearby crate at Obi Wan giving him a chance to get up, Obi Wan easily spun around the crate but was met with Darth Vaders blade, Obi Wan managed to bring his blade up in time to block Darth Vader putting them into a dead lock showdown. They broke free of their dual carefully circling each other.


“I can’t believe you would fight me!” Obi Wan stated in horror.
“You betrayed me, you must die.” Darth Vader replied coldly.
“Are you listening to yourself? Who will you fight next? Padme? Your son?” Obi Wan questioned harshly.
“Son?” Darth Vader whispered in disbelief, his lightsaber slipped from his hand extinguishing itself. He dropped to his knees completely shaken.


“Anakin.” Obi wan said empathetically.
“What’s his name?” Anakin asked quietly.
“Luke.” Obi Wan replied slowly.
“Luke.” Anakin repeated softly.


Anakin grabbed his lightsaber hilt and handed it to Obi Wan.
“I don’t ever want to see this again.” Anakin stated sternly.
“Alright Anakin.” Obi wan nodded.
“I’d like to see him.” Anakin said calmly after a long pause.
“I’m sure he’d like to meet you too, come on.” Obi Wan said smiling.


The two of them boarded Obi Wans ship. Anakin made his way to the crew cabin while Obi Wan set the coordinates for Tatooine, before long they had entered hyperspace. Obi Wan lost all sense of time as he stared off into the stars, what was he supposed to do now. He knew he couldn’t stay with Padme and Anakin, but where else was he supposed to go, was he supposed to just stay on Tatooine, and if he did what was he supposed to do there. Just wait for the savior of the force to save the day, or was he supposed to find a way to fight the Emperor. Obi Wans mind wandered elsewhere, he wondered how many Jedi had escaped the Emperors wrath, he knew of a handful that had escaped but he wondered most of all about his old master Qui Gon Jinn. He tried to reach out using the force but felt nothing, of course most Jedi’s, including himself, had begun hiding their force presence making detection next to impossible.


A beep notified him that he was dropping out of hyperspace, and to his surprise they had already arrived at Tatooine, he had been so deep in thought he had lost track of time. Setting the autopilot Obi Wan walked into the ships corridor.
“Anakin we’re here!” He called down the hall. Anakin appeared looking groggy, together they made their way to the landing ramp that had just lowered.


They exited the ship onto the Lars homestead, Anakin stopped dead in his tracks seeing Padme standing a few feet away with her arms crossed, Beru behind her supportively. They stood staring at each other unsure of what to do, until Padme finally walked over to Anakin and stood a few inches away from him. Padme reached up and slapped him hard making Anakin’s cheek red.
“I guess I deserved that.” Anakin spoke sheepishly as he rubbed his cheek.
“Yes you did.” Padme replied evenly, then drew him in for a tight hug.
“I’d like to see my son.” Anakin said quietly.
“Why doesn’t Beru take you to him, I’d like to talk to Padme for a moment.” Obi Wan interjected before Padme could answer.
“Sounds good.” Beru chimed in, then took Anakins hand and led him inside.


Obi Wan waited until Anakin disappeared completely before speaking.
“I would be careful around Anakin for the next few days, he’s… a little shaken up.” Obi Wan told Padme stroking his beard.
“I’ve noticed.” Padme replied casually still staring at the hole that Anakin had disappeared through.
“Also I’d advice you not to tell him about Leia.” Obi wan continued.
“Why?” Padme asked confused returning her gaze to Obi Wan.
“If Anakin ever has a relapse the galaxy is going to need her. Besides she is intended for a different destiny.” Obi Wan explained.
“Alright Obi, if you believe that’s best.” Padme agreed solemnly, they paused briefly.
“Where will you go?” Padme asked curiously.
“Oh I’ll be around.” Obi Wan answered mysteriously.
“Well I hope to see you around.” Padme replied with a wink.


Obi Wan turned to his ship and Padme went inside the house. She entered the cold underground house and found Anakin in Luke’s room staring at him in the crib. Padme leaned against the door frame.
“You can hold him you know.” Padme teased. Hesitantly Anakin reached into the crib and picked up his son, Padme came up beside him and put her arm around him.


Anakin kissed Padme, their lips stayed together for a long time until Anakin finally broke away. He put Luke back into the crib before kissing her again, he buried his hands into her thick brown hair and continued his kiss. Padme nuzzled her nose against his as their tongues interlocked. Padmes hands slipped down his pants, her hands grasping at his half stiff dick. Padme pulled Anakin out of the room and into the hall where they collided with a wall.
“What about Owen and Beru?” Anakin mumbled through the kiss.
“There out checking the moisture vaporators.” Padme returned with an equal mumble.


They blindly fumbled their way to the bedroom, knocking over various household items along the way. They entered the bedroom with the same amount of ruckus, both of them stripped down trying not to break their passionate kiss as they did so. Anakins hands gripped Padmes ass tightly, his rock hard cock rubbed against her stomach. Padmes hands massaged his shoulders gently, Anakins hands slowly felt their way up until they reached her tits, Padme gently nudged him backwards towards the bed. With a little incentive from Padme, Anakin laid down on the bed, his dick pointing straight up in the air. Padme slowly crawled on him, her chest was gently pressed his as she slowly lifted her ass. She gently sat her ass down onto the tip of his cock so it was just barely inserted in. She always enjoyed teasing men with her looks, and the bedroom was no exception. Anakin tried to thrust up to pump his cock in but Padme was to fast, she swiftly moved her ass up managing to keep just the head of the dick in her pussy, the couple giggled and nuzzled their noses, Padme gently lowered herself until she had completely engulfed his cock.


Padme moved slowly up and gently riding his cock, slowly building up speed until the loud sound of skin on skin contact emerged loudly. Padme hugged Anakin tightly as she pounded her ass down as hard and as fast as she could, Padmes moans grew louder. Anakin's hips thrusted up meeting her half way, Padme gently nibbled on her lower lip as she enjoyed the feeling of Anakins thick rod being shoved up her tight pussy.


Anakin easily lifted Padme up and off of him with a wet pop when his cock slipped free of her snatch. They stood up and Anakin bent Padme over, she gripped a nearby dresser with her hands waiting for Anakin to stick his cock back into his pussy. Anakin didn't disappoint and found his place behind Padme gently prodding her pussy before ramming his hard cock into her pussy. Anakin began to hump Padme as fast as he could, he admired Padmes body as he did. Her petite frame left little to be desired, her ass was a nice heart shape that was very plump. Hardly an inch of fat could be found on her body, even her back, which he was staring at, just went to show how hard she worked to keep her body toned and perfectly fit.


Padmes moans and turned into shouts of pleasures spurring Anakin on to bang her harder. Anakin was happy to oblige and made his thrusts faster and harder. Anakin could already see the redness of her ass beginning to appear from the skin slapping together. Anakin could feel his balls tightening, he knew he was close to Cumming.


Anakin withdrew his cock from Padmes warm pussy and gently pulled her to the edge of the bed, she laid down on her back looking up at Anakin who reinserted his dick picking up the pounding right where he left off. he watched Padmes lower lip slowly be pulled into her mouth and nibbled upon. Her chest jiggled each time he slammed into her and her moans and groans of ecstasy. Anakin gave a final thrust before pulling his dick out.


He grabbed his dick in his and quickly jerked it. Thick globs of cum launched from his cock and onto Padme, most of it landed on her stomach put some had managed to get to her perky tits. Anakin let the last bit of cum dribble onto her leg, Padme giggled as she slowly spread the cum around her body with her fingers.


Anakin laid down beside Padme while she toweled herself off and then cuddled up beside Anakin, their naked bodies pressing tightly against each other. Padme thought about the turn of events that had brought her here, she would probably never be involved in diplomacy again, and she had basically up any right to being royalty by deciding to live on a farm. And yet she was still blissfully happy, though adjusting to the farming life would be difficult at first it would be worth it. Padme had a twinge of pain and guilt as she thought about giving up Leia, she knew it had to be done but she still missed the opportunity to raise her. perhaps she would grow up to be a princess Padme thought, yes to Padme Leia would always be her little princess.



Hope you enjoyed the newest chapter of the What ifs (sorry it took so long), I'm stoked about the next chapters and getting into a brand new era of Star Wars. As always I enjoy questions comments, and listening to what you'd like to see!
~UrbanChaos

[loobinator69]

good chapter but... hows episodes 4,5,6 going to work without vader?

[RAT25]

@loobinator69, they're what ifs, not a sex version of the storyline. Anyway, hopefully UrbanChaos will be able to make it interesting for all of us.

[UrbanChaos]

As Rat25 pointed out this is a what if scenerio, and this is really the first major change I've made. However I have a few tricks up my sleeve, plus their are still two sith kickin around

[loobinator69]

yeah, this definitely is a major change. i guess i just sorta expected it to somewhat stick to the plot of the movies. well, wherever it goes, it will still be good, with urban writing it

[jdawgg]

hmm. no welcome back from ya guys? guess no one missed me.

[RAT25]

We didn't notice you were gone to by honest.

[UrbanChaos]

hmm. no welcome back from ya guys? guess no one missed me.

Haha I wondered where you disapeared to! Glad to have you back. (It was weird not having anyone bitch at me for a few weeks lol)

@loobinator69 yeah all the minor changes I've made will now turn into major changes... just as I had planned.

[loobinator69]

@jdawgg i did wonder where you disappeared to, just never thought to bring it up. so, welcome back, a few days late.

the thread was extremely quiet while you were gone though. very few posts, so i guess the subject just never came up. sorry man

[jdawgg]

Haha I wondered where you disapeared to! Glad to have you back. (It was weird not having anyone bitch at me for a few weeks lol)

@loobinator69 yeah all the minor changes I've made will now turn into major changes... just as I had planned.
well, this is just for you. wheres the new god-damn chapter at? i was expecting it two days ago. hehehe just fuckin wit ya bro

@jdawgg i did wonder where you disappeared to, just never thought to bring it up. so, welcome back, a few days late.

the thread was extremely quiet while you were gone though. very few posts, so i guess the subject just never came up. sorry man
i noticed that there was very few posts done. i thought you woulda kept pestering urbanchaos about the new chapters without me being here though. lol

[Coolbro]

lovin it :D

[loobinator69]

@jdawgg well, he did have an excuse of welder's flash. i was letting his eyes heal.

so, urban, now that your eyes are healed, wheres the new chapter? lol

[UrbanChaos]

Haha I've put the story on hold, someone raised a concern to me and I'm trying to figure out how to deal with it right now

[Worlord321]

Hey urban. Ive read this thread for awhile. Just made my user a few weeks ago. So now you will have one more person buggin you to get chapters out. Btw when's the next one? (don't ever be like avatrek leaving all those stories unfinished)

[Worlord321]

Oops sorry didn't see your abOve post

[loobinator69]

urban, you should definitely make note of that, and not do what avatrek did. btw, does anyone know why exactly he stopped posting?

[RAT25]

No, it's a mystery, just like where the restricted files came from...

[Lazerous]

What did Avatrek do?

[RAT25]

Out of nowhere he suddenly stopped posting. No one knows where he went or why he when away. It's like he fell off the face of the earth. But people still comment on how they liked his stories even though he has been gone far a while

[Lazerous]

Yes a lot of authors went out and just disappeared...there used to be so many good quality stories posted on here all the time.

[loobinator69]

yeah, avatrek was definitely one of the best.


@rat25 if he kept posting, we might know where they came from.

[Lazerous]

I miss susansloverboy too, had the best mature asian stories...

[UrbanChaos]

I've had to completly scrap chapter 26 and start over, now that everythings been "fixed" I cant really give a deadline yet because I'm stil reworking it in my head. I hope to push myself and have it done in the next few days, or if I'm able to work like I used to maybe tonight (but I doubt it)

[loobinator69]

oh darn. i guess is it definitely won't be tonight then?

[mj5748]

I have been following ur post side the star! Now i made an account. You have a new person to pester you!

[Archfiend]

darn, can't wait for the next chapter. These stories open up quite some possibilities even though I prefer heavier AUs, something where a bit of a more drastic change emerges (to be honest I would prefer that order 66 never happened. In the movie I nearly cried, so man jedi dead in a moment...especially when it comes to the likes such as Aalya Secura etc..) Anywa, nice stories, can't wait what will happen next with no Dath Vader, an alive Padmé and such. Will be interesting

[UrbanChaos]

@mj5748 glad you joined up! I always enjoy reading comments (even the pestering ones)

@Archfiend I agree that heavier AU's are the best, but I wanted to stay in somewhat of a guidline to make sure the characters I wanted remained present otherwise it can be arguable maybe one day I'll make an AU that is completly different (perhaps "The What Ifs 2.0") It'll be the next chapters that the changes will really be made apperent

Side note next chapter is almost done :)

[loobinator69]

so when are you going to post this new chapter? i'm definitely looking forward to it.

[jdawgg]

biggest side note posted here. im a father now. beautiful healthy baby girl, named Alicia Susanne Julie Ramey

[UrbanChaos]

Congrats bro!!! Glad shes healthy!

@loobinator I dunno sometime this week I hope

[loobinator69]

@jdawgg congrats man! so is this why you took that long break from here recently?

[UrbanJungle]

Well since UrbanChaos has neglected to update you guys I suppose it's up to me then.

I suppose you're all wondering where the next chapter is right?:icon042:? Well the answer is simple (In a complicated kind of way); the reason it's not out really has to do with the process of how the chapters are written. First off UrbanChaos writes the chapter then does a quick edit after which he re-reads the chapter and makes minor adjustments/tweaks and then does a full edit. After that happens I get a hold of it and do three to four edits and then give it back to him. The third part (which I like to call the pending part) is when UrbanChaos reads over my edits and makes sure he is satisfied; if he is, he releases it to you guys, if not he makes a few revisions, edits it, and sends it to me for three to four more edits. So it's basicly a simple rinse and repeat cycle. However with this chapter I've seen five very different version with three different pairings all of which UrbanChaos has tossed out and started from pretty much scratch; this is the sixth time he has written it and I have yet to see it.


So why take so long and put in so much effort you may ask. Simply put both me and UrbanChaos hate seeing some kind of error in any story because it often leads to confusion for the reader and interrupts the flow of the story. While some mistakes do slip through on occasion he prefers to get as close as he can to a spotless chapter, especially since this site does not allow editing afterward. The only consistent error you will find in these chapters is Urbanchaos's tendency to put "Anakin's" rather then "Anakins" not sure why he does this but he likes it better that way.


Anyways I hope that clears things up, even if it's just a little bit!

[RAT25]

I wonder if there are any errors on that... Too long to even consider checking. But thanks for the info anyway. So how many more revise and edits do you will there be for this chapter UrbanJungle?

[jdawgg]

@jdawgg congrats man! so is this why you took that long break from here recently?

no thats not why, my laptop had fucked up big time, me being a father is now what is keeping me away from here for a while now

[loobinator69]

well, at least we know urbanchaos cares alot about the quality he gives us.

@jdawgg yeah, fatherhood really eats away at your free time

[UrbanJungle]

I wonder if there are any errors on that... Too long to even consider checking. But thanks for the info anyway. So how many more revise and edits do you will there be for this chapter UrbanJungle?

Well I made him promise that this is the last time he touches the chapter. So a I'd say one to three more days of writting and one to two days for me to edit, so I'd expect it by sundayish. Also their where zero mistakes in my first comment; I was an english major. :icon268:


Btw you will never be able to guess the pairing he went with.

[RAT25]

@UrbanJungle, is that a good or bad thing...

[loobinator69]

i'm no grammar major, but... i think theres a mistake in your most recent post. "their" should be "there" in the second to last sentence, i think.

but i'm no grammar major. correct me if i'm wrong. confusing the their/there/they're is always a problem. honestly, i'm probabky wrong. i was never an english grammar kind of guy.


thanks for telling him to make this the last edit. its been a long time now since the last chapter.

[jdawgg]

i'm no grammar major, but... i think theres a mistake in your most recent post. "their" should be "there" in the second to last sentence, i think.

but i'm no grammar major. correct me if i'm wrong. confusing the their/there/they're is always a problem. honestly, i'm probabky wrong. i was never an english grammar kind of guy.
thanks for telling him to make this the last edit. its been a long time now since the last chapter.
correct me if im wrong, but in your second to last sentence, it should be, probably, not probabky. lol

[UrbanJungle]

Their represents mine, an item in possession; there is a place like a location. The post was mine, not a location lol.

[RAT25]

I'm surprised at how one mention of a grammatical error can make everyone looking out for them.

[loobinator69]

@jdawgg there was no spell checker in the forum post box... lol

@urbanjungle that makes sense. i was just thinking their meant person (not object). i was also confused on there, which is always location (stuff slips my mind occasionally). i was never much for grammar anyway.

[jdawgg]

I'm surprised at how one mention of a grammatical error can make everyone looking out for them.

lol, i was reading his post an noticed it. wasn't looking out for any

[loobinator69]

i think "an" should be "and" lol

@rat25 yes, it is pretty funny.

[Worlord321]

Hey when's the next chapter? Can't wait!!!

[jdawgg]

i think "an" should be "and" lol

@rat25 yes, it is pretty funny.

lol not to me it shouldn\t be lmao

[RAT25]

@Worlord, finally someone broke the chain. Now that we have given them a few days without us nagging them, where is the chapter?

[UrbanChaos]

Saved in my documents :jestera:

[Worlord321]

I'm gonna piss my pants in suspense

[Worlord321]

You think we'll see it later tonight?

[loobinator69]

i don't know... hopefully, but it will definitely be up by tomorrow, right?

[UrbanChaos]

I wouldnt say definitely, but a strong possibility of maybe

[UrbanChaos]

Well I'm not going to have time to post it tonight
1) Its not quite finished
2) I have few things to add after the chapter (a few things that need to be said/asked)
Basicly I just dont have the time but I hope to be able to get the accumulative amount of time by stretching it out a little longer. BUT it will be out sunday night

[jdawgg]

c'mon buddy. the new father is waiting for something to read while his girls are sleeping.

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 26: Final Fantasy

By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.

*EDITOR NOTE[S]* I would advise being familiar with Camie she was supposed to be in the movies but George Lucas cut her out because he felt she was "unnecessary" (yes I am a little bitter about that) she can be found HERE (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Camie_Loneozner)
Also their might be a few errors in here, I only edited it once and I think UrbanJungle only got to do it once as well.
Anyway enjoy...





"Luke?" A voice called from somewhere in the house.
"In the workshop." Luke called back. Luke was tinkering with some spare parts like he often did in his spare time. He remembered watching his father all the time find a way to fix old droids or moisture vaporators and make them work like they were brand new, his father always had an affinity to fixing things his mom always told him, something he had inherited.
"The traders are here, your uncle wants help picking out new droids." His father Anakin told him stepping into the workshop.
"What are you doing home from the shop?" Luke asked referring to his father's mechanic shop in Mos Eisley.
"Owen was having trouble with a vaporator so I came back to fix it." Anakin answered stopping before he left.
"Who's in charge of the shop?" Luke turned to face his father better.
"I left Tyro in charge, why?" His dad replied scratching the stubble on his chin.
"I bet that made Watto angry" Luke laughed imagining the old Toydarian shaking his fist and complaining to his dad.
"Watto works for me now, he'll just have to get used to it." Anakin replied with a snicker, Watto had lost his shop in a pod race to a Hutt, Anakin had bought it from Jabba the Hutt for half of its worth and then converted into a mechanics shop where he fixed droids, ships, swoop bikes, pod racers and everything in between. It had quickly become known as the most reliable shop on all of Tatooine, that was just over ten years ago. Watto had been forced to work for Jabba for those ten years and had recently been given his freedom back and then hired by his dad to help organize the place better, even though his mom insisted he was a no good shifty con man.
"One more thing." Luke said hesitantly.
"Yeah?" Anakin replied leaning against a nearby wall.
"I want to fight for the Rebellion." Luke spat out honestly.


A long pause grew between them as Anakin eyed his son down thinking deeply.
"It's your decision, but you have to clear it with your Uncle Owen, you work for him remember." Anakin finally answered.
"Alright." Luke nodded.
"And you might want to tell your mom." Anakin smiled thinking about Padme pacing as she yelled at their son trying to convince him otherwise.
"You better go help your Uncle." Anakin continued before walking out.


Luke put his tools away and headed outside thinking about joining the rebel alliance. He knew his father had been some sort of soldier for the republic but he never talked about it, his mom was more open about how she used to be a senator and was even the Queen of Naboo at one point. But he always wished he knew more about his father's past, was he a pilot? Ground force? Specialist? Luke passed his Uncle's house which was about fifty meters from their house.


Luke saw his Uncle arguing with some Jawa's and quickly made his way over to them.
"Dad said you wanted help?" Luke said approaching his uncle.
"Yeah take the gold protocol droid and the red astro droid to the work shop, fix em up while we argue over the price." Owen said.


Luke nodded and began to lead the two droids towards the house, however the a few steps away the red droid caught fire and began to smoke.
"What are you tryin to pull?" Owen accused the Jawa's angrily.
"If you need another droid may I suggest the blue one there, I've worked with him before." The gold droid interjected pointing at another astro droid.
"What about that one Uncle Owen?" Luke shouted at his uncle pointing at the blue astro droid the protocol droid had advised.
"Sure why not." Owen sighed.


The blue droid whistled cheerfully and rolled his way beside Luke.


"Hey uncle?" Luke said slowly.
"Yeah?" Owen replied finishing his business with the Jawa's
"I want to go fight for the Rebels." Luke blurted out.
"Luke, you know I need you here, this is the busy season." Owen argued.
"Yeah I know, but Leon is the same age as I was when I started working for you. Plus you just bought two new droids." Luke countered referring to his fourteen year old nephew and Owens son.
"All of whom need to be trained. I can't do it alone Luke." Owen stressed the point.
"If I teach the droids what to do within the next day or two then can I go." Luke proposed.
"We'll talk about it later, right now I need you to get those droids into working condition." Owen said abruptly ending their conversation.


Luke slowly sulked away, his uncle had pretty much said no, but that shouldn't stop him should it? I'm going to leave no matter what he says. Luke thought defiantly. Luke made his way to the workshop with the droids in tow, he put the gold one into a hot oil bath while he began to tinker with the blue astro droid, cleaning out gunk and checking fuses.
"So what am I supposed to call you two?" Luke asked to both of them as he changed out tools.
"I am C-3PO, I excel in human relations, in fact I am fluent in over six million forms of communication." The gold droid boasted proudfully.
"What's this guy's name?" Luke asked somewhat ignoring C-3PO.
"Oh, my obtuse companion there is known as R2-D2." C-3PO answered slightly hurt by Lukes uninterest in him.
"I'm Luke, good to meet you guys. You said you've worked with him before, what did you guys do?" Luke continued the conversation.
"We have done an abundant amount of things for both the Republic, and more recently, the Rebellion." C-3PO began to list.
"Wait you've worked for the Rebellion?" Luke asked excitedly.
"On several occurrences, in fact we are on a mission right now." C-3PO boasted, but was soon the victim of R2-D2's sharp whistle telling him to be quiet.
"R2 show master Luke the message, perhaps he could help." C-3PO commanded R2.


R2 whistled angrily but soon his holo projector gears began whirling and an image appeared. Luke saw a frightened young lady bending over looking into the holo recorder. The young lady wore a long white gown that showed her shapely curves nicely, her face was very beautiful and she seemed very elegant, almost royal.
"Help me Obi Wan Kenobi, you're my only hope." The mysterious lady said worriedly. The message repeated itself a few times then disappeared just when Luke was really getting into it.
"Hey! Where'd she go!?!" Luke demanded at the small droid, the droid answered with a curious whistle.
"What message? the one you were just playing!" C-3PO half translated half rebuked.


"That was quite the pretty woman." A voice said from the door.
"Mom!" Luke said startled twisting towards the door.
"Mistress Padme!" C-3PO exclaimed seeing Padme.
"You know my mom?" Luke asked jarring his head back at C-3PO in utter confusion.
"Yes, me and 3PO here have quite the history." Padme chuckled amused to see the gold droid again.
"Indeed, me and Senator Amidala have known each other for a very long time." C-3PO chimed in happily.
"Senator?" Luke said confused his neck getting sore from wrenching it back and forth.
"Now that really was a long time ago. Anyway Camie is here to see you." Padme said getting back on topic.
"Just send her down." Luke said trying to make sense of the situation that had just happened.


Padme nodded and took one last look at the droids before leaving, Luke caught a glimpse of his moms heavenly body, though Luke hadn't been told the whole story, he had been told that something happened when she was younger and now didn't age, or at least aged very slowly. So she still looked like she was twenty two, she often enjoyed flaunting that fact by wearing very revealing clothes, today she had chosen small tight brown shorts and a tight white tank top. They were often mistaken as siblings when they went in town but his mom never seemed to mind and went along with it more often than not. On Tatooine beautiful things never lasted long but his mom seemed to be the exception to the rule.


"New droids?" Camie noticed coming through the door. Luke looked her over seeing her long brown boots that went up to her knees that she always seemed to wear, she had a brown skirt on that ended about mid thigh and a baggy farmers shirt that wasn't very flattering to her slim figure. His mom and Camie looked roughly about the same age and often competed to see who could look the sexiest.
"What's wrong?" Luke asked sensing sadness in her.
"Did you ask about joining the Rebels?" she said changing subjects.
"Just gotta convince my uncle." Luke answered excitedly.
"So both you and Biggs huh." Camie said sadly.
"Why aren't you excited?" Luke asked stopping everything he was doing and turning to her.
"Its nothing... I'm just going to miss you." Camie admitted looking at her feet.


Luke took a few steps towards her and grabbed her for a hug. They hugged tightly for a few seconds and then broke slightly, Luke let his hands stay wrapped around her waist and she kept hers on his shoulders as if they were slow dancing. Her dark blue eyes pierced through him as if she was inspecting his soul.
"I'm going to miss you to." He returned shyly.
"But I'll come back to visit." Luke added.
"You promise?" Camie sniffled.
"How's this for an answer?" Luke grabbed Camie's ass tightly.
"Not bad." She giggled sliding her hands down his pants and taking his half stiff dick in her hands.


Luke groped one of her slightly larger than average tits with his hand through the fabric of her shirt before she slid down to her knees taking his pants with her. Lukes rock hard dick sprung up almost smacking Camie in the nose, Camie purred as she slowly stroked his cock and barely licked his shaft.


"Luke! Dad wants you to... Whoa!" Leon yelped stopping dead in his tracks seeing his crush Camie sucking off his cousin, he moved his shaggy black hair out of his eyes revealing the scar that went across his face and giving him the ability for a better view.


"Get out of here you brat!" Luke yelled picking up a wrench and hurling it has hard as he could at his cousin.


The wrench slammed into his chest sending him stumbling out the door wheezing for air.
"Will he be ok?" Camie asked worriedly still stroking Lukes cock.
He's a tough kid he'll be fine." Luke encouraged.


Camie shrugged it off and popped the head of Lukes dick into her mouth, she slowly worked the shaft down her throat she began to bob her head back and forth gaining speed and rhythm. Luke buried his hands into her thick brown hair and helped guide her head, her warm mouth teased him with each thrust, her tongue wrapped around his cock lightly grazing the shaft. She worked furiously with her head and hand bobbing simultaneously doing everything she could to work the cum out of Luke. In the time Luke had known her, Camie had gone from barely knowing what to do with a dick to becoming an expert cock sucker, she had learned what every small movement meant from Luke and how to encourage a huge climax.


She clumsily undid the buttons on her blouse as she tried to keep Luke's cock in her mouth. She tossed her shirt a side as Luke's cock popped out of her mouth dripping with saliva. Luke gently pulled Camie up and followed her to a nearby work bench, Camie bent down and pressed her bare tits against the cold durasteel. Luke pulled her skirt over her waist and moved her panties to the side. Luke slowly guided his dick into her pussy and humped in short quick bursts. Camie's hands gripped the work benches edges as her body rocked back and forth. Luke had worked his way into deep strong thrusts drawing out Camie's moans, Luke's hands had begun to knead Camie's firm ass. His hands worked their way forward rubbing down the sides of Camie's body, his pounding continued but his chest was now resting on her back. His hands cupped the sides of her breasts and his face was buried in her light brown hair.


Luke's thrusts had lost much of their power in his new position, but the feel of Luke's tough farmers body on hers made her feel each ripple and almost doubled her pleasure. Luke slowed his thrusts but made sure that he slammed into her pussy as hard as he could making her yelp with pleasure each time. feeling the cum in his balls rapidly rising Luke pulled and let his hard dick press against Camie's ass cheek, he replaced his cock with two of his fingers, Luke's heavy breath tickled Camie's ears as he ruthlessly fucked her with his fingers. Camie's ecstasy moans and groans filled the room, Camie gently wiggled her way out from under Luke and tried to stand but another brutal finger attack to her pussy made her drop to the floor. Her perfectly round ass stuck up in the air and her face was pressed to the floor, Luke forked his legs over her and drilled down ramming is thick cock into her wet pussy. Luke smashed into her pussy stealing the breath from Camie, Camie panted with excitement and pleasure unable to move from Luke's relentless pounding.


After a long pounding Luke pulled out and took a few steps back jacking his cock. Camie moved as fast as her tired body would let her, she positioned herself underneath of Luke's cock and waited for the stream of cum that would come shooting out. She didn't have to wait long as thick globs of cum shot out and landed all over Camie's face. Luke's last bit of cum dribbled between her cleavage as she licked her lips hungrily.


"Now, do you really believe I could leave you behind?" Luke panted.
"I guess not." Camie giggled licking the cum on her fingers.
"I'm going to go clean up, I'll see you at Tosche Station." She continued gathering up her clothes.


Luke redressed himself the turned to continue work on the droids.
"Pardon me master Luke but I'm afraid R2-D2 went to search for Master Kenobi." C3PO told Luke.
"What!?! Why didn't you tell me!" Luke screamed at the droid.
"It would have been rude to interrupt your meeting." The droid explained calmly.
"Come on we have to go after him before Uncle Owen kills me." Luke huffed as he grabbed his jacket and sprinted outside.


If he didn't catch that astro droid he would never be able to leave to fight for the Rebels...





Well I hoped you enjoyed this chapter and the previous ones, I guess by writting this one I've signed on for at least one more movie. Sorry about the amount of time its been taking; life gets busy sometimes.
I have a few things I would like to ask, it may increase the speed I'm able to write these I would ask everyone to answer them since I do enjoy feed back and interacting with you guys and gals.
1) is their anybody in paticular you'd like to see make an apperance/do you have a favorite character?
2) is their a paticular pairing you've wanted to read about?
3) is their an event in this movie you for sure want to see?
4) what is your favorite chapter thus far?
Again you don't have to answer all of these or even any of these but if you do I would greatly appreciate it.

Annnnnnd if someone points out the easter egg i put in there i'll make sure theirs another chapter posted within the next week or two (Theirs a hint in the title)

[Worlord321]

First I think the egg is that Camie is ahsoka, tell me if im wrong. And second I think leia and luke would be a good one just sayin. Or leia and obiwan

[Worlord321]

Oh and also best one so far IMO was Sabe and Obi

[keller]

padmas dressed like tifa from final fantasy 7

[keller]

also 1(quigon
2(han and padma
3(death star sene (i really want to se hwaats going to hapen with out darth vader)
4(ALL OF THEM

[Worlord321]

Oh wow I didn't read the forward about Camie. Now my guess looks retarded.

[RAT25]

At this point, there is not a pairing that would not be good. As long as the characters and elements that make it Star Wars are there, it will be good.

[UrbanChaos]

padmas dressed like tifa from final fantasy 7

Nope, didnt notice I did that till now

[RAT25]

Is the Easter egg the fact that Owen's son's name is Leon, the name of the main character in Final Fantasy VIII?

[loobinator69]

great chapter. sucks that i had computer troubles and had to wait until today to read it, but glad theyre all fixed now.

as for the easter egg, i honestly dont have a guess... final fantasy is one of the game series i meant to play but just didn't have the time.

1. mara jade, but thats more extended universe stuff there
2. anything you write would turn out well
3. none in particular for this movie.
4. all of them (to quote keller)

[shadowblitz7]

For the easter egg, there were actually 2 of them, and people have listed them but just to make it clear: Luke's girlfriend is Tifa from FFVII, and he pretty much made her outfit the same as it was in the game, which has been the center of horny nerd jokes since well, pretty much the games creation. Leon is the character for FFVIII, and he even gave Leon the same scar across the face like in the game. (Curious as to if that means that Seifer will make an appearance. Darkside?). Urban has made it so that Leon is in love with Tifa, so pretty much he just made a coupling of two of the favorite characters from two different games, thrown into the middle of the Star Wars universe. Its a nerdgasm that could shatter the universe. The Jedi have got to be feeling this one....ok, sorry, ive got more lame jokes but I think I better quit while i am behind =)

[UrbanChaos]

^ Definitely right on the Leon part, but Camie was actually a character George Lucas created and took out of the film her scenes can still be watched ( Theirs a link to her in the eidtors note). Padme does look like Tifa, but that was on accident. I tend to like to add little nerd things here and their, chapter 12 had a guy named Dez otherwise known as Darth Bane for those of you who know who that is. Very impressed by your guess though, a few other characters might make an apperance

[loobinator69]

so are we getting a chapter in "the next week or two" then?

[UrbanChaos]

^ yup, this one is a lot shorter though, the average chapter is like 6-7 pages (the last was 10) this ones only like 3-4. The time and location its in doesent leave a lot of options but I wanted to do it anyway

[RAT25]

All I can say is 'Yes! I got it first!' And 'Oh I can not belief I missed the scar, even though I recognized him.'

[gofer]

Another great chapter. Cant wait for more.

[shadowblitz7]

Ah, youre right, sorry. I read the story about four days beforehand and so I mixed up which chars were dressed as who, I just remembered the tifa thing. Haha, well, now Leon could always get a thing for Padme?

[keller]

^ Definitely right on the Leon part, but Camie was actually a character George Lucas created and took out of the film her scenes can still be watched ( Theirs a link to her in the eidtors note). Padme does look like Tifa, but that was on accident. I tend to like to add little nerd things here and their, chapter 12 had a guy named Dez otherwise known as Darth Bane for those of you who know who that is. Very impressed by your guess though, a few other characters might make an apperance
i would never have guess leon was a referance to squall leonhart

[RAT25]

^ Definitely right on the Leon part, but Camie was actually a character George Lucas created and took out of the film her scenes can still be watched ( Theirs a link to her in the eidtors note). Padme does look like Tifa, but that was on accident. I tend to like to add little nerd things here and their, chapter 12 had a guy named Dez otherwise known as Darth Bane for those of you who know who that is. Very impressed by your guess though, a few other characters might make an apperance

So did you name him Leon so it wouldn't be a complete give away if you had named his squall, or did you know that he was called that from a different game...

[UrbanChaos]

So did you name him Leon so it wouldn't be a complete give away if you had named his squall, or did you know that he was called that from a different game...

I assume you're referring to KH? yeah a little of both

[jdawgg]

hey bro miss me while i been busy being a father?

[UrbanChaos]

I will admit I was waiting for you to turn up, got a little nervous when you werent showin up

[RAT25]

yeah, I played KH a while back so when I read this I didn't thing anything strange of it until Keller didn't get the hint because it would be a little difficult without knowing about KH even with playing FF VIII

[keller]

i knew about kingdom hearts but i didn't register the final fantasy reference until after i read the chapter then i remember padma so Leon completely slipped my mind

[jdawgg]

I will admit I was waiting for you to turn up, got a little nervous when you werent showin up

lmfao. i dont get much spare time anymore, although you may notice that just over a week ago, in ur last update, i thanked you. then i disappeared, had only enough time to read it, and i gotta say, your a talented writer.

[jdawgg]

c'mon urbanchaos, dont let this thread die. post another chapter

[UrbanChaos]

I took a slight break from writting this chapter to catch up on the other stories I've been working on. This chapters almost done, it will be up by at least next sunday if not sooner this week.

[loobinator69]

are the 2 weeks up yet? lol whenever we get the new chapter, hopefully this week, it'll be good

[UrbanChaos]

^It will be this week, I could have had it done already but I'm playing catch up with the four other stories I'm trying to finish while consistintly finish the never ending chapters

[jdawgg]

im gonna keep bugging u until it comes out. is it done yet, lol?

[loobinator69]

other stories? so will you be making another series?

[UrbanChaos]

to be honest I dont ever see myself doing another series (if i do it will be a mini series), the only reason the "what ifs" still existed is because its my baby, I've almost killed it twice (once at the end of episode 1 and the second was at the end of episode 3) but several people talked me out of it, (UrbanJungle being a strong supporter of its continuation so you guys owe her big time, infact thats more or less why she jumped on board to help). The only story I'm working on that is sort of a series is about four parts long and will be completed before i release any of it. Another reason is I'm not sure what i would write on... Kingdom Hearts popped into my heads once but i'm not sure their are enough people familiar with it to even do one story on it.

[RAT25]

^ yeah, that's always the problem with Kingdom Hearts unfortunately.

[loobinator69]

didn't you think about an avatar the last airbender series though? plenty of characters in that series

[RAT25]

^ Yes. Urban Chaos don't let the fact that a few other people made avatar stories make you thing that you couldn't make an original one of your own

[UrbanChaos]

I have thought about an avatar series I was just going to continue where the final season left off, but I'm not sure if I want to start a new series, I might just make stories as requested.

[loobinator69]

speaking of stories as requested, hows the new chapter coming along lol?

[UrbanChaos]

Well I didnt get the weekend off like i expected soooooo it probably wont be done by sunday like I planned... Maybe! but probably not... But possible!

[jdawgg]

its sunday. u got that chapter done yet?

[UrbanChaos]

I got home a couple hours early tonight so I'm working on it right now, it might be out tonight depending on how fast UrbanJungle can edit... or if she even feels like it

[loobinator69]

it's monday. is the editing almost done yet?

[RAT25]

Urban Chaos, you should spend the time that you are not editing or writing chapters (this is your free time I'm talking about), and use that time to write the next chapter so there is less of a wait. P.S., ignore this if you have been doing this all along...

[UrbanChaos]

Editing should be done and back in my hands by tomorrow but I already know I need to change some stuff...
@Rat25 Yeah I always tell myself that but I rarely have free anymore time anymore (not like I used to when I started this thread) I always aim to be done in a week but it never happens in reality it takes me 2-3 weeks to finish a chapter unlike the 2-3 days it used to and I already know I wont have anytime to work on it tomorrow, I'll be lucky if I even have time to read it.
My schedual right now is get up at 5am work till 7pm come home and eat and either go to bed or hang out with my girlfriend/buddies for a couple of hours then repeat but I've worked 19 days without a day off so they owe me 1 when I reach 21 days so I'll be able to get a good amount of work done on these chapter then lol when I'm done on this work site I'll be able to pick up the speed

[jdawgg]

better be up soon, dont wanna make me hafta smack ya around the forums

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 27: Play Ball


By UrbanChaos


•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.



Yup so I managed to power through the last bit of this chapter and managed to write/edit the last 4 hours I needed for this chapter. And instead of releasing it on sunday I figured and just put it out now, so enjoy the early treat!!!!!!






"What did you say?" Darth Maul growled to a low ranking Imperial officer.
"It appears as though the plans aren't on the starship." The officer gulped nervously.


Maul gripped the man's spine with the force and lifted him in the air with the motion of his hand. Then angrily hurled him across the deck slamming him into a durasteel wall.


"You!" Darth Maul said turning to another ensign.
"Yes my lord." The ensign answered in fear.
"Tear that ship apart. I want those plans found now!" Darth Maul roared.
"Right away my lord." The ensign replied hurrying away.
"And bring me that ambassador!" Darth Maul snarled.


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Leia soon found herself being whisked away by several stormtroopers down a long gray steel hallway.
"The senate will not stand for this, I demand you release me this instant." Leia demanded but was ignored like every other time.


Leia didn't know where she was being taken but she could feel something evil ahead of her. It was as if she could sense it through the air. She had been able to sense peoples true emotions from a young age, she just chalked it up to woman's intuition. But this was different, the evil seemed as if it was trying to choke her, it plugged every sense she had. The closer she got the more light headed she became, it was as if she could see a dark cloud moving towards her. It was frightening yet exhilarating.


A large door opened and she saw the command deck of the Imperial Star Destroyer. A large hooded man stood at the very end of the bridge. This man was radiating with the evil she had felt. She didn't want to go near him, yet craved to feel more of his power.


"I demand you release me." Leia said now standing next to him.
"I will permit you your freedom... When you tell me where my plans are." Darth Maul casually bargained.
"I don't know what you are talking about." She scoffed looking away.
"Where are my plans." Maul said stooping over and grabbing her chin forcing her to look into his yellow eyes.
"When the senate hears about this you are going to be in big trouble." she spoke wiggling free of his grip.
"I'm going to ask you one more time." Maul paused
"WHERE ARE MY PLANS!?!" Maul roared shaking the command deck through his rage.


Leia gathered her thoughts and recovered her nerve from his sudden outburst.
"I don't know." Leia said defiantly.
"Well that's unfortunate for you." Maul said regaining his composure.
"What do you mean?" Leia asked nervously.
"Sazh, take her to the prepared chamber." Darth Maul ordered what looked like a high ranking officer.
"I would rather not stun you, please just follow me." The man spoke gently waving her to follow him.


Darth Maul watched the lady go, her white dress clinging to her. He couldn't shake the feeling that he had met someone like her years ago.


Leia followed the man out and down the hall.
"I'm sorry for all the fuss little lady." The man said kindly.
"Where are you taking me." Leia asked forcefully.
"To a holding cell." Sazh replied stepping into a lift and pressing the detention level button.
"The Senate will not stand for this." Leia humphed.
"Listen, I hate to tell you this but the Empire doesn't care about the senate's approval. If I was you I'd just accept what's happening and try to find a way to escape." Sazh commented.
"Are you telling me to escape?" She asked slightly confused by the man's kindness.


Sazh opened his mouth to say something then closed it when the doors opened, he lead her through several guards and officers then down another corridor where he finally opened a cell door.


"I can't tell you what or what not to do, but if I were you I wouldn't be sticking around." Sazh murmured quietly so no one else around them could hear.
"Any advice?" Leia asked back in an equally low voice.
"Just play ball for now, I might be able to help you get out. Just go in there and put on what's there. I'll try to think of something." Sazh said looking over his shoulder.
"Why would you help me?" She asked a little suspicious.
"Do I need a reason?" He answered pushing her in the cell and closing the door.
"Wait put what on!" She screamed at the already closed door.


Leia turned around to survey the room. It was gray, like the rest of the ship, there was a bench on the far wall that was meant to be a bed. She stepped over to the bench and saw what she was supposed wear. She picked up the black thong and stretched it by the waist bands, it was skimpier then anything she had ever worn in public and to add insult to injury the Empire's insignia was in white on the front. Leia picked up the matching lacy bra and rubbed the fabric with her fingers.


"Just play ball for now." Leia murmured reminding herself of Sazh's words.
Leia undid her silver belt and set it on the bench, then slowly pulled her left sleeve down until her arm popped free and did the same with her right arm. her dress hung at her waist until she wiggled her ass slightly and pushed the white dress to her ankles, she stepped out of the dress and neatly folded it up and set it next to her belt she stood naked in her white high heel boots. She rarely if ever wore undergarments since it was easily noticed under her white dress. She sat down on the cold steel bench and undid her high heels and sat them to the side. She looked at the thong once more then with a sigh slid them on and did the same with the bra. Leia took a moment to straighten her buns but was interrupted by the opening of the cell door. Darth Maul strode in and surveyed Leia in her new outfit.
"That looks more fitting on you." Darth Maul teased copping a feel at Leia's perky tits before it was slapped away.
"I'm feeling particularly generous today and decided to give you one last chance. Give me my plans and I'll let you go unharmed." Maul bargained yet again.
"And what if I still don't know?" Leia asked her defiance fading slightly.
"Now that would be ruining the surprise wouldn't it?" Darth Maul grinned devilishly showing his yellow teeth.


Leia bowed her head in silence.
"I take it you still refuse to answer. Very well." Darth Maul scowled. Darth Maul stepped into the door frame to leave but hesitated.
"Don't think this is over. We will still make use of you." Darth Maul growled leaving.


As Darth Maul stepped out of the frame Sazh and two soldiers in white body armor entered.
"Follow me kid." Sazh sighed, his voice hinting at sadness.


Leia did as she was told and followed the Sazh out into the hall wearing her very skimpy undergarments, her cheeks reddened quickly as passing soldiers gawked at her nearly naked body. She could even feel the burning gazes of the soldiers following behind her. She was lead into a large room that was about half the size of a hanger, soldiers were strewn about but were not wearing armor, it was some kind of break room Leia thought. The more she looked around the more games she saw, there was a sabacc table, a pazaak table, blast darts, grav-pool, novacrown, trin sticks, in fact there were more games then she thought ever existed. An entire corner of the room was designated for weights and another for tv. The walls were plastered with posters of girls wearing skimpy or no clothing, many she recognized as famous celebrities, she saw the famous twi'lek dancer Dia Lolm, the holo porn star Vicky Qesh and many, many more. But one wall stood out, it was almost full of large prints of women drenched in cum.


Leia followed Sazh to a sort of pit, it was a octagonal shape and had about four stairs leading to the bottom. Sazh motioned for her to step down the stairs, she did as instructed feeling the rooms attention turning towards her.
"Entertainments here!" Sazh shouted to the men in the room. They quickly huddled around the pit, Sazh quickly left the crowd probably to leave.


A long awkward pause grew between Leia and the men, their intense stares burning into her.
"Entertain us already!" A man shouted from within the group, a low murmur of agreements grew in the crow.
"Do a strip tease!" Another voice called out, soon a chant formed saying strip tease, strip tease.


Leia unsure of what to do slowly and sensual rubbed her naked belly gathering some hoots and hollers, her hands slid down to her thong straps which she slowly stretched teasing the men by showing her clean patch of pubic hair before quickly snapping the thong back into place. Leia's hands slid back up to her stomach then to her perky tits. She kneaded her tits through her bra gently pushing them together then let go letting them jiggle freely. Her hands reached to her back where she found the clip to her bra, she unclipped it letting it fall slightly before she caught it in her forearms, the straps of the bra dangled as she danced sensually. Leia replaced the bra that was just barely covering her tits with her arm, she spun the bra above her head with her free hand and throw it into the crowd gaining appreciative hollers. Leia covered her tits with her hands squeezing them gently, her hands slid to the bottom of her breast and lifted them up slowly finally showing off her tits in their naked glory. She lifted them high enough up so she could suck on her pert nipple. One of her hands glided down to her thong where she slowly rubbed her pussy through the cloth. Her thong became wet quickly, Leia couldn't believe what she was doing, she was semi-masturbating in front of complete strangers. She had originally got a little swept up in the moment but her head was clearing slightly now, she was a princess not a slut. Yet she couldn't deny the thrill she was getting from these men watching her nasty acts, she gazed around the room and saw many of them men rubbing their cocks through their pants. Time to bring it home Leia thought. She bent over slowly and then reached back for her thong, gently she pulled down as she wiggled her delicious ass. She straightened back up and kicked the thong that was around her ankle into the crowd. Leia posed for the group of men in the most sensual and sexy poses she could think of. Eventually Leia's hands found their way to her dripping wet pussy where she inserted two fingers. Her two fingers began to pump quickly while her free hand squeezed and played with her tits. She found herself getting more aggressive as her fingers sped up and slammed into her, she didn't masturbate this hard when she was alone let alone in front of a large crowd. She knelt down to her knees, her fingers worked into overdrive pushing and twisting as deep as she could go. She fell onto her back with her legs up in an arch, both hands scrambled around her wet snatch taking turns with which fingers would thrust, Leia panted for breath in between her moans and groans. Two fingers from each hand made their way into her pussy at the same time finding a rhythmic thrust together, Leia's arousal had peaked and she knew it, she had never masturbated this long or this hard and having all these men watch her had just increased her pleasure, she knew it wouldn't long until she climaxed. And she was right at was mere seconds before her juices flooded out spraying across the floor, Leia couldn't believe how much she came, her cheeks were hot red with embarrassment. She managed to get herself back onto her knees and rested her hands on her thighs while attempting to cover her tits slightly.


But as Leia refocused on the men around her she saw that most, if not all, of them had their pants off and their rock hard cocks out. Most were glistening with pre-cum but she spotted a few that had already blown their load. Leia stared back at them with a blank and somewhat innocent look unsure of what they were waiting for.
"I'm not finished yet!" She heard someone yell.
"Me either!" Someone else chimed in. A unanimous murmur of agreement formed in the crowd.
"Some dancer, I'm barely hard!" Another soldier joked getting a few laughs.


Leia didn't think it was possible but her cheeks blushed even harder with embarrassment now, and she wasn't hundred percent sure why, she wasn't a dancer or a slut why should she care if these green backs didn't like her dance. She was royalty after all they should be humbled to merely be in her presence she thought somewhat pompous. Leia could barely make out what the men were saying by this point, shouts were coming from all direction and she could barely make sense of it all. Until one man finally stepped forward.
"All of you shut up!" The man yelled gaining the silence of his peers minus a few whispers. Leia surveyed the man as he turned to her, his cock was larger than the average mans, not the largest she had seen but it was up there. He was well chiseled and a ruggedly handsome man by any standards.
"Listen little princess, you're our entertainment. So you need to satisfy our needs if you catch my drift." The man winked at her.
"Alright." Leia gulped nervously.


The man strode up to her a little over confident until his dick was inches from Leia's mouth glistening with pre-cum. Leia hesitantly stuck her tongue out, and then gave his dick a quick lick. The sweet salty taste made her mouth water slightly, the men around her hooted in excitement cheering her on. Leia figured she had played their game this long she might as well finish it, Leia began to suck on the head of the cock letting her tongue gently explored the tip. Soon she was gulping down his entire rod trying to put on a show for the other men around her. Her slurps grew louder as she allowed her saliva to build up around the meat, then she felt a pair of hands massage her shoulders from behind, she managed to catch a glimpse of a guy behind her massaging her, his cock rubbed against her back slightly. Leia let the cock in her mouth spring free and wrapped two hands around it quickly jerking it off, Leia bit her lower lip focusing on her strokes. Two dicks squished against both her cheeks forcing her to refocus, she slid one of the dicks into her mouth and reassigned a hand to one of the new dicks. She could feel four hands massaging her body now instead of the previous two.


Leia felt herself being lifted into the air and then gently lowered onto a soldier whose dick pierced right into her moist pussy, Leia began to buck her hips trying to deal with all four cocks that were being forced on her. The group converged tighter on her trying to get a closer and better look at her, she could feel several hands rubbing her body and several dicks rubbing up against any free skin she had. Leia tried to switch between as many dicks as she could with her hands and mouth but there was to many to keep track of. Meat was being thrusted at her in each direction. She slammed her ass down one more time sending the soldier underneath her into orgasm, his hot seed sprayed into her belly coating her walls. She didn't have to wait long before that soldier was replaced with another and her pussy was once again being slammed with a cock. Leia's mind snapped back to attention when she felt the cock in her mouth shudder slightly then moments later it exploded into her mouth sending thick streams of seamen down her throat. She let the semi-limp cock slip from her mouth leaving a trail of cum down her chin, Leia felt the same shudder from the cock in her left hand and felt the warm splash on her cheek she pointed it down as best as she could and the rest of the load landed on her tits and side.


Before Leia could even think the two wasted cocks were replaced with fresh ones. She felt a pair of hands on her back work their way down to her deliciously tight ass and start to squeeze each cheek, Leia bent forward a little too deep throat a cock better which sent the wrong sign her mysterious massager, he spread her ass cheeks and rubbed his dick against her virgin hole.
"Please not in the ass." Leia begged with a dick in her mouth.
"Not in the ass Kallen." The guy with his dick in Leia's mouth repeated to the man teasing her hole.


Leia could hear the man behind her grumbling but he did stop, instead he place his dick between her ass cheeks like a hotdog in a bun and started thrusting that way. All Leia cared about was saving that hole for someone special. The man really didn't last long and before long she felt the gush of warm cum spray against her back, apparently the men around him liked his idea because it wasn't long before another dick had taken its place. The man she had been sucking off pulled his meat out of her mouth and stuffed it between her tits, he bucked his hips wildly bringing him to orgasm and spraying his spunk all over Leia's chest and chin. The fresh coat of cum spurred on the two cocks in her hand which lost control almost simultaneously spraying sperm all over her body. By this point the feeling of warm wet spray had become pretty routine, random blast seemed to come out of nowhere. She had slurped down more cocks then she thought she would in her life time. Leia felt the fourth or fifth shower of cum fire up and into her belly.


"Times up!" She heard who she assumed was Sazh yell. Like clockwork the men with still stiff cocks surrounded her making a circle, the jerked furiously trying to finish themselves off, Leia made herself more comfortable on her knees and waited for the inevitable end. She didn't have to wait long before a shower of cum sprayed all over her body. Leia rubbed the cum all over her body, she always enjoyed playing with cum.
"Look over here!" Someone shouted, Leia looked and saw a soldier holding a camera apparently she was about to earn a spot on the wall, she pushed her chest and sucked on two fingers covered with cum adding a seductive smile. The camera flashed and Sazh had made his way to the front of the group.
"Alright, alright. Soldiers back to work, Princess please come with me." Sazh said offering her a hand up then thought twice about it.


Leia had expected some kind of towel or clothing but received none, Sazh picked up her undergarments and then lead the way out, she probably should have been embarrassed being lead naked down the hall covered cum, but she was far passed embarrassment, by this point she was walking proudly.


She was lead back to her cell where she saw several towels and other things to help her clean up.


"I've been looking into a way to get you out." Sazh finally said breaking the silence.
"Any leads?" Leia replied picking up a towel.
"Nothing concrete, unless someone's coming to rescue you and see you getting out of here anytime soon." Sazh admitted.
"Will I be used as entertainment often?" She joked.
"No, from past experience you'll only be servicing higher ranking officers individually." Sazh explained.
"I'll leave you to clean up, and keep searching to get you out." Sazh continued before leaving.


Leia slowly cleaned herself up, her mind wandered to her escape. Why was Sazh helping her anyway? what motive did he have? Her best bet right now seemed to be Obi Wan Kenobi... But what were the chances he was even going to get her message?




Hope you all enjoyed the newest chapter in the series feel free to ask questions make a comment or even suggest a few ideas... and as always i've left an easter egg or two

[loobinator69]

great new chapter. thanks for getting it out today, i don't think i would have made it until sunday

[jdawgg]

great chapter urban

[RAT25]

Is one the guy who is helping Leia Sazh Katzroy, from FF XIII?

[Bentobox]

thanks for the story

[dexterjester0]

Cant wait for the next one!

[UrbanChaos]

Is one the guy who is helping Leia Sazh Katzroy, from FF XIII?
yes, yes he is

[jdawgg]

yes, yes he is

thought his name sounded fimilar. couldn't quite remember from where

[Bentobox]

mmm not bad~

[RAT25]

are Some of thE hIgh ranking oFficers going to bE from final fantasy or is that now going to be what you end up Righting about now that I suggested it. OR maybe adding in a chaRacter that could be darth maul's apprentIce, you never Know there coUld be a lot of people to choose from. Which means a lot of visits to wikipedia if you were to strive to be accurate... Just say that it'll be out in a few weeks and be done with us for the time being.

[UrbanChaos]

**SPOILER ALERT**
>For those of you who are enjoying the story and the change in elments I've made and want to continue on being suprised I suggest you skip over this comment

>For those of you curious and want some back story like Rat25 then I encourage you to read on


I dont think I'm going to be able to explain this well enough in the chapters so here's deal, Palpatine has decided to leave the ideal of "Rule of two" started by Darth Bane which states that the Sith must number in only 2 no more no less, one master one apprentice. One to embody the power one to crave it. Palpatine had decided to leave this rule behind and has created a circle of Sith much like the olden day sith had.You will see several final fantasy characters in the circle (some of which I'm sure you can guess) but it will not be limited to just them, many charcaters from many different franchises will sneak their way into the stories. And they will not just be sworn to the darkside many will apear on the lightside as squall did. For the most part if you are unaware of these characters and who they actually are it wont take away from the story any, if you do know who they are it might add a little extra for you. It's like ordering a large fries from Mcdonalds everyone gets around the same amount but everyone gets a little different... and I just compared the "what ifs" to mcdonalds fries, wow...

[RAT25]

That's a lot more than what I expected, so great. Now I will be pacient until someone else loses their pacients and starts asking again.

[jdawgg]

That's a lot more than what I expected, so great. Now I will be pacient until someone else loses their pacients and starts asking again.

i gotta ask this now, it was mentioned. whens the next chapter coming out?

[UrbanChaos]

probably not this week, maybe next, but no more then three weeks I'd say

[RAT25]

i gotta ask this now, it was mentioned. whens the next chapter coming out?

This is not what I had in mind, but ok, I will now wait for 3 weeks and ask then.

[Archfiend]

**SPOILER ALERT**
>For those of you who are enjoying the story and the change in elments I've made and want to continue on being suprised I suggest you skip over this comment

>For those of you curious and want some back story like Rat25 then I encourage you to read on


I dont think I'm going to be able to explain this well enough in the chapters so here's deal, Palpatine has decided to leave the ideal of "Rule of two" started by Darth Bane which states that the Sith must number in only 2 no more no less, one master one apprentice. One to embody the power one to crave it. Palpatine had decided to leave this rule behind and has created a circle of Sith much like the olden day sith had.You will see several final fantasy characters in the circle (some of which I'm sure you can guess) but it will not be limited to just them, many charcaters from many different franchises will sneak their way into the stories. And they will not just be sworn to the darkside many will apear on the lightside as squall did. For the most part if you are unaware of these characters and who they actually are it wont take away from the story any, if you do know who they are it might add a little extra for you. It's like ordering a large fries from Mcdonalds everyone gets around the same amount but everyone gets a little different... and I just compared the "what ifs" to mcdonalds fries, wow...

So, insstead of the Rule of Two that went (in canon) up to Darth Caedus und Tahiri Veila , you use the "One Sith" from the Legacy era (130- ABB), where there were many Sith Lords who all bowed to Darth Krayt. Interesting idea actually and fits in well to your "What-ifs".
Looking forward to the next chapter

[UrbanChaos]

^nailed it :smile:

[Archfiend]

^nailed it :smile:

funnily enough, Krayt knew Vergere and that she was a dark Jedi. They met before the Yhuuzhan Vong war though they disagreed on which path the Sith should take. Vergerre was far more conservative, preferring the rule of two, while Hett wanted to create the 'One Sith'. Both though knew of each other and wath each other was doing, though Vergere never told Jacen. In fact the One Sith knew of Jacen being Caedus, Alema Rar actually met the One Sith on Korriban while she was a Dark Jadi. The One Sith did not take Jacen and his Sith very seriously, though they did find him useful, seeing as he drew the attention of the Jedi away from them. They did accept him as a Sith Lord and recognized his power though.... Still, A'Sharad Hett became Krayt relatively early, sometime between the end of the Clone Wars and the Battle of Yavin.

Still interesting twist, the One Sith being in control. Wonder what Skywalker and Obi-Wan will do?

[RAT25]

Darkside... I assume UrbanChaos ment the dark side if the force not that... But I just had to... So yeah... Just putting that out there... That would be amussing, a huge black monster, with a red lightsaber between two of its fingers against Skywalker and Obi-Wan...

[Akota1991]

Great story I enjoy the wording an story, but why did you post the next chapter in the comments instead of writing a new one each time?

[UrbanChaos]

Great story I enjoy the wording an story, but why did you post the next chapter in the comments instead of writing a new one each time?

to avoid clogging up this story section, and for convenience for the reader since theirs going to be 50+ chapters it's easier to just put it in one thread where it can be found quick and easy.

[jdawgg]

Great story I enjoy the wording an story, but why did you post the next chapter in the comments instead of writing a new one each time?

also, to add onto what urbanchaos has already said, us readers dont wanna take looks in the main section for each new chapter. and theres another reasons why we like it here, easier to comment on each chapter, and to chat while waiting for the new chapters to come out.

[loobinator69]

and, one final note on why its all here, you can subscribe to the post to be emailed when chapters are posted, instead of checking everyday.


so hows the next chapter coming along?

[Akota1991]

Oh ok thank you for explaining

[RAT25]

and, one final note on why its all here, you can subscribe to the post to be emailed when chapters are posted, instead of checking everyday.


so hows the next chapter coming along? @jdawgg this is what I had ment when I had said wait until someone else loses their pacients, but now I can't ask, cause Urban still has two weeks before I can start asking why isn't the chapter out.

[UrbanChaos]

^by this sunday actually you could nag me, I had said no more then three weeks and its now week three, I should be able to get a good chunk of it done tomorrow if not all of it

[RAT25]

^ I just pay attention to what each post in this thread says, and mine says one week ago, so I'm not too worried about being accurate.

[UrbanChaos]

I finished the next chapter (chpt 28) last night (wednesday) so It'll be out sometime Sunday... maybe earlier if I'm feeling generous :smile:

[loobinator69]

well, then, please feel generous

[RAT25]

Yes by all means, be like Oprah, burst on stage on a jetpack and giving away humpback whales and schools. The way Dane Cook describes the fun Oprah.

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 28: Lessons Learned


By UrbanChaos


•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.






The engine of Luke's speeder whined under the strain it was being put under, Luke had finally recovered the R2 unit that had tried to escape and find a man named Obi Wan Kenobi and for whatever reason Luke had promised to take R2-D2 to him. Luke knew very little about the hermit that lived in the mountains, his parents talked about him occasionally but only in hushed tones and when they thought he wasn't around.


Luke decelerated as the old house came into view, the small group unloaded from the vehicle and approached the house. But before Luke could even knock the door swung open and he was greeted by an older man probably nearing his fifties.
"Luke, I've been expecting you. Come on in." The man said waving Luke in.
"You've been expecting me?" Luke asked confused following him inside.
"Well to be honest I thought Anakin would've sent you earlier." Obi Wan said scratching at his grey beard.
"I'm not sure I follow." Luke spoke in the same confused voice.


Obi Wan tapped his chin thoughtfully then opened an old chest and started to dig through it.
"For your training of course! You're a little too old now, but I guess the rules don't apply anymore." Obi Wan rambled as he dug through the chest tossing out various items.
"Training? What training? And why would my dad send me here at all?" Luke asked feeling utterly lost at this point.
"AHA!" Obi Wan shouted triumphantly.


Obi Wan pulled out a small wooden case and blew off a layer of dust, he was about to open it then stopped himself.
"Tell me Luke, what do you know about your father?" Obi Wan inquired turning to Luke.
"Not much, I know he's a hell of a mechanic and one of the best pilots this side of the galaxy." Luke admitted.
"Does he ever talk about the clone wars?" Obi Wan asked curiously taking a seat on a nearby chair.
"I've never heard him specifically talk about it. But my mom has mentioned it a few times, she was a senator at the time, apparently their love was forbidden but I've never known the exact reason why. I just assumed it was because she was so high class." He answered trying to remember the few details he had been given.
"It was because he was a Jedi knight." Obi Wan cut in lounging comfortably in his chair now.
"No that's not true. That's impossible." Luke laughed trying to imagine his father as a Jedi.
"It's true, and I was his master. I wanted to train you to be a Jedi but your Uncle always interjected and your father agreed with him at the time. Personally I believe your Uncle was preying on his weakened mental state at the time." Obi Wan pointed out.


A long silence grew between the two as Luke digested the life altering information he had been given.
"I think your father would want you to have this now." Obi Wan finally said breaking the silence, then handed him the old wooden case. Luke slowly undid the metal latch that held it closed and opened the case, the inside was lined with red felt and in the centre was an old lightsaber hilt. Luke slowly slid his finger down the cold steel wondering about the weapons history. Luke stood up and ignited it, it sprang to life with a pale blue blade and quiet hum. He practiced a few swings with it trying to gain a feel for it.
"So if you didn't come here for training, what exactly brought you here." Obi Wan asked watching the Luke play with the majestic blade.
"This droid actually." Luke answered motioning to the white and blue R2 unit.



The droid whistled cheerfully and rolled forward the gears in his holo-projector whirred than emitted the picture of a beautiful young lady wearing a long white dress that showed off her slender figure quite nicely.
"General Kenobi, years ago you served my father in the Clone Wars. Now he begs you to help him in his struggle against the Empire. I regret that I am unable to present my father's request to you in person, but my ship has fallen under attack and I'm afraid my mission to bring you to Alderaan has failed. I have placed information vital to the survival of the Rebellion into the memory systems of this R2 unit. My father will know how to retrieve it. You must see this droid safely delivered to him on Alderaan. This is our most desperate hour. Help me, Obi-Wan Kenobi, you're my only hope." The lady finished the disappeared.


Obi Wan leaned back in his chair slightly and scratched his head in thought.
"You must learn the ways of the force if you're to come with me to Alderaan." Obi Wan stated looking over at Luke.
"Alderaan? I'm not going to Alderaan! I've got to go home. It's late, I'm in for it as it is." Luke laughed at the old man's request.
"I need your help Luke. She needs your help. I'm getting to old for this sort of thing." Obi Wan protested.
"I can't get involved! I've got work to do! It's not that I like the Empire. I hate it! But there's nothing I can do about it right now. It's such a long way from here." Luke argued.
"That's your uncle talking." Obi Wan pointed out.
"You're not meant to be a farmer Luke. You've known it your whole life, you weren't brought to here by a mere coincidence, it was the force that guided you here. Come with me and learn the ways of the force." Obi Wan insisted.


Luke thought deeply about Obi Wan's words, he was right, Luke knew he was meant for more than farming or simple work. And hadn't he wanted to leave and fight for the Rebels just this morning?
"Alright let me go home and grab a few things." Luke sighed.
"Good, I'll go and secure us a flight to Alderaan. I'll send a message of where we will meet up." Obi Wan instructed.
"Alright." Luke nodded then headed for the door.


He and the droids hopped into his speeder and sped back home, while Obi Wan sped off on his swoop bike towards Anchorhead to secure a flight off of Tatooine.


Luke finally arrived at his homestead about an hour later, the old engine groaned and hissed as he turned the vehicle off.
"You two wait here." Luke instructed the two droids before hopping out.
"Yes master we will eagerly await your return." C3PO called to Luke.


Luke made his way down into his room being careful to avoid everyone. He found his old duffel bag and started to shove in spare clothes and a few random things. Luke dropped to his chest and dug under his bed looking for his old Merr Sonn model 57 blaster pistol. He found his holster but to his dismay it was empty, he strapped the holster to his belt next to his lightsaber then got up and went to his parents room. His mom borrowed it often when she saw a stray womp rat so she could take a few shots at it without the kickback of a rifle.


Luke snuck into his parents room and spied his blaster on the dresser, Luke snagged it then turned to leave but was cut off by his mom.
"And just where are you going?" Padme snapped at her son.
"Just going to the shop to see dad." Luke lied trying to grin nonchalantly.
"You're fathers still at the moisture vaporator." Padme countered catching onto Luke's game.
"Did I say to see dad?" Luke laughed a little.
"Yes, you did." Padme nodded raising an eye brow.
"I meant to see Tyro." Luke corrected himself.
"Mmm, Tyro of course." Padme agreed.
"I'll just be going then." Luke said trying to slip by his mom.
"The shop closed an hour ago Luke." Padme said not letting Luke by.
"Damn." Luke murmured knowing the jig was up.
"So where are you really going?" Padme asked taking Lukes hand and leading him back into the bedroom.



The two sat down on the king sized bed and Luke started his story from the beginning.
"... and now I'm going to meet up with Obi Wan." Luke finished his tale.
"Leave it to Obi to start another crazy quest." Padme joked
"You're ok with me going?" Luke questioned confused by how willing his mom was to let him go.
"Your father was much younger then you when he started these stupid missions. I'm just worried that you're going to meet a lot of girls and your experience won't be adequate enough, and I won't have my baby being embarrassed and bringing shame to the Skywalker name." She lectured.
"I'm not sure I understand." Luke gulped.
"Mama's going to teach you a few things." Padme whispered letting her hand massage his crotch.


Luke's mind raced with the thought of fucking his mom, his mom was hot no doubt about it. He had even pictured what it would be like, Luke had ended up rubbing a few out to those fantasies. He already knew that his mom was somewhat of a slut and had spied on her on numerous occasions fucking someone other than his dad, but the crazy thing was his father didn't mind Luke had told him what he saw once and his father just laughed and said is that all?


Luke's thoughts were cut short when he noticed Padme was now in between his legs gently licking his cock, she batted his cock between her hands as if she was a young felinx playing with a toy, Padme moved her brown medium length hair behind her ear and began to suck Luke's cock in a sideway fashion. Luke moaned loudly focusing completely on not blowing his load this soon, his mom was obviously very experienced in giving head.


"You get both! How's that fair!?!" Leon screamed entering the room seeing Padme deep throating her sons cock.


Luke set his gun to the lowest stun point and fired a couple rounds at his younger cousin intentionally missing him.
"Get out!" Luke yelled at the fleeing Leon. Padme let the wet dick slip from her mouth and looked up at her son.
"I would've enjoyed an extra cock." Padme whimpered.
"Oh I'm sure I'll be enough for you." He bragged back, then pulled off Padme's shirt letting her medium to large size breasts spring free, his hands quickly groped them. Ever since he was young he had dreamt of feeling these magnificent tits, a countless number of times he had secretly watched his mom changing or getting out of the shower just to catch a glance of them.


Padme pulled Luke up and helped him strip before quickly ditching her own clothes, she then dropped back to her knees and resumed her blowjob, her expertise was mind numbing, she could easily take all of Lukes meat without gagging and not only that her mouth was tighter than most cunts Luke had fucked, but to top it all off her tongue danced around his cock teasing it in every sensitive spot he had and a few he never knew he had. He focused his whole being into avoiding blowing his wad so soon, but at this point it was like Padme was playing games with him she would gently focus on one sensitive area until he was within centimetres of jizzing then back off and focus on another section. Luke's mind at this point couldn't even comprehend how many dicks his mom must have sucked to get to this level of masterfulness. He was now positive that if she wanted to make him cum she would have already done so, now she was simply proving a point that he knew a lot less then he thought he did about sex and women's various talents within the subject. Padme then did something Luke had never seen or heard about, she gobbled up his whole shaft quickly then sucked his balls into her mouth so her lips where kissing his stomach then she clamped down and applied pressure, the pleasure was simply too intense for Luke to handle soon his seed was gushing down her throat.


Luke's orgasm lasted several seconds before his cock deflated and slipped free of Padme's mouth. Padme wiped her chin with a big grin.
"I thought you had more than that." Padme teased with a wink.
"Oh I do." Luke confirmed lifting her into the air, he laid her on her back on the bed and towered over her. He slapped his limp cock on her snatch desperately trying to get it back up, then it happened, his cock grew to its full length and was ready for round two.
"I see you've already inherited a Jedi ability." She noticed Luke's hard on.


Luke paid no attention to his mom and instead slammed his dick into her tight warm cunt, Padme squealed in delight as her sons rod thrusted in and out, her body jiggled as the bed rocked back and forth with each powerful ram, Padme's hands roamed her body massaging her torso but ending up rubbing her breasts. Luke leaned forward and planted a kiss on Padme which lead to him half falling onto her, their bodies tangled into a new awkward position, Padme's legs wrapped around Luke, and Luke bear hugged his mom. His thrusts had slowed down tremendously and became less powerful. His face had ended up between Padme's cleavage, Luke took full advantage of this and began to suck on her nipples and surrounding skin. As awkward as the position was, Luke's cock was grinding the top of Padme's pussy, something she wasn't used to her pleasure had mounted quickly with each thrust, but the slow speed drove her crazy, it either made it more pleasurable or just made it unbearable she hadn't quite figured it out yet. As much as she was enjoying Luke's thick tool Padme knew she had to retake control, this was all about teaching him in first place wasn't it? Padme rolled her son over so she was in the mount position, Luke whined slightly until she started to churn her hips. Padme quickly moved onto the main event and started rhythmically bounce up and down on Luke's manhood.


Luke let his hands rest on her elegantly curvy hips and started to help her pump up and down but his hands drifted to her ever so lusty ass. Luke bucked his hips wildly feeling the tension in his balls tightening.
"Ganna cum!" Luke managed to get out.
"Not yet baby." Padme insisted.


Luke clenched his teeth trying to calm himself to the best of his abilities, he managed to power through the next hand full of strokes but it was just no use his body was going to win in this match. Padme must have sensed this because she hopped of his dick making Luke stand up, she dropped to her knees opening her mouth greedily waiting his cum. She didn't have to wait long within a few strokes Luke was gushing his cum all over Padme. His spray covered her from head to toe making her let out an involuntary yummy sound.


Luke was just enjoying the scene when his father busted in.
"Where's my kriffing rifle!" He screamed moving past his wife without giving her a second glance.
"In about twelve pieces in the shop, it jammed again so I took it apart." Luke explained.
"Fraking great, I've got a group stormtroopers sniffin around this place like a bantha dropped a deuce that smells like a bouquet of sunnydew flowers and I don't even have my A280!" Anakin yelled frustrated.
"Use this." Luke said unclipping his new lightsaber and passing it to his father.
"It'll have to do." His father muttered grudgingly accepting the lightsaber.


His father rushed out of the room, Luke grabbed his pants and attempted to put them on as he chased his father. Luke tried his best to keep up but lost his father up the winding staircase. Luke wall pressed against the alcove leading out to the outside and saw the six stormtroopers his father had mentioned.


Three where talking to each other pointing in various directions, one was standing watch, the fifth of the group was looking in pile of crates and the final was checking the door to their shop. But Luke couldn't for the life of him find his dad. The trooper that checking the door seemed satisfied that the door was locked and turned around to take a better look at the grounds. The door behind him opened slowly and two hands reached out of the darkness and pulled him in silently closing the doors after. The group didn't seem to notice the sudden disappearance of their companion, Luke then saw his father running across the roof of the shop in a hunched position, then dropped down behind the stack of crates his second victim was rummaging through. A blue beam shot out through one of the spaces between the crates slicing into the troopers heart making him cry out in pain.


This caught the attention of the group and they rushed to his side one stormtroopers went to check the status of his friend while one aimed his rifle at the crates then gave the signal for the other two to circle around it, one on each side.
"No one's back her sir." One of them reported.
"I don't like this, where's Jenkins, where getting the hell out of her." The leader said nervously.
"No sign of him sir, last we knew he was checking that building." The trooper updated him.
"Damn, you go check to see if he's in there, the rest of us back to the speeders." The leader instructed.


The group did as they were told and ran to the speeders, however the stormtrooper that had checked the shop building was lagging behind after coming to the conclusion that it was locked and soon became Anakin's prey, as he was running he stepped into a snare which tangled around his ankle, with a mighty pull the trooper tumbled to the ground and was dragged towards the corner of the building kicking and screaming, he grabbed the corner of the building with his fingers just as he was rounding it and tried to pull himself away, Anakin stopped pulling momentarily letting his prey feel the adrenaline rush of freedom, the trooper managed to get back up and tried to run not realizing he had just played into Anakin's hand. With the rope still snugly around his ankle this time when he pulled the trooper was to disoriented and to close to the corner to grab on too it, there was one last blood curdling scream as he disappeared around the corner, then... silence.


"Speeder won't start sir." A trooper stated shakily breaking the silence.
"Then let's start running." The leader said turning to the huge desert.
"Sir with all due respect if the sand people don't get us the desert will." A soldier reminded him.
"Then stay I don't care, I'm out of here." The leader stated flatly before running into the desert, the last two troopers looked at each nervously, then chased after their leader.


None of them got far, a lightsaber swooped out of the sky commanded by an invisible force, it chopped off all three heads and returned to its owners hand. Which just so happened to be Anakins.
"Dad! That was amazing!" Luke said making all his doubt of his father being a Jedi disappear.
"Pack your things were leaving." His dad stated bluntly moving past his son, and tossing his son the lightsaber.



Luke followed his dad down into the house, he grabbed his already packed bag and finished dressing. He could hear his parents discussing where they were going to go. Luke went outside to clear his head, his mind nearly exploded with his father's display of skill.


Luke's holo-communicator beeped notifying him he had a message. He quickly looked at it and saw it was Obi Wan telling him where to meet him. It told him to go to a bar called 7th Heaven, Luke knew the place well, in fact he had a few friends there...






Hope you all enjoyed the latest installment of the "What Ifs", go ahead and leave a comment, suggest an idea or even ask a question!

[jdawgg]

awesome dude. im first to comment and thank you for it.

[loobinator69]

awesome new installment.

[jdawgg]

just noticed this, lol:

"Ganna cum!" Luke managed to get out.
"Not yet baby." Padme insisted.

Im assuming you meant to say 'gonna cum'

[UrbanChaos]

yeah, I left it that way intentionally though. I Thought it made it more slangish and more in the heat of the moment like he was gritting his teeth, maybe i've just been hangin around with to many newfies lol

[RAT25]

Good chapter, it's staying close to the movie, but with changes to make it new.

[WhyAlex]

I'm interested to see where you're going to take the stories. You've got A LOT of rewriting to do don't you?! Also, the sex is pretty hot ;P

[UrbanChaos]

^yeah, I figure up to the sixth movie will be 50+ chapters and then I'm not sure if i'll continue into EU or not

also the next chapters probably going to take some time beacuse
1. I blew out my shoulder at work again so I'm down to one arm and I'll be in and out of several doctor offices for a while (leaving little time for writting)
2. it's really long, it's probably going to be the longest I've written in a while simply beacuse I have to go from Tatooine to the death star and off it before I can get to a sex scene and with no ladies in between (other then one that I hinted to at the end of this chapter) it's going to take a while to write then edit it.

[Worlord321]

Man we need to either tie urban down and make him finish or just clone him so he can write it. Good chapter btw!

[RAT25]

@Worlord I think thats why Urban Jungle is helping him...

[jdawgg]

i think ive waited long enough to ask this, but whens the chapter coming out?

[UrbanChaos]

Not for a while its fairly long and i've been working at shortening it down plus with all the jumping around while keeping good conveyance and keeping it from getting to clunky, I'd like to get it done for this weekend but that wont happen and the sex scene probably wont meet expections unless i change the pairing which I probably wont do cause this pairing will set up future things... so to sum it up I'm not sure when its coming out, maybe next week?

[loobinator69]

i'm confused...

so next week then?

[jdawgg]

urban, if u need an extra set of eyes for editing and proof-reading, let me know. i got some spare time, and bored during the day. i'll send u my email address, and u can email it to me

[UrbanChaos]

@loob maybe I'm pushing for this sunday

[loobinator69]

alright can't wait lol

[UrbanChaos]

Alright update time, so the next chapter is about 2/3 done. I'm about 90% sure I can have it done for sunday the last bit is rather lengthy and the sex scene always takes me the longest but I'm hoping I can finish it, so yeah... sunday... be there... read the chapter... enjoy it...

[Worlord321]

Do you always have to finish when I'm out of town for that Sunday? Haha. On a scale of 1 to 10 how good is the chapter?

[loobinator69]

its sunday. no chapter?

[UrbanChaos]

No, the editors computer crashed so it had to be redone, it should take a couple of days I'd say wednesday it'll be up. Maybe earlier

[kosmosX]

just wow

[UrbanChaos]

So where is the next chapter? its wednesday and I dont see it!
Yeah about that... the next chapter isnt up because I'm an idot, when i send the chapter out for editing i split it into sections so the editor gets somewhere between 60-75% of the actually chapter this leaves me with 2 different word doc.'s a complete one and one 75% done, when i went to post chapter 29 I realized I deleted my complete one and kept my unfinished one... so i have to re-write a bunch of it... to be honest I'm not sure how long it will take me if I can work on it enough tonight it could be up by tomorrow but in reality it will probably be released on sunday.
sorry about the wait I'll update this thread again when i have more of a game plan.

[jdawgg]

So where is the next chapter? its wednesday and I dont see it!
Yeah about that... the next chapter isnt up because I'm an idot, when i send the chapter out for editing i split it into sections so the editor gets somewhere between 60-75% of the actually chapter this leaves me with 2 different word doc.'s a complete one and one 75% done, when i went to post chapter 29 I realized I deleted my complete one and kept my unfinished one... so i have to re-write a bunch of it... to be honest I'm not sure how long it will take me if I can work on it enough tonight it could be up by tomorrow but in reality it will probably be released on sunday.
sorry about the wait I'll update this thread again when i have more of a game plan.

partly my computers fault too. it crashed, and im getting it fixed. thats why it wasn't out sunday

[RAT25]

At least there is effort in trying to get it done. Don't rush, the longer we wait, the better it will be to have the next chapter when it comes out.

[jdawgg]

gettin my laptop back tomorrow. cant wait to stop usin my data up on my fone

[UrbanChaos]

So here's the deal, as of right now the chapter is not finished or even close to being fully edited. I'm going to try and push through the rest of the chapter and get it done for either really late tonight or tomorrow night, so the editing isn't going to be top notch and I might be cutting a couple corners because I'm sick of working on this chapter and just want to be done with it... So late tonight or sometime tomorrow

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 29: An Elegant Game


By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.


-So this is the long over due chapter 29, I hope you all enjoy it, this is the longest chapter I have ever written so far, however I was the only person to edit it and I only did 2 quick edits since it was such a nice day I spent most of my time working on my car so sorry in advance for the mistakes but I'm super sick of writting this chapter so its the best I'm going to do at this point, without further adieu I give you chapter 29!-





"Come on this is X-34 landspeeder it's worth more than that." Luke complained to Wioslea the local speeder salesman.
"Luke at the price I've given you I'm probably going to lose money." She argued.
"Fine." he grudgingly accepted tossing her his keys and taking his new credits.


Luke crossed the street and walked down the nearby alley heading for the bar Obi Wan had told him to go to. He walked down a couple blocks until he found the right building. Being still early in the evening when Luke entered there were only six people inside. He looked around not seeing Obi Wan and looked at the barmaid who had her back to him.
"Welcome to 7th Heaven bar and restaurant." The barmaid said hearing the door chime.
"Where's old spiky head?" Luke joked to his good friend.


The barmaid whirled around making her long black hair swirl.
"On a delivery." She said grinning.
"I was hoping to ask him a few questions about his time in the Imperial service before I left." Luke frowned a little disappointed.
"I'd suggest you phone him but he never answers, makes me wonder why he keeps his communicator at all. Besides you know he doesn't remember much anyhow." She replied cleaning a glass.
"True." Luke nodded in agreement.
"So why did you really come here?" She asked flipping her rag over her shoulder and putting away the glass.
"Ben Kenobi told me to meet him here." Luke said leaning on the counter.
"Ah, follow me then." She said waving Luke around the counter.


Luke followed her around where she unlocked a backroom door and waved him in before closing it behind him. Luke found himself in a crowded smoky room with several gambling tables, he saw Obi Wan sitting in a corner booth with a with another man discussing something. He made his way across the room and took a seat next to Obi Wan.
"Luke this is Han Solo he'll be taking us to Alderaan." Obi Wan filled Luke in.
"How's it going kid." Han nodded at Luke.
"When do we leave?" Luke asked.
"Right now." Han said standing up


The group stood up and headed for the door but were cut off by a Rodian with his blaster drawn, he was speaking his native tongue which Luke didn't understand, he was able to pick up a few key words which seemed to point to a conflict between him and someone else and he was here to collect a bounty.
"Yeah I'll get him his money, tell him I'm going to make a quick run and then pay him with it." Han sighed. The Rodian said a few more things which Luke assumed were not good since Han's fingers had unlatched his blaster holster, before the Rodian even finished his sentence Han fired two shots into his chest sending him flailing to the ground, his chest smoking from the two holes.
"Sorry Greedo I have business to attend to." Han joked to the corpse before stepping over it. Obi Wan shrugged at Luke, the two followed Han back out into the main area. Han stopped briefly at the exit and turned to the busty barmaid.
"Sorry about the mess Tifa." Han grinned before leaving. The group left the bar but could still hear Tifa cursing at Han for killing yet another patron in her bar.


They moved through the streets relatively quickly but Luke couldn't help but feel they were attracting some unwanted attention. They entered the hanger were Luke almost took a preemptive sigh of relief, then he saw a group of stormtroopers raid the hanger.
"Onto the ship!" Han barked at the group.


The group scurried onto the ship, Han ran to the cockpit and strapped himself in next to his wookie copilot. The ship lurched as it lifted off and then slammed the crew into their seats as it throttled forward, they left the atmosphere and Han flicked a few switches sending them into hyperspace. Han patted his wookie companion on the shoulder as he stood up and headed back to the ships main area.


Han sat down in a nearby chair beside Luke and Obi Wan.
"We should be at Alderaan in a bit, Chewie will let us know."
"Good, plenty of time for you to get some lightsaber training." Obi Wan said sliding a helmet over to Luke.
"But this has a blast shield on it."
"Precisely. You'll be forced to use the force.
"The force." Han snorted.
"You don't believe in the force?" Luke asked Han.
"I believe in three things kid, a blaster, money and luck." Han retorted.


Luke didn't bother to reply, he was to focused on not getting shot by the small probe droid circling him. He yelped feeling a sharp sting in his thigh, he tried to refocus his mind but to no avail he attempted to open himself to the force and though he could feel it begin to flow through him he couldn't decipher its cryptic language. He swung his lightsaber but it only swooped through the air a second later a second shot hit him in the arm.


"Focus Luke." Obi Wan instructed.
Luke took a deep breath, trying to centre himself again. Something nagged at him deep inside his mind trying to tell him something, for a brief moment he could see past the blast shield that covered his eyes, he could see Han and Obi Wan sitting nearby but more importantly he could see the probe, the sense was over as quickly as it had begun and Luke was once again blind. The probe shot for a third time hitting him in the chest. Luke cursed loudly as he deactivated his lightsaber. Luke heard Obi Wan gasp loudly, he rushed to his said trying to aid his master.
"What's wrong?" Luke asked
"felt a great disturbance in the Force...as if millions of voices suddenly cried out in terror and were suddenly silenced. I fear something terrible has happened." Obi Wan said trying to regain his breath. Chewbacca roared from the cockpit telling them they were about to drop out of hyperspace. The trio rushed the cockpit just as the alarms started to sound. Han sat down in his captains and franticly started to push buttons and flip switches.
"We've entered into an asteroid field!" Han shouted at the crew.
"How's that possible?"
"I don't know it isn't on any of the charts, our position is correct but no Alderaan." Han tried to explain.
"What do you mean? Where is it?" Luke asked.
"That's what I'm trying to tell you, kid. It ain't there, it's been blown away."
"What? How?"
"Its been destroyed, by the Empire." Obi Wan spoke gravely.
"An entire Starfleet couldn't destroy the whole planet. It'd take a thousand ships with more fire power than I've..." Han was cut short by a blinking light indicating that another ship was incoming.
"Maybe they know what happened." Luke offered.
Chewbacca growled informing the group that it was an Imperial Tie fighter.
"It's heading for that moon." Luke pointed out.
"That's no moon. It's a space station." Obi Wan said.
"It's too big to be a space station."


The Millenium Falcon shuttered as an invisible force grabbed hold of the ship and pulled it towards the enormous battle station.
"Chewie put it in full reverse!" Han yelled at his companion who in turn roared back at him.
"It won't do any good, we need another plan." Obi Wan chimed. Han rubbed his chin thoughtfully.
"I've got it! Chewie lift up the floor panels and stow yourselves in there, I'll make a fake captain's log then join you." Chewbacca gave an affirmative growl and rushed to the back of the ship. Luke and Obi Wan followed closely behind, the wookie stopped in the middle of the hallway and lifted a panel of the floor up his large muscles bulged under the weight, the group entered the container and were soon joined by Han.


The ship was set down in what Luke assumed to be a hanger, each passing second felt like a year as he heard people walk on the paneling above his head, they were obviously looking for the crew and had begun to tear the ship apart. Luke could hear murmurs but couldn't make out what they were saying, he focused intently on the footsteps tracking them throughout the ship, he followed them from the cockpit back to the crew quarters then finally off of the ship. The Chewbacca wasted no time lifting the floor panel up and off of the hidden container, the group scrambled out quickly and headed for the exit ramp.
"I'll handle the tractor beams, you go get ready to open the hanger door." Obi Wan instructed. The group split apart to accomplish their separate tasks, Obi Wan snuck down a nearby hall while the other entered the nearby control room.


"R2 go plug into their mainframe and find the hanger door switch." Luke told R2-D2. The droid whistled and did as instructed while Han and Chewie locked down the room. R2 whistled something to Luke notifying him of an important new detail.
"What? Where?" Luke asked the droid in a panic.
"What's the tin can saying?" Han asked not very fluent in the beeps and whistles of astro droids.
"Princess Leia, she's on this station."
"Sucks to be her then." Han said taking a nearby seat and putting his feet up.
"You don't get it, these droids belong to her! we need to rescue her!"
"We don't have o do anything, the old man said be ready to open those hanger doors." Han snorted. Luke paused for a moment, he wanted to save the princess but couldn't do it alone, he would just have to try a new tactic to convince Han.
"They're going to kill her!"
"Better her then me." Han laughed crossing his arms.
"She's rich." This time Chewie growled something to Han after hearing Luke's comment.
"Rich?"
"Yeah she's a princess from Alderaan. Power, money she's got it all."
"And I get a reward?"
"More then you can imagine" Luke emphasised.
"I don't know, I can imagine an awful lot." Han said with Chewie adding a short grunt.
"You'll get it." Luke persuaded.
"I better."


Chewie growled something and opened the nearby closet revealing a few stormtrooper suits.
"That might just work." Han approved.
"Put one on kid." He continued.


The pair slipped on the armour deciding the best way to save the princess was to do it as quietly as possible, Han put a pair of electro cuffs on Chewie with him growling in disapproval.
"Now let's escort Chewie to the detention center and grab the princess." Han said opening the door.
"Master Luke sir, pardon me for asking but... ah... what should Artoo and I do if we are discovered?" Chimed in.
"Lock the doors." Luke shrugged
"And hope they don't have blasters." Han added.


The trio moved through the battle station as inconspicuous as possible, though that wasn't easy with a towering wookie. But to Luke's surprise nobody stopped to question them and they finally made it to the elevator with only a handful of glances.


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Leia shivered again in her ice cold cell, she had been used as "entertainment" a handful of times now but it was now just private shows. Sazh and taken care of her to the best of his ability, but her cell was always freezing. She tried to wrap her white gown around her tighter but it didn't help. Her hand slid down to her cunt while she tried to decide if she should warm herself up or not. She was still wearing the imperial under garments she had been given though Sazh was either washing them or giving her new ones, she wasn't quite sure.
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The elevator door opened and the trio emerged to meet a grim looking officer.
"What's this... thing?"
"Prisoner transfer from block one-one-three-eight." Luke answered.
"I wasn't notified. I'll have to clear it." The officer said turning towards a console and punching in information. Han and Luke looked at each other silently trying to communicate a plan.
"Look out he's loose!" Han screamed pushing Chewie forward towards the guards. Han and Luke shot out the cameras with their blasters then eliminated the dumbfounded guards.


Han rushed to the nearby console and checked a few read outs.
"That princess of yours is in cell twenty-one-eight-seven, go get her while I hold them here." Han told Luke.


A buzzing communicator caught Han's attention on the console, he took a deep breath the turned it on.
"Everything is under control situation normal."Han said as calmly as possible.
"What happened?" A sharp voice returned.
"Uh...had a slight weapons malfunction. But, uh, everything's perfectly all right now. We're fine. We're all fine here, now, thank you. How are you" Han answered nervously.
"We're sending a squad up."
"Uh, uh, negative. We had a reactor leak here now. Give us a few minutes to lock it down. Large leak...very dangerous." Han said trying to come up with some kind of lie.
"Who is this? What's your operating number?"


Han took as few steps back and blasted the com link.
"Boring conversation anyways." Han murmured.
"Luke we're going to have company!" He shouted down the hallway.
Chewie growled to Han telling him they were setting charges on the lift door. Han and Chewie retreated down the hall just as the doors exploded into shrapnel. They took cover behind a wall beside Luke and who could only be the princess they had come to rescue.
"Can't get out that way." Han remarked.
"Looks like you managed to cut off our only escape." Leia jabbed at Han.
"Maybe you'd like it back in your cell, your highness." Han barked sarcastically.
"Both of you shut it! Threepio isn't answering." Luke cut in.
"Do I have to do everything?" Leia huffed then grabbed Luke's blaster and shot a nearby grate, then leaped down it. Chewie gave a displeasured growl to the remaining group.
"Get in there you big furry oaf! I don't care what you smell! Get in there and don't worry about it." Han kicked his partner down who was closely followed by Luke, then Han took a deep breath and went down after them.


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Obi Wan turned off the final tractor beam generator, he could feel the dark side nagging him as if this whole battle station was consumed in raw dark side energy. But he could feel someone calling to him, it was proposing a duel to him. Obi Wan pondered the idea, if he fought this dark side user he would certainly buy time for the others, but he was almost positive he would lose the fight. This force user was well trained and felt stronger then himself. Obi Wan careful made his way down the hallway, carefully prodding at the individual through the force trying to get a better feel for what he might be up against. The presence felt familiar, he had felt it a long time ago, it was the unmistakable feel of a Sith, however this one felt much stronger than it used to be. He came to a fork in the hallway one lead to the Millennium Falcon the other lead to his challenger, Obi Wan stroked his beard in thought he knew the choice he made now would ultimately shape the galaxies fate. Obi Wan Kenobi made his decision then headed down the hallway.
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Han, Luke, Leia and Chewbacca all peeled around the corner running at full tilt from a group of stormtroopers hot on their heels, the Falcon was now in sight, their getaway was nearly complete.
"Where's the old man?" Han shouted over the blaster fire.
"Hopefully on the ship!" Luke yelled back.


The group entered the ship rapidly, Leia being the first to enter and Han being the last, Han leaped into his captain's chair and brought the Falcon to hovering status, R2 had already opened the doors for the freighter and the ship blasted from the hanger! Chewie wasted no time plotting an escape into hyperspace and soon the ship entered hyperspace leaving the death star behind.


The crew took a sigh of relief happy to finally be safe. Luke headed back to the crew quarters while Han read the ships read outs trying to figure out what was damaged.


Luke walked into the quarters and saw Obi Wan mediating in a chair, his old eyes opened slowly feeling Luke's presence enter the room.
"Sit down with me Luke, we have much to discuss."
"What about?"
"Your Jedi training." Obi Wan answered mysteriously.


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Leia slipped out of the cockpit quietly growing tired of Han's and Chewie's technical jabber. She found her way to the refresher and started to clean herself up, it had been a long time since she had had the privilege to wash up. She spent what must have been an hour fixing her hair, washing her face scrubbing her gown and she eventually got to taking off her imperial underwear. She looked it over and decided she didn't actually want to get rid of it, while it didn't hold a lot of pleasant memories it was somewhat of a souvenir, it was kind of like a scar while at the time it hurts now, later on when you look at it reminds you of who you are and where you've been, the underwear would be like a prize to her.


She left the refresher what must have been an hour or two later and figured it was a good time to catch up on some sleep. She walked down the hall but stopped at the cargo hold when she heard a distinct whine, she poked her head in and saw Chewie near the back behind a few crates moaning sadly.
"What's wrong?" Leia asked softly.
She startled the wookie slightly but he soon spilled his guts to the only one that would listen, Leia wasn't fluent in shyriiwook but managed to get the gist of what he was saying. Apparently the wookie was in some sort of heat for the past couple weeks, even though he had no mate he was able to keep it under control fairly well. Until Leia had arrived, the fresh smell of cum and sex had sent Chewie into a frenzy. The biggest problem being he couldn't alleviate his pent up needs on his own he specifically needed the scent of a women.
"That's quite a problem." Leia agreed not sure of how she could help.


It wasn't until this moment that the wookie moved from behind the crates showing his huge dangling cock, Leia gasped just seeing the size of it, it wasn't even hard yet and it was monstrous already. She felt a twinge of guilt, she knew Chewie must be in a lot of pain because of her, and there was nothing he could do about it, in fact it was more probable it would get worse. Chewie pawed at his limp dick growling softly in pain. It was clear that Leia had to help him, and to be honest she was looking forward to it.
"Since this is mostly my fault, I guess I should... give you a hand." Leia said shyly. Chewie growled that it wasn't necessary but Leia insisted that it was her fault.


Leia got on her knees before Chewie's rising member and waited for it to come to full erection, she was amazed by its size it was at least twice as big as any cock she had ever had, both in width and length. Leia felt like a virgin all over, not really sure what to do with it, part of her royal training had been in how to please a man or other suitors but it had never covered how to please a wookie.


Leia wrapped her hand around the large shaft of the cock, her hand couldn't even wrap all the way around it. She slowly started to jack the giant cock in her hand trying to be as gentle as possible, Chewie let out a low satisfied growl as Leia's hand traveled from the tip of the head down to the bottom of the shaft. She put her second hand on the dick with the first and started to stroke it faster and harder. Leia was still stunned by the size of Chewie's rod, she could remember when she was a young teenager, she and her friends would giggle about cocks and which species would have the largest and who would be the best lover but they had never imagined them this big.


She tightened her grip up trying to focus herself and convince herself it was just any other cock, she made her thrusts harder and put more emphasise into each pull. Chewie moaned softly encouraging Leia, she let one hand continue working the shaft while the other moved to his dangling balls. She rolled them around in her palm carefully massaging each one independently making sure they got the attention they deserved, Leia licked her lips watching Chewbacca's meats sway back and forth right in front of her eyes. She felt a twinge of pleasure shoot through her pussy, she felt an uncontrollable urge tell her to stuff the massive meat down her throat until she choked. She managed to push the notion aside but she still wanted to taste it, Leia let her tongue lap against the head of the cock tasting the sweet saltiness of pre-cum.


Her hands never stopped working but the focus had shifted to her mouth, her lips closed around the tip and her tongue danced around the fat head. She made the pumps with her hands stay near the bottom of the shaft and started to suck a small portion past the cocks crown. She was trying to psych herself up for deep throating the massive meat but she already knew she would never be able to take the whole cock into her throat.


Leia let the cock slip from her mouth with a loud wet pop, Chewie grumbled as Leia stopped completely.
"Don't worry, I'm just taking my dress off I don't want it to get dirty." Leia comforted him.


Leia stood up and elegantly let her gown slip from her shoulders letting it pool around her feet leaving her in all her naked glory. She picked up her dress and set it on a nearby crate then turned to face Chewie who in turned scooped her up so her feet wrapped around his waist and her ass sitting on his rock hard cock. He rubbed his nose against hers growling softly.
"No, if you put it in my pussy you'll rip me apart!" Leia replied denying his request to fuck her snatch. Chewie moaned sadly back but set her back on her knees to continue her task.


Leia let her hands resume their work while her head found its old spot and began to suck. She started to gain a little more moment with her head and let a little more of the cock slide down her throat. The cock moved down her throat slowly inching its way farther down until it had reached the farthest point it could go, to Leia's amazement she had managed to take in about two thirds of the dick. but there was still plenty of room for her hands to work. Her hands picked up speed while her mouth slopped over the dick greedily licking up every dry inch she could fit her mouth around. She let her hands continue their work stroking the large dick but let the cock slide out of her mouth so she could gulp down much needed deep breaths. Leia's only thought by this point was trying to make the wookie cum and be done with this task, she was beginning to regret this decision yet she knew given the chance to go back in time and repeat the events that had brought her here she wouldn't change anything, but she had to admit her arms were growing more tired by the second to the point where her biceps felt like they were on fire.


Leia's gaze caught sight of Chewie's dangling balls, she leaned forward and began to suck on the large stones she lusted after while her hands kept stroking above her head, Chewie growled satisfied with Leia's new position, she let one hand continue working on the shaft while the second palmed the tip of the head. Leia's mouth wandered of course now giving attention to both the balls and the very base of the shaft, she made her stroking hand pump faster trying to draw most of Chewbacca's focus on that while in the background she gently tickled his balls teasing him ever so slightly. The two of them were now caught in an elegant game of dejarik each player trying to pull the other into their trap, in this case Leia was attempting to bait and tease Chewie into ejaculation while she was sure that Chewie was trying to keep from blowing his load in hopes Leia would get frustrated and offer up her cunt in order to make him cum, unbenounced to Leia Chewbacca's primal nose was capable of picking up even the slightest of sexual aroma and he had been forced to smell Leia's sweet smelling wet snatch but hadn't been able to do anything about it. Chewie was nearing two hundred which in wookie years meant he was still a young adult but in that time he had had more sexual experience then this young nineteen year old girl could possible imagine, plus he had his hunter instincts which would only work in his favour, he was trained to find his prey's weakness then exploit it, in this case it was her physical limitations and her hot head she had already displayed a multitude of times in their escape from the death star. He would tire the girl out and in her frustration she would see that her only choice would be to give him what he so desperately desired.


Leia couldn't believe the wookie's resilience she thought with all his pent up cum he would blow like a poorly installed gasket. Yet her arms were aching from the constant back and forth. She once again put the cock in her mouth and began to deep throat it as best as she could, Leia knew she had to make her next move count, it had to be the one that would finish Chewie off or else she would be in serious trouble. Leia let her hands drop and let her head do all the work, she then relocated her hand to her luscious tits gently squeezing and playing with them. Chewie's attention grew more attached to her incredible breasts. Leia already knew what Chewie wanted, he wanted the same thing all men wanted and she was going to use it against him.


Leia laid on her back and pulled Chewie on top of her so his cock was hovering over her pink pussy, Leia's hands got a firm grasp on his member making sure she was still in control of the situation. She slow rubbed the cock against her pussy gently teasing him by keeping his prize mere centimetres away from him.


In that moment Chewie broke his number one hunters rule, growling in frustration, by doing so he had let Leia know she had gained the upper hand. Leia instantly attacked his moment of weakness and toyed with him by pushing his fat shaft against her tiny hole, Chewie felt his cum quickly bubbling up and he knew he had to regain composure quickly or his dream would be shattered.


Leia knew this would be her only opportunity to win against the wookie, she held the dicks shaft tight against her pussy and quickly began to grind against it allowing her juices to seep onto the cock, her rapid movement made Chewie gulp hard.


Chewie knew it was over, he had lost this match to Leia, a reminder to never underestimate ones opponent his only hope now was a rematch in the future. Chewie reared up letting out a low howl he peered down at the sweet innocent looking body of Leia, his hand worked furiously jacking of his on cock until it finally brought him to orgasm, his hot thick seed sprayed across Leia in large white gobs. The hot cum washed over Leia in buckets, it was more cum then Leia had even seen in a gangbang let alone coming from one individual. Leia waited for the spurts to die down before moving, she rubbed the thick gobs off her face trying to clear up her vision a little.


Chewbacca gave Leia an appreciative growl before taking a seat on a nearby crate.
"I'd better go clean up again." Leia laughed carefully gathering up her clothes, trying not to get any cum on them. She carefully made her way to the refresher trying to avoid making any noise.




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Darth Maul strode up the stairs of the newly reconstructed Sith temple Darth Sidious had built for his order. His hatred boiled inside of him, it had been his responsibility to keep the princess imprisoned and he had failed, something his master would not take lightly. He passed through the large dark halls swiftly trying to avoid contact with any of his Sith equals. He had put his cowl up so hit hide the majority of his face in hopes it would make him more discrete. He rounded the final corner where the huge throne room doors stood, two honour guards stood on either side but to his dismay another man leaned against the nearby wall obviously waiting for him. Maul cursed under his breath, this was Maul's only equal rival, the only man capable of threatening his position on the dark council, he flipped his long white hair as he slowly made his way towards Maul. His long katana like vibrosword glinted as he moved.


"I hear you failed once again." The man said mockingly strolling by.
"You've heard wrong then." Maul hissed back.
"Not only did you lose the plans you let a mere girl best you, that sounds like failure to me." The man replied in a cool demeanour.
"My business is my own." He spat back.
"Your business effects all of us, you had better not fail us again." The man said firmly before casually strolling on.


Maul's rage burned deeply as he stood motionless, his finger nails dug into his palms resisting the urge to draw his lightsaber and lunge at the man, a choice that would have nothing but negative consequences he told himself. He took a deep breath before turning his attention to the honour guards kneeling before him.


"Open the doors!" Maul commanded the duo.
"Yes milord." The pair said in unison. They both pushed their assigned door letting the doors slowly swing open, Maul moved passed them quickly moving past the huge grey pillars that lead him to the single throne chair in the room. Maul stopped a few feet away and bowed down on one knee, his face looking down at the blood red carpet.
"What is thy bidding my master." Maul said in a low voice, the chair swivelled around so Darth Sidious could look upon his minion.
"You have failed me again." The Emperors voice boomed.
"I beg for your forgiveness, there was unforeseen complications." Maul answered.
"I do not want your excuses, an army is gathering against us to strike." Sidious explained.
"What would you have me do?"
"Go to the death star, the Rebellion will come to you." Sidious answered,
"How do you know?"


"I have foreseen it."



-Hope you enjoyed the latest chapter, love to hear feedback so feel free to give a suggestion, tell me what you liked, what you didnt like, what you want to see, you could even give a suggestion or ask a question!-

[RAT25]

At first, it seemed that there was more story than sex mainly because the chapter was so long, which is needed every once in a while. Just there has been a big gap since the last chapter, I was expecting something different, but this was something that it seems could not be avoided. All in all a good chapter. Can't wait until next one.

[loobinator69]

i liked it, got much of the long boring part of the plot out of the way, but still had a hot sex scene.

[UrbanChaos]

@Rat25 yeah I knew putting it out it would be a disapointment to most people since I took such a long time I really tried to beef up the sex scene but didnt want CHewie/Leia to go all the way yet so I tried something new in that area, and even cut out large parts like the garbage disposal scene. that can be the proble with trying staying close with an already made script, their are somethings I can change but overall I have to stay rather close to it. but i got rid of a lot of the plot in that chapter.

the next chapter is going to be really short, plot will play a small roll in it but things will be added... I'm hoping to have it done for THIS SUNDAY!!!!! Thats right from waiting a whole month to waiting four days! at least i hope to have it done by then...

[RAT25]

@UrbanChaos, don't beat yourself up over this, like loobinator69 said, you got a lot of the plot stuff out of the way. There needed to be a long one like this eventually so now is good a time as any. Also, don't try to put completion dates, they only makes it hard on you because you will end up stressing over getting them out on time, and if you don't, then someone here will ask questions about it and that doesn't help either. Take your time and try to put due dates only if all there is left to do is revise and edit. Hope this helps some what.

[Catccp]

Good update!

[Worlord321]

I guess I am the one to ask this time, sooooo when's the next chapter out?

[gofer]

Great addition

[RAT25]

So, UrbanChaos, will you make your Sunday deadline?

[UrbanChaos]

^ No for several reasons,
1) I keep getting 404 errors and can only access this page every couple of days
2) I've been out of town for the last couple days
3) I've hit a bit of a wall in the story
4) I still don't have the first draft edit of what i have finished of the story
5) real life stuff has been demanding most of my time lately
so what it really comes down to is if I can get past the wall I've hit I'm about a 2/3 done but the next part I dont want to be a generic crappy scene, I could just slap on a some what believable scenerio but I'd rather it be better than that. I'm going to try and figure out what to do with it, I've let it simmer for a couple days and have yet to come up with a sollution so I'm hoping to have it out for some time this coming week if everything goes as planned.

sorry that havent been able to update in a while, just been busy

[jdawgg]

i hear ya on being busy. they got me workin overtime at work. i've lost 7 security guards in the past 4 days at work, leaving me with only 3 other trained guards, besides myself.

[RAT25]

Then dont rush yourself, it's your story, don't stop until you are satisfied with it. Don't worry about time, it seems to be having that affect on everyone...

[Marlene38EE]

Ditto above--don't stress and don't try to 'force' yourself. Write as and when your Muse stirs you--only way it really works, right?? :-)

[Lazerous]

Urbanchaos, just post it when it's done! Don't stress...

[Malcho1234]

Great story.

[UrbanChaos]

I know it's a liitle late for an update but the next chapter is going to be out tomorrow night (sunday June 3) while its not finished yet I'm confident i can have it done/edited in time, so see you all tomorrow

[starwarsfan1001]

Can't Wait! this is a great story, it is sexy but at the same time, full of laughs!
:thumb:

[UrbanChaos]

K, so when I said I would release it today I forgot it was my buddy's birthday, so I didnt have time to finish it and I'm just way to tired to work on it right now. I'm not sure when I'll put out the next chapter but it'll probably be sometime this coming week, I'll update a day or two before.

[Worlord321]

We getting the next chapter soon? I see you are online(at time of posting)

[UrbanChaos]

yes it will be out soon, i had planned to put it out tonight and it is finished but i decided it needed another edit so i'm holding it back, it should be out tomorrow

[UrbanChaos]

didnt have time to edit today been super busy maybe hopefully tuesday sorry guys

[UrbanChaos]

Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 30: Typical Hero Stuff


By UrbanChaos

•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if."


So I finaaly found time to finish this chapter sorry about the wait but I've been having trouble finding time, I finally got time to edit so here it is enjoy!



The smell of smoking durasteel seeped into Han's nostrils as his plasma torch welded a new durasteel sheet into the Millenium Falcons engine room, in their rush to escape the death star Han had throttled the accelerator a little too hard causing a fire to break out burning through the durasteel plates and frying several layers of wiring. He had already replaced the fire damaged cables and was just finishing up changing out the plating. Chewie had been running a full diagnostic of the ship and since been fixing the hyperdrive.


Han took off his welding goggles and inspected his work, not too shabby, Han thought impressed with his handiwork. He moved down the corridor of the ship passing by several panels they had removed to get at the ships wiring. He could hear Chewie banging around on top of the ship and quickly rushed out to see what the big lug was doing.



"Hey fuzz ball! What are you doing!" Han screamed at the wookie, Chewie roared back at Han bitterly.
"Rerouting? What the hell are your rerouting for?" He yelled back, Chewie growled at Han not to worry about it.


Han ran his hand through his thick brown hair looking around him at the Massassi temple hanger, the Rebels had transformed the old temple into their base of operations, Han had decided to stick around for a couple of days to fix up his ship and see what crazy plan they would come up with to fight the Empire. Apparently their plan was to do a full assault on the battle station with the small gorilla force they had put together, a plan Han did not intend to stick around for. He watched as several mechanics scrambled about preparing for the attack on the super battle station.
"I'm going to find some food, I'll be right back." He shouted up at Chewie, who in turn growled back a confirmation.


Han turned around and left the hanger passing by several busy looking people, in truth Han wasn't going to get food he was more interested in finding that princess. As infuriating as she had been he had the undeniable desire to get to know her better, if Han didn't know any better he would've sworn he was in love. Han wandered down the temples hallway mulling over the thought of love, he had been a scoundrel for most of his life leaving very little time for a relationship. Though there had been one girl a long time ago, Bria Tharen, the only female to ever break his heart.


Han peered into the control centre where several men were staring at a screen discussing something, he looked around the room trying to find Leia but only saw people hunched over control panels informing the group of men of updates. He continued down the hall a little ways until he reached the princesses room, he was actually kind of nervous he admitted, he lifted his hand to knock but stopped himself trying to figure out what he was even going to say to her. What was his excuse for coming to talk to her, he needed a reason for being here didn't he? He took a deep breath and was about to knock when he heard a moan from the other side of the makeshift door. He looked around to make sure the hallway was clear then pressed an ear against the door. He heard yet another moan, a moan he was more than familiar with, he had heard moans like this countless amount of times. It was the unmistakable sound of sexual pleasure, and it sure sounded like Leia was enjoying it. Han snickered slightly, he hadn't expected someone as refined as her to indulge in something like that. He wondered if he should help the princess out, his question was answered soon when he heard her moan Oh Luke. Han snapped back from the door in shock, he knew Luke wasn't in there he would have been able to hear him but she was still fantasizing about him! Han stomped down the hall feeling hurt and betrayed, though he wasn't sure why, if she didn't want him it wasn't his problem, but still his rage burned. He wasn't even in love with the skank why was it bugging him so bad he wondered.


In his anger Han rounded the corner a little too fast and ran straight into someone carrying several boxes, they both tumbled to the floor sending the boxes scattering everywhere.
"Watch where you're going!"
"I'm sorry, alright!" Han snapped back.


Han looked at the young female Chiss he had knocked over, who was franticly trying to pick up the spilled boxes, Han could certainly understand why Chiss had quickly become the desire of most humans, their physical shape mirrored a humans minus the blue skin and the red eyes, but their bodies where always much more well defined and sculpted. He had never seen an out of shape Chiss, he watched her as she bent over attempting to re-pick up her boxes, her ass was a nice firm heart shape and perfectly accentuated in her tight black pants, her matching black leather jacket didn't show much in the way of tits but Han was positive they had to be a decent size, she had done her jet black hair up into a ponytail.


"Let me help you with those." Han insisted heaving up the boxes she had been struggling with.
"Oh, thank you. Just follow me." The Chiss blushed slightly.
"Lead on." Han grunted.


They young Chiss lead him down the corridor, though Han's eyes were more focused on her ass then on where they were going. She stopped briefly at a durasteel door to type in a code, the door slid open with a whoosh and the Chiss stepped into the dimly lit room with Han a few steps behind. She quickly cleared a space for the boxes among the other crates then stepped aside so Han could set them down. Han lowered them semi-gently letting them drop with a thud.
"Thanks. uh..."
"Han." He introduced himself extending his hand.
"Thanks Han, I'm Taylyn." She said shaking Han's hand.
"Wait, are you the Han that saved the princess?" She asked slightly impressed.
"Yeah, that's me." Han said with a lopsided grin.
"Then that stuff is yours, as your reward Mr. big shot hero." She said looking at a clipboard and pointing at some boxes.
"Do you come with it?" Han winked.
"No I don't! From what I hear your not going to be around long enough to satisfy me anyways." She teased back.
"I dunno I'm pretty good. Who knows maybe with the right incentive I might stick around for a while."
"You do know they're already scrambling the fleet."
"So I show up fashionably late and save the day, typical hero stuff. " Han winked starting to dig through his reward.


Taylyn stared at Han for a moment watching him rummage through his crates.
"Honestly I'm a little surprised the princess didn't call dibs on a handsome hero such as yourself." Taylyn finally said breaking the silence.
"Yeah, well she's a little stuck up." He shrugged.
"Funny that's what she said about you."


Han looked over to joke back but stopped when he saw she had removed her black leather jacket and hung it on a crate, she stood there in a rather small grey pushup bra carefully going over her clipboard doing inventory. Han rolled up his sleeves and silently made his way over to her, he slowly began to slide his arm around her waist but was abruptly stopped, Taylyn grabbed his forearm twisting around she pulled Han's arm behind his back and applied pressure forcing him to the ground.
"Were you trying to make a move on me?!?" Taylyn exclaimed.
"I've been making moves on you since you dropped the boxes." Han grunted.
"Why?" she narrowed her eyes and applied a bit more pressure.
"Because..." Han started, then pushed back as hard as he could sending the pair toppling backwards, they grappled momentarily rolling over top of each other.


Taylyn finally managed to get the upper hand, stopping the roll and climbing into a full mount.
"I used to be an imperial agent, you're going to have to do better than that." She teased breathing heavily.
"You forget I'm still a smuggler." Han smiled pressing the barrel of a hold out blaster into her side.
"Well played." She grinned putting her hands up.
"Now be a good girl and get off, you're crushing my spleen." Han huffed.


She did as she was told and carefully got up and moved to the side while Han got up keeping his blaster trained on her.
"Now that you've got me, what're you going to do to me?" Taylyn smiled seductively.
"Oh I think you know." Han said catching onto her game.


Taylyn stepped towards Han, her hips swaying like a goddess. She bent down and slowly pulled Han's pants down freeing his hard cock, she began to jack the cock with one of her hands slowly twisting her hand around the shaft. She licked her lips, her mouth was already watering thinking about the taste of Han's meat.


Taylyn stuck the tip into her mouth and let her tongue play on it. She always enjoyed teasing men anyway she could, whether it be the way she dressed or when she was giving a blowjob, and by the sounds Han was making she was doing a great job at it. However she had overestimated Han's patience and soon Han was thrusting his hips forward forcing down as much of his dick that he possibly could. Taylyn tried to pull back but Han's hand was faster grabbing onto the back of her head and forcing her to sit steady. Han's thrust became harder and faster, his balls smacked against her chin loudly. She was running out of breath fast, she hadn't been able to take a breath since Han had started his savage assault. She focused on keeping calm but she couldn't deny that her vision was getting darker and beginning to blur.


But before it got any worse Han pulled out letting her fall backwards gasping for air. She had hardly caught her breath when she felt Han spread her legs, she looked down to see Han's head buried in her crotch enthusiastically licking her pussy. Taylyn cried out in pleasure, she hadn't expected Han to be so skilled, and what was more amazing was how fast he was bringing her to orgasm. She tried to maintain her composure but she was losing it quickly, Han inserted to fingers into her snatch and began to pump them quickly hitting all the right spots. Taylyn's moans grew louder as Han worked his tongue twice as hard, his fingers ravaged her quivering pussy, her hips had begun to roll on their own trying to grab hold of any extra pleasure that they possible could. Taylyn felt her body shake as the tingles of pleasure radiating from her pussy exploded sending her into orgasm.


Han leaned forward and kissed her on the lips passionately, his hands fondled her breasts trying to blindly pull her bra up, she finally lent a hand to Han's cause breaking their kiss for a mere moment to get her pushup bra off. His hands squeezed her tits tightly, she could feel his rock hard cock rubbing against her thigh trying to find her sweet pussy.


She felt the prick find her pussy just barely grazing the outside skin. Then without warning Han slammed into her tight pussy leaving Taylyn gasping for air, his hips moved swiftly pound her snatch with all his might. Taylyn wrapped her arms around Han hugging him tightly, she pushed her face in his thick brown hair gasping deeply. His hands were still crawling all over her tits carefully exploring each part of them. Her pussy was aching with the raw pleasure she was receiving she was still super sensitive from cumming so recently, Han's hard pumps were driving her crazy. Taylyn used her position to roll over to get on top of Han taking control of the situation. She arched her back enjoying the feeling of her smashing her pussy down onto Han's thick rod, her body jiggled with each slam. Han's hands squeezed her sexy ass tightly loving the feel of her well toned butt.


They were briefly interrupted by the sound of an alarm blaring.
"What's that?"
"The fighters are launching for an attack." She answered wheezing slightly.
"Well I don't want to be too late." Han smirked.


Han pushed Taylyn off ignoring her whimpers. He pulled her towards a few crates that were stacked up to their hips then bent her over forwards. Han reinserted his dick into her pussy taking quick meaningful thrust. Taylyn griped the crate tightly for support as her body rocked back and forth. She felt Han's hands massage her hips, she closed her eyes reveling in the feel of Han's touch and thrusts. Han reached out with one hand grabbing her pony tail and using it to his advantage. Taylyn yelped half in pain and half in surprise though she couldn't deny she liked the way it felt.


The feeling was cut short when Han pulled out suddenly, then the feeling of hot cum sprayed across her back. Taylyn was breathing heavily trying to catch her breath from the ordeal, she heard the zip of Han's pants and looked over still bent over the crates.
"Aren't you a quick dresser." She smirked seeing Han already fully dressed.
"Well I do have a day to save." Han joked putting on his vest.


"Catch you later kid." Han said casually giving her ass a hard smack on the way out making her giggle.


Han walked briskly down the hall towards his ship, it was time he swooped in and joined the fight.



Hope you enjoyed this chapter, go ahead and leave a comment, let me know what you think and what you'd like to see in the future!

[RAT25]

Good chapter. Because you are changing some aspects of the story, what are you thinking of putting in the next chapter? If you try to explain, it could help you to write to.

[loobinator69]

great chapter, you're getting really good at writing these. some of your dialogue just seems absolutely perfect for the characters.

[RAT25]

Adding on to what loobinator69 said, you're really good at writing these. It's one of the reasons we wait so patiently for the next chapter, because as a reader we don't have to have a double take on a sentence because it doesn't sound right or what ever reason. These chapters have been worth the wait so keep up the good work.

[dexterjester0]

Great job! I hope you're gonna do stuff with Leia.

[UrbanChaos]

^The next chapter will be from Leia's point of view
For Rat, the next chapter will involve the attack on the deathstar, the end of chapter 29 will play a roll the rebels are going to get more then they bargined for.

[irishcdn]

great addition urban.they are great as always

[UrbanChaos]

So yesterday was the legend of korra season 1 finale after watching it I somehow managed to write a short story for it (that night in three hours) directly after the episode Endgame, it's written and edited but my problem is I'm not sure their is enough intrest for it, if I get enough support for it here I will release it otherwise I'm just going to either set it aside for a while until the demand increases or junk it. So if you want to read it either "thanks" this post a message for it.

[jdawgg]

email it to me if u want to. i'd love to read it. dont got much spare time anymore, but i should be able to read it sometime this week

[UrbanJungle]

Yes! Yes! Yes! Do it! I want to read it so bad!

[RAT25]

You might as well, in case anyone else is going to write about it here, people will at least know somewhat what it's about.

[RhysMagi]

Yes please do post the new story. Also this is a great story thanks for posting your work here.