Baby Blue
02-02-2010, 05:57 PM
Turmoil presents me with it's finest hand.
Heavy blow to this one articulate mind.
Leaving no empathy for this dealer.
Shuffling the last cards of my sanity.
Forgive me not, for i haven't sinned.
Or is one's burning crush, to much?
Left to die, for sorrow does not show his head.
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Not quite finished, but I'm thinking i could go somewhere with this. I still think I'm missing the middle . I'm not quite sure about that end line, i think it could be romeo and juliet.
Heavy blow to this one articulate mind.
Leaving no empathy for this dealer.
Shuffling the last cards of my sanity.
Forgive me not, for i haven't sinned.
Or is one's burning crush, to much?
Left to die, for sorrow does not show his head.
----
Not quite finished, but I'm thinking i could go somewhere with this. I still think I'm missing the middle . I'm not quite sure about that end line, i think it could be romeo and juliet.