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Baby Blue
02-02-2010, 05:56 PM
The celestial midnight surrounded us.
This was our first embrace.

That weightless dove, had soared high.
Into blue waiting for her loves return.

Our passion tangoed through the night.
Leaving no taste for the aurora.

Reflections of the crescent spilled off the water
Nothing more whole than her reflection.

Embers burning behind the green cities.
And to the celestial midnight, goodnight.

OldHorny
02-03-2010, 05:43 PM
Really loved this one thanx for the excellent post

Baby Blue
02-03-2010, 05:49 PM
Really loved this one thanx for the excellent postThanks very much. This is one the first bits of freeverse poetry I created. I wanted to experiment with words and I used to consider myself a heavy romantic. Poetry was something I used to show the ladies I was more than just a big man with big muscles.

I love poetry though, especially when there are no rhymes. Everything is just free flow.