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06-19-2009, 01:48 AM
Here I go, I am posting my first story. It's also the first one I've fully written out. Let me know what you think.
Nicole’s Experience
As Nicole was standing there, contemplating leaving, and having only been at the party for a meager forty minuets, she couldn’t recall why she had agreed to come to the party to begin with. Her friends had convinced her she had needed a night out, since it had been quite a while.
Although Nicole had never been much of an outgoing person, something deep inside told her tonight she should make an exception. Now, she was wondering why she had listened to that little voice in her head earlier.
That’s when she saw him. A strange figure, dressed in all black. She had never seen him around town, and in the small community that Nicole lived in, pretty much ever one knew every one else, and she didn’t know him, and definitely would not have forgotten him either.
There was something enigmatic about him, that Nicole could take her eyes off of him, yet she was paralyzed to move closer. Stuck in a state of utter turmoil, Nicole remained still. She felt her cheeks start to flush with heat due to an influx of blood running through them, the tell tale sign that she knew that she was blushing.
Why was this stranger affecting her so? Never had a man had such power and influence over her that she remembered as she searched frantically, quickly scanning back over her memories of the past twelve years of experience she has had with the opposite sex. Not a single one even coming close to what was currently taking place, not even her first crush on her older neighbor, Shane Barry, back when she first moved to this town.
As she continued to be assaulted by the unflinching, unavoidable stare of the stranger, Nicole started to recognize a very familiar feeling starting to creep up from her nether regions. She realized she was going to have an orgasim, and very soon.
She knew she needed to leave the party now. She knew once the tidal wave of overwhelming sensations hit, that she wouldn’t be able to control her body. Her mind would cease to function and all primal animal instincts would kick in. She had to escape now!
Nicole quickly gathered her things, found her friends who had invited her to the party, and let them know that she was leaving. On the fly, she made up some excuse of starting to not feel to well and deciding to go home and get some rest. Even she knew it sounded like a crock of shit, but in the state she was currently in, it was the best she could come up.
As she made her way to door she noticed a shadow along the far wall making its way to the same exit. She realized that it was the stranger that had held her captive earlier, and thus she quickened her pace to beat him to the exit. It seemed no matter how fast she was able to move, the stranger moved a little faster.
Nicole lost sight of him for a moment, and thought that he had turned back into the party, but upon reaching the door, there he was. Now Nicole stood face to face with stranger. Now able to see him more clearly, and clearly noticing all his features. The man’s dark, tanned complexion. He had dark hair that was short, wavy, and hung messily atop his perfectly shaped head. Lastly, she looked into his eyes, and seemed to lose herself completely, a dark ice blue in color that seemed to go on for an eternity. Then he spoke. He had a bit of an accent, but she couldn’t tell from where. Nor did it matter, it sounded so smooth and comforting, it didn’t matter what he said.
Nicole about collapsed right then and there from the utter sensory overload. She didn’t even realize the stranger had something to her. She just dropped her things on the floor, and proceeded to wrap her arms around the strangers’ neck, and kiss him. At first he didn’t respond, due to the shock of the situation. Very quickly that dissipated, and soon Nicole was entrenched in the kiss of her life. This perfect looking stranger was now giving her the most perfect kiss she had ever received. His lips soft, lightly plump, moist but not drenched, just enough tongue to tease her, but not stabbing into mouth. It was like their mouths were perfect match of dance partners, finally united, and never to be broken apart again. It was now at this moment Nicole’s orgasim hit.
She gripped the stranger tighter, holding on for dear life, as the passion from with in she was trying to out race finally over took her. She started kissing furiously the stranger, and all other people, places, things, vanished at that very instant. All that existed was the stranger and her, locked in furious, writhing, wanton, primal, heated passion. There bodies came together as close as could be. The heat they produced fueled them on more and more. Now all control was lost. Their oral embrace was that of a starving animal ravaging at a fresh kill, never to be stopped until completely satisfied.
After what seemed like an eternity, of countless climaxes and multiple rounds of exchange of dominance of wills, finally Nicole and the strangers embrace was broken. Reality set in. They looked into each others eyes realizing that, never again could the two capture that kind of raw energy and emotion.
Sadness grew in the strangers eyes, and a small tear welled up in Nicole’s. The two quickly looked around, and the rest of the room seemed to be oblivious to the miracle that had transpired not but moments prior in the very same room. The two caught eyes again. Nicole bent down and picked up her things, and the stranger opened the door. Nicole stepped out, turned back, and saw the stranger standing in the doorway. His body language said it all. A Love, to last an eternity, had just transpired. Just like a match though, it burned fast, furiously, and altogether too quickly, never to be ignited again.
End.
Nicole’s Experience
As Nicole was standing there, contemplating leaving, and having only been at the party for a meager forty minuets, she couldn’t recall why she had agreed to come to the party to begin with. Her friends had convinced her she had needed a night out, since it had been quite a while.
Although Nicole had never been much of an outgoing person, something deep inside told her tonight she should make an exception. Now, she was wondering why she had listened to that little voice in her head earlier.
That’s when she saw him. A strange figure, dressed in all black. She had never seen him around town, and in the small community that Nicole lived in, pretty much ever one knew every one else, and she didn’t know him, and definitely would not have forgotten him either.
There was something enigmatic about him, that Nicole could take her eyes off of him, yet she was paralyzed to move closer. Stuck in a state of utter turmoil, Nicole remained still. She felt her cheeks start to flush with heat due to an influx of blood running through them, the tell tale sign that she knew that she was blushing.
Why was this stranger affecting her so? Never had a man had such power and influence over her that she remembered as she searched frantically, quickly scanning back over her memories of the past twelve years of experience she has had with the opposite sex. Not a single one even coming close to what was currently taking place, not even her first crush on her older neighbor, Shane Barry, back when she first moved to this town.
As she continued to be assaulted by the unflinching, unavoidable stare of the stranger, Nicole started to recognize a very familiar feeling starting to creep up from her nether regions. She realized she was going to have an orgasim, and very soon.
She knew she needed to leave the party now. She knew once the tidal wave of overwhelming sensations hit, that she wouldn’t be able to control her body. Her mind would cease to function and all primal animal instincts would kick in. She had to escape now!
Nicole quickly gathered her things, found her friends who had invited her to the party, and let them know that she was leaving. On the fly, she made up some excuse of starting to not feel to well and deciding to go home and get some rest. Even she knew it sounded like a crock of shit, but in the state she was currently in, it was the best she could come up.
As she made her way to door she noticed a shadow along the far wall making its way to the same exit. She realized that it was the stranger that had held her captive earlier, and thus she quickened her pace to beat him to the exit. It seemed no matter how fast she was able to move, the stranger moved a little faster.
Nicole lost sight of him for a moment, and thought that he had turned back into the party, but upon reaching the door, there he was. Now Nicole stood face to face with stranger. Now able to see him more clearly, and clearly noticing all his features. The man’s dark, tanned complexion. He had dark hair that was short, wavy, and hung messily atop his perfectly shaped head. Lastly, she looked into his eyes, and seemed to lose herself completely, a dark ice blue in color that seemed to go on for an eternity. Then he spoke. He had a bit of an accent, but she couldn’t tell from where. Nor did it matter, it sounded so smooth and comforting, it didn’t matter what he said.
Nicole about collapsed right then and there from the utter sensory overload. She didn’t even realize the stranger had something to her. She just dropped her things on the floor, and proceeded to wrap her arms around the strangers’ neck, and kiss him. At first he didn’t respond, due to the shock of the situation. Very quickly that dissipated, and soon Nicole was entrenched in the kiss of her life. This perfect looking stranger was now giving her the most perfect kiss she had ever received. His lips soft, lightly plump, moist but not drenched, just enough tongue to tease her, but not stabbing into mouth. It was like their mouths were perfect match of dance partners, finally united, and never to be broken apart again. It was now at this moment Nicole’s orgasim hit.
She gripped the stranger tighter, holding on for dear life, as the passion from with in she was trying to out race finally over took her. She started kissing furiously the stranger, and all other people, places, things, vanished at that very instant. All that existed was the stranger and her, locked in furious, writhing, wanton, primal, heated passion. There bodies came together as close as could be. The heat they produced fueled them on more and more. Now all control was lost. Their oral embrace was that of a starving animal ravaging at a fresh kill, never to be stopped until completely satisfied.
After what seemed like an eternity, of countless climaxes and multiple rounds of exchange of dominance of wills, finally Nicole and the strangers embrace was broken. Reality set in. They looked into each others eyes realizing that, never again could the two capture that kind of raw energy and emotion.
Sadness grew in the strangers eyes, and a small tear welled up in Nicole’s. The two quickly looked around, and the rest of the room seemed to be oblivious to the miracle that had transpired not but moments prior in the very same room. The two caught eyes again. Nicole bent down and picked up her things, and the stranger opened the door. Nicole stepped out, turned back, and saw the stranger standing in the doorway. His body language said it all. A Love, to last an eternity, had just transpired. Just like a match though, it burned fast, furiously, and altogether too quickly, never to be ignited again.
End.