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April
06-08-2009, 06:27 PM
This is a great start for your first story; it was sexy, passionate, erotic and the perfect way to ease some frustration as Lauren had the pleasure to discover.

Thank you for taking the time to write and share your story with us, and I look forward to reading more from you when you have the time.

Scorpio8
06-08-2009, 06:51 PM
Very fine work on this story and made for an enjoyable read.

It doesn't really need any build up or background, it speaks for itself
in how the characters feed off each others sexuality.

Can't ask for much better than that, well done.

lwilson
06-09-2009, 05:38 AM
I certainly hope there are more where that came from. :)

phogga
06-09-2009, 03:40 PM
Nice hot story.

frankjohnmoore
10-16-2009, 03:10 AM
very hot story