jack4rp
11-25-2008, 02:55 PM
“The Vortex Hotel” is an interactive erotic novella written alternately by Jack and Julie, two people who don’t know each other in real life. It’s not finished; we continue to add to it regularly.
As the story opens, Julie is a bridesmaid at a hotel wedding reception. Julie is a distant cousin of the bride, Michele. They don’t like each other, but have agreed to be in the wedding together to try to heal a rift in their families.
Julie begins flirting with a hotel employee, Jack. They make playful bets, with the loser having to perform a dare. At one point, Jack dares Julie to take off her panties and give them to “Grandpa,” an older relative of the best man. Despite her trepidations, Julie does so. She then returns to Jack, and they discuss their next bet, which is on who will catch the bouquet.
We hope you enjoy the story.
1. By Julie
I’ve seen this tacky ritual before. The bride tosses her bouquet, and the bride then sits on a chair, and the groom removes her garter from under her dress. Then he tosses it to the guys, and the one who gets it is supposedly the next guy to be married. The girl who caught the bouquet then sits on the chair, and the guy who caught the garter puts it on her, sliding it under her dress. There is lots of banter and hooting and the band plays “stripper” music.
It’s tacky and low-class, and I was naïve enough to think that Michele was above it, little as I respected her. But I was wrong.
“One of the bridesmaids will catch the bouquet,” I predict, “and one of the horny bastards in the groom’s party will catch the garter.”
“And you agree to my dare if you lose?”
I’m about to respond, when the guitarist interrupts on the mike to ask all the eligible girls to come forward for the bouquet toss. They do, giggling and jockeying for position. I turn to you again, when one of the bridesmaids grabs me by the arm.
“C’mon, Julie!” she urges, and drags me reluctantly out to the floor.
You watch, amused. Everyone is watching the giggling girls, but you happen to notice Grandpa whispering something to the bride. They whisper, and he pulls something out of his pocket and shows it to her.
She grins. They whisper some more, and she grins again.
Meanwhile, I’m a latecomer to the gaggle of gigglers, so I stand near the front and wait for the nonsense to be over.
The guitarist plays a dramatic warm-up. I stand there bored and embarrassed. Finally Michelle, with some flair, tosses the bouquet. I watch it fly through the air, and suddenly realize it’s headed straight for my chest. I reflexively reach out, and the next moment discover that without in any way trying to do so, I’ve caught it.
2. By Jack
I laugh as the bridesmaid pulls you away, yelling after the two of you, “That a girl, Julie. Don’t let her act fool ya, she was just telling me this is her favorite part!” I smirk, sipping my wine, trying to formulate a new plan. What would I have you do?
Then the unthinkable happened. Time seemed to slow as the bouquet flew through the air and towards you. As it made it’s way down and into your hands, my shoulders and head slumped, “Well shit.” I say to myself shaking my head and suddenly cursing at what I made you did, I raise my glass to you when I catch your eyes for a moment, “You’re gonna really get me now, aren’t you?” I say more to myself, as I smile and shake my head at you, thinking that the unthinkable just happened.
3. By Julie
After I catch the bouquet, there is a smattering of applause. (Apparently I was not the crowd favorite.) But Michele does come up to me and kiss me. The guitarist asks my name, and sings “Juuuuuu-lee” as the band performs impromptu backup.
I slink back to our table, placing the bouquet on it, and letting you ironically congratulate me. I feel numb.
You’re still thinking about losing the bet. “What are you going to do to me?” you ask.
Much as I was intent on flirting with you a moment ago, I am a little distracted. I turn to you. “Right now, I’m just a little more concerned with what’s going to happen to ME,” I say, for once not being ironic.
“Now then,” interrupts the guitarist, booming his voice in a kitschy cheesy way, “it’s time for our bride Michele to lose an article of clothing!”
He places a chair on the edge of the stage, about a foot and a half above the dance floor, facing out. Michele, loving the attention, walks up and sits down. The crowd, by now drunk, gathers around. The horny bastards in the groom’s party stand in front.
The groom, Mark, is supposed to slide his hands under the bride’s dress and remove her garter. But instead he lifts her hem above her knees. Michele blushes, but it’s not clear if she is really uncomfortable or just playing the part.
As the band plays something raunchy-sounding, Mark slides the hem further up Michelle’s thighs. The groomsmen kneel, ostensibly so others behind them can see, but in fact to get a better view,
The guitarist leans over and peeks. “Something old, something new, something borrowed, something blue,” he says. “I think we can see what Michele’s wearing that’s blue, and it’s NOT her garter!”
The crowd roars. The guitarist was worried that his joke was too risqué, but now he is emboldened.
Mark slides the garter to Michele’s knee. “Oh, give us another look!” the guitarist urges. Suddenly Mike lifts the hem of Michele’s dress, and everyone can catch a glimpse of Michele’s light blue lacy panties between her slightly parted thighs. She blushes and mock-tussles with him for the hem, then he lets go and removes the garter.
The drunk crowd cheers with delight. Michele playfully slaps Mike and walks off. “All in good fun,” the guitarist crows.
Our table is well-situated such that you are distracted getting a good look at Michele. Finally you look back at me. Suddenly it starts to dawn on you why I’m upset.
“I caught the bouquet,” I remind you. “So whoever catches the garter gets to put it on me. Taking the garter off the bride is usually the tame part; it’s putting it on someone else that everyone always plays to the hilt. And thanks to you … I’m … not … wearing … any … panties.”
You look away, feeling awkward, and once again notice Michele and Grandpa whispering.
4. By Jack
The crowd continues to cheer, getting louder and louder as the excitement builds and the drinks are poured. I look again to you, seeing the panic on your face. I lean down, covering my face in the crook of my arm. Well shit, Jack, meet a girl who’s not only pretty and fun, but also adventurious and you go and fuck it up. Pat yourself on the back, bud.
I look up at you, eyes going to Mark, then back to you. I pull the chair back, “You’re going to owe me if I can pull this off…” I say moving away from our table. I pass by a table of some of the older folks gathered at the wedding and as one of the men leans forward I slip his jacket off the back of his chair, pulling it on me in one motion covering my uniform. I shake my head as I slip in behind and into the group of single men.
I take one look back at you, to see the horror and worry on your face. Well shit, I think, that just piles the pressure on. I quickly turn around, placing an elbow to the sides of one of Mark’s friends to get him to move just enough to let me get in deeper to the horny group of men as the guitarist tries getting the crowd even more excited, “Who’s gonna be the lucky fellow to get to place the garter on our Julie, seated right over there!” He says, pointing you out.
As if you weren’t embrassed enough, almost everyone takes a look over at you, seeing you red faced as you watch your fate play out before you. You notice Grandpa grinning, looking at you unlike anyone else here.
Mark claps his hands once, drawing the attention back to him, he says something you can’t hear and then time slows for you.
The only thing you can hear is your heart beating, everything else fades into the backround. Ba bump, ba bump, ba bump, as his arm stretches out, ba bump, ba bump, ba bump, hand extending forward sending the garter flying from his fingers. You’re not sure what to watch, the garter gracefully flying through the air or the men in front, pushing and shoving for position filled on wine and testerone.
Hands reach up as the garter flies into the group, fingers trying to get a piece of it, shoving, and then someone trips and falls to their knees and the garter slips from hands, falling, the group fights for it like animals almost. For everyone else, only seconds have passed but to you it seems to last an hour. You can barely hear the guartist shouting “Who’s got it?! Who’s the lucky man?!” as your mind screams the same, ‘Who’s got it?!’.
Suddenly, you see me back out of the dog pile, as if I was pushed out, my hands going in my pockets as I turn to meet your eyes, my face telling you the whole story as I shrug, looking defeated. Your heart beats even faster as you realize your fate, a man, one you probably hate, is about to expose you to the whole wedding party.
They’re going to make you sit on the stage, as they gather around with the band playing the same tacky music they play at every wedding for this moment. The man will knee between your legs, lift up your skirt and everyone here will know what myself and grandpa already do - you are wearing no panties. This event will spread within days of this and become wedding legend, “Did you hear about the slut who took off her panties and went up on stage?”.
As you look back to me, trying to search for any way out of this mess, I bring my hand up from my pocket and with my pointing finger, call you forward as my other hand comes out, raising a garter and holding it high, I smirk and mouth the words “You owe me” to you as I turn to the stage and look up at Mike and the guitarist, “I believe you’re looking for me.” I say with a smile, before laughing at the drunk horny pile of men on the ground who all look up at me.
I take a moment to tease the group of men, imagining they’re the guys from every stupid wedding I’ve had to do, displaying confidence and cockyness, “All skill boys. Next time, maybe next time.” I grin.
Silently, on the inside, I’m sweating bullets, feeling my heart thumping against my chest. Don’t forget to buy a lottery ticket today, Jack.
5. By Julie
My whole body experiences relief as I discover that you have the garter, but I have only a moment to enjoy it before the guitarist calls me to the stage. A moment later I’m seated in the chair, facing the crowd, the groomsmen in front, and Steve, the best man, cracking jokes among them, and ready with his camera.
All the groomsmen were obnoxious, but Steve was the worst. I do believe Michele had shared her annoyance at being forced to have me as a bridesmaid, and had encouraged the groomsmen to make me as uncomfortable as possible. But Steve, I think, was almost pathological, and had a pronounced sadistic streak.
The first time I was alone with him and a couple of his friends, at a party at Michele’s family’s house, he asked me if it was true that Michelle was putting the bridesmaids in strapless dresses. I said yes. He asked if it was hard to keep up a strapless dress if you didn’t have big tits. He stared at my chest. “What are you….34b, maybe?” he asked, then grinned like it was a playful joke.
Another time he asked me what color panties I was wearing, explaining that the guys had made a bet. At the rehearsal dinner, where I was wearing a short dress, he sat next to me at one point, reached under the tablecloth, put his hand on my knee and started sliding it up my leg. I got up and went to the powder room.
Behind me, the band struck up more raunchy music. The crowd cheered. My heart pounded. You slid the garter up under my dress, revealing nothing. There were some scattered groans and boos.
“Oops, Jack!” said the guitarist. “That was the wrong leg! It goes on her other leg. Sorry, you’ll have to take it off and start over.” (A classic trick for this game.)
There’s no good way out of this, so you again slide your hands under my dress. This time you stop, with my legs parted for you and your right hand sliding high up along my thigh. Our eyes meet, and you smile. You’re my white knight, and I can’t begrudge you a moment to savor the situation. Then you slide the garter down over my high heel, and begin on my other leg.
As the garter slides over my knee, and nothing is revealed, the guitarist gets frustrated at your gallantry. “Here, let me help!” he says, and he stands on the other side of you and grabs the hem of my dress, lifting it over my knees. My hands go straight to my lap, and a struggle ensues as he tries to yank the hem to my waist.
Fortunately, you move quickly in front of me, and as the flashbulbs and video cameras go off, all they can see is your back…saving me from becoming a YouTube sensation. You join the struggle on my side and eventually pull my hem down. Then I stand up and walk off. I suspect the guitarist could probably tell that I was au naturel, but the damage was limited to him.
There is a smattering of applause and some more groans and boos as we sit down. My heart is pounding against my chest.
I look at you. “I do think you owe me for that. Big time,” you say.
I look past you for a moment and see Steve walking by, shooting me a look. It says, “You dodged a bullet there, Julie, but I’m going to get you tonight. Just you wait.” I look around. Maybe I’m paranoid, but I sense a similar vibe from the other groomsmen…..Grandpa…..Michelle…the guitarist….
At this point I want to go upstairs to my hotel room and lock and barricade the door. However, before I can do that, I realize I have a very large debt to repay.
“Yes, I owe you big time,” I say to you, smiling the most engaging smile I can manage. “What can I do to make it up to you? Your wish is my command.”
As the story opens, Julie is a bridesmaid at a hotel wedding reception. Julie is a distant cousin of the bride, Michele. They don’t like each other, but have agreed to be in the wedding together to try to heal a rift in their families.
Julie begins flirting with a hotel employee, Jack. They make playful bets, with the loser having to perform a dare. At one point, Jack dares Julie to take off her panties and give them to “Grandpa,” an older relative of the best man. Despite her trepidations, Julie does so. She then returns to Jack, and they discuss their next bet, which is on who will catch the bouquet.
We hope you enjoy the story.
1. By Julie
I’ve seen this tacky ritual before. The bride tosses her bouquet, and the bride then sits on a chair, and the groom removes her garter from under her dress. Then he tosses it to the guys, and the one who gets it is supposedly the next guy to be married. The girl who caught the bouquet then sits on the chair, and the guy who caught the garter puts it on her, sliding it under her dress. There is lots of banter and hooting and the band plays “stripper” music.
It’s tacky and low-class, and I was naïve enough to think that Michele was above it, little as I respected her. But I was wrong.
“One of the bridesmaids will catch the bouquet,” I predict, “and one of the horny bastards in the groom’s party will catch the garter.”
“And you agree to my dare if you lose?”
I’m about to respond, when the guitarist interrupts on the mike to ask all the eligible girls to come forward for the bouquet toss. They do, giggling and jockeying for position. I turn to you again, when one of the bridesmaids grabs me by the arm.
“C’mon, Julie!” she urges, and drags me reluctantly out to the floor.
You watch, amused. Everyone is watching the giggling girls, but you happen to notice Grandpa whispering something to the bride. They whisper, and he pulls something out of his pocket and shows it to her.
She grins. They whisper some more, and she grins again.
Meanwhile, I’m a latecomer to the gaggle of gigglers, so I stand near the front and wait for the nonsense to be over.
The guitarist plays a dramatic warm-up. I stand there bored and embarrassed. Finally Michelle, with some flair, tosses the bouquet. I watch it fly through the air, and suddenly realize it’s headed straight for my chest. I reflexively reach out, and the next moment discover that without in any way trying to do so, I’ve caught it.
2. By Jack
I laugh as the bridesmaid pulls you away, yelling after the two of you, “That a girl, Julie. Don’t let her act fool ya, she was just telling me this is her favorite part!” I smirk, sipping my wine, trying to formulate a new plan. What would I have you do?
Then the unthinkable happened. Time seemed to slow as the bouquet flew through the air and towards you. As it made it’s way down and into your hands, my shoulders and head slumped, “Well shit.” I say to myself shaking my head and suddenly cursing at what I made you did, I raise my glass to you when I catch your eyes for a moment, “You’re gonna really get me now, aren’t you?” I say more to myself, as I smile and shake my head at you, thinking that the unthinkable just happened.
3. By Julie
After I catch the bouquet, there is a smattering of applause. (Apparently I was not the crowd favorite.) But Michele does come up to me and kiss me. The guitarist asks my name, and sings “Juuuuuu-lee” as the band performs impromptu backup.
I slink back to our table, placing the bouquet on it, and letting you ironically congratulate me. I feel numb.
You’re still thinking about losing the bet. “What are you going to do to me?” you ask.
Much as I was intent on flirting with you a moment ago, I am a little distracted. I turn to you. “Right now, I’m just a little more concerned with what’s going to happen to ME,” I say, for once not being ironic.
“Now then,” interrupts the guitarist, booming his voice in a kitschy cheesy way, “it’s time for our bride Michele to lose an article of clothing!”
He places a chair on the edge of the stage, about a foot and a half above the dance floor, facing out. Michele, loving the attention, walks up and sits down. The crowd, by now drunk, gathers around. The horny bastards in the groom’s party stand in front.
The groom, Mark, is supposed to slide his hands under the bride’s dress and remove her garter. But instead he lifts her hem above her knees. Michele blushes, but it’s not clear if she is really uncomfortable or just playing the part.
As the band plays something raunchy-sounding, Mark slides the hem further up Michelle’s thighs. The groomsmen kneel, ostensibly so others behind them can see, but in fact to get a better view,
The guitarist leans over and peeks. “Something old, something new, something borrowed, something blue,” he says. “I think we can see what Michele’s wearing that’s blue, and it’s NOT her garter!”
The crowd roars. The guitarist was worried that his joke was too risqué, but now he is emboldened.
Mark slides the garter to Michele’s knee. “Oh, give us another look!” the guitarist urges. Suddenly Mike lifts the hem of Michele’s dress, and everyone can catch a glimpse of Michele’s light blue lacy panties between her slightly parted thighs. She blushes and mock-tussles with him for the hem, then he lets go and removes the garter.
The drunk crowd cheers with delight. Michele playfully slaps Mike and walks off. “All in good fun,” the guitarist crows.
Our table is well-situated such that you are distracted getting a good look at Michele. Finally you look back at me. Suddenly it starts to dawn on you why I’m upset.
“I caught the bouquet,” I remind you. “So whoever catches the garter gets to put it on me. Taking the garter off the bride is usually the tame part; it’s putting it on someone else that everyone always plays to the hilt. And thanks to you … I’m … not … wearing … any … panties.”
You look away, feeling awkward, and once again notice Michele and Grandpa whispering.
4. By Jack
The crowd continues to cheer, getting louder and louder as the excitement builds and the drinks are poured. I look again to you, seeing the panic on your face. I lean down, covering my face in the crook of my arm. Well shit, Jack, meet a girl who’s not only pretty and fun, but also adventurious and you go and fuck it up. Pat yourself on the back, bud.
I look up at you, eyes going to Mark, then back to you. I pull the chair back, “You’re going to owe me if I can pull this off…” I say moving away from our table. I pass by a table of some of the older folks gathered at the wedding and as one of the men leans forward I slip his jacket off the back of his chair, pulling it on me in one motion covering my uniform. I shake my head as I slip in behind and into the group of single men.
I take one look back at you, to see the horror and worry on your face. Well shit, I think, that just piles the pressure on. I quickly turn around, placing an elbow to the sides of one of Mark’s friends to get him to move just enough to let me get in deeper to the horny group of men as the guitarist tries getting the crowd even more excited, “Who’s gonna be the lucky fellow to get to place the garter on our Julie, seated right over there!” He says, pointing you out.
As if you weren’t embrassed enough, almost everyone takes a look over at you, seeing you red faced as you watch your fate play out before you. You notice Grandpa grinning, looking at you unlike anyone else here.
Mark claps his hands once, drawing the attention back to him, he says something you can’t hear and then time slows for you.
The only thing you can hear is your heart beating, everything else fades into the backround. Ba bump, ba bump, ba bump, as his arm stretches out, ba bump, ba bump, ba bump, hand extending forward sending the garter flying from his fingers. You’re not sure what to watch, the garter gracefully flying through the air or the men in front, pushing and shoving for position filled on wine and testerone.
Hands reach up as the garter flies into the group, fingers trying to get a piece of it, shoving, and then someone trips and falls to their knees and the garter slips from hands, falling, the group fights for it like animals almost. For everyone else, only seconds have passed but to you it seems to last an hour. You can barely hear the guartist shouting “Who’s got it?! Who’s the lucky man?!” as your mind screams the same, ‘Who’s got it?!’.
Suddenly, you see me back out of the dog pile, as if I was pushed out, my hands going in my pockets as I turn to meet your eyes, my face telling you the whole story as I shrug, looking defeated. Your heart beats even faster as you realize your fate, a man, one you probably hate, is about to expose you to the whole wedding party.
They’re going to make you sit on the stage, as they gather around with the band playing the same tacky music they play at every wedding for this moment. The man will knee between your legs, lift up your skirt and everyone here will know what myself and grandpa already do - you are wearing no panties. This event will spread within days of this and become wedding legend, “Did you hear about the slut who took off her panties and went up on stage?”.
As you look back to me, trying to search for any way out of this mess, I bring my hand up from my pocket and with my pointing finger, call you forward as my other hand comes out, raising a garter and holding it high, I smirk and mouth the words “You owe me” to you as I turn to the stage and look up at Mike and the guitarist, “I believe you’re looking for me.” I say with a smile, before laughing at the drunk horny pile of men on the ground who all look up at me.
I take a moment to tease the group of men, imagining they’re the guys from every stupid wedding I’ve had to do, displaying confidence and cockyness, “All skill boys. Next time, maybe next time.” I grin.
Silently, on the inside, I’m sweating bullets, feeling my heart thumping against my chest. Don’t forget to buy a lottery ticket today, Jack.
5. By Julie
My whole body experiences relief as I discover that you have the garter, but I have only a moment to enjoy it before the guitarist calls me to the stage. A moment later I’m seated in the chair, facing the crowd, the groomsmen in front, and Steve, the best man, cracking jokes among them, and ready with his camera.
All the groomsmen were obnoxious, but Steve was the worst. I do believe Michele had shared her annoyance at being forced to have me as a bridesmaid, and had encouraged the groomsmen to make me as uncomfortable as possible. But Steve, I think, was almost pathological, and had a pronounced sadistic streak.
The first time I was alone with him and a couple of his friends, at a party at Michele’s family’s house, he asked me if it was true that Michelle was putting the bridesmaids in strapless dresses. I said yes. He asked if it was hard to keep up a strapless dress if you didn’t have big tits. He stared at my chest. “What are you….34b, maybe?” he asked, then grinned like it was a playful joke.
Another time he asked me what color panties I was wearing, explaining that the guys had made a bet. At the rehearsal dinner, where I was wearing a short dress, he sat next to me at one point, reached under the tablecloth, put his hand on my knee and started sliding it up my leg. I got up and went to the powder room.
Behind me, the band struck up more raunchy music. The crowd cheered. My heart pounded. You slid the garter up under my dress, revealing nothing. There were some scattered groans and boos.
“Oops, Jack!” said the guitarist. “That was the wrong leg! It goes on her other leg. Sorry, you’ll have to take it off and start over.” (A classic trick for this game.)
There’s no good way out of this, so you again slide your hands under my dress. This time you stop, with my legs parted for you and your right hand sliding high up along my thigh. Our eyes meet, and you smile. You’re my white knight, and I can’t begrudge you a moment to savor the situation. Then you slide the garter down over my high heel, and begin on my other leg.
As the garter slides over my knee, and nothing is revealed, the guitarist gets frustrated at your gallantry. “Here, let me help!” he says, and he stands on the other side of you and grabs the hem of my dress, lifting it over my knees. My hands go straight to my lap, and a struggle ensues as he tries to yank the hem to my waist.
Fortunately, you move quickly in front of me, and as the flashbulbs and video cameras go off, all they can see is your back…saving me from becoming a YouTube sensation. You join the struggle on my side and eventually pull my hem down. Then I stand up and walk off. I suspect the guitarist could probably tell that I was au naturel, but the damage was limited to him.
There is a smattering of applause and some more groans and boos as we sit down. My heart is pounding against my chest.
I look at you. “I do think you owe me for that. Big time,” you say.
I look past you for a moment and see Steve walking by, shooting me a look. It says, “You dodged a bullet there, Julie, but I’m going to get you tonight. Just you wait.” I look around. Maybe I’m paranoid, but I sense a similar vibe from the other groomsmen…..Grandpa…..Michelle…the guitarist….
At this point I want to go upstairs to my hotel room and lock and barricade the door. However, before I can do that, I realize I have a very large debt to repay.
“Yes, I owe you big time,” I say to you, smiling the most engaging smile I can manage. “What can I do to make it up to you? Your wish is my command.”