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Ninja Wolf
09-29-2008, 02:20 PM
This is the first sex story that I've ever written, but I'm planning on making it... long. The quality won't be the best but I hope to improve in time. I have 5 parts planned, with 3 chapters each, more or less, and the sex goes from incest/romantic to group sex and a lot more, so I couldn't fit it anywhere else. I may not finish but I hope you enjoy the first chapter of two almost done! And if you have any advice for improving my writing, let me know. Again, enjoy.

Part 1: The Incestuous Coupling

Chapter 1, it begins


School had just gotten out for the year, and Michael was glad it was over. He did fine at school, when he tried he could get As with some effort in all of his classes, but he always wanted to relax, play videogames, hang out with friends, anything but work. Another thing, he hadn’t had sex in months. Masturbating to internet porn was enough to sate him for a while, but he needed sex…and needed it soon or he was going to go insane. He lived with his mother, his younger sister and older brother in a large house on the hillside near the town of Winter, population 90,000. His family had a lot of money, mostly inherited, although his mother was an extremely skilled architect. His house had everything you could need. It had a Jacuzzi, a large, furnished basement, a nice living room… a deck, and plenty of privacy.

His older brother Nick had soccer camp near the beginning of the summer months. Michael thought he took it too seriously even though he enjoyed it himself. It was a 2 day drive, so when Michael got back from his last day of school his mother and older brother were already gone, leaving instructions for him to take care of Clara while they were away. The camp required parents to sign for their children if they were the ones paying, and Nick was unemployed at the moment.

Anyways, the story begins here. Clara, his younger sister, a real beauty with long black hair, blue eyes, and supple breasts that were well proportioned to her somewhat average, yet extremely cute frame, wouldn’t be home for another hour from dancing lessons, so the first thing that he did was run to his bed upstairs and stripped to his boxers, horny as hell and needing relief. He wasn‘t patient enough to take it slow, and rapidly stroked his cock up and down until he neared his climax and came explosively. Collapsing in his bed from exhaustion, he slept until waking up to his door creaking open.

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He woke up exhausted, with only his boxers on, and noticed Clara standing at the door, wearing her purple pajamas. By now, it was dark outside, as he saw through the blinds. , and he could hear thunder outside. “Michael, can I sleep with you tonight? I don’t want to sleep alone, the thunder is scaring me,” Clara pleaded. Normally he would’ve refused, he hadn’t slept in the same bed with his sister since they were kids and she was really damn hot. It didn‘t help that he had stumbled in on her fingering herself only days before. But he didn’t say no, against his better judgment, so she walked over and snuggled under the covers with her back facing him. “Goodnight Michael,” Clara said as she drifted off to sleep. Michael whispered, “goodnight sis.”

After a few minutes Michael fell asleep as well, but he awoke a few hours later when Clara’s butt pressed into his groin, moaning softly, she was obviously having an erotic dream. The sound of her soft moans almost instantly made him hard, and he couldn’t resist her…he hadn’t had sex in so long that he hardly realized what he was doing until her pajamas and panties were pulled down just enough to reveal her dripping hole, with his dick poised at the entrance to her moist lips. He knew she was on the pill and couldn’t get her pregnant, so he made the decision that would change their relationship forever, in an instant.

He slowly began to press against her, in the spoons position. He rubbed his cock up and down her cunt lips for a moment, soliciting a faint moan from Clara, and in one quick moment slammed himself into her, burying himself inside her to the hilt. Clara woke up instantly, yelping in pain as her virginity was stolen, but by the time she understood she was being fucked most of the pain was gone and pleasure overwhelmed her. She had just been dreaming of her brother fucking her…and now it was happening, he was behind her and his dick was pushing into her pussy. It felt like nothing she had ever felt before.

Michael froze when he saw her eyes open, until he saw them pleading him to continue, burning with desire. Clara had fantasized Michael fucking her for a long time, imagining his cock deep inside her as she fingered herself. “Fuck me Michael…fuck me hard…it feels so good Michael…ahhh,” Clara moaned as he began to pound her love hole fast and hard. Michael sped up his pace as she spoke, her words turning him on beyond what he had ever felt in sex. His sister was asking him to fuck her, and he was going to do just that. Her pussy was warmer and tighter than any girl he had ever felt, his cock was drenched in her juices, and the knowledge that it was his own sister he was fucking right now made it hard to stop from cumming instantly.

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He lasted for a mere 3 minutes before moaning loudly, “I’m going to cum…I’m cumming…oh my god!” he yelled as he pounded her pussy harder and harder, making Clara scream in pleasure as her own orgasm exploded over her like a tidal wave. Her pussy muscles gripped Michael’s dick and began to milk it with the contractions as hot cum poured into her like a torrent, splashing against her cervix and filling her up completely with warmth.

Holding Clara close, he slowly pulled out of her, his tool glistening with both of their juices, and without it blocking her hole, the juices began to flow out of her, trailing down her leg. Still horny, but a bit more clear-headed, Michael felt guilt at what he had done, until Clara cooed softly. “Michael…I love you so much…that was amazing, I’ve never felt anything like it.” Michael responded softly, “I love you too sis, I’m sorry I did that though…and you were amazing, no girl I’ve ever known felt as good as you did.” He meant it. Clara smiled at the compliment, and cooed at him, “soooo…want to do it again? I want you to…I love you so much and it felt so good before,” pleaded Clara.

Michael was in heaven, hearing his own sister ask him to fuck her was a bit unnerving at first, but he only wanted to please her, he really did love her more than anything. Kissing her lips softly and lovingly, he rolled her onto her back and slowly stripped her pajamas off, and began to strip himself. When they were both naked completely, he began kissing, sucking, and licking her body and causing her to moan in anticipation, her legs quivering slightly. He undid her bra and sucked and nibbled each nipple teasingly, causing her to gasp in pleasure. Finally, with both of them fully naked, Clara spread her legs wide and Michael mounted her, staring into her blue eyes and both of them smiling widely.

“I would do anything for you Clara. You’re so beautiful, I’ve always fantasized doing this but I never thought we would,” admitted Michael. “Me too! I’ve never been with another guy but I know I would choose you first…you’re so sweet Michael,” responded Clara, hugging him tightly. Michael wanted her to feel amazing, to feel like the amazing girl she was, his little gem. Nothing would ever be the same again, and he wanted her to feel like a woman, to know the pleasures she deserved for being such a loving sister. He would never refuse her demands.

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Clara moaned as her lips were spread open again by his tool, and Michael sighed softly, pressing his body against hers slowly until he was fully inside her. He lay on top of her for a moment, and kissed her passionately before slowly pulling out, and slamming back in, slowly but strongly, he was determined to make this last. Clara moaned, squealed, and wrapped her legs around his back as he made love to her for what seemed like days, Clara cumming multiple times. Each time she did, Michael began to fuck her even harder, making each of her orgasms come closer and closer together with each one being more powerful and mind-shattering than the last, until she was screaming in pleasure as Michael was nearing his own climax. Clara screamed his name over and over as she came again, drenching his cock in her juices.

“Fuck me harder, harder! Oh my god! Michael! Michael! Aaaah!,” she cried out as she was fucked ruthlessly, Michael’s dick plunging in and out of her like a jackhammer. Michael felt cum rising in his balls, and knew he couldn’t hold it in for much longer. Clara screamed again as yet another orgasm washed over her, “Fill me with your cum… I want it inside me, I want it now!”

She moaned

She screamed

She squealed

She panted and gasped for air

Slamming into her pussy again and again, he finally came, screaming her name as he filled her up with jet after jet of cum, pounding her all the way through it. It seemed to last forever for both of them, his cum splashing against the walls of her cunt and filling her cervix completely. Finally, both of them sated and panting rapidly, he stared into Clara’s tired eyes again before kissing her deeply and passionately, and rolling onto her side, holding her close. Clara felt safe, protected more than she ever had. They both hoped the bond they now shared, this new bond of pleasure would last forever. That night, they both dreamt of the pleasures to come.

Note: I could tell this was way too short when I posted it, but it seemed so much longer in a word proccessor program! I'll try to work on length in the future, and quality, everything really. :ices_blah:

davesmistress
09-29-2008, 02:50 PM
Not bad at all for a first attempt....short paragrphs make it easier to read, and you had good spacing....maybe just serperating the dialogue....just like here:


Holding Clara close, he slowly pulled out of her, his tool glistening with both of their juices, and without it blocking her hole, the juices began to flow out of her, trailing down her leg. Still horny, but a bit more clear-headed, Michael felt guilt at what he had done, until Clara cooed softly.

“Michael…I love you so much…that was amazing, I’ve never felt anything like it.”

Michael responded softly, “I love you too sis, I’m sorry I did that though…and you were amazing, no girl I’ve ever known felt as good as you did.”

He meant it.

Clara smiled at the compliment, and cooed at him, “soooo…want to do it again?

I want you to…I love you so much and it felt so good before,” pleaded Clara.

Kinda seperates what they say from what they are just thinking.....Keeep at it and we will be looking forward to part 2.

Ninja Wolf
10-01-2008, 01:52 AM
I'm almost done with the second part. It's a bit longer, explains more, and I'm taking a lot more time in working on it. But it's still probably going to suck. I'm mostly afraid of making TOO MANY paragraphs, although, maybe you can't have too many. Oh well. Should have it posted within 24 hours. I'm lazy.

mkirros
10-01-2008, 10:17 PM
Don't worry so much about whether it's going to suck. Write it, post it, accept any feedback you get, and go on from there. I thought this first piece was very good for a first attempt at writing, and DM's comments were on the money as far as constructive criticism. As far as paragraphs are concerned, it's much better to have too many than too few. If you don't break the paragraphs enough, a story becomes almost impossible to read.

I really enjoyed this part, and I'm definitely looking forward to more

Ninja Wolf
10-14-2008, 12:33 AM
I've been way too lazy to do it, and accidently deleted what I had as well. I may start writing again eventually but for now, nothing. Still, thanks for the advice.

davesmistress
10-14-2008, 12:35 AM
No worries and no rush...thanks

Ninja Wolf
01-01-2009, 05:32 AM
Well, I've been going through a lot recently, and havn't paid much attention at all to these forums. My only real involvement will be through my stories, which I'll try to actually put some work into now. I've only made one, and was well on the way to making a sequel in a very large series when I accidently deleted it and gave up, so now I'm going to recreate it from scratch asap. This one was short, but that is because it was meant to just be an introduction. Other parts will have more than just sex, although there will be plenty...I want it to be a good story on its own right, or at least decent.

vadermaul
01-12-2009, 12:12 PM
Not a bad start. Keep up the good work.

frankjohnmoore
12-26-2009, 02:11 AM
very good and you have a very good start

upallnight
12-28-2009, 03:29 AM
good story so far