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Brownsman
08-05-2008, 10:33 AM
This story is pretty long. I hope it's not too long that it becomes boring. I hope you enjoy it.
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I met Liz about 10 years ago when I volunteered to mentor her and her brother. From the first time I met them there was something special about Liz. She was so quiet when we first met. I arrived at their house to meet them and their mother. I spent about an hour talking with them and getting to know them. Before I left Liz had climbed up on my back and flipped over my head. That was the first time I had touched her and her ass and from then on I was hooked. I mentored Liz and her brother for about 7 years but I have kept in contact with them since then. I got to see them both grow up and mature. I haven't talked to her brother for a couple of years because of him going off to college. Because of decisions their parents had made the kids were without a father for most of their lives. So I was the father figure to them. When ever I would pick them up and take them places Liz would hold my hand like a daughter would with her father. If we were at home she would sit close to me or on my lap. Sometimes it was a little uncomfortable to have her on my lap knowing if she moved a certain way she would feel my hard on, but so many times I wanted her to feel it just to see her reaction.

Like I said I got to see both of them grow and mature. I watched Liz grow from a cute little girl to a beautiful young woman. More and more I would find myself checking her out as she sat close to me or as she left the room I'd watch her butt wiggle while she walked away. There were many times that I would tickle her just so I could touch her and feel her squirm beside me or on my lap. Many times I would grab her from behind and "accidentally" touch her young growing breasts. She had the most amazing body for a young girl. Knowing the consequences if someone found out if anything happened between us always stopped me from trying anything more than playful touching or so I thought it would.

One day when Liz was about 15 I had taken her to a park to have a picnic and spend time with her. We were leaving the park and she mentioned that she had to use the bathroom. I told her my parents lived just up the street and we could stop there and she could go. So we left the park and drove over to my parents house. When we got there I noticed no one was home but since I had a key we would be able to get in. At the time my parents were remodeling the bathroom on the lower level so I told her she would have to go upstairs. We walked over to the stairway and I let her go in front of me. She walked up the first step and I grabbed her arm. She turned around and looked at me. I pulled her close and kissed her on the lips. It was a very passionate kiss. Liz didn't try to stop me because for years she wanted to be my "girlfriend".

I broke the kiss and said "Wow that was even better than I thought it would be."

"Yeah that was pretty nice." Liz said.

She turned to finish walking up the steps. Again I grabbed her arm and pulled her to me. This time instead I put her arms around my neck and lifted her up. Figuring out quickly what I wanted she wrapped her legs around my waist. I slowly walked up the steps so we didn't fall. At this point my erection would be pretty noticeable when I put her down but that would be ok. I carried her into the bathroom and sat her on the edge of the sink. I leaned in for another kiss. This time as I was kissing her I pushed the straps of her tank top off her shoulders and down her arms. She slipped her arms out of the straps and then broke our kiss.

Sitting there on the sink she just smiled at me and said "Are you going to let me use the bathroom or did you bring me in here just to tease me and not let me go?"

"You can use the bathroom in a minute." I said.

I leaned back in and kissed her on the lips again. This time I didn't stay there though. I kissed down the side of her face to her neck. I kissed all over her neck and ear.

I pulled her off the counter and dropped down to my knees. I pulled her close to me and started kissing her chest. I pushed her tank top down so I could kiss her breasts and suck on her nipples. She had smaller sized breasts but they were perfect for her. She moaned as I sucked gently on her nipples. As I was kissing and licking her breasts I pushed her shorts and underwear down. Slowly revealing her small patch of pubic hair and her young pussy.

I pushed the bottom of her tank top up to reveal her stomach. I kissed her stomach and worked my way down towards her pussy. I kissed the top of her pussy a couple of times.

"You should get back up on the sink so I lick your pussy." I said.

She climbed back up on the sink and I moved in between her legs. I had her lean back so I could slide her butt out a little more. As I slowly ran my tongue across her clit her body raised up so that my tongue couldn't get away.

"Oh shit." she said. "Do that again."

I ran my tongue over her clit a couple more times before I moved my tongue a little farther down and ran it all over her wet slit. Soon she was rocking up and down with my tongue and moaning loudly every time it hit her clit. Wanting to give her a little more sensation I slowly slipped my finger into her pussy.

"Your pussy is pretty tight. Are you still a virgin?" I asked.

"Yes" she moaned.

With my finger still buried in her pussy I could feel her muscles tightening around it. Then I heard her say "Something feels funny. It feels really good though." and then she let out a loud moan.

"I think you had an orgasm. Have you never had one before?" I said as I pulled my finger out of her pussy and licked her slit one more time to get all of her juices.

"Wow that was great and no I've never had one. Now I really have to pee." she said and jumped down from the sink and walked over to the toilet and sat down.

"Come here." she said.

I walked over to her. With my erection sticking out she pulled my shorts down and took my dick in her hand. She pulled me a little closer and slowly stuck it in her mouth. Her warm mouth wrapped around my dick felt great. It almost sent me over the edge with the first couple of bobs of her head. She pulled my dick out of her mouth and smiled and asked "how did that feel?"

"Great!!" I said.

She slowly stroked my dick. When she started doing that she let the first stream of pee go. Hearing her pee really turned me on. With her stroking my dick and listening to her pee sent me over the edge. I leaned in close to her and started shooting my cum on her chest. She licked the last couple drops off the head of my dick and smiled at me.

"Did you like that?" she asked.

"Yeah it felt good and hearing you pee pushed me over the edge." I said.

"Having your cum on me has made me really horny. I want you to take my virginity." she said.

"I would love to take your virginity, but we can't." I said. "We shouldn't have done this but I got a little carried away. I could get in big trouble if anyone found out about this."

"I'm not going to tell. I've wanted you to do this for a long time." she said.

"How about we make a deal. You stay a virgin and for your 18th birthday as a gift to you I'll take your virginity."

"That's 3 years away. I'm not sure if I can go that long without having you." she said.

"It's up to you but we can't do it before that." I said.

"Ok deal, I guess." she agreed.

She wiped her pussy and got up from the toilet. "So what am I supposed to do with your cum on my tits?" She asked.

"Leave it there. That way you will have a little of me with you the rest of the day." I said

"Ok" she said as she adjusted her shirt to cover her breasts.

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That all happened a couple years ago.

About a week ago, I got a call late one night. As I answered the phone I heard a young womans voice and crying.

"Hello" I said

"Hello" was the response

"Liz, is that you?" I asked

"Yeah it's me. Can you come get me?" she said through her tears.

"Where are you at?" I asked.

"The police station." She said.

"What are you doing there?"

"I'll tell you when you get here. Please hurry." she said.

So I jumped out of bed and went to the police station to pick her up. On the way over there I could only imagine the things that she had done to get picked up. I wasn't prepared for the reason why she was there though. When I got to the police station I talked with the officer at the front desk and they directed me to where I needed to go. When I got the room that she was in she ran up to me and threw her arms around me and cried even harder than she was before.

"Are you ok?" I asked

"Yeah, I'm fine. Let's get out of here." she replied

I thanked the officers that were there and we left. Liz was quiet most of the way home. Finally she started talking to me.

"Mom and dad are dead."

Pulling into the garage and nearly wrecking the car "What??" I asked shocked and surprised.

"They are both dead." she said.

We walked into the house and sat down on the couch.

"Someone came over tonight. I was upstairs in my room and I heard yelling and screaming, then I heard 2 gun shots. I didn't know what to do. I was so scared. I stayed in my room and called the police. I didn't know if anyone was still in the house so I just stayed in my room. When the police came they said the house was clear and it was ok for me to come out of my room."

She started crying hard again telling the story.

"When I walked outside there were two bodies laying on the ground covered in white sheets. Mom and dad were shot." she said

"I'm so sorry to hear that sweetheart." I said pulling her close to me trying to calm her.

"I don't know what I'm going to do. I have no where to live, my parents are gone." she started crying again.

"You can stay here for now. We'll figure something out. I promise." I said.

Hearing that a small smile formed on her face as she put her arms around my neck and gave me a little hug.

"Thank you." she said.

"I think you might feel a little better if you get some sleep." I said.

"Yeah maybe."

I showed her to the spare bedroom where she and her brother had stayed on a couple of different occasions.

"Good night." I said to her as I kissed her on the forehead.

"Good night." she replied.

I laid there for a little while just thinking about how close I was with my parents and how devistated I would be if I had to go through that at her age.

After laying there for about half an hour I heard a knock on my door and then my door opened.

"Are you sleeping?" I heard her ask

"No, I'm still awake. Is everything ok?" I asked.

"I'm scared. Can I lay in here for a little bit?" She asked.

"Yeah, sure. Come here." I said pulling back the blankets and inviting her into my bed.

She crawled into bed with me and laid on her side facing away from me. I pulled her into me and wrapped my arm around her. Soon I heard the soft sounds of her sleeping. She stayed cuddled in my arm all night.

The next morning I contacted the local family services department to see what would happen.

"Hello" I said.

"This is Mr. Williams. I was a mentor with a brother and sister a few years ago and have kept in contact with the family since then. There was an accident last night and I have the girl that I formerly mentored. Her parents were victims of a homicide and she called me last night to pick her up. I was wondering if it would be possible for her to stay with me for a little while."

A response from the other end of the phone.

"I just don't want her to be sent from foster family to foster family in her time of need." I replied

Another response

"I understand that and I'm also looking out for her best interest." I said

"Well I never thought about fostering or adopting her. Is that an option for me?" I asked

A response

"Will she be able to continue to stay here until all the paper work is done?" I asked

A response.

"Ok. I'll talk it over with her and I'll call you back. Thank you very much." I said and hung up the phone.

Liz was still asleep in my bed as I walked into my bedroom. Gently brushing the hair off her face I said "Liz, wake up sweetheart."

She stirred a little. "Liz sweetheart wake up." I said again.

This time she opened her eyes and gave me a little smile.

"Good morning sweetheart." I said.

"Good morning" she mumbled.

"Do you want to get up and get a shower so we can talk?" I asked.

"I kind of wanted to lay in bed all day if I could." She said.

"Well I've got something you might be excited to hear."

"What's that?" she asked perking up a little.

"Well I talked with family services this morning."

"What did they have to say?" she asked.

"Well they said you can stay with me for a little bit, but since I'm not a registered foster parent you can't stay here long term."

"But I want to." she said.

"I asked about that and they said I could fill out the paperwork and become a foster parent if I wanted." I said.

"Would you do that for me?" she asked.

"I told them I would talk to you about it and then I'd call them back." I told her.

"That would be great." she said.

"Ok then. I'll go this afternoon and fill out the paperwork." I said.

Sitting up in bed and hugging me she said "Thank you so much."

"You're welcome sweetheart."

That afternoon I filled out the paperwork to become a foster parent.

That night and the following days were pretty emotional for Liz. She had to plan and carryout the funerals of her mother and father. The three of us (her brother, her and I) cleaned out the house they lived in and turned it over to be sold. She moved all of her stuff into my basement while we tried to figure out what all was going to be kept and what was going to be gotten rid of.

A few days after the funerals I was laying in bed horny as could be and wanting to get off. I knew I couldn't call one of my "friends" to come over with Liz being there. I wasn't sure how she would react to that situation. So I decided to put a porno in and help myself out.

I was in the middle of a good scene. There was a young blonde being pounded from behind by a well hung guy. She was begging for him to fuck her harder. As I was stroking my cock I heard a knock on my door. I quickly covered myself up and turned the video off.

"Come in" I yelled.

"Hey." she said

"Whats up?" I asked

"Can we talk?" she asked

In my head I was asking her if she really wanted to talk now but I said "Sure, what's up?"

"Remember a couple years ago, when we stopped at your parents house after being at the park." she said

"Yeah I remember that." I said trying to play it cool

"Well I really liked what you did and I've had a couple other guys that have tried it but it wasn't as good as when you did it. I was wondering if we could do it again." she said

"I thought we agreed that we would wait until you were 18 before anything else happened between us." I reminded her.

"I know we did but my birthday is only a couple more weeks away and I've wanted to feel you touching me like that again. I felt loved when you were touching me." she said

She reached out to the tent in the covers and said "Are you sure you don't want to do it?"

"I'm not saying that. I'm saying...." then I was cut off by her kissing me.

Throwing her leg over me and strattling me she whispered into my ear "I'm not wearing any panties. I need you to have me. You have to have me."

She leaned back and removed her shirt to reveal her young tits. This was the first time I had seen them since that day at my parents house. They were just as beautiful as they were then. She interlocked our hands and gently caressed her breasts as she rocked back and forth across my erection.

"Are you sure you still don't want me?" She asked seductively.

"You know I do. We just shouldn't be doing this." I said

"No one will find out. It can be our secret." she said

I couldn't take her teasing anymore and rolled her off of me onto her back. I leaned down and started kissing her neck and down her body. I licked and sucked on each nipple on my way down her body. When I got down to the waist band of her shorts I kissed along it and kissed all over her stomach. I grabbed the waistband and pulled her shorts off to reveal that she really didn't have any panties on and her small patch of pubic hair. I leaned back down and started kissing all over her body again. I was trying to get her really worked up and excited before I dove in and ate her pussy. I decided the best way to really turn her on would be to plant small gentle pecks all over her pussy.

I gently kissed all over her pussy. She was begging me to eat her out. So the last few kisses were right on her lips. With the final kiss I ran my tongue up and down her slit slowly parting her lips. She shivered a little when I hit her clit and let out a little moan.

"Yes. That's what I've been waiting for." She said "Do it again. Please."

I slowly licked her to her first orgasm of the night.

"Damn that was just as good as I remembered it being." she said as I crawled up beside her and slowly stroked her breast and nipple.

"Now I think I owe you. Not just because of what you did to me but also for letting me stay here." she said.

"You don't owe me anything." I said

She rolled over and faced me and gave me a kiss on the lips and pushed me onto my back. She kissed her way down to my boxers. She pulled my boxers off of me. She reached up and slowly stroked my dick as she watched me. Liz leaned forward and kissed the head of my dick and licked the pre cum off.

"You know, you were the first person I ever gave a blow job too. I had given a couple of guys hand jobs but I'd never given a blow job." She told me. "I really enjoyed it too. I've given a few since then and I think I've gotten pretty good at it."

"Oh have you really?" I asked.

With that she slipped the head of my dick into her mouth and slowly bobbed up and down and ran her tongue along the bottom of it. She pulled my dick out of her mouth and continued to stroke it.

"Am I any better?" she asked

"A little. The first one was pretty good too." I told her

She continued to stroke and suck my dick.

"Will you cum on my tits again?" she asked

"If that's where you want me to sure." I said

"It made me horny the rest of the day knowing your cum was on my chest and other people didn't know it."

"Ok lets switch positions then because I'm pretty close." I told her

So she laid down and I got on top of her. She started stroking my dick again and with a few strokes I was shooting cum all over her tits and a little got on her face. She took her finger and cleaned it off of her face and licked her finger clean. Then she rubbed the rest of the cum into her breasts and nipples. It was so sexy watching her rub her breasts and tease her nipples.

I laid beside her and pulled her close to me. My softening erection was pressed against her ass.

"I Love You. I want to be yours forever." she said

"I Love You too sweetheart, but I think you might find someone else you'll want to be with." I told her.

"I probably won't. No one compares to you."

Hearing her say that got me growing a little. Feeling my erection growing against her ass she started rubbing her ass against my dick. Feeling her ass stroke my dick was wonderful. I placed my hand on her pussy and slowly rubbed her clit and pussy while she was grinding her ass along the shaft of my dick.

"I've got an idea." I said "It will almost be like us having sex but I won't completely take your virginity tonight."

"What's your idea?" she asked.

I had her roll onto her back and I placed a pillow under her ass and lower back. I kneeled down between her legs and grabbed the backs of her knees and pushed her legs back until her pussy was opened wide. I positioned the head of my dick right at the entrance of her wet pussy.

"I'm going to put the head of my dick in you and jack off and shoot my cum in you." I said

"Ok" she said with a big smile on her face.

"Ready?" I asked

With a smile on her face she shook her head. I slowly pushed the head and a little bit of my dick into her pussy. I let her get use to the feeling of my dick being in her for a minute. Then I slowly started to rub her clit and pussy. I took her hand and placed it on her pussy and showed her how I wanted her to rub her pussy while I stroked my cock. I could feel her pussy tightening around my dick as she rubbed her lips and clit and I knew she was approaching another orgasm.

She gently rocked her hips in rhythm with her fingers and she began to moan.

"I'm getting really close." she said

"Me too. Don't stop now." I said

I felt her pussy clinch tight around my dick as her orgasm riped through her body. Feeling the muscles spasm in her pussy pushed me over the edge and I was blowing my load into her virgin pussy.

"I can feel your warm cum in me." She said.

I waited for her orgasm to pass and I slowly withdrew my dick from her pussy. She closed her legs and rolled onto her side and once again I laid behind her.

"I Love You." she said again

"I Love You too sweetheart." I said.

That's how we slept that night. Both of us naked, and my cum still in her pussy.

The next week I was pretty busy at work and came home late most of the nights. Liz was usually already asleep in my bed before I got home. There was always a note for me on the counter when I got home. The note always read the same "I tried to wait up for you. I Love You. Liz" I would make myself something to eat and then quietly slip into bed so I wouldn't wake her up.

"I Love You, Sweetheart" I would whisper into her ear and gave her a kiss on the cheek.

A week later I had to tell Liz that she needed to start sleeping in her own bed. Her sleeping with me wasn't ok any more. It's not what a father and daughter should do although the messing around we did wasn't something we should have done either. Liz said she understood and would start sleeping in her own bed.

The week leading up to her birthday I had started to notice something different about Liz. She had a certain glow to her. A couple days ago I heard her in the bathroom getting sick early in the morning. She said she wasn't feeling very good. So I called the doctor and scheduled an appointment for her.

The day before her birthday I got a call from the doctor. They got the results of the tests they did. I told them I'd like to pick up a copy of the report if I could. They said they'd have a copy for me at the office. On my way home from work I stopped and picked up the report.

When I got home Liz had a simple dinner ready for me. She also greeted me at the garage door with a hug and a kiss on the cheek.

"Tomorrow's my birthday." she said "What did you buy me?"

"I can't tell you or it will ruin the surprise." I said. "Something smells wonderful."

"It's dinner. I made it myself." she said.

"Let's eat then."

"After dinner can we go to the mall?" she asked "I want to get me something nice to wear for my birthday."

"I think we can do that." I said

We finished dinner and I cleaned up the dishes and we left to go to the mall.

"I hope you got me something really nice for my birthday." she said

"I did." I said with a wink

"I'm so excited." she said

We got to the mall and found a parking spot. We got out of the car and I handed her a bunch of bills.

"What's this for?" she asked

"For you to buy you something nice." I said.

She counted it "Two hundred fifty dollars. Thanks Daddy." she said with a cute little giggle and smile.

"I'll be down at the food court. Come find me when you're out of money so we can go." I said.

I stopped in at the book store and picked up a couple of golf magazines to read while I waited. Surprisingly I only waited for an hour and a half before she came and found me. She had bags from all kinds of places. Of course she had to show me the new shoes, and the new dress she got for tomorrow. She also got a couple pairs of pants, and some sexy shirts.

"And this bag you can't see what's in it." she said

It was a pink Victoria Secret bag. Instantly my mind started racing about what kind of sexy bra and underwear combo she picked out.

We left the mall and went home. We decided on the way home watching a movie and having some popcorn sounded like a fun thing to do. When we got home she flipped through the movies and found a sappy love story and I popped the popcorn. We sat cuddled up on the couch under a blanket while we watched the movie. About 3/4's of the way through the movie Liz fell asleep. I gently picked her up trying not to wake her and took her into her room. I pulled the covers over her and kissed her on the cheek before leaving her to sleep.

The next morning I woke up and made breakfast for both of us. Pancakes, fresh fruit salad and some orange juice. I went into Liz's room and put our breakfast on the nightstand beside the bed. I leaned down and kissed her on the cheek and said "Good morning Birthday girl."

She opened her eyes and smiled at me.

"Good morning sweetheart. Happy Birthday." I said.

"Thank you."

"I've got some breakfast for you." I told her.

She sat up and I placed the bed tray over her lap. She took a drink of the orange juice and then picked up a fork and started to eat her pancakes and fruit salad.

"This is good. Thank you for breakfast." She said.

"No problem it's just the start of things for your special day." I told her.

"So when do I get my present?" She asked.

"Patience young one." I said.

We finished our breakfast and I took the dishes out and cleaned up everything. Liz stayed in bed watching t.v. When I was finished cleaning up I stopped by her room and let her know that I was going to get a shower because I had a couple of errands to run before we could have dinner later. She said ok and I left to get a shower.

I started the water for my shower. When I stepped in I started thinking about the promise I had made to Liz 3 years ago and realized that the day had come. I was going to fulfill my promise to her and take her virginity. Sometime lost in my thoughts I had started to rub my erection. I soon realized what I was doing and was too far along to stop. While I was standing there stroking my dick Liz snuck into the bathroom and had quickly undressed. As she climbed into the shower I felt a cold breeze and I stopped and turned with my dick in hand and faced Liz.

"Need some help with that?" she asked reached out and grabbing my dick

"I wasn't expecting you to come in here." I said

"Well today is my birthday and you promised that you would take me when I turned 18." she said

She got down on her knees and took my dick in her mouth. With the hot water hitting my body and her hot mouth wrapped around my dick I was quickly approaching my orgasm. With a couple more bobs of her head I was shooting my cum down her throat and she kept sucking.

Liz stood back up and said "Yummy. A little cum to wash down my pancakes and orange juice."

Liz moved in close to me, wrapped her arms around my neck and kissed me. Soon we were both standing under the shower head.

"We probably ought to finish up our shower." I said.

We quickly finished up our shower and got out. She left and went into her room and I got dressed.

I knocked on her door before sticking my head into the room. She was laying on the bed naked with her legs spread rubbing lotion on her legs and body.

"I'm leaving. I'll be back in a little while. Call me if you need me." I told her and then left.

I was going out to buy her birthday present. I had a friend of mine pick me up so that way Liz would have my car if she needed to leave and go somewhere. My friend dropped me off at the local Chevrolet dealership and picked out a new Trailblazer for Liz. We agreed on a price and all that good stuff and an hour after getting there I was leaving with a brand new car. I stopped by the bank and got $4,000 out of my account. This would be used for the rest of my birthday surprise. I stopped by a couple other stores before heading home. It was now 5 o'clock and I was getting hungry. I pulled into the driveway and went into the house.

Liz was sleeping on the couch. I walked over to her and gently shook her to wake her up. She sat up and looked kind of upset.

"Where have you been all day? I've been worried." she asked.

"I told you I had a couple errands to run. Follow me." I said.

We went outside and I handed her the keys to her new car and said "Happy Birthday Sweetheart."

"Thank you so much." She said hugging me and giving me a kiss.

"Go look at it." I told her.

As she ran over to the car she looked at it and turned and looked at me and smiled. She got in the drivers side and checked it out.

She was starting to cry when she asked "Why is there a carseat in here?"

"You're pregnant. The doctor called me yesterday and told me." I said.

"Are you serious?" she asked getting out of the car and coming over to me.

"Yes." I said.

She threw her arms around me and hugged me tight before kissing me.

"I have another surprise for you." I said.

I backed away from her and got down on one knee and pulled a ring out of my pocket.

"You said you wanted to be mine forever. Will you marry me?" I asked her

"YES!!" she said again hugging me.

I slipped the ring on her finger. We went back inside to get ready for dinner.

That night we had a wonderful dinner. We both were stuffed by the time we left the restaurant. The whole time all I could do was sit and smile at my new bride to be and the soon to be mother of my child.

We got home from dinner and we went into our room. I started kissing Liz and while I was doing that I reached around behind her and started to unzip her dress. She let the straps off her shoulders and the dress fell to the floor revealing the bra and panties that she had bought. They were a pick lacy material that was see thru. I picked her up and laid her on the bed. I removed my clothes and laid beside her.

I started kissing all over her body. As I reached her bra I removed it and kissed and sucked her breasts and nipples. I then kissed down her stomach to her panties. I removed those and started to kiss and lick her pussy. Soon Liz was moaning and grinding her pussy against my face.

"I don't want to cum yet." she said "I want to cum on your dick."

Hearing that I licked a little harder then stopped.

"Are you ready to become mine forever?" I asked

"Yes" she said.

I positioned myself at the opening of her vagina. I pushed the head and a little bit in. Liz gasped a little. I waited a second before pushing a little bit more of my dick into her. I hit her hymen.

"This might hurt a little. I don't mean it to but it will." I said.

With that I started kissing her and pushed the rest of my dick into her breaking her hymen. Liz let out a little grunt.

"Ouch. Pull out a little." She said.

I pulled out a little. She said it was ok so I slowly started to make love to her. As she got use to the feeling of my dick in her pussy I started to increase the speed and before long I was pounding her virgin pussy. She was begging for more and I was eagerly giving it to her.

I soon noticed that her pussy was getting tighter and her breathing was changing.

"I think I'm about to cum." she said.

With a few more pushes she was screaming and moaning to her first orgasm from intercourse and feeling her pussy grabbing my dick pushed me over the edge and I was blowing my load deep into her pussy.

"Damn. At first it hurt like hell but now, WOW." She said

"I'm glad you enjoyed it. There will be many more nights like this." I said.

We laid there for a little while. Liz wanted to do it again. This time I let her be on top and let her control the pace. She was soon fucking herself hard on my dick.

We had sex one more time after that before falling asleep.

We got married a month later in a small ceremony before she started showing that she was pregnant.

Nine months later she delivered a beautiful baby girl.

davesmistress
08-05-2008, 10:56 AM
thanks for the new addition

buzzbomb
10-13-2008, 07:16 PM
wow, what a story...nice development

Luckymann
10-14-2008, 04:59 AM
Great little story Brownsman. Keep up the good work.

dangerous_dave
10-15-2008, 06:33 PM
I'm still trying to get to the end of the story. 'Thanks. It is great

c3markh
10-21-2008, 04:15 PM
Love the Story and would like to read more.

Rum
05-20-2009, 04:25 PM
I loved this story for a few reasons. 1) it was believable (besides the older/younger aspect). 2) it was hot....very hot! 3) it flowed well and 4) there were hardly any mistakes that made me stop reading.
Al-in-all very well done and I hope to read more of your "stuff".

plys24
05-21-2009, 11:55 AM
great story

comsmith22
05-21-2009, 12:40 PM
Good Story... Thanks
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luvsex101
06-05-2009, 10:11 PM
loved it reminds me of true love

JTjtJT
06-06-2009, 11:19 AM
love the story :)

Pusher268
06-30-2009, 11:41 PM
Very nice story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you

plumber71954
07-01-2009, 04:36 AM
wow now that was a great story .....welll told and written ..........

wadave
07-01-2009, 09:00 AM
a truely powerful love story thank you

dirtymind_88
07-05-2009, 05:29 PM
Great story. I really liked it. Maybe you could continue it somehow.

twojustfourfun
07-06-2009, 05:55 PM
I read this story a while back, but never posted my appreciation... thanks for a great tale! :)

donaldt69
07-19-2009, 04:20 PM
Great Story

randy66
07-19-2009, 05:41 PM
better than i thought it would be. keep it up

wulantowag
07-19-2009, 09:32 PM
Great story. Nice balance between romance and sex. Well developed and constructed.

metslane
07-20-2009, 06:55 AM
Pretty good story!

frankjohnmoore
10-14-2009, 01:33 AM
very nice story, could be true

ironeagle2
10-14-2009, 04:05 PM
great story

wulantowag
07-05-2011, 07:40 PM
Wonderful story very believable