Perfection

[lono]

Thighs of crushed velvet glistening in candle light.
Hips that curve into the perfect waist.
Beads of perspiration rolling down her back,
briefly collecting in her dimples of venus
and moving on to places not yet explored.

Standing sideways to the light
the erect nipples on her pert breasts strain to make contact with moist lips.
Narrow shoulders connect with long neck
and soft blond hairs beyond standing erect
betimes his gentle kiss.

A long narrow finger hangs from her bottom lip,
as if shy but inviting.
Her deep blue eyes looking for a way through a long blond fringe.
Innocent but primal, firm yet yielding.

[davesmistress]

Very nice lono

thank you for the addition

[Scorpio8]

My apologies for not commenting sooner Lono, I most
surely missed this one in this part of the forums.

That's a grand piece of writing in all honesty and
I find it an extreme rush to the senses.

Don't ask me why but having read this it just
triggered this tune playing as I read these sensual
haunting words you write here.

Maybe it's just the mood I'm in at the moment but
I place this here as my way of offering praise on
a poem that really touches deep.

"House Of The Rising Sun"~Geordie

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POf7BC_o9UU

[LadyRaven]

As I read this, Lono, I felt a warm rush flood through my body, my very mind tingling at the imagery you create. Thank you for sharing this piece of yourself. A tempting glimpse, indeed.

[lono]

Hi Jeff, LadyRaven and Davesmistress, many thanks for your kind comments. I am glad you enjoyed the few lines. To be honest i forgot all about it. I am happy it had such an effect on you Jeff and LadyRaven. I must admit it stirred some old memories in me while writing it. Thanks again. And LadyRaven i like the Irish touch you have added to your signature.