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dyl1dyl
11-13-2007, 09:04 AM
My parents have really dirty sex frequently. However,one night when my father was overseas, I heard the doorbell ring as I lay in bed. I decided to go see who it was and I peeked out of my room. I was shocked as I saw my pretty mum clad in a sheer nightgown with black silk panties and a bra underneath. By the way, my mum has huge D-cups so they really protruded from the bra. She walked to the door and to my shock, let in two muscular men who I did not recognize and a large dog . I quickly ducked back into my room and quietly closed the door. After that, I waited for quite awhile until my mum, the two guys and the dog had entered the master bedroom and then I peeked into it. My cock was already hard as I knew what my mum was doing and I had actually fantasized about my mum's creamy white legs and great breasts before. What I saw totally shocked me, my mum was groaning loudly as she rubbed her clit and breasts while one man was in her mouth, one was in her ass and the dog's huge cock was in her gorgeous pussy which was leaking juices onto the bed. I started jacking off to the cries of my mum like "Oh My God! Fuck Me!" and "Uhh, you feel so big!". Unfortunately, I couldnt finish jacking off as they finished quite quickly, my mum swallowing one man's jism and having another load in her ass a dog's cum in her pussy. Her lingerie was strewn all over the place and I quickly ran back to my room and finished my masturbating as she in full nudityushered her bedroom partners and their canine friend out.

Zee Gal
11-13-2007, 12:07 PM
Interesting story. Sounds like a possible series???

badlybent
11-13-2007, 01:17 PM
Thanks for sharing. We love new members. Keep writing what you enjoy and share it with us. Good start.

davesmistress
11-13-2007, 01:17 PM
Welcome to the Forum dyl1dyl

Good attempt but a bit to short....Just a suggestion also,,,try breaking up your paragraphs to make it easier to read and gives it a better flow.

Keep at it and we look forward to more.

malcg
04-15-2008, 07:38 AM
i hope there is more of this to come xxxx

oldreader
08-08-2008, 07:42 AM
Very good. Would be a really great story to build to. Fantastic outline. Just need to carry it further and maybe let son have her later. Still it is a good story, just a bit short. Thank you

Basiler
08-20-2008, 10:11 PM
It was a good story, but for your future tales. Try to make them longer :)

ForceControl
08-21-2008, 09:53 AM
Are you serious about the dog?

footslave
08-26-2008, 05:15 PM
very hot luv to hear more

treena
10-25-2008, 02:26 PM
great story

tonez1988
10-28-2008, 01:01 AM
Not bad

swurvy
10-29-2008, 12:21 PM
Nice first story. The good thing about this one is that you can work on it and go more in depth with the characters. Run wild with the detail and this could become a great story on this site.

mick210
11-26-2008, 07:35 AM
so far so good will there be more

darkslamer
11-26-2008, 08:45 AM
not a bad story but needs more depth to it

Rich
11-27-2008, 04:52 AM
Good story. maybe more length to it.

cocknbals
11-28-2008, 09:33 PM
Nice story. New to this and look forward to more already.

hungry-jack
12-06-2008, 01:07 PM
really sexy story .keep it on with the storyline

crzy67
01-02-2009, 10:11 PM
Good story.

aaemarine
01-05-2009, 08:03 PM
it's nice one...try to more

cocummer
02-14-2009, 02:51 PM
A great slut-mommy shortie. Thanks

mannipaks
02-21-2009, 11:20 AM
Hope there's more to cum

larkin
03-14-2009, 06:01 AM
kool series man ? wud be gd to read

stdlvr69
03-15-2009, 12:43 PM
You could go a lot of different ways with the story. You should write a sequel or something.

Slow_hand
03-16-2009, 10:03 PM
For a quicky it was a hot story but I agree with everyone else, could've been longer.

vnairborn
03-17-2009, 06:38 PM
great-that all?-keep up with this story my friend

Stewie220
03-17-2009, 09:27 PM
good story keep writing

astrase2
03-20-2009, 05:23 PM
Good to see you having a go but from a neutral standpoint the story lacks descriptive content which would keep the reader's attention. Has promise for a good story and perhaps series with more thought about content.

thunderace
03-20-2009, 05:30 PM
a wee bit short - but has so much potential for a longer story - you want to expand?

RobinaAmiR
03-23-2009, 04:03 AM
nice

scotty2hotty
03-26-2009, 10:19 AM
nice so far. a bit short tho. hope there's more.

jokes
03-26-2009, 05:23 PM
hot story, next chapter?

roval
03-29-2009, 10:10 PM
Am I missing something here? 11 lines is rated as a story! Surely I'm missing some of the post.

lookingforfun21
03-31-2009, 08:10 AM
enjoyed this story, abit short but exciting none the less.

robertjames
05-29-2010, 05:46 AM
a bit short

Steve309
06-02-2010, 11:29 PM
love to hear more

Delta64
06-03-2010, 04:07 AM
good but it could be more if details included.

sirvent67
02-09-2011, 11:20 AM
Good story, I would love to read more.

frankjohnmoore
03-19-2011, 01:54 AM
short but good,,,,,thanks

etbet
06-07-2011, 08:31 AM
Has a lot of promise

penisbutt
07-04-2012, 06:01 PM
pretty mediocre story. no descriptions, no paragraph breaks. not what i was hoping for

shaunhaupt
07-13-2012, 11:56 AM
hope the son gets to join in next time round

Vortex
07-21-2012, 10:33 AM
keep going, nice start.

chamberman
07-21-2012, 12:06 PM
I liked it, lacks descriptive scenes which would add to the length. Keep it up, you got it going on.

Marti
07-23-2012, 01:16 PM
Nice start, now needs developing.

Bella 25
12-24-2012, 07:36 AM
Good start but too short. Needs to be continued.

milker
01-14-2013, 10:48 AM
not bad a little short

okiek9girl
03-29-2013, 12:38 PM
Ohh what a fun story! The possibilities!

PutitaRica
03-29-2013, 03:22 PM
why are these stories sound like someone is telling them like if they professors using all this big words, people should tell their stories just as they are, down and dirty - not using medical or dictionary terms to describe our pussies and guys cocks