Whirlpool of Darkness

[freedom37803]

The weight of my thoughts pulls at me,
I think of all the bad and forget the good,
The pain, the heartache,
They consume the person I once was,
Leaving me an empty shell.
My heart and mind wondering what will be.
Too much pain,
All I see is the down side,
I try with all my heart and soul,
To find the light,
And climb from this dark abyss.
But as I grasp for the edge,
The pain of my loneliness
Pulls my back into the darkness,
Which has become as a whirlpool,
Pulling me deeper with every stroke I take,
Losing strength, losing faith
As deeper into the darkness I fall.
The weight of the pain,
Crushing my heart in my chest.
Taking the person that I was,
Making me something else,
Something that doesn’t know,
How to feel,
How to love,
How to care,
How to be me.
It all seems to fade,
Into the darkness,
As I fall all alone,
With no one to save me.

[frozen_north]

:) I'll save you!!! :)

Nicely done girl, very nice.

[freedom37803]

Thanks...glad you liked it....thought you didn't since you didn't comment it elsewhere...lmao

[badlybent]

Yeah I felt that way until they gave me Effor. No shit. Great poem.

[frozen_north]

do you mean Effexor?

[freedom37803]

No clue what you all are talking about but glad you like it all the same...lol

[frozen_north]

Sorry I didn't comment earlier; I didn't see the post.

[freedom37803]

I was talking about on our sister site sweety...lol...it's over there too...lol

[Suthernlady]

Well I never saw this either...I have got toget new reading glasses....very good. I have felt that way before....yes I have.